I received an ARC from Edelweiss
TW:
drowning, kidnap of an infant, toxic mother
3.3
When Beet's cousin dies, she sees his ghost in the garden. It's something she keeps mostly to herself, an impossibility she only thinks on to try to recall the song she heard him playing. But when someone new arrives on their island, someone who claims to be kin to her cousin and his now-dead mother, impossibilities are everywhere. Determined to keep her cousin's infant child safe, as well as the girlfriend he left behind, Beet must discover the secrets this newcomer has hidden.
This is a hard one for me. Conceptually, I love it, and there's a certain lushness to the storytelling that most of the time I would be really happy about. But there's something about that quality that made it so hard to get into. I think it's partially because I came into this story expecting YA, and I wouldn't at all say that it's a YA. If I had been expecting an adult book, I may have been more responsive, but instead I found it incredibly hard to get a grip on this book.
That said, I think the writing has its moments. The island town, the magical atmosphere allowing ghosts and sea monsters, it's all written well enough to sink into. The problems arise when it's hard to get back out- away from the descriptions and into the actual story. But if you're fine with a slow moving, atmospheric read, this is a good one.
As for dialogue, I do wish the author hadn't made the choice of doing things like spelling boy with multiple "y"s to signify tone. That sort of thing puts me off in professionally published media, and it made my trust in her as a writer, and writer of teen characters, waver.
Generally, I liked the characters. Their intentions and motivations are strong and yet grounded in something small enough in scope to be easily dug into. Beet isn't all that unique as a character, but I liked her family. They gave me the vibes of a family from an older literary book, honestly, which isn't a bad thing and made them almost feel familiar. I also enjoyed the rest of the town as they made their marks on the story. They helped round out the island itself.
As for the sea monster context- again, conceptually, I loved it. The history behind all of this as well done in terms of getting the actual information, and it was emotional enough to make me sympathetic towards her victims. However, I kept waiting for it to give me an actual answer about her- what does she want, who is she, why these specific requests and victims besides being a villain? And I never fully got any answers.
I never got invested in this story, or any of its characters. This wasn't one that I personally ally enjoyed, and I blame a lot of that on this not being a story that reads YA to me and one I should have come into with different expectations and a different headspace.