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The Flawed Princess
Is forgiveness too high a cost to save a kingdom?
Violet is hidden away by her father, a provincial lord, for having a deformed foot. She is tired of being ignored and longs to help her people, who have been abused and suppressed by the court for generations. Their ancient magic is almost forgotten.
When she is caught up in a deadly rebellion, Violet is taken hostage by the king and dragged to the capital. A prisoner deprived of friends and family, she is thrown into a dangerous world of politics and strange magic, where men and beasts are bonded together. Violet realises she must quickly learn the rules of the castle in order to be a voice for her forgotten province.
But the bonds that tie people are fragile, and true evil lurks in the shadows of the castle. As war and assassination threaten to break the kingdom apart, Violet realises that to save it, she must learn to forgive her captor.
And maybe even allow herself to be loved.
Violet is hidden away by her father, a provincial lord, for having a deformed foot. She is tired of being ignored and longs to help her people, who have been abused and suppressed by the court for generations. Their ancient magic is almost forgotten.
When she is caught up in a deadly rebellion, Violet is taken hostage by the king and dragged to the capital. A prisoner deprived of friends and family, she is thrown into a dangerous world of politics and strange magic, where men and beasts are bonded together. Violet realises she must quickly learn the rules of the castle in order to be a voice for her forgotten province.
But the bonds that tie people are fragile, and true evil lurks in the shadows of the castle. As war and assassination threaten to break the kingdom apart, Violet realises that to save it, she must learn to forgive her captor.
And maybe even allow herself to be loved.
229 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 23, 2019
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About the author
Alice Ivinya
32 books312 followersAlice is a USA Today Bestselling author who writes low spice fantasy and fairytales.
She lives in Bristol, UK, and has loved fantasy all her life. Her favourite authors are Holly Black and Brandon Sanderson.
When she's not off gallivanting in other worlds, you can find her looking after her two young sons, hanging out with her church family, or walking the best dog in the world with her husband.
She lives in Bristol, UK, and has loved fantasy all her life. Her favourite authors are Holly Black and Brandon Sanderson.
When she's not off gallivanting in other worlds, you can find her looking after her two young sons, hanging out with her church family, or walking the best dog in the world with her husband.
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July 6, 2025
Well this was absolutely beautiful and I don’t give many 5 stars. Violet is strong and has character and is a truly real person. She doubts herself and her feelings, but she has a moral center and acts for what’s right no matter the price. A slight bit of Mary Sue going on here, but that’s mitigated with her body’s limits. The world felt real and solid, but there was still a bit of magic.
September 9, 2025
This book turned out to be a little gem.
Excellent world building, unique magic system, great plot.
Amazing, strong heroine and compassionate Hero.
It makes me a bit sad that there is no sequel because the author did such a great job with world-building and all the characters that she could easily add a few books more without being tiresome.
Looking forward to read more of her books.
Excellent world building, unique magic system, great plot.
Amazing, strong heroine and compassionate Hero.
It makes me a bit sad that there is no sequel because the author did such a great job with world-building and all the characters that she could easily add a few books more without being tiresome.
Looking forward to read more of her books.
January 27, 2022
This is my first time reading Alice Ivinya and let me just say, I was NOT disappointed! The Flawed Princess was a truly captivating read with an intriguing plot, well developed characters to fall in love with and adversaries to hate all encompassed in a beautiful enthralling world. So basically, if you’re a fan of YA Fantasy—then read on!
Violet is all but a captive in her own home as she’s considered “flawed” by those around her. Born with a club foot, flaming red hair and freckles makes her an outcast as it marks her as different and its seen as a weakness. Even her own father is ashamed of her “deformity” and keeps her hidden away and out of sight—leaving Vi with a passion to better the world and make a change to help the abused…until a failed rebellion leaves her a hostage of the king and opens her up to a whole new world.
Ivinya expertly wove an enthralling tale of a young girls journey of self-discovery, political intrigue and the ultimate revelation of power and hidden magic that instantly captures you and draws you right in. I absolutely loved that our heroine was not the stereotypical heroine/princess as Vi demolishes boundaries and limitations others saw placed upon her due to her disability. The friendships and relationships she makes along the way, and the characters that become a part of her journey were all equally intriguing and amazing.
Overall if you love a good story of a heroine facing adversity and overcoming limitations that’s packed full of bravery, courage, trust, loyalty, treachery and forgiveness then this this one’s for you! This story is a super fun, well rounded, quick easy YA fantasy read that was beautifully written and utterly intriguing—so grab it for yourself to see now!
Violet is all but a captive in her own home as she’s considered “flawed” by those around her. Born with a club foot, flaming red hair and freckles makes her an outcast as it marks her as different and its seen as a weakness. Even her own father is ashamed of her “deformity” and keeps her hidden away and out of sight—leaving Vi with a passion to better the world and make a change to help the abused…until a failed rebellion leaves her a hostage of the king and opens her up to a whole new world.
Ivinya expertly wove an enthralling tale of a young girls journey of self-discovery, political intrigue and the ultimate revelation of power and hidden magic that instantly captures you and draws you right in. I absolutely loved that our heroine was not the stereotypical heroine/princess as Vi demolishes boundaries and limitations others saw placed upon her due to her disability. The friendships and relationships she makes along the way, and the characters that become a part of her journey were all equally intriguing and amazing.
Overall if you love a good story of a heroine facing adversity and overcoming limitations that’s packed full of bravery, courage, trust, loyalty, treachery and forgiveness then this this one’s for you! This story is a super fun, well rounded, quick easy YA fantasy read that was beautifully written and utterly intriguing—so grab it for yourself to see now!
June 20, 2022
Thankful to the person who recommended this to me, I am now probably going to go on a binge of this author.
Reminiscent of Hanna Sandvig in a way.
Reminiscent of Hanna Sandvig in a way.
May 18, 2023
Violet has been told by her father to always remain in
the shadows and not be seen because of her deformity. When her father listens to others and defies the king and proclaims himself king, the king arrives and he is killed because of his treason. Violet is taken as a prisoner back to the king’s palace but she finds she finally has the freedom to explore that her father never allowed her to have now as a result. She is hated by some but befriended by the king’s half sister and through a strange book she mysteriously receives learns of the ancient arts of the clans and by touching someone with the art while they are thinking of it she can get that art like Queen Avan of old. Betrayal is very much alive though and she and her brother are both threatened as well as the king and attempts are made on their lives. Because of what she has learned, she discovers who is behind the plots and vows to do what she can to stop them!
This is an exciting, page turning experience I throughly enjoyed! The king and Violet both have good hearts and intentions in wanting to help the people and she finds herself conflicted as to her feelings toward the man who killed her father.
I most assuredly recommend you get this book and read it- preferably after you read Queen Avan so you can stay in that world a little longer!
I know you’ll enjoy it as much as I did and will root for
Violet and Edward to come out on top to stop the rebellious uprising that has come to the kingdom.
Alice is a marvelous author whose books are well written and exciting and suspenseful to read! You’ll throughly enjoy the experience of finding yourself in her worlds where the characters come to life! They become your friends and you find yourself caught up in what they’re experiencing!!
Reading her books are a joy and I can’t recommend them enough! Pick up this book and see what I mean, then get and read her other books! You’ll be glad you did for you’ll find you’ve discovered a new author you’ll want to read more of!
the shadows and not be seen because of her deformity. When her father listens to others and defies the king and proclaims himself king, the king arrives and he is killed because of his treason. Violet is taken as a prisoner back to the king’s palace but she finds she finally has the freedom to explore that her father never allowed her to have now as a result. She is hated by some but befriended by the king’s half sister and through a strange book she mysteriously receives learns of the ancient arts of the clans and by touching someone with the art while they are thinking of it she can get that art like Queen Avan of old. Betrayal is very much alive though and she and her brother are both threatened as well as the king and attempts are made on their lives. Because of what she has learned, she discovers who is behind the plots and vows to do what she can to stop them!
This is an exciting, page turning experience I throughly enjoyed! The king and Violet both have good hearts and intentions in wanting to help the people and she finds herself conflicted as to her feelings toward the man who killed her father.
I most assuredly recommend you get this book and read it- preferably after you read Queen Avan so you can stay in that world a little longer!
I know you’ll enjoy it as much as I did and will root for
Violet and Edward to come out on top to stop the rebellious uprising that has come to the kingdom.
Alice is a marvelous author whose books are well written and exciting and suspenseful to read! You’ll throughly enjoy the experience of finding yourself in her worlds where the characters come to life! They become your friends and you find yourself caught up in what they’re experiencing!!
Reading her books are a joy and I can’t recommend them enough! Pick up this book and see what I mean, then get and read her other books! You’ll be glad you did for you’ll find you’ve discovered a new author you’ll want to read more of!
March 6, 2024
I really enjoyed this book! Violet was a brave, head-strong character. I also loved the representation that perfection isn't needed. Well done!
February 25, 2022
great fairytale
This felt like an exotic fairy tale, with more depth and complexity in the characters and the storyline. I liked the magical aspects of this world and would enjoy more time exploring them-the possibilities are intriguing.
This felt like an exotic fairy tale, with more depth and complexity in the characters and the storyline. I liked the magical aspects of this world and would enjoy more time exploring them-the possibilities are intriguing.
March 31, 2021
Great story
I enjoyed reading ‘The Flawed Princess’ and actually wanted it to be a little bit longer. It was satisfying to read about a princess whose minor defect did not keep her from accomplishing what she wanted/needed to do. I see there is a prequel which I have already downloaded.
I enjoyed reading ‘The Flawed Princess’ and actually wanted it to be a little bit longer. It was satisfying to read about a princess whose minor defect did not keep her from accomplishing what she wanted/needed to do. I see there is a prequel which I have already downloaded.
January 13, 2020
Anyone familiar with my blog knows I only gush when I truly love something, I can give something 5 stars (1 to 5 scale) but not gush because it was great the first time but I will likely never reread. Well, guess what this is a gusher. I loved this book. To start with the cover completely caught me. Most covers today are bright, flashy, very in your face. This was simple but not plain. The girl was not your typical type of pretty but more interesting and pretty in a presence sort of way. The dog was also intriguing. So I read the blurb and was like okay time to read. I got the book and started it...then finished it the same day.
Violet was a wonderful character that I can truly say does not remind me of any other character I have ever read about. She is, as the title indicates, flawed. She has red hair and freckles while all the people around her have brown or in some cases blond hair. Then there is her club foot. A sign of weakness and a mark against her she is stifled, oppressed, and then her entire world changes.
Going from never leaving her house to the palace where everyone despises her because of her foot or family she has to navigate a world of politics and hidden magic. Traitor ideas and changes of heart she never thought possible. And when the opportunity to make what she wants come true in a way she never thought possible will she choose that or love? RIght or wrong? And what is right and wrong? Which side is right? It's an epic fantasy tale of her changing as shes thrust from one world to the next and fights her way through finding herself and trying not to lose herself all at the same time.
The other characters were great too. Edward often amused me or annoyed me and I loved watching him grow as well. Jared often had my facepalming or fist-bumping him (in my mind only obviously). Bane was so sweet I wanted to hug him. And not all the characters are as they seem which added another dimension to the book.
An ever-changing world, one traitor at a time, and magic that can save or destroy. And a question of loyalty. To your family, your country, and your heart. I would so read this again. In fact if this became a series even if nothing else went wrong I would read the whole thing just to know how the future of all these wonderful characters go.
Violet was a wonderful character that I can truly say does not remind me of any other character I have ever read about. She is, as the title indicates, flawed. She has red hair and freckles while all the people around her have brown or in some cases blond hair. Then there is her club foot. A sign of weakness and a mark against her she is stifled, oppressed, and then her entire world changes.
Going from never leaving her house to the palace where everyone despises her because of her foot or family she has to navigate a world of politics and hidden magic. Traitor ideas and changes of heart she never thought possible. And when the opportunity to make what she wants come true in a way she never thought possible will she choose that or love? RIght or wrong? And what is right and wrong? Which side is right? It's an epic fantasy tale of her changing as shes thrust from one world to the next and fights her way through finding herself and trying not to lose herself all at the same time.
The other characters were great too. Edward often amused me or annoyed me and I loved watching him grow as well. Jared often had my facepalming or fist-bumping him (in my mind only obviously). Bane was so sweet I wanted to hug him. And not all the characters are as they seem which added another dimension to the book.
An ever-changing world, one traitor at a time, and magic that can save or destroy. And a question of loyalty. To your family, your country, and your heart. I would so read this again. In fact if this became a series even if nothing else went wrong I would read the whole thing just to know how the future of all these wonderful characters go.
May 7, 2021
The flawed princess has a really unexpected storyline and memorable characters.
The plotting is really interesting, with a real sense that the things that didn't happen could have happened, which is often strangely lacking in books. The characters are memorable, and I think will appeal especially to a more young adult audience.
Structured and thought through magic systems can be a lot of fun to think about, but sometimes come at the expense of the story itself. The flawed princess handles this balance perfectly, eventually establishing a fascinating outline of the magic of the world, without slowing the plot. The magic is deeply tied to the cultures we encounter, which makes it feel deeply real. A part of their world.
In a similar vein the book does a great job of balancing the politics. On the one hand making the world's politics feel real. Not just "good vs evil" but actual people in governments with their own ideas of what is right (price of wheat is a dividing line in their politics). While on the other hand ensuring that it remains properly an adventure story, we don't get bogged in politics and that we can support our protagonist. I think maybe there is one line of dialogue too many about the price of wheat, but we get our big proper adventure and the conflict feels natural.
Altogether an excellent read!
The plotting is really interesting, with a real sense that the things that didn't happen could have happened, which is often strangely lacking in books. The characters are memorable, and I think will appeal especially to a more young adult audience.
Structured and thought through magic systems can be a lot of fun to think about, but sometimes come at the expense of the story itself. The flawed princess handles this balance perfectly, eventually establishing a fascinating outline of the magic of the world, without slowing the plot. The magic is deeply tied to the cultures we encounter, which makes it feel deeply real. A part of their world.
In a similar vein the book does a great job of balancing the politics. On the one hand making the world's politics feel real. Not just "good vs evil" but actual people in governments with their own ideas of what is right (price of wheat is a dividing line in their politics). While on the other hand ensuring that it remains properly an adventure story, we don't get bogged in politics and that we can support our protagonist. I think maybe there is one line of dialogue too many about the price of wheat, but we get our big proper adventure and the conflict feels natural.
Altogether an excellent read!
August 24, 2019
I don't usually read self published books, because they all seem to have the same pitfalls, but I enjoyed this novel a lot. More than I thought I would, certainly.
The main character is interesting, and the love story is a natural progression of the characters' relationship. The magic is compelling and not what you normally find in a fantasy novel. I'd love to read more on it.
There are the same issues that all self published novels suffer from in the form of typos, but they are few and far between and easily forgiven. I would definitely read other works by this author in the future.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The main character is interesting, and the love story is a natural progression of the characters' relationship. The magic is compelling and not what you normally find in a fantasy novel. I'd love to read more on it.
There are the same issues that all self published novels suffer from in the form of typos, but they are few and far between and easily forgiven. I would definitely read other works by this author in the future.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 3, 2019
I liked the story and the heroine, flawed (it's actually a physical handicap) but courageous. The story is pleasant and I loved the style, but, as I kept reading, I grew more and more frustrated about the treatment of the 'love story' between h and H. We are informed that the H loves the h, but nothing in the story hints at this 'love'. The two lovebirds had barely spoken or spent time together; the h is sweet, but not particularly bright, educated, or attractive. Why did the H fall in love with her? Just because she was there? Due to this issue, it's only a 2 1/2 stars for me. It could have easily been a 5 star book. In my opinion is a lost opportunity.
August 23, 2019
This story starts off a bit slow, but if you push through the first two chapters you will be consumed. I devoured this book in about a day. I couldn't read fast enough to find out what was going to happen. The author did a wonderful job of keeping me on the hook, but not hiding things too much that I couldn't figure them out as the main character did or even slightly before. It is an inspiring story that reminds us we just need to be ourselves.
September 2, 2019
I loved this book. The main character, Violet, has a sort of spunky confidence that steals the reader’s heart immediately. From the first chapter I had to know what was going to happen to her. With each page The Flawed Princess engulfed me in its magic, becoming better and better until I simply couldn’t put it down. I one hundred percent recommend it. After all, who needs sleep anyways?
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 29, 2019
This story is vivid, flowing and consuming. I just couldn't put it down till the last page.
May 12, 2021
A right royal political fantasy romance... Sort of. While there's plenty to like about this tale of a "crippled" girl thrown to the very human wolves of a magical court, there were also several things that just didn't quite work out for me. Sadly, the central romance was one of them, and being so integral to the plot it did bring down my enjoyment of the book as a whole.
Lady Violet lives in Herne, capital of the Farthi lands where crops are grown to feed all of the tribal kingdom of Sellador. Kept out of sight by her ambitious father because of her club foot-induced limp, she dreams of one day being allowed to visit the outside world. That day comes too soon when her father and her scheming cousin Liam attempt a coup to take back their corner of the kingdom from their Tharan rulers and create their own. When their rebellion is quashed by the young King Edward, Violet is taken as a political prisoner to ensure her family's good behaviour. On her journey she learns more about the magical Arts of the other tribes of the kingdom including those lost Arts of her own Farthi people. She also must learn quickly that not everyone is who they may first appear...
The early story really drew me in. I liked Violet's no nonsese narration, and while it's obviously mentioned that he's got a disability, it's not made a massive thing of (except by those looking to belittle her). She's strong and determined without feeling unnaturally so, never falling into that Not Like The Other Girls trope that so many ladies of YA do. She does however act a little immaturely for her supposed 17/18 years - maybe age her down a few and I'd have believed her naivety a little more. I know she's been isolated, but some of her actions seem a bit too naive given the whole coup she's just lived through.
The plot does get a bit slow once we hit the Tharan royal court, and there's quite a bit of info-dumping about the different "tribes". The lore of the world is really interesting though, what with the four peoples having different abilities, and then specific kinds of abilities within their own schools of magic. We mainly see the Tharans and their animal-companions at work, but it was a nice addition to know more of the world that Violet had never experienced. I wished there could have been more time to develop the world, like knowing about the Ionain Princess (boo, hiss!) and how the other kingdoms/tribes fitted together. The twist at the end felt a tad rushed and monologue-ish, but I liked the general direction of it and that I didn't instantly see it coming.
The thing that did slow my enjoyment of the story greatly was the romance, or rather how it happened. It just... Happened. The couple barely spend any time together. Violet should have at least some reservations about getting so cozy with him so easily and telling him her secrets. Yet suddenly he loves her and she loves him without development time. I'm not one for smush, but it needed time to build. I'd expected some kind of enemies to lovers scenario, but it didn't the have that kind of tension.
While the writing is pretty solid and well-flowing, I found some of the language choices sounded unnatural or odd. Take " tribes" used to describe groups in very Euro/Medieval styled fantasy where you'd expect "clans" or something similar, or a person being described as "painful" when falling to the floor rather than the action. Sometimes it was enough to make me stop and wonder what was meant, or if I had been picturing the world wrongly all along.
Overall while it was an alright read, it wasn't quite the high drama/enemies to lovers/story of self-discovery fantasy adventure I'd been expecting from the blurb.
Lady Violet lives in Herne, capital of the Farthi lands where crops are grown to feed all of the tribal kingdom of Sellador. Kept out of sight by her ambitious father because of her club foot-induced limp, she dreams of one day being allowed to visit the outside world. That day comes too soon when her father and her scheming cousin Liam attempt a coup to take back their corner of the kingdom from their Tharan rulers and create their own. When their rebellion is quashed by the young King Edward, Violet is taken as a political prisoner to ensure her family's good behaviour. On her journey she learns more about the magical Arts of the other tribes of the kingdom including those lost Arts of her own Farthi people. She also must learn quickly that not everyone is who they may first appear...
The early story really drew me in. I liked Violet's no nonsese narration, and while it's obviously mentioned that he's got a disability, it's not made a massive thing of (except by those looking to belittle her). She's strong and determined without feeling unnaturally so, never falling into that Not Like The Other Girls trope that so many ladies of YA do. She does however act a little immaturely for her supposed 17/18 years - maybe age her down a few and I'd have believed her naivety a little more. I know she's been isolated, but some of her actions seem a bit too naive given the whole coup she's just lived through.
The plot does get a bit slow once we hit the Tharan royal court, and there's quite a bit of info-dumping about the different "tribes". The lore of the world is really interesting though, what with the four peoples having different abilities, and then specific kinds of abilities within their own schools of magic. We mainly see the Tharans and their animal-companions at work, but it was a nice addition to know more of the world that Violet had never experienced. I wished there could have been more time to develop the world, like knowing about the Ionain Princess (boo, hiss!) and how the other kingdoms/tribes fitted together. The twist at the end felt a tad rushed and monologue-ish, but I liked the general direction of it and that I didn't instantly see it coming.
The thing that did slow my enjoyment of the story greatly was the romance, or rather how it happened. It just... Happened. The couple barely spend any time together. Violet should have at least some reservations about getting so cozy with him so easily and telling him her secrets. Yet suddenly he loves her and she loves him without development time. I'm not one for smush, but it needed time to build. I'd expected some kind of enemies to lovers scenario, but it didn't the have that kind of tension.
While the writing is pretty solid and well-flowing, I found some of the language choices sounded unnatural or odd. Take " tribes" used to describe groups in very Euro/Medieval styled fantasy where you'd expect "clans" or something similar, or a person being described as "painful" when falling to the floor rather than the action. Sometimes it was enough to make me stop and wonder what was meant, or if I had been picturing the world wrongly all along.
Overall while it was an alright read, it wasn't quite the high drama/enemies to lovers/story of self-discovery fantasy adventure I'd been expecting from the blurb.
January 27, 2024
*3.5*
The start was a bit slow but then I got pretty into the story only to be dissapointed at the ending. The rating then went from 4 to 3 but I ended at a 3.5 due to liking the main character.
I thought Violet was good main lead. She was kind and normal, in the sense that she wasn' the typical kick-ass heroine we have been getting for ages now (nothing wrong with that, just nice with a more relatable heroine now and then). Although being restricted by her father, she was still learned and smart. At times she cold be emotional and rude but mostly she is a calm and well reflected girl with a lot to contribute with.
Edward was also a nice character. Literally, he is very nice, almost a bit much x) I totally agree that he was being very merciful and considerate. He is a pretty standard nice guy and I like him, but also don't consider him a very distinct character. Not anything new in the clean historical fantasy genre.
The romance was also fine, but again standard. You just expect them to get together because that is just how the hostage-king plot goes, and they are both nice characters so nothing wrong, but nothing particularly noteworthy either (I have been reading a lot of books with similar relationships lately and I am starting to crave books with deeper connections, you know: obvious chemistry, witty banter, sizzling attraction, and all that jazz xD)
*SPOILER*
The ending, however, dissapointed me. The twist was okay. We are given several hints early on in the story, so nothing too suprising really, but my problem was that Violet just got too OP. Honestly, the ending battle felt a bit ridiculous. It went from court intrigue to confusing battle in the air with a monster. I also think that if the author was going to make her OP it would make more sense if the power were related to her farthi lineage that very much of the story is focused on, rather than flying powers... Also, the fact that one of the main villains simply gave up and commited suicide by jumping of the roof just dindt make any sense...
I also feel that many fantasy authors do not utilize their own fantasy elements enough, they only introduce supernatural elements and then they only appear at the very end of the story, making the ending seem a bit out of place. This is also something I have experiences a lot lately and starting to get sick off. The arts and all of that is okay, but all the forbidden stuff about killing powers, chimeras and golems is only mentioned (and demonstrates one time) and then at the end there is suddenly a golem army attacking and freaky OP villians. It almost feels a bit like the middel part and the ending are different genres. The story would be better without the over-the top fantasy elements if the author is only going to save it for the very end. Feels more like a plot device than part of the worldbuilding if that makes sense?
Anyway, okay book, but the ending dissapointed.
The start was a bit slow but then I got pretty into the story only to be dissapointed at the ending. The rating then went from 4 to 3 but I ended at a 3.5 due to liking the main character.
I thought Violet was good main lead. She was kind and normal, in the sense that she wasn' the typical kick-ass heroine we have been getting for ages now (nothing wrong with that, just nice with a more relatable heroine now and then). Although being restricted by her father, she was still learned and smart. At times she cold be emotional and rude but mostly she is a calm and well reflected girl with a lot to contribute with.
Edward was also a nice character. Literally, he is very nice, almost a bit much x) I totally agree that he was being very merciful and considerate. He is a pretty standard nice guy and I like him, but also don't consider him a very distinct character. Not anything new in the clean historical fantasy genre.
The romance was also fine, but again standard. You just expect them to get together because that is just how the hostage-king plot goes, and they are both nice characters so nothing wrong, but nothing particularly noteworthy either (I have been reading a lot of books with similar relationships lately and I am starting to crave books with deeper connections, you know: obvious chemistry, witty banter, sizzling attraction, and all that jazz xD)
*SPOILER*
The ending, however, dissapointed me. The twist was okay. We are given several hints early on in the story, so nothing too suprising really, but my problem was that Violet just got too OP. Honestly, the ending battle felt a bit ridiculous. It went from court intrigue to confusing battle in the air with a monster. I also think that if the author was going to make her OP it would make more sense if the power were related to her farthi lineage that very much of the story is focused on, rather than flying powers... Also, the fact that one of the main villains simply gave up and commited suicide by jumping of the roof just dindt make any sense...
I also feel that many fantasy authors do not utilize their own fantasy elements enough, they only introduce supernatural elements and then they only appear at the very end of the story, making the ending seem a bit out of place. This is also something I have experiences a lot lately and starting to get sick off. The arts and all of that is okay, but all the forbidden stuff about killing powers, chimeras and golems is only mentioned (and demonstrates one time) and then at the end there is suddenly a golem army attacking and freaky OP villians. It almost feels a bit like the middel part and the ending are different genres. The story would be better without the over-the top fantasy elements if the author is only going to save it for the very end. Feels more like a plot device than part of the worldbuilding if that makes sense?
Anyway, okay book, but the ending dissapointed.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 23, 2023
I was worried for a hot second there when it was revealed she was 12 years old in chapter 1. Then I saw the "5 years later" subheader to chapter 2 and went PHEW, I can work with this (17 year old protagonist)! Especially since I knew there was a romance coming. (Which chapter 1 also heavily hinted at, between specific meet cute's and her -never will I ever's-.)
This book was REALLY good for the first 1/2-3/4 of the book after chapter 1 and i *devoured* it between a bubblebath, reading after midnight in my bed, and reading past meal times the next day.
However. And this is why I docked a star, for a number of reasons:
1) It really pained me to see that one princess (Telu?)'s dark skin tone commented on multiple times, just for her to be made a petty love interest rival to the ~poor white female protagonist~. I think diversity in books is important, but not with these kinda optics. Maybe unintentional by the author, but if you're going to write diverse characters (which IS important), they need to be in both hero and antagonist roles, not just the caricature vapid+slutty woman role...
2) The romance, while enjoyable and developed gradually, had out of the blue "I love you's" that felt abrupt and...I don't want to say "unearned," but they felt awkward in the context of the book they were set in. Their relationship in the last couple chapters also felt like it rushed forward (without a time lapse) and *that* definitely felt unearned??? idk.
3) there were spelling and grammar errors that, while not as overwhelming as other indie or self-published books I've read recently (cough Thornwood Fae cough), became a little cringe-y when they became more numerous near the end of the book. Nothing another good copy editing job couldn't fix, however (cause I think she mentions having one in the acknowledgements...).
Overall, I enjoyed the book, but I think it's a solid 3.5 star book (rating rounded up given how fast I tore thru it).
This book was REALLY good for the first 1/2-3/4 of the book after chapter 1 and i *devoured* it between a bubblebath, reading after midnight in my bed, and reading past meal times the next day.
However. And this is why I docked a star, for a number of reasons:
1) It really pained me to see that one princess (Telu?)'s dark skin tone commented on multiple times, just for her to be made a petty love interest rival to the ~poor white female protagonist~. I think diversity in books is important, but not with these kinda optics. Maybe unintentional by the author, but if you're going to write diverse characters (which IS important), they need to be in both hero and antagonist roles, not just the caricature vapid+slutty woman role...
2) The romance, while enjoyable and developed gradually, had out of the blue "I love you's" that felt abrupt and...I don't want to say "unearned," but they felt awkward in the context of the book they were set in. Their relationship in the last couple chapters also felt like it rushed forward (without a time lapse) and *that* definitely felt unearned??? idk.
3) there were spelling and grammar errors that, while not as overwhelming as other indie or self-published books I've read recently (cough Thornwood Fae cough), became a little cringe-y when they became more numerous near the end of the book. Nothing another good copy editing job couldn't fix, however (cause I think she mentions having one in the acknowledgements...).
Overall, I enjoyed the book, but I think it's a solid 3.5 star book (rating rounded up given how fast I tore thru it).
December 13, 2024
What happens when a handicapped woman shut away from society becomes a king’s political hostage?
You end up with this sweet story.
Violet’s family is descendent from when their province had kings. As the Lord of the province, her father hides Violet away from society as her club foot is an embarrassment for him. As such she has never been off the family property, never ridden a horse and had minimal contact with anyone other than family or servants.
When her family overreaches by trying to recreate their own sovereign kingdom, and her father and uncle killed as traitors, Violet is taken by the young king to keep her family in line. Violet knows she is worthless as a hostage as the only person who cares is her brother, but the king treats her kindly, even if his court is not pleased.
Through Edward’s kindness, Violet is finally free to explore the world around her and she finds herself coming to enjoy his friendship. But can her friendship become love when Edward is the man who sentenced her father to death, and can the kingdom accept her when deaths start to build up within the palace itself?
I enjoyed Violet’s spirit and insatiable curiosity- she struggles to be seen for who she is, and not by her family or handicap. The king is sweetly supportive and I like the pair’s budding friendship and eventual relationship. Some reviews mention the lack of time Edward actually spends with Violet, but the story’s explanation works just fine for me.
My only issue is the magic system- and the ending of “you were made to be extraordinary” shtick… it’s confusing why Violet had to be more than she is, because she could have stayed the everyday girl she was and the ending changed. Of course, the kiss at the end as written is adorable.
Tween me says 4 stars, adult me 3 1/2, thus the 4-star review.
The only warning for young readers is murder and blood.
You end up with this sweet story.
Violet’s family is descendent from when their province had kings. As the Lord of the province, her father hides Violet away from society as her club foot is an embarrassment for him. As such she has never been off the family property, never ridden a horse and had minimal contact with anyone other than family or servants.
When her family overreaches by trying to recreate their own sovereign kingdom, and her father and uncle killed as traitors, Violet is taken by the young king to keep her family in line. Violet knows she is worthless as a hostage as the only person who cares is her brother, but the king treats her kindly, even if his court is not pleased.
Through Edward’s kindness, Violet is finally free to explore the world around her and she finds herself coming to enjoy his friendship. But can her friendship become love when Edward is the man who sentenced her father to death, and can the kingdom accept her when deaths start to build up within the palace itself?
I enjoyed Violet’s spirit and insatiable curiosity- she struggles to be seen for who she is, and not by her family or handicap. The king is sweetly supportive and I like the pair’s budding friendship and eventual relationship. Some reviews mention the lack of time Edward actually spends with Violet, but the story’s explanation works just fine for me.
My only issue is the magic system- and the ending of “you were made to be extraordinary” shtick… it’s confusing why Violet had to be more than she is, because she could have stayed the everyday girl she was and the ending changed. Of course, the kiss at the end as written is adorable.
Tween me says 4 stars, adult me 3 1/2, thus the 4-star review.
The only warning for young readers is murder and blood.
August 3, 2022
Violet has a disability and because of it, her father keeps her hidden away. Although she is intelligent, kind and immensely strong, bearing pain without complaint, she is kept on the sidelines until her father's rebellion against the king sends her life into turmoil. Violet ends up being taken as a hostage prisoner by the king. Traveling through the kingdom she basks in her newfound freedom and learns all there is to know about the wide world she lives in.
I don't want to give any more of the plot away. All I will say is that this is high fantasy at its best. Ivinya's world comes to life beautifully. I love the small, almost insignificant details that make this book vivid and feel so real. I honestly journeyed with Violet through the marvels she encountered. Another outstanding detail is the magic in this world. Ivinya has constructed a fabulous magical system that is intriguing and fascinating. I lapped up every little tit-bit the author deigned to strew out. It was truly amazing.
I am also very impressed with the message of strength Ivinya sends to all those who are different and who are told that they cannot do something or be something because of an accident of their birth. It is an uplifting and inspiring message, truly worthy of our age and beautifully wrapped in a magical fantasy packaging that lets us escape the monotony of our mundane lives and live, even for a little bit, in a realm where dreams come true. A part of me is most satisfied with this stand-alone novel, while another would love to have the opportunity to immerse myself in that world over and over again. I'm sure I'll be reading this book again sometime. It really is that good.
I don't want to give any more of the plot away. All I will say is that this is high fantasy at its best. Ivinya's world comes to life beautifully. I love the small, almost insignificant details that make this book vivid and feel so real. I honestly journeyed with Violet through the marvels she encountered. Another outstanding detail is the magic in this world. Ivinya has constructed a fabulous magical system that is intriguing and fascinating. I lapped up every little tit-bit the author deigned to strew out. It was truly amazing.
I am also very impressed with the message of strength Ivinya sends to all those who are different and who are told that they cannot do something or be something because of an accident of their birth. It is an uplifting and inspiring message, truly worthy of our age and beautifully wrapped in a magical fantasy packaging that lets us escape the monotony of our mundane lives and live, even for a little bit, in a realm where dreams come true. A part of me is most satisfied with this stand-alone novel, while another would love to have the opportunity to immerse myself in that world over and over again. I'm sure I'll be reading this book again sometime. It really is that good.
January 19, 2025
For being titled “The Flawed Princess”, the book has a distinct lack of flaws for its main character. Her only two flaws are being crippled and hotheaded. But obviously we get the typical plot of the girl being insecure and afraid of not being “worthy” of the male lead (Like, my goodness, we get it. You hate yourself.)
And then at the end she decides to
The male lead does admit some of his faults at the end, but most of the time he gets away scott free. There’s this whole drama about him
What I did like was the tables turning of her being the powerful and capable one at the end and everyone else needing her help.
Minor quabble: there were a bunch of grammar issues (its/it’s, to/too)
The twist in tone??? Very startling. I just didn’t see it coming since up til then the amount of gore and violence had been pretty tame.
And then at the end she decides to
The male lead does admit some of his faults at the end, but most of the time he gets away scott free. There’s this whole drama about him
What I did like was the tables turning of her being the powerful and capable one at the end and everyone else needing her help.
Minor quabble: there were a bunch of grammar issues (its/it’s, to/too)
The twist in tone??? Very startling. I just didn’t see it coming since up til then the amount of gore and violence had been pretty tame.
July 11, 2024
I hesitated a long time to read this, honestly mostly because I didn't like the title. I didn't like the main character being described as "flawed," even if that's how her family views her in this book. I am glad I finally read it though, because it was great.
Violet was born with a club foot (her "flaw"). Because her lameness slowed her down, prevented her from riding and dancing, her father insisted she stay mostly hidden and forgotten in the castle. When she gets caught up in a rebellion, she is taken to the capital as a hostage for her family's good behavior. There, for the first time in her life, Violet is seen and heard. She must adjust to this new life as well as navigate court politics to save her family and her people.
I loved the first third of this book, because it focused on Violet and featured a lot of growth and coming-of-age themes. After that, the story had several plotlines going, featuring court politics, Violet's interest in the Arts, and a subtle romance plotline. And my only complaint here was that I wanted more. There was just barely enough to keep each plotline going, and I would have loved to have a bit more. Partly to develop the story a bit more, but also because I liked the characters and the setting and the writing, and I would have liked more of all of it.
A fairly standard fantasy adventure romance plotline with fantastic writing and characters.
Violet was born with a club foot (her "flaw"). Because her lameness slowed her down, prevented her from riding and dancing, her father insisted she stay mostly hidden and forgotten in the castle. When she gets caught up in a rebellion, she is taken to the capital as a hostage for her family's good behavior. There, for the first time in her life, Violet is seen and heard. She must adjust to this new life as well as navigate court politics to save her family and her people.
I loved the first third of this book, because it focused on Violet and featured a lot of growth and coming-of-age themes. After that, the story had several plotlines going, featuring court politics, Violet's interest in the Arts, and a subtle romance plotline. And my only complaint here was that I wanted more. There was just barely enough to keep each plotline going, and I would have loved to have a bit more. Partly to develop the story a bit more, but also because I liked the characters and the setting and the writing, and I would have liked more of all of it.
A fairly standard fantasy adventure romance plotline with fantastic writing and characters.
March 19, 2021
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A wonderful and unique story.
Violet has been isolated throughout her life by her father for having a deformed foot. When she is taken hostage by the king after a failed rebellion, she begins experiencing all the things she has missed. But evil lurks in the background and she is thrown into court politics and deadly situations which is threatening to break the kingdom apart. Now it is upto her to set things right.
I loved this book right from the start and the best part about it was that Violet wasn't like the typical female protagonist who is drop dead gorgeous. She is flawed and while it makes her doubt herself at times, she is still driven. Her character is so relatable and I found myself being empathetic towards her.
Edward was great and I liked his open mindedness and attitude towards Violet.
The supporting characters were equally important to the story.
The plot was interesting and well executed. There were some parts in the middle which I had to skim through due to info dump. There were too many pages about the various groups of people with their abilities and I found it hard to remember all of it.
But the magic and the animals were intriguing.
The romance between Edward and Violet is well developed and very sweet.
The conclusion was amazing and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I recommend it to all fantasy romance lovers.
A wonderful and unique story.
Violet has been isolated throughout her life by her father for having a deformed foot. When she is taken hostage by the king after a failed rebellion, she begins experiencing all the things she has missed. But evil lurks in the background and she is thrown into court politics and deadly situations which is threatening to break the kingdom apart. Now it is upto her to set things right.
I loved this book right from the start and the best part about it was that Violet wasn't like the typical female protagonist who is drop dead gorgeous. She is flawed and while it makes her doubt herself at times, she is still driven. Her character is so relatable and I found myself being empathetic towards her.
Edward was great and I liked his open mindedness and attitude towards Violet.
The supporting characters were equally important to the story.
The plot was interesting and well executed. There were some parts in the middle which I had to skim through due to info dump. There were too many pages about the various groups of people with their abilities and I found it hard to remember all of it.
But the magic and the animals were intriguing.
The romance between Edward and Violet is well developed and very sweet.
The conclusion was amazing and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I recommend it to all fantasy romance lovers.
November 1, 2023
My first read by Ms Ivinya.
This was a stand-alone novel. No cliffhanger; not a series.
I liked Vi. She was not your "normal" heroine! I really liked the story. This book could use a good editor. There were some blaring incorrect word usage. Something that could have easily been fixed with an editor.
Back to Vi! I liked her a lot! When I started the novel, I didn't think it was a true fantasy and was pleasantly proven wrong. It is definitely a fantasy. It is slow to bloom but there are threads throughout.
Edward was a great hero.
The story caught me by surprise at around 80% or so when I realized I hadn't been paying enough attention. I knew one of the bad guys but the fact there was someone on the inside caught me off guard. I liked the twist although saddened.
This was a fun read. I liked so much about this.
Triggers: there's some light gore, no sex, and a little romance, I wouldn't call it "slow-burn" but more friends to lovers instead. They started out as "enemies" sort of. I wouldn't call it an enemies-to-lovers story though. Great morals to the story!
This was a stand-alone novel. No cliffhanger; not a series.
I liked Vi. She was not your "normal" heroine! I really liked the story. This book could use a good editor. There were some blaring incorrect word usage. Something that could have easily been fixed with an editor.
Back to Vi! I liked her a lot! When I started the novel, I didn't think it was a true fantasy and was pleasantly proven wrong. It is definitely a fantasy. It is slow to bloom but there are threads throughout.
Edward was a great hero.
The story caught me by surprise at around 80% or so when I realized I hadn't been paying enough attention. I knew one of the bad guys but the fact there was someone on the inside caught me off guard. I liked the twist although saddened.
This was a fun read. I liked so much about this.
Triggers: there's some light gore, no sex, and a little romance, I wouldn't call it "slow-burn" but more friends to lovers instead. They started out as "enemies" sort of. I wouldn't call it an enemies-to-lovers story though. Great morals to the story!
March 4, 2021
Flawed Princess is perfection
I absolutely love this author! Her stories draw you in and are so good I couldn’t put this book down again!!
The magic or Arts in this book are very unique and it’s great that we get to learn about them along with Violet. I thought that was a great twist and made me feel like Violet was more real to me. I also love her relationship with Bane and her discovery of the world around her that everyone else has seemed to have taken for granted.
Violet is young but her growing romance was innocent and completely believable. A clean read too. Poor girl has been neglected and forced to the shadows because of her foot but the king ‘sees’ her for her and values her opinions and her for her. I really liked how the author had Violet want to remain with her foot as is instead of using the Arts to fix her.
Explosive ending with a happily ever after. This is definitely one I see myself rereading.
I absolutely love this author! Her stories draw you in and are so good I couldn’t put this book down again!!
The magic or Arts in this book are very unique and it’s great that we get to learn about them along with Violet. I thought that was a great twist and made me feel like Violet was more real to me. I also love her relationship with Bane and her discovery of the world around her that everyone else has seemed to have taken for granted.
Violet is young but her growing romance was innocent and completely believable. A clean read too. Poor girl has been neglected and forced to the shadows because of her foot but the king ‘sees’ her for her and values her opinions and her for her. I really liked how the author had Violet want to remain with her foot as is instead of using the Arts to fix her.
Explosive ending with a happily ever after. This is definitely one I see myself rereading.
June 21, 2022
This is a perfect fantasy book, it has royal politics, magic, secrets, treason and of course, romance. I’m a bit surprised about how much I enjoyed it.
In this fantasy world the kingdom is divided in sectors that each has a focus on either Agriculture, medicine, protection or others. Violet is the daughter of a lord and lives in the Agriculture sector which has been a bit isolated by the court. She has never left her home because her father keeps her hidden due to her deformed foot. Violet’s father raises a rebellion to overthrow the current king but Violet is taken as hostage to the court and learns about all the other magics including one where animals and men bond.
Violet takes this as a opportunity to represent her people in the palace but she has to suffer cruel nobles and even murder attempts that are getting closer and closer to the king, who Violet has learn to trust.
It’s just a really good fantasy, very easy to read, entertaining and with unexpected twists.
In this fantasy world the kingdom is divided in sectors that each has a focus on either Agriculture, medicine, protection or others. Violet is the daughter of a lord and lives in the Agriculture sector which has been a bit isolated by the court. She has never left her home because her father keeps her hidden due to her deformed foot. Violet’s father raises a rebellion to overthrow the current king but Violet is taken as hostage to the court and learns about all the other magics including one where animals and men bond.
Violet takes this as a opportunity to represent her people in the palace but she has to suffer cruel nobles and even murder attempts that are getting closer and closer to the king, who Violet has learn to trust.
It’s just a really good fantasy, very easy to read, entertaining and with unexpected twists.
September 26, 2022
Beautiful story
Unique and enchanting, this is a tale I will remember and think on for weeks to come. It is heart-wrenching and provoking, making me laugh one moment and cry the next.
It started slow in the mind of the young MC, but all the threads began to connect and weave until the mystery begins to unravel. The relationship was absolutely adorable. The side characters are well fleshed out and add humorous relief that is a great juxtaposition to the hard topics addressed in the tale.
Political intrigue, mystery, romance, and action combine to create a compelling and exciting tale for all ages.
I recommend for both the values and the beautifully crafted words. The MC is not your typical heroin, she’s imperfect and relatable... and because of that I came to deeply care for her and her trials. The end came much too soon!
Read this. You won’t regret it.
Unique and enchanting, this is a tale I will remember and think on for weeks to come. It is heart-wrenching and provoking, making me laugh one moment and cry the next.
It started slow in the mind of the young MC, but all the threads began to connect and weave until the mystery begins to unravel. The relationship was absolutely adorable. The side characters are well fleshed out and add humorous relief that is a great juxtaposition to the hard topics addressed in the tale.
Political intrigue, mystery, romance, and action combine to create a compelling and exciting tale for all ages.
I recommend for both the values and the beautifully crafted words. The MC is not your typical heroin, she’s imperfect and relatable... and because of that I came to deeply care for her and her trials. The end came much too soon!
Read this. You won’t regret it.
March 22, 2020
An unlikely princess, a failed rebellion - a treat of a book!
If you like Sarah J Maas’ books, you’ll love this one. All but forgotten in her manor, Violet finds herself the prisoner of a king after a failed rebellion. Instead of engaging in games, she speaks straight, has a big heart and sticks up for her homeland. I loved Vi’s road of self-discovery to find her gifts and her outspokenness. Nobody suspects the underdog, so it was refreshing to read a book about an unlikely hero princess with a club foot. The peppered warnings that some things are not what they seem were also fun to notice. And, of course, I loved the ending. A fast-paced read that I couldn’t put down. Definitely recommend and will keep an eye out for this author! ❤️
If you like Sarah J Maas’ books, you’ll love this one. All but forgotten in her manor, Violet finds herself the prisoner of a king after a failed rebellion. Instead of engaging in games, she speaks straight, has a big heart and sticks up for her homeland. I loved Vi’s road of self-discovery to find her gifts and her outspokenness. Nobody suspects the underdog, so it was refreshing to read a book about an unlikely hero princess with a club foot. The peppered warnings that some things are not what they seem were also fun to notice. And, of course, I loved the ending. A fast-paced read that I couldn’t put down. Definitely recommend and will keep an eye out for this author! ❤️
July 6, 2022
Interesting story dealing with cool magical ideas; like the animal companions scenario. I’m not huge on all the royal intrigue plot, but still some interesting stuff going on. Violet is in hostile territory after her father’s unfortunate choices; she’s lived a bit of a sheltered existence, but now finds herself on an adventure. A lot has happened to her, but she’s still enjoying learning new things and meeting new people. I liked her strength; a bit more emotion to her would’ve been good, but I appreciate her survivor spirit. There’s a sweet romance; I would’ve liked more development between Edward and Violet, but I liked them together. Enjoyed the writing style and the world the story is set in too. Overall, an entertaining read.
June 14, 2022
I liked this (I read it all in one day), but I wished it was longer.
The first half seems too long, compared to the second half, the second half seems maybe not in depth enough.
I liked Violet, her will, her loyalty, her sweet disposition and I liked Edward and his desire to do right by his people when he had the right to turn his back and make the traitors pay.
I wanted a bit more development on Violet's time in the court, something more regarding the steps she took to be an ambassador for her people, definitely more time together with Edward!
All in all, this is a delightful story that is about love and forgiveness and hope for a better future and it left a sweet taste in my mouth :)
The first half seems too long, compared to the second half, the second half seems maybe not in depth enough.
I liked Violet, her will, her loyalty, her sweet disposition and I liked Edward and his desire to do right by his people when he had the right to turn his back and make the traitors pay.
I wanted a bit more development on Violet's time in the court, something more regarding the steps she took to be an ambassador for her people, definitely more time together with Edward!
All in all, this is a delightful story that is about love and forgiveness and hope for a better future and it left a sweet taste in my mouth :)
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