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Poolside Punishment
Strict spankings and steamy group sex in the California sun...
When bratty Lola and her Daddy Dom Austin go to visit their friends in California, Lola just wants to lounge by the pool, get tipsy, and play with her beautiful friend Victoria. The last thing she wants is to have Daddy intruding on her fun with orders and rules - then Austin's friend Marcus starts giving her orders too! A bratty submissive surely shouldn't have to obey her Daddy on vacation...right?
But there are consequences for disobedience, and Austin is a strict disciplinarian. He takes Lola over his knee for a hard paddling, while Marcus and Victoria watch. No matter how much bratty Lola begs and struggles, Austin makes sure she's spanked until she's very sorry, and completely humiliated. Disobeying in front of Daddy's friends carries extra punishment too, when Austin gives Marcus permission to spank Lola next! The only hope Lola has of seeing her punishment come to an end is to pleasure Victoria with her mouth, bringing the woman to orgasm as she's spanked by Marcus.
Red-bottomed and repentant, Lola is then allowed to pleasure the two Dominant men, spit-roasted from both ends - her sore bottom pounded as her mouth is filled and used. Disobedience has consequences - but not all of them are bad!
This kinky erotic short story is written in Third Person POV and is roughly 11k words in length. Contained within is strict punishment scenes, disciplinary humiliation, delicious GirlxGirl oral play, and rough, hot double-penetration. Your perfectly pleasurable poolside read - it'll be more than just the sun getting you hot!
WARNING! These are the fetishes within...use of the titles Daddy/babygirl, heavy spanking, heavy paddling, struggling/restraint, begging, tears (from spanking), oral play (GirlxGirl and BoyxGirlxBoy), double penetration, scolding.
When bratty Lola and her Daddy Dom Austin go to visit their friends in California, Lola just wants to lounge by the pool, get tipsy, and play with her beautiful friend Victoria. The last thing she wants is to have Daddy intruding on her fun with orders and rules - then Austin's friend Marcus starts giving her orders too! A bratty submissive surely shouldn't have to obey her Daddy on vacation...right?
But there are consequences for disobedience, and Austin is a strict disciplinarian. He takes Lola over his knee for a hard paddling, while Marcus and Victoria watch. No matter how much bratty Lola begs and struggles, Austin makes sure she's spanked until she's very sorry, and completely humiliated. Disobeying in front of Daddy's friends carries extra punishment too, when Austin gives Marcus permission to spank Lola next! The only hope Lola has of seeing her punishment come to an end is to pleasure Victoria with her mouth, bringing the woman to orgasm as she's spanked by Marcus.
Red-bottomed and repentant, Lola is then allowed to pleasure the two Dominant men, spit-roasted from both ends - her sore bottom pounded as her mouth is filled and used. Disobedience has consequences - but not all of them are bad!
This kinky erotic short story is written in Third Person POV and is roughly 11k words in length. Contained within is strict punishment scenes, disciplinary humiliation, delicious GirlxGirl oral play, and rough, hot double-penetration. Your perfectly pleasurable poolside read - it'll be more than just the sun getting you hot!
WARNING! These are the fetishes within...use of the titles Daddy/babygirl, heavy spanking, heavy paddling, struggling/restraint, begging, tears (from spanking), oral play (GirlxGirl and BoyxGirlxBoy), double penetration, scolding.
33 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 24, 2019
About the author
Harley Laroux
21 books17.9k followersHarley is an author of Adult Romance and Erotica. They write kink-positive, steamy love stories with queer protagonists, dangerous stakes, and haunting atmospheres.
Harley lives in Washington state with their husband and three cats. Most days they can be found at their desk drinking tea with at least one cat on their lap.
Harley lives in Washington state with their husband and three cats. Most days they can be found at their desk drinking tea with at least one cat on their lap.
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Displaying 1 - 8 of 8 reviews
December 4, 2019
I thoroughly enjoyed this short by Harley. She really is the goddess of spankings/funishment. As usual, the sex was very well written. I highly recommend all of her stories.
April 28, 2020
this story i shared more of the same kinks as these characters but also the amount of daddy/sir talk was a bit cringe for me.
the scenes between these four people definitely got me in the feels and a little hot sometimes, so that was fun because i hardly ever read smut.
overall, it was an enjoyable read for me and i might check out a few more of this authors smutty works.
the scenes between these four people definitely got me in the feels and a little hot sometimes, so that was fun because i hardly ever read smut.
overall, it was an enjoyable read for me and i might check out a few more of this authors smutty works.
May 20, 2020
4/5 - complete BDSM Dd/lg erotica.
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August 7, 2020Short story. Lola is being a brat in front of her daddy and his friends.
February 12, 2021
Yummy short story!
Very well written and utterly captivating! I have read and reread it several times now, it’s that delicious. Highly recommend!
Very well written and utterly captivating! I have read and reread it several times now, it’s that delicious. Highly recommend!
May 7, 2020
Let me tell you something about Poolside Punishment.
It's not going to be the book for you if you're not into sub-sharing and submissive's actually using their dom's honoraries to address them.
It can come across as a little cringey, yes, but honoraries are a part of BDSM like the punishments and spankings are.
Harley has content warnings in her books for a reason.
Okay, now that we got that out of the way, let's actually talk about Poolside Punishment. We got Harley's favorite types of characters - bratty subs and strict doms, both written very well - in a fun summery vacation setting, and it is quite a fun read if you can get with oral play and lots of spanking.
This book is hot in every way, and it does what it's supposed to.
It gets you excited, and maybe, it makes you crave a fun poolside vacation too.
It's not going to be the book for you if you're not into sub-sharing and submissive's actually using their dom's honoraries to address them.
It can come across as a little cringey, yes, but honoraries are a part of BDSM like the punishments and spankings are.
Harley has content warnings in her books for a reason.
Okay, now that we got that out of the way, let's actually talk about Poolside Punishment. We got Harley's favorite types of characters - bratty subs and strict doms, both written very well - in a fun summery vacation setting, and it is quite a fun read if you can get with oral play and lots of spanking.
This book is hot in every way, and it does what it's supposed to.
It gets you excited, and maybe, it makes you crave a fun poolside vacation too.
April 13, 2020
WHEW!
If you are looking for a quick steamy story that you’re not able to put down read this story! Harley never disappoints with her vivid erotica and this story is no different! You won’t be sorry you picked this one up.
If you are looking for a quick steamy story that you’re not able to put down read this story! Harley never disappoints with her vivid erotica and this story is no different! You won’t be sorry you picked this one up.
April 30, 2020
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I just know if it’s Harley I’m going to love it 😍 always a great read !! Yes Sir 😈
I just know if it’s Harley I’m going to love it 😍 always a great read !! Yes Sir 😈
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