WOW!
This story was really wild! The men cheating on their wives and girlfriends then killing them and their families off for sport! Yeah, the exes were doing stupid stuff but, Jacinta was the only one that should have been killed!! I didn't like how many times you let her torture and abuse her baby in this story. It was very, very hard to read! And I can't believe that you made Ant okay with his mother being killed no matter how much he liked Vanity! Kids get mistreated by there parents but, still love them and don't want them dead! Vanity or Ant's dad didn't care about his feelings they only cared about what they wanted! And the men had no regard for anyone other than their families! And they were all cheaters!