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A Duel in Meryton: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
With his young sister Georgiana’s reticence a constant reminder that his onetime friend, George Wickham, should not be trusted, Darcy decides a trip to rural Hertfordshire is in order, for both him and Georgiana. Darcy believes the people there are of so little consequence, Georgiana will know no fear in interacting with them. He soon learns he’s wrong about both his sister and Hertfordshire, but not about Wickham.
Even bearing the brunt of Mr. Darcy’s insult doesn’t soften Elizabeth to her husband-hunting cousin, Mr. Collins, and her first reaction is to disdain both men. As the two join forces against Meryton’s newest militia member, the charming Mr. Wickham, Elizabeth comes to see a different side to Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins. Their presence in Hertfordshire, along with Mr. Darcy’s other companions, will forever alter the lives of Elizabeth and those she cares for most.
A Duel in Meryton is a Pride and Prejudice variation of approximately 73,000 words.
Even bearing the brunt of Mr. Darcy’s insult doesn’t soften Elizabeth to her husband-hunting cousin, Mr. Collins, and her first reaction is to disdain both men. As the two join forces against Meryton’s newest militia member, the charming Mr. Wickham, Elizabeth comes to see a different side to Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins. Their presence in Hertfordshire, along with Mr. Darcy’s other companions, will forever alter the lives of Elizabeth and those she cares for most.
A Duel in Meryton is a Pride and Prejudice variation of approximately 73,000 words.
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March 17, 2024
A duel in France, is not like one in England; the former is a matter of course; a trifle of common occurrence; one makes an engagement to fight, in the same breath as an engagement to dine; but the latter is a thing of state and solemnity — long faces — early rising — and will making. ~ Edward George Earle Bulwer-Lytton
Yes, a Duel comes to Meryton but the participants are not the ones you might expect.
Our story begins with an incident at Rosings Park several years before the events in canon P&P. In fact, for the first 70% of the book, I wondered how the earlier story fit into the story I was reading. All is eventually satisfactorily explained.
One of the duel combatants is not up to the challenge and must begin instructions and a fitness regimen. But will perseverance be enough for success? Perhaps with support from more than one quarter? Does it take a village to train a swordsman?
I enjoyed this story of an unlikely hero. The book is well-written and proofread. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
People are always blaming their circumstances for what they are. I don't believe in circumstances. The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for the circumstances they want, and, if they can't find them, make them. ~ G.B. Shaw
Yes, a Duel comes to Meryton but the participants are not the ones you might expect.
Our story begins with an incident at Rosings Park several years before the events in canon P&P. In fact, for the first 70% of the book, I wondered how the earlier story fit into the story I was reading. All is eventually satisfactorily explained.
One of the duel combatants is not up to the challenge and must begin instructions and a fitness regimen. But will perseverance be enough for success? Perhaps with support from more than one quarter? Does it take a village to train a swordsman?
I enjoyed this story of an unlikely hero. The book is well-written and proofread. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
People are always blaming their circumstances for what they are. I don't believe in circumstances. The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for the circumstances they want, and, if they can't find them, make them. ~ G.B. Shaw
October 29, 2021
This book diverges from canon in so many interesting ways! The first chapters begin at Rosings. We learn that Colonel Fitzwilliam has an identical twin brother, Walter (who shows up in the book later). Also, a Mr. Blackmore is there, having presented himself as Louis de Bourgh's second cousin. He's wooing Anne. This leads to a shocking confrontation.
Years later, one consequence of those events is that Colonel Fitzwilliam inherits Rosings after the deaths of his cousin and aunt. Unfortunately, he's estate-rich but cash-poor. He goes with Darcy to visit their friend Mr. Bingley at Netherfield, and Caroline Bingley is eager to latch on to either of the gentleman.
Georgiana is with them at Netherfield, too. Darcy notes she's been behaving oddly ever since her misadventure at Ramsgate, which he finds worrisome. He hopes she'll get more communicative with Miss Bingley and Mrs. Hurst, but Georgiana shies away from them.
Her presence really affects the story's trajectory beginning at the Meryton assembly. Then she gets closer to Jane and Elizabeth at Netherfield during Jane's convalescence. Later, she walks herself to Longbourn and learns that Wickham is in the local militia and has immediately started charming Lydia and Kitty. Georgiana freely shares his past misdeeds with the Bennet family and Mr. Collins (who's already arrived for his visit). This includes the shocking details of what happened at Ramsgate.
Wickham happens to come a-calling at Longbourn just then, and he gets a very different reception than he was expecting.
All the above leads to a challenge to duel, and the participants are not who this reader was expecting. Entertainment-starved Meryton gets caught up in duel-mania, with lots of fencing lessons and swordplay. Support for the duelers splits the community in the weeks leading up to the fight.
I appreciate that Kitty is given a different role than usual, coming out from under Lydia's shadow. Mr. Collins gets more love in this story too, starting out similar to canon but changing with the unusual circumstances he finds himself in. Lydia stubbornly hangs onto her usual childishness a long time, but I love Darcy having a heart-to-heart with her where he correctly identifies the reason for her behavior.
Of course, the romance brews between Darcy and Elizabeth and develops nicely, while Darcy recognizes what an arrogant snob he's been. In fact, there are several romantic pairings you'll be cheering for by the story's end, including a very surprising one.
It's the way all these different plot elements are woven together that I find truly impressive. Wonderful, fun storytelling that's well-edited and proofread. Content is clean.
Years later, one consequence of those events is that Colonel Fitzwilliam inherits Rosings after the deaths of his cousin and aunt. Unfortunately, he's estate-rich but cash-poor. He goes with Darcy to visit their friend Mr. Bingley at Netherfield, and Caroline Bingley is eager to latch on to either of the gentleman.
Georgiana is with them at Netherfield, too. Darcy notes she's been behaving oddly ever since her misadventure at Ramsgate, which he finds worrisome. He hopes she'll get more communicative with Miss Bingley and Mrs. Hurst, but Georgiana shies away from them.
Her presence really affects the story's trajectory beginning at the Meryton assembly. Then she gets closer to Jane and Elizabeth at Netherfield during Jane's convalescence. Later, she walks herself to Longbourn and learns that Wickham is in the local militia and has immediately started charming Lydia and Kitty. Georgiana freely shares his past misdeeds with the Bennet family and Mr. Collins (who's already arrived for his visit). This includes the shocking details of what happened at Ramsgate.
Wickham happens to come a-calling at Longbourn just then, and he gets a very different reception than he was expecting.
All the above leads to a challenge to duel, and the participants are not who this reader was expecting. Entertainment-starved Meryton gets caught up in duel-mania, with lots of fencing lessons and swordplay. Support for the duelers splits the community in the weeks leading up to the fight.
I appreciate that Kitty is given a different role than usual, coming out from under Lydia's shadow. Mr. Collins gets more love in this story too, starting out similar to canon but changing with the unusual circumstances he finds himself in. Lydia stubbornly hangs onto her usual childishness a long time, but I love Darcy having a heart-to-heart with her where he correctly identifies the reason for her behavior.
Of course, the romance brews between Darcy and Elizabeth and develops nicely, while Darcy recognizes what an arrogant snob he's been. In fact, there are several romantic pairings you'll be cheering for by the story's end, including a very surprising one.
It's the way all these different plot elements are woven together that I find truly impressive. Wonderful, fun storytelling that's well-edited and proofread. Content is clean.
August 26, 2019
When I read the title I imagined it would be Darcy and maybe Wickham duelling. Although one story had Mr. Bennet dueling with and dying at the hands of the latter man, this story has neither and I really don't want to reveal who goes at it in the face-off. I was pleasantly surprised with the twist this story had.
The story starts maybe 4 years before canon, at Rosings. The Colonel is there along with Darcy and another man, claiming to be a relation to Sir Lewis de Bourgh is also there and he is making moves on Anne. Instinct causes the cousins to return to the estate one Sunday morning before going into church. Anne is saved from the man forcing himself upon her in order to gain the estate. As the story progresses in a few years Lady C. rewards her savior by willing the estate to him. (Anne has died.)
Move onto Meryton. Mr. Richard Fitzwilliam (Yes, the Colonel has retired from the army.) is there with the usual players. Later his twin brother also shows up. The twin is in need of a rich wife in order to shore up the estate he owns. Georgiana is there also as Darcy thinks being in the more relaxed neighborhood in the country she might not be so afraid of speaking out in company. The county folk might not be as judgmental. And she has had that situation with Wickham at Ramsgate but with a slightly different bend. She makes friends with Elizabeth and spews out her version of the story while in company. (Elizabeth keeps thinking she should stop but the young lady tells it all.)
Wickham is the same but there is one who takes such umbrage at his spreading lies, disrespecting the man who gave him such attention and supplied him with an education that he immediately demands an apology! When the man won't apologize...well look to the title. Soon the area is dividing into two camps. A good bit of the story tells us how preparation for the duel ensues but it also has others parts to tell as various attentions are given to romance.
Darcy has, of course, insulted Elizabeth at the assembly and then in this story Richard makes a bet with him as to whether Darcy can get Elizabeth to dance with him...after all don't all women just fall at his feet. He is rich, he is handsome and he has an estate and connections. Loved how that wager played out but oh, he now has added another insult to a different individual, even more grievous, to the one he spoke about Elizabeth. The man just cannot keep his foot out of his mouth.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
The story starts maybe 4 years before canon, at Rosings. The Colonel is there along with Darcy and another man, claiming to be a relation to Sir Lewis de Bourgh is also there and he is making moves on Anne. Instinct causes the cousins to return to the estate one Sunday morning before going into church. Anne is saved from the man forcing himself upon her in order to gain the estate. As the story progresses in a few years Lady C. rewards her savior by willing the estate to him. (Anne has died.)
Move onto Meryton. Mr. Richard Fitzwilliam (Yes, the Colonel has retired from the army.) is there with the usual players. Later his twin brother also shows up. The twin is in need of a rich wife in order to shore up the estate he owns. Georgiana is there also as Darcy thinks being in the more relaxed neighborhood in the country she might not be so afraid of speaking out in company. The county folk might not be as judgmental. And she has had that situation with Wickham at Ramsgate but with a slightly different bend. She makes friends with Elizabeth and spews out her version of the story while in company. (Elizabeth keeps thinking she should stop but the young lady tells it all.)
Wickham is the same but there is one who takes such umbrage at his spreading lies, disrespecting the man who gave him such attention and supplied him with an education that he immediately demands an apology! When the man won't apologize...well look to the title. Soon the area is dividing into two camps. A good bit of the story tells us how preparation for the duel ensues but it also has others parts to tell as various attentions are given to romance.
Darcy has, of course, insulted Elizabeth at the assembly and then in this story Richard makes a bet with him as to whether Darcy can get Elizabeth to dance with him...after all don't all women just fall at his feet. He is rich, he is handsome and he has an estate and connections. Loved how that wager played out but oh, he now has added another insult to a different individual, even more grievous, to the one he spoke about Elizabeth. The man just cannot keep his foot out of his mouth.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
March 13, 2023
Status: Read September 4-11, 2019
Rating: 3.5 Stars ⭐⭐⭐
My Library Notes:
A Duel in Meryton: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
by Renata McMann, Summer Hanford
Kindle Edition, First Edition, 233 pages
Published August 18, 2019
ASIN: B07WSGQ1TD
Darcy had the unsettling suspicion that Miss Elizabeth Bennet was one to refuse any man she didn't hold in high esteem, no matter his standing or wealth.
And that idea terrified him.
With his young sister Georgiana’s reticence a constant reminder that his onetime friend, George Wickham, should not be trusted, Darcy decides a trip to rural Hertfordshire is in order, for both him and Georgiana. Darcy believes the people there are of so little consequence, Georgiana will know no fear in interacting with them. He soon learns he’s wrong about both his sister and Hertfordshire, but not about Wickham.
Even bearing the brunt of Mr. Darcy’s insult doesn’t soften Elizabeth to her husband-hunting cousin, Mr. Collins, and her first reaction is to disdain both men. As the two join forces against Meryton’s newest militia member, the charming Mr. Wickham, Elizabeth comes to see a different side to Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins. Their presence in Hertfordshire, along with Mr. Darcy’s other companions, will forever alter the lives of Elizabeth and those she cares for most.
A Duel in Meryton is a Pride and Prejudice variation of approximately 73,000 words.
Rating: 3.5 Stars ⭐⭐⭐
My Library Notes:
A Duel in Meryton: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
by Renata McMann, Summer Hanford
Kindle Edition, First Edition, 233 pages
Published August 18, 2019
ASIN: B07WSGQ1TD
Darcy had the unsettling suspicion that Miss Elizabeth Bennet was one to refuse any man she didn't hold in high esteem, no matter his standing or wealth.
And that idea terrified him.
With his young sister Georgiana’s reticence a constant reminder that his onetime friend, George Wickham, should not be trusted, Darcy decides a trip to rural Hertfordshire is in order, for both him and Georgiana. Darcy believes the people there are of so little consequence, Georgiana will know no fear in interacting with them. He soon learns he’s wrong about both his sister and Hertfordshire, but not about Wickham.
Even bearing the brunt of Mr. Darcy’s insult doesn’t soften Elizabeth to her husband-hunting cousin, Mr. Collins, and her first reaction is to disdain both men. As the two join forces against Meryton’s newest militia member, the charming Mr. Wickham, Elizabeth comes to see a different side to Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins. Their presence in Hertfordshire, along with Mr. Darcy’s other companions, will forever alter the lives of Elizabeth and those she cares for most.
A Duel in Meryton is a Pride and Prejudice variation of approximately 73,000 words.
October 25, 2019
It's difficult to summarise the plot here.... it's a long story with lots of twists and turns. We start much earlier with an incident at Rosings which changes the following chain of events. We have the Colonel,as a twin, and Georgiana arriving with Bingley and the Netherfield party. Collins arrives and is more arrogant and obnoxious than usual and yet his story is one that is really important.
I thought this story was quite slow to get going - but the reason for spending so much time on the early detail becomes clear at the end. The focus of the story is the duel and yet I felt there was a part of this book missing as the duel itself is all a bit of an anti climax and quickly brushed over.
Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship is interesting... quite a slow burner that then quickly gathers pace towards the end. This Darcy still manages to put his foot in it more often that not but eventually learns how to speak his feelings as when he does, he does it very well!
There is romance in the air for many couples in this book and Wickham's story is also different.
This is an enjoyable, very different story. I don't think it's one of my favourites by these authors - but I enjoyed the second half of the book much more than the first.
I thought this story was quite slow to get going - but the reason for spending so much time on the early detail becomes clear at the end. The focus of the story is the duel and yet I felt there was a part of this book missing as the duel itself is all a bit of an anti climax and quickly brushed over.
Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship is interesting... quite a slow burner that then quickly gathers pace towards the end. This Darcy still manages to put his foot in it more often that not but eventually learns how to speak his feelings as when he does, he does it very well!
There is romance in the air for many couples in this book and Wickham's story is also different.
This is an enjoyable, very different story. I don't think it's one of my favourites by these authors - but I enjoyed the second half of the book much more than the first.
August 20, 2019
Very original story
This enjoyable story isn’t just about Lizzy and Darcy it is about both of their families. Darcy insults Lizzy at the assembly but that is about all that is canon.
The story has lots of interactions with various characters and is a really good read. I recommend the book.
This enjoyable story isn’t just about Lizzy and Darcy it is about both of their families. Darcy insults Lizzy at the assembly but that is about all that is canon.
The story has lots of interactions with various characters and is a really good read. I recommend the book.
January 9, 2023
First I want to clarify a few things. Though the title talks about a duel, it isn't the main focus of the story, in fact, it is only discussed and not described but it does help a bit in bringing some understanding between Elizabeth and Darcy. Also, in spite of the summary, Darcy doesn't work with Collins against Wickham except only on one occasion. Also, there is nearly no interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth for nearly the first half of the book. But the story is good and different with many a HEA.
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June 13, 2025And what a duel it was
I don't recall having read anything by these authors before, but I really enjoyed this story.
Of course, there's much more to the story than the duel, but that is certainly an important event. And you'll be surprised when you learn the identity of the duellers
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I don't recall having read anything by these authors before, but I really enjoyed this story.
Of course, there's much more to the story than the duel, but that is certainly an important event. And you'll be surprised when you learn the identity of the duellers
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November 26, 2019
Entertaining if implausible Pride and Prejudice variation, but the storytelling is good enough that I was able for the most part to suspend disbelief and just enjoy the ride. There is some humor and quite a lot of ungentlemanly behavior by even our favorite gentlemen. Georgiana Darcy's part in this variation is much more important than usual. Wickham's is too, the blackguard, although he has almost no time on page. Mr. Collins goes through quite an interesting transformation.
There are three new pairings off that I found intriguing and romantic, each in its own way.
In spite of some violence at the outset and the story revolving around a duel, and except for Mr. Bennet's unexplained illness, overall this is a lighthearted, pleasant, fun, romantic tale. This is an enjoyable read, and I'm not at all sorry I picked it up.
The anachronisms that stood out for me most are almost all necessary to the story. I doubt it would have been thought proper for ladies to even be aware of a duel taking place, let alone attend fencing practice sessions in preparation for one. But the story takes place in the country, not in London, and it's clearly all in fun - the story, not the duel. There is a violent incident at the beginning of the book that does have some bearing on the outcome, although it seems unrelated almost entirely through the story. In fact this whole story is a string of mostly delightful contrivances.
There are two nails-on-a-blackboard errors that threw me out momentarily. One can be chalked up to slightly imperfect proofreading, with Miss Bennet rather than Mrs. Bennet screeching . I cannot picture Jane Bennet doing any screeching in that scene, but her mother, absolutely. The other glaring error could have been prevented with just a bit of research into peerage titles and forms of address. Sir Arthur, Earl of Matlock? No! He's an earl, not a knight or a baronet. Sir Lewis de Bourgh was a baronet; Sir William Lucas is a knight. They are not peers. Lady Catherine is called Lady Firstname because she's the daughter of an earl who married a commoner (knights and baronets are not peers). The earl would be Arthur Fitzwilliam, Earl of Matlock, or simply the Earl of Matlock, or Lord Matlock, never Sir anything. I don't know why this stuff bugs me so much, but it does, and it's a type of error I see all over historical romances. It's not that hard to get right, because the etiquette is well spelled out.
References:
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http://web.archive.org/web/2014101119...
There are three new pairings off that I found intriguing and romantic, each in its own way.
In spite of some violence at the outset and the story revolving around a duel, and except for Mr. Bennet's unexplained illness, overall this is a lighthearted, pleasant, fun, romantic tale. This is an enjoyable read, and I'm not at all sorry I picked it up.
The anachronisms that stood out for me most are almost all necessary to the story. I doubt it would have been thought proper for ladies to even be aware of a duel taking place, let alone attend fencing practice sessions in preparation for one. But the story takes place in the country, not in London, and it's clearly all in fun - the story, not the duel. There is a violent incident at the beginning of the book that does have some bearing on the outcome, although it seems unrelated almost entirely through the story. In fact this whole story is a string of mostly delightful contrivances.
There are two nails-on-a-blackboard errors that threw me out momentarily. One can be chalked up to slightly imperfect proofreading, with Miss Bennet rather than Mrs. Bennet screeching . I cannot picture Jane Bennet doing any screeching in that scene, but her mother, absolutely. The other glaring error could have been prevented with just a bit of research into peerage titles and forms of address. Sir Arthur, Earl of Matlock? No! He's an earl, not a knight or a baronet. Sir Lewis de Bourgh was a baronet; Sir William Lucas is a knight. They are not peers. Lady Catherine is called Lady Firstname because she's the daughter of an earl who married a commoner (knights and baronets are not peers). The earl would be Arthur Fitzwilliam, Earl of Matlock, or simply the Earl of Matlock, or Lord Matlock, never Sir anything. I don't know why this stuff bugs me so much, but it does, and it's a type of error I see all over historical romances. It's not that hard to get right, because the etiquette is well spelled out.
References:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Forms_o...
http://web.archive.org/web/2014101119...
March 9, 2021
I had this on my maybe list for a while. It started out promising, I really liked that the majority of the book was from Darcy's POV. Then it lagged, and I couldn't plow through it. Kept reading other books in between.
Finally at 50% it started to pick up and I could get into it. Each individual character was well for written for their purpose. Even Mr. Wickham, who had a relatively minor role, was a huge motivator through half the story. ODC get off to the usual start and ever so slowly begin to open up to each other while all the other drama is going on.
A duel, character defamation, couples falling in love, illness and Lydia, but not in her usually written way ( she is almost palatable)!
Aside from some really slow parts, this is well written and I am glad I stuck it out. 3.5*
Finally at 50% it started to pick up and I could get into it. Each individual character was well for written for their purpose. Even Mr. Wickham, who had a relatively minor role, was a huge motivator through half the story. ODC get off to the usual start and ever so slowly begin to open up to each other while all the other drama is going on.
A duel, character defamation, couples falling in love, illness and Lydia, but not in her usually written way ( she is almost palatable)!
Aside from some really slow parts, this is well written and I am glad I stuck it out. 3.5*
June 22, 2023
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A Duel in Meryton is an excellent Pride & Prejudice Variation that alters the events of the story in an unexpected and exciting manner with Mr. Collins assuming a role that no one would associate with him, and Mr. Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam coming to his aid.
I loved the fact that even though the story follows cannon upon the arrival of the Netherfield party to Meryton, it changes significantly the characters backgrounds, creating therefore new pathways for them.
Georgiana’s wit and strength of character changed the events of this book in a radical manner, and I found the change of the Ramsgate events and Georgiana’s point of view a very interesting way to create a bond between her and the Bennet sisters. Speaking of which, Kitty will surprise everyone in this book, and even if her feelings were unexpected, they revealed a character growth I truly appreciated, and which was still faithful to canon.
Mr. Collins was also a big surprise and another character that had more to him then meets the eye. I loved the scenes involving him, especially because they were simultaneously tender and funny. I did not expect some of the revelations he makes towards the middle of the story and felt I was finally understanding him. The authors definitely did an incredible job with his character demonstrating a side that we seldom see in austenesque books.
The Fitzwilliam brothers were both very interesting characters, and I enjoyed the love stories the authors played out for them. As all relationships in A Duel in Meryton, they made perfect sense and were well developed.
Elizabeth and Darcy were also very interesting characters, and I loved the slow built relationship they had in this book. Their interactions and dialogues were profound and mature, allowing them to build a friendship that grew into something more. I loved to observe them discuss other people, their stories, feelings and expectations. I felt more then was told how these characters grew close to one another, which is a sign of a well written book.
Overall, I loved all the small alterations and details that were added to this novel, but especially the writing style because all storylines and characters added something unique and beautiful to the story in a very balanced way. A Duel in Meryton is the epitome of a good storytelling with many different and engaging characters and plots cleverly woven with each other.
Summing up, this book is an exciting story that keeps a balanced pace and explores many different types of relationships between the characters. We will see many interesting friendships growing, siblings’ dynamics changing and romances developing. The diversity of the plotlines and the intelligent manner with which they were composed make this book incredibly engaging and uputdownable. I highly recommend it for readers who are looking for an innovative, engaging and well written book.
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A Duel in Meryton is an excellent Pride & Prejudice Variation that alters the events of the story in an unexpected and exciting manner with Mr. Collins assuming a role that no one would associate with him, and Mr. Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam coming to his aid.
I loved the fact that even though the story follows cannon upon the arrival of the Netherfield party to Meryton, it changes significantly the characters backgrounds, creating therefore new pathways for them.
Georgiana’s wit and strength of character changed the events of this book in a radical manner, and I found the change of the Ramsgate events and Georgiana’s point of view a very interesting way to create a bond between her and the Bennet sisters. Speaking of which, Kitty will surprise everyone in this book, and even if her feelings were unexpected, they revealed a character growth I truly appreciated, and which was still faithful to canon.
Mr. Collins was also a big surprise and another character that had more to him then meets the eye. I loved the scenes involving him, especially because they were simultaneously tender and funny. I did not expect some of the revelations he makes towards the middle of the story and felt I was finally understanding him. The authors definitely did an incredible job with his character demonstrating a side that we seldom see in austenesque books.
The Fitzwilliam brothers were both very interesting characters, and I enjoyed the love stories the authors played out for them. As all relationships in A Duel in Meryton, they made perfect sense and were well developed.
Elizabeth and Darcy were also very interesting characters, and I loved the slow built relationship they had in this book. Their interactions and dialogues were profound and mature, allowing them to build a friendship that grew into something more. I loved to observe them discuss other people, their stories, feelings and expectations. I felt more then was told how these characters grew close to one another, which is a sign of a well written book.
Overall, I loved all the small alterations and details that were added to this novel, but especially the writing style because all storylines and characters added something unique and beautiful to the story in a very balanced way. A Duel in Meryton is the epitome of a good storytelling with many different and engaging characters and plots cleverly woven with each other.
Summing up, this book is an exciting story that keeps a balanced pace and explores many different types of relationships between the characters. We will see many interesting friendships growing, siblings’ dynamics changing and romances developing. The diversity of the plotlines and the intelligent manner with which they were composed make this book incredibly engaging and uputdownable. I highly recommend it for readers who are looking for an innovative, engaging and well written book.
December 19, 2021
A lovely surprise
An interesting premise and lively action in this enjoyable variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Renata McMann and Summer Hanford.
An interesting premise and lively action in this enjoyable variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Renata McMann and Summer Hanford.
April 18, 2023
3.5/5 — додаткові 0.5 балів за гарну начитку.
September 6, 2019
A different and interesting road to several HEAs
This story added characters and events, perfectly in sync with Miss Austen's creations, but flips the story into something new and attention worthy. Georgiana plays an initially pivotal role in this realistic, radical departure from canon. I found all the familiar characterizations to be legitimate to their sources within an original plot of universal romance. Quite satisfying.
This story added characters and events, perfectly in sync with Miss Austen's creations, but flips the story into something new and attention worthy. Georgiana plays an initially pivotal role in this realistic, radical departure from canon. I found all the familiar characterizations to be legitimate to their sources within an original plot of universal romance. Quite satisfying.
June 19, 2020
This book was good, but not great. I have enjoyed many books from this author duo and felt this wasn't their best. The story wasn't bad, but I can't say I will be eager to go to it a second time. I just felt the characters were not quite right and things were a bit too far fetched. I also really really really dislike when Colonel Fitzwilliam gets paired with any of the youngest three Bennet sisters or Charlotte Lucas. Always a detractor for me.
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November 17, 2021Although I liked the beginning of the story it became obvious that I was not going to like one of the pairings so I gave up at 39%
July 25, 2025
Torn between 3.5-4 stars.
This was a fun variation, BUT, it is not for the reader that wants more of Lizzy and Darcy. I just read another book that served plenty of that, so I didn’t mind that they are an afterthought in this story, and that both Kitty’s and Charlotte’s romances are better developed. And Jane’s of course.
The focus of this story is indeed a duel and how it affects the whole of Meryton and Longbourn, splitting the commmunity into two sides.
Georgiana is a very different creature here, at times her lack of restraint was a bit grating, but it did further the plot and it is a variation so, one should expect changes.
So overall, the story was good fun. Introduces some new characters (including a twin) and new romances, and it is captivating but for the Darcy and Lizzy romance.
Some time is spent on him and his feelings, but with 1 hour 30 minute left of the book I realized they had really only had ONE conversation. By the time he is ready to propose she kind of idly still thinks of them as recent enemies. She has only just accepted his excuse for his comment at the assembly and in part because he expresses that he find her pretty.
At the end, when she declares that she loves him, I honestly had no idea why she would, except for the fact that he had called her pretty. So I was underwhelmed with their pairing, they could just as well never have spoken again and it would have been just as convincing of an ending. Actually, it would have felt more convincing.
That said, I still really enjoyed the story. I loved the Fitzwilliam of it all, loved Kitty, and Charlotte Lucas. I also enjoyed the beginning with Anne de Bourgh. And I did think it fun with a more assertive Georgiana. I was also impressed that Mr. Hurst got a couple of lines, many variations just have him in the background (understandable).
Can’t say I came around to Miss Bingely or her end, but it still felt more satisfying than Darcy and Lizzy.
Definitely recommended, but primarily ro readers who wants more of the side characters.
This was a fun variation, BUT, it is not for the reader that wants more of Lizzy and Darcy. I just read another book that served plenty of that, so I didn’t mind that they are an afterthought in this story, and that both Kitty’s and Charlotte’s romances are better developed. And Jane’s of course.
The focus of this story is indeed a duel and how it affects the whole of Meryton and Longbourn, splitting the commmunity into two sides.
Georgiana is a very different creature here, at times her lack of restraint was a bit grating, but it did further the plot and it is a variation so, one should expect changes.
So overall, the story was good fun. Introduces some new characters (including a twin) and new romances, and it is captivating but for the Darcy and Lizzy romance.
Some time is spent on him and his feelings, but with 1 hour 30 minute left of the book I realized they had really only had ONE conversation. By the time he is ready to propose she kind of idly still thinks of them as recent enemies. She has only just accepted his excuse for his comment at the assembly and in part because he expresses that he find her pretty.
At the end, when she declares that she loves him, I honestly had no idea why she would, except for the fact that he had called her pretty. So I was underwhelmed with their pairing, they could just as well never have spoken again and it would have been just as convincing of an ending. Actually, it would have felt more convincing.
That said, I still really enjoyed the story. I loved the Fitzwilliam of it all, loved Kitty, and Charlotte Lucas. I also enjoyed the beginning with Anne de Bourgh. And I did think it fun with a more assertive Georgiana. I was also impressed that Mr. Hurst got a couple of lines, many variations just have him in the background (understandable).
Can’t say I came around to Miss Bingely or her end, but it still felt more satisfying than Darcy and Lizzy.
Definitely recommended, but primarily ro readers who wants more of the side characters.
August 10, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is a part of the A Pride and Prejudice Variation series.
With his young sister Georgiana’s reticence a constant reminder that his onetime friend, George Wickham, should not be trusted, Darcy decides a trip to rural Hertfordshire is in order, for both him and Georgiana. Darcy believes the people there are of so little consequence, Georgiana will know no fear in interacting with them. He soon learns he’s wrong about both his sister and Hertfordshire, but not about Wickham.
Even bearing the brunt of Mr. Darcy’s insult doesn’t soften Elizabeth to her husband-hunting cousin, Mr. Collins, and her first reaction is to disdain both men. As the two join forces against Meryton’s newest militia member, the charming Mr. Wickham, Elizabeth comes to see a different side to Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins. Their presence in Hertfordshire, along with Mr. Darcy’s other companions, will forever alter the lives of Elizabeth and those she cares for most. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is a part of the A Pride and Prejudice Variation series.
With his young sister Georgiana’s reticence a constant reminder that his onetime friend, George Wickham, should not be trusted, Darcy decides a trip to rural Hertfordshire is in order, for both him and Georgiana. Darcy believes the people there are of so little consequence, Georgiana will know no fear in interacting with them. He soon learns he’s wrong about both his sister and Hertfordshire, but not about Wickham.
Even bearing the brunt of Mr. Darcy’s insult doesn’t soften Elizabeth to her husband-hunting cousin, Mr. Collins, and her first reaction is to disdain both men. As the two join forces against Meryton’s newest militia member, the charming Mr. Wickham, Elizabeth comes to see a different side to Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins. Their presence in Hertfordshire, along with Mr. Darcy’s other companions, will forever alter the lives of Elizabeth and those she cares for most. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
October 23, 2025
Mr. Collins & Kitty Become an Impractical, Impassioned Power Couple
Mr. Collins challenging Whickham to a duel: funny.
Collins' reason being Whickham showing improper deference to the Darcy patronage: hilarious.
Kitty falling heads over heels for Mr. Collins because she thinks its romantic that he is willing to die for his beliefs: hysterical.
Mr. Darcy getting roped into fencing instruction with all Meryton boys joining in the fun made for a delightful read.
I need some short stories that are nothing but Mr. Darcy's lists of excuses people will use when asking for money and the terrible things that could go wrong when inheriting an estate.
I also really liked this version of Colonel Fitzwilliam and how he has matured since inheriting Rosings. I cheered when instead of selling presentation of the living at Hunsford, he rewarded a fellow soilder who had saved his life. I thought his burgeoning relationship with Charlotte was very sweet.
Mr. Collins challenging Whickham to a duel: funny.
Collins' reason being Whickham showing improper deference to the Darcy patronage: hilarious.
Kitty falling heads over heels for Mr. Collins because she thinks its romantic that he is willing to die for his beliefs: hysterical.
Mr. Darcy getting roped into fencing instruction with all Meryton boys joining in the fun made for a delightful read.
I need some short stories that are nothing but Mr. Darcy's lists of excuses people will use when asking for money and the terrible things that could go wrong when inheriting an estate.
I also really liked this version of Colonel Fitzwilliam and how he has matured since inheriting Rosings. I cheered when instead of selling presentation of the living at Hunsford, he rewarded a fellow soilder who had saved his life. I thought his burgeoning relationship with Charlotte was very sweet.
February 28, 2024
I wanted to like this more.
Unfortunately the book is inconsistent with Austen's characters and deviates from manners and conventions from the time period, which are laid out in the original text. Some of this could have been overlooked, but the writing doesn't quite hold up for me.
SPOILERS
Mr Collins announcing his intention to find a wife at Longbourn at the table, in front of all his cousins, was frustrating as it totally contradicts P&P, and the style and inconsistentances spiral from there.
What was more frustrating was how the female characters were practically two dimensional.
2 stars because the authors had some really really original ideas - I loved the thought of Colonel Fitzwilliam having an older twin brother, and much of the tone is appropriate if the author is trying to channel Austen.
Unfortunately the book is inconsistent with Austen's characters and deviates from manners and conventions from the time period, which are laid out in the original text. Some of this could have been overlooked, but the writing doesn't quite hold up for me.
SPOILERS
Mr Collins announcing his intention to find a wife at Longbourn at the table, in front of all his cousins, was frustrating as it totally contradicts P&P, and the style and inconsistentances spiral from there.
What was more frustrating was how the female characters were practically two dimensional.
2 stars because the authors had some really really original ideas - I loved the thought of Colonel Fitzwilliam having an older twin brother, and much of the tone is appropriate if the author is trying to channel Austen.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 10, 2020
Good read with too many errors
This was an enjoyable book, by an author I follow, with some interesting twists on the P&P plot. I found the many malaprops and errors to be irritating, however. Examples: brusque v brisk, allied v allayed, excepting v accepting, Bigley v Bingley, intreated v entreated, serine v serene, gapping v gaping, belittler v belittle, morning v mourning, martial v marital, find v fine, etc. this author should have a better editor - or even spell check would be an improvement. Still, it was an enjoyable read.
This was an enjoyable book, by an author I follow, with some interesting twists on the P&P plot. I found the many malaprops and errors to be irritating, however. Examples: brusque v brisk, allied v allayed, excepting v accepting, Bigley v Bingley, intreated v entreated, serine v serene, gapping v gaping, belittler v belittle, morning v mourning, martial v marital, find v fine, etc. this author should have a better editor - or even spell check would be an improvement. Still, it was an enjoyable read.
November 16, 2020
Good different
I like that Mr. Collins has principles, sticks to them, and earns the respect of one of the Bennet girls. I don't like that we never then hear of their fate. It's a nice romance for Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth, and others. Always amazes me how many ways there are to tell the same story.
I like that Mr. Collins has principles, sticks to them, and earns the respect of one of the Bennet girls. I don't like that we never then hear of their fate. It's a nice romance for Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth, and others. Always amazes me how many ways there are to tell the same story.
October 27, 2022
a very different “what if” variation
A very unusual variation which made for delightful reading. The idea of Meryton embracing the idea of duelling with alacrity rang true - a great excitement in their quiet lives.
Not perhaps the most romantic of variations but that didn’t diminish the enjoyment.
A very unusual variation which made for delightful reading. The idea of Meryton embracing the idea of duelling with alacrity rang true - a great excitement in their quiet lives.
Not perhaps the most romantic of variations but that didn’t diminish the enjoyment.
September 29, 2023
Entertaining
Interesting storyline for this variation. 4 stars because Darcy and Elizabeth's misunderstandings were rather tedious. Arguing over a duel? I found it uninteresting and hard to fathom. Also the remark of Charlotte being ugly, as a gentleman Darcy would never have used those words and then wagered with Richard. Poorly said. Otherwise, Enjoyable.
Interesting storyline for this variation. 4 stars because Darcy and Elizabeth's misunderstandings were rather tedious. Arguing over a duel? I found it uninteresting and hard to fathom. Also the remark of Charlotte being ugly, as a gentleman Darcy would never have used those words and then wagered with Richard. Poorly said. Otherwise, Enjoyable.
August 23, 2020
I didn't enjoy this book as much as the others by these authors. The story is slow, and is more of telling a story than anything happening.
February 5, 2022
This one surprised me! Fun.
March 4, 2023
3.5 stars rounded up. Enjoyable, but not sure I’d read it again. I’ll try more of these two authors’ books..
April 19, 2024
I really enjoyed this P&P retelling. It diverges pretty significantly from canon, but still remains true to the characters. I was a little sad when it ended.
August 8, 2024
A well-written interesting book, with a duel involving a surprising participant.
Recommended
2nd read 8/8/24
Recommended
2nd read 8/8/24
September 7, 2019
Wonderful
The story starts well before the meeting of ODC, and lays the groundwork for the villainy of George Wickham. Because of a betrayal by Wickham, Anne DeBourgh is endangered and subsequently rescued by Colonel Fitzwilliam. As a result, Fitzwilliam inherits Rosings Park after the death of Anne, and then later, Lady Catherine. Darcy is present during the incident with Anne, and it isn't apparent at that point that Wickham is involved in it, but that connection comes to light later.
Eventually the assembly in Hertfordshire happens, but now Fitzwilliam and Georgiana are there as well, and they're both quite different characters than in the original version. Fitzwilliam is now a landowner, and no longer in the army. Georgiana has had the incident in Ramsgate, but she's more bold and self-confident, and not at all afraid of Wickham. Rather than worrying about a sister who is too introverted, now Darcy is trying to handle a girl who wants to be too outgoing, and is eager for some exposure to society.
The story moves at an unhurried pace, and gives a lot of time to a gradual development of friendship, and then affection between Darcy and Elizabeth. This version of Darcy starts out proud and insufferable at the assembly, but his cousin and sister are both there to call him out for it, so he sees the error of his ways a little quicker.
Mr. Collins plays a major role, and the authors do a good job of retaining most of his ridiculousness, but finding a way for him to have some moments of heroism. It's refreshing to have him do some things right, and even to become a respected person. He's actually an interesting character in this version.
I think it's the addition of Georgiana and Mr. Fitzwilliam to the people visiting Bingley in Hertfordshire that makes Darcy's character more grounded and less clueless about his faults. They both provide him with feedback and with situations designed to bring about his reformation. I like this version of Darcy, floundering at first, but then perfectly willing to try different approaches to situations.
There were some editing errors, but not enough to distract. I recommend this book highly.
The story starts well before the meeting of ODC, and lays the groundwork for the villainy of George Wickham. Because of a betrayal by Wickham, Anne DeBourgh is endangered and subsequently rescued by Colonel Fitzwilliam. As a result, Fitzwilliam inherits Rosings Park after the death of Anne, and then later, Lady Catherine. Darcy is present during the incident with Anne, and it isn't apparent at that point that Wickham is involved in it, but that connection comes to light later.
Eventually the assembly in Hertfordshire happens, but now Fitzwilliam and Georgiana are there as well, and they're both quite different characters than in the original version. Fitzwilliam is now a landowner, and no longer in the army. Georgiana has had the incident in Ramsgate, but she's more bold and self-confident, and not at all afraid of Wickham. Rather than worrying about a sister who is too introverted, now Darcy is trying to handle a girl who wants to be too outgoing, and is eager for some exposure to society.
The story moves at an unhurried pace, and gives a lot of time to a gradual development of friendship, and then affection between Darcy and Elizabeth. This version of Darcy starts out proud and insufferable at the assembly, but his cousin and sister are both there to call him out for it, so he sees the error of his ways a little quicker.
Mr. Collins plays a major role, and the authors do a good job of retaining most of his ridiculousness, but finding a way for him to have some moments of heroism. It's refreshing to have him do some things right, and even to become a respected person. He's actually an interesting character in this version.
I think it's the addition of Georgiana and Mr. Fitzwilliam to the people visiting Bingley in Hertfordshire that makes Darcy's character more grounded and less clueless about his faults. They both provide him with feedback and with situations designed to bring about his reformation. I like this version of Darcy, floundering at first, but then perfectly willing to try different approaches to situations.
There were some editing errors, but not enough to distract. I recommend this book highly.
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