2.0⭐️ This is a damn good story; it’s a damn good, hilarious story, and it is a damn good, sexy-as-hell, romantic story. I absolutely enjoyed Koji Okada, who owns his own company and develops cutting edge technology. He’s arrogant, confident and charming. Dr. Trista Hathaway, a County Coroner in Macon, Georgia, is an extremely intelligent, attractive, no-nonsense, honest black woman—a strong black woman. I love the black woman/japanese man match-up.
The novella explores the ways in which these two intelligent, confident people go toe to toe with each other. They have an easy going camaraderie. Koji wants Trista to persuade her father to try his new app at the family’s mortuary. He believes it will revolutionize the funeral industry service. Trista emphatically rejects Koji’s request. He’s determined to change her mind. Who will win? What an intriguing premise this is, yeah?
If that is so, why such a low rating? Plainly speaking, this short novella is only 60 pages (not the 78 pages indicated), yet it was riddled with proofreading and editing issues. Specifically, there are missing words, dropped words, or wrong, inexplicable or just plain nonsensical words and phrases. Consider this excerpt from the book: “In less than ten minutes, she was dressed, her teeth were brushed, and her hair tamed with her overnight bag.” Further, incorrect and missing punctuation often resulted in run-on sentences. Moreover, there are several inconsistencies that are very easy to spot. These types of problems are egregious given the length of the piece. In fact, these problems were not simply annoyances, but rather they hindered the full enjoyment of the book.
All in all, the pervasiveness of the mistakes and errors in this book turned what should have been an easy read into a proofreading exercise. Accordingly, these excessive errors have resulted in a diminution of stars to 2.