The Repenting Serpent is the second in the DCI Yorke series. Set around three years after Last Prayer for the Rays, the novel opens with a bloody, horrific death which not only shakes up the entire team but sets a bizarre precedent for the rest of the novel. Over the course of three days, three murders are committed, and Yorke is no closer to discovering who the murderer is. All he has is a photograph mistakenly left behind, and a warning from someone in the last stages of Alzheimer's. Can he catch the killer before it’s too late?
As mentioned, this is the second in the series, and while this could happily be read as a standalone, I don’t suggest you do. Start with the first novel. Last Prayer is a gruesome, fast past, psychologically twisting novel which takes everything comfortable and throws it out the window. The Rays were a damaged, gross family, and the murderer felt real, as well as painfully justified. The book opened in a unique, stunning way, creating tension to a standard I still hold other crime novels to. At the time, it was and still is, one of my favourite books within the genre, right up there with the DI Sterling novels. From the moment I knew about this tour, my excitement was palpable, but as was my anxiety. Would the book stand up to such a strong predecessor? Could Wes keep the tension as tight and concise? Could any other murderer be as grossly satisfying as the Rays were? Before I say anymore, I want to say yes, yes, and yes, but with a warning – Serpent isn’t Last Prayer.
It’s actually more satisfying in the ways Last Prayer wasn’t, but less intense as far as the mystery is concerned. I know that might not make sense, but I want to revisit two critique I had for Last Prayer, to try and explain.
In my review, I said I felt the ‘good guy’ characters got so little airtime, I didn’t know them. Serpent handles that with ease, and by the end of the first chapter, my heart was incredibly heavy with emotion. As I had very little come before, I wasn’t invested in the characters or necessarily sad for them per say, but was just very sad, if that makes sense. To further this, Wes made an incredibly bold story telling choice by giving almost every named character a POV moment, often breaking up chapters with a paragraph or two from many members of the ‘cast’, a technique we tend to see in Fantasy, not Crime, but by doing so we’re treated to scenes we’d never have been able to see otherwise. There were one or two times where this style felt choppy, as some of these POV changes are only a few sentences long, but choppy isn’t necessarily a bad word. As with sentence structure, and needing to create mood, Wes uses scene lengths to conjure atmosphere. Those short, snappy interludes keep the plot moving, and our interests keen. It’s a choice, and one I didn’t expect, but overall, one I enjoyed.
I also stated in the Last Prayer review, that I felt there was an arc which felt out of place, and it ended up extending the ending an unnecessary amount of time. This novel eradicates that. There are side arcs, but every plotline wove towards the same end point, creating a satisfying, mood inducing finale. The epilogue is heart breaking, I warn you now, but Wes has made another powerful choice – kill your darlings. I won’t go into it any more than that, but this decision was well made, and overall allowed every arc to be poignant.
The only thing I missed from Last Prayer was the mystery. We knew a lot by the middle of the book, and it became a race against time, instead of a journey of discovery. This isn’t a critique, as I’m madly in love with the culture Wes introduced into Serpent, but as you know, I prefer knowing very little until the crux of the situation. While I missed it, I thoroughly enjoyed the force that lay in its place. For fans of intensely researched, well plotted, and adrenaline inducing crime, this will be a hit. Likewise, for fans of novels which hinge on realism, and no instances where the good guys magically know where to be and when, this is a zinger.
The only critique I’d give, is minor, but one I find myself giving a lot in in this genre – the blurb or promotional material needs warnings. Do not read this if you have a weak stomach, or aren’t a fan of grotesque, as from page one, things are intense. I wouldn’t go as far as to say trigger warnings are necessary, but for gore, you’ve been warned. I’m a fan of the macabre, so was insanely pleased, but if you only teeter that line, this could be too much.
To round up, The Repenting Serpent is a fantastic second novel to a strong series. It’s not its predecessor but is a fantastic novel in its own right. If you enjoy gripping crime where the unexpected occurs, where you’ll feel ill, then sad, then overloaded, before elated, this is a novel to get. If you give this a read, I hope you come back and share your thoughts with me, this isn’t a book to ignore.
I’d just like to say thank you to the author, publisher, and blog tour host for the opportunity to read this for an honest review. All my thoughts are my own, but for transparency, I received this book for free.