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The Bernicia Chronicles #6
Storm of Steel
AD 643: heading south to lands he once considered his home, Beobrand is plunged into a dark world of piracy and slavery when an old friend enlists his help to recover a kidnapped girl. Embarking onto the wind-tossed seas, Beobrand pursues his quarry with single-minded tenacity. But the Whale Road is never calm and his journey is beset with storms, betrayal, and violence. As the winds of his wyrd blow him ever further from what he knows, will Beobrand find victory on his quest, or has his luck finally abandoned him?
464 pages, Paperback
First published May 9, 2019
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About the author
Matthew Harffy
35 books741 followersMatthew Harffy is the author of the action-packed series of historical novels, the Bernicia Chronicles.
Matthew’s 2020 novel, Wolf of Wessex, was his first departure from the seventh century. Taking place a couple of centuries later in the early years of the Viking Age, it tells the tale of ageing warrior, Dunston, as he tries to find a man’s vicious murderers, keep the victim’s orphaned daughter alive and uncover the dark secret that threatens to plunge the kingdom into war. The book was very well received, with The Times calling it “a treat of a book”.
His A Time for Swords series is set at the dawn of the Viking Age. It follows the adventures of monk-turned-warrior, Hunlaf, who witnesses the first attack on the monastery of Lindisfarne and feels compelled to pick up a blade and organise the defence against the Norse raiders.
Before becoming a full-time author, Matthew worked in the IT industry, where he spent most of his days writing and editing, just not the words that most interested him! Prior to that, he worked in Spain as an English teacher and translator.
Matthew lives in Wiltshire, England, with his wife and their two daughters.
Matthew’s 2020 novel, Wolf of Wessex, was his first departure from the seventh century. Taking place a couple of centuries later in the early years of the Viking Age, it tells the tale of ageing warrior, Dunston, as he tries to find a man’s vicious murderers, keep the victim’s orphaned daughter alive and uncover the dark secret that threatens to plunge the kingdom into war. The book was very well received, with The Times calling it “a treat of a book”.
His A Time for Swords series is set at the dawn of the Viking Age. It follows the adventures of monk-turned-warrior, Hunlaf, who witnesses the first attack on the monastery of Lindisfarne and feels compelled to pick up a blade and organise the defence against the Norse raiders.
Before becoming a full-time author, Matthew worked in the IT industry, where he spent most of his days writing and editing, just not the words that most interested him! Prior to that, he worked in Spain as an English teacher and translator.
Matthew lives in Wiltshire, England, with his wife and their two daughters.
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August 12, 2021
This wonderful novel is the 6th volume of the astounding "Bernicia Chronicles" from the author, Matthew Harffy.
Storytelling is once again of a top-notch quality, all characters, whether they are real historical or fantastic fictional, come vividly to life in this tale of Storm and Steel, and the atmosphere of the Dark Ages shines as ever wonderfully out of the pages.
Right inside the book you'll find a well-drawn map of Southern Albion and Northern Frankia in the year AD 643, with places that will play an important part in this great tale.
At the beginning of the book you'll see an informative list of Place Names, while at the back you'll notice a very well documented Historical Note, where the historical details are superbly explained.
The book is divided into five parts, with three bigger and two smaller ones, and the story itself is set during the years AD 643-644.
In this book we will follow Beobrand, his gesithas, and the crew from Hithe, with Ferenbald, son of Hrothgar, as their captain, riding the waves of the Whale Road, in search of a girl who goes by the name of, Ardith, who was taken by pirates with at their head the brothers, Grimr and Draca, and that girl seems to be originally the natural daughter of Beobrand and his youth love, Udela.
What is to follow is an amazing, fast-paced and action-packed tale that will take Beobrand and his gesithas to the lands of the Franks, and after leaving the Whale Road they will meet traitors at Mantican's Hall, and at the Palace of Vulmar at Rodomo (Rouen) they will be in the heat of the action, and in these environments Beobrand and his friends will meet betrayal, loyalty and various deadly clashes, all in an attempt to free Ardith from the clutches of Vulmar, Grimr and Draca, and after a close-run thing on the Whale Road, a final battle on a beach in Albion will decide who will be victorious, a battle where Beobrand will lose old and gain new friends, and after that battle a definite score will be settled with a certain individual.
Highly recommended, especially for fans of Bernard Cornwell's "The Last Kingdom" series, because this series has much in comparison in the way of its set up and accuracy, and storytelling wise it is with as much quality, or even better in my humble opinion, and to come back to this episode I like to call it: "Beobrand's Amazing Chilling Whale Road Encounters"!
Storytelling is once again of a top-notch quality, all characters, whether they are real historical or fantastic fictional, come vividly to life in this tale of Storm and Steel, and the atmosphere of the Dark Ages shines as ever wonderfully out of the pages.
Right inside the book you'll find a well-drawn map of Southern Albion and Northern Frankia in the year AD 643, with places that will play an important part in this great tale.
At the beginning of the book you'll see an informative list of Place Names, while at the back you'll notice a very well documented Historical Note, where the historical details are superbly explained.
The book is divided into five parts, with three bigger and two smaller ones, and the story itself is set during the years AD 643-644.
In this book we will follow Beobrand, his gesithas, and the crew from Hithe, with Ferenbald, son of Hrothgar, as their captain, riding the waves of the Whale Road, in search of a girl who goes by the name of, Ardith, who was taken by pirates with at their head the brothers, Grimr and Draca, and that girl seems to be originally the natural daughter of Beobrand and his youth love, Udela.
What is to follow is an amazing, fast-paced and action-packed tale that will take Beobrand and his gesithas to the lands of the Franks, and after leaving the Whale Road they will meet traitors at Mantican's Hall, and at the Palace of Vulmar at Rodomo (Rouen) they will be in the heat of the action, and in these environments Beobrand and his friends will meet betrayal, loyalty and various deadly clashes, all in an attempt to free Ardith from the clutches of Vulmar, Grimr and Draca, and after a close-run thing on the Whale Road, a final battle on a beach in Albion will decide who will be victorious, a battle where Beobrand will lose old and gain new friends, and after that battle a definite score will be settled with a certain individual.
Highly recommended, especially for fans of Bernard Cornwell's "The Last Kingdom" series, because this series has much in comparison in the way of its set up and accuracy, and storytelling wise it is with as much quality, or even better in my humble opinion, and to come back to this episode I like to call it: "Beobrand's Amazing Chilling Whale Road Encounters"!
April 24, 2023
absolute perfection!! loved the story, characters and battles.
i laughed, cried and couldn't stop listening/reading.
Best one so far!
i laughed, cried and couldn't stop listening/reading.
Best one so far!
December 28, 2019
This is truly a remarkable series that (somehow) gets better and better with each new instalment.
May 9, 2019
As Storm of Steel is the sixth book to feature Northumbrian thegn, Beobrand, I was a bit worried that I’d be at a disadvantage having not read earlier books in the series. I’ll admit I struggled a little initially getting to grips with who was who in Beobrand’s war band. There are also passing references to significant events in earlier books. However I certainly didn’t struggle to get drawn into the story as Storm of Steel opens with a wonderfully exciting and thrillingly described scene in which Beobrand and his comrades are ambushed by pirates during a raging storm. And it’s not long before Beobrand learns something that is news to him and, I’m guessing, will be to readers of previous books in the series too.
It sets Beobrand and his comrades on a course that will involve stormy seas, intrigue, dangerous enemies at every turn and bring them up against powerful individuals in foreign lands before a final dramatic reckoning. Throughout Beobrand is conscious of those he’s left behind and the danger they may also face.
As I discovered more about his past exploits, I quickly understood why Beobrand is so feared as a warrior and inspires such loyalty from his men. I also learned something of the tragedies in his life that have shaped him. He makes a great hero, despite being battle-scarred and ruthless when necessity dictates. I may be out of my mind (or should I say ‘thought-cage’) but I was tempted to wonder if it wouldn’t be worth being kidnapped by pirates if only to have the possibility of being rescued by Beobrand!
I’m now determined to read the series from the beginning and, if Storm of Steel is anything to go by, I’m in for a real treat. It’s action-packed, dramatic and realistic: historical fiction at its best, in fact.
It sets Beobrand and his comrades on a course that will involve stormy seas, intrigue, dangerous enemies at every turn and bring them up against powerful individuals in foreign lands before a final dramatic reckoning. Throughout Beobrand is conscious of those he’s left behind and the danger they may also face.
As I discovered more about his past exploits, I quickly understood why Beobrand is so feared as a warrior and inspires such loyalty from his men. I also learned something of the tragedies in his life that have shaped him. He makes a great hero, despite being battle-scarred and ruthless when necessity dictates. I may be out of my mind (or should I say ‘thought-cage’) but I was tempted to wonder if it wouldn’t be worth being kidnapped by pirates if only to have the possibility of being rescued by Beobrand!
I’m now determined to read the series from the beginning and, if Storm of Steel is anything to go by, I’m in for a real treat. It’s action-packed, dramatic and realistic: historical fiction at its best, in fact.
May 18, 2019
It seems like forever since we last saw Beobrand and his brave gesithas.. in reality it hasn’t been that long.. I’m just impatient ha.
The wait is over..it’s time to join Beobrand on his latest adventure and this time not much of it will be spent on land as we take to the high seas in search of a missing girl.
While on a mission to bring the soon to be new Queen home Beobrand gets a blast from the past and is torn… he’s oath sworn to do as his King requests but that would mean leaving the girl to fate.
Luckily for Beo the decision is taken out of his hands, the new queen is known to Beo and after a night of feasting they have grown rather close..so much so she orders him to do whatever it takes to bring the little girl home.
Beobrand enlists the help if a group of sailors to aid him in his journey and very soon they are bound together in blood as they set sail on the trail of a group of pirates who have taken the girl hostage.
Twists and turns come aplenty and Beo’s life will never be the same.
The best addition to this story for me is young Brinin..he’s betrothed to Ardith, the girl who has been taken, and he joins Beobrand in the hunt. Brinin reminds me a lot of Beo, he’s young and headstrong and has a big part to play.
For me the plot was just amazing..dark and brutally gripping..the past haunts Beobrand and I really enjoyed it when the author gives you the chance to reflect on moments throughout the series that have impacted on the man Beo is today.
The last fight scene was pure wow factor.. brothers at arms..sacrifices are made that will shape the destiny of others.
This series goes from strength to strength and credit to the author that he manages to keep each story so fresh and entertaining.
The wait is over..it’s time to join Beobrand on his latest adventure and this time not much of it will be spent on land as we take to the high seas in search of a missing girl.
While on a mission to bring the soon to be new Queen home Beobrand gets a blast from the past and is torn… he’s oath sworn to do as his King requests but that would mean leaving the girl to fate.
Luckily for Beo the decision is taken out of his hands, the new queen is known to Beo and after a night of feasting they have grown rather close..so much so she orders him to do whatever it takes to bring the little girl home.
Beobrand enlists the help if a group of sailors to aid him in his journey and very soon they are bound together in blood as they set sail on the trail of a group of pirates who have taken the girl hostage.
Twists and turns come aplenty and Beo’s life will never be the same.
The best addition to this story for me is young Brinin..he’s betrothed to Ardith, the girl who has been taken, and he joins Beobrand in the hunt. Brinin reminds me a lot of Beo, he’s young and headstrong and has a big part to play.
For me the plot was just amazing..dark and brutally gripping..the past haunts Beobrand and I really enjoyed it when the author gives you the chance to reflect on moments throughout the series that have impacted on the man Beo is today.
The last fight scene was pure wow factor.. brothers at arms..sacrifices are made that will shape the destiny of others.
This series goes from strength to strength and credit to the author that he manages to keep each story so fresh and entertaining.
May 4, 2019
BLURB
AD 643. Anglo-Saxon Britain. A gripping, action-packed historical thriller and the sixth installment in the Bernicia Chronicles. Perfect for fans of Bernard Cornwell.
Heading south to lands he once considered his home, Beobrand is plunged into a dark world of piracy and slavery when an old friend enlists his help to recover a kidnapped girl.
Embarking onto the wind-tossed seas, Beobrand pursues his quarry with single-minded tenacity. But the Whale Road is never calm and his journey is beset with storms, betrayal and violence.
As the winds of his wyrd blow him ever further from what he knows, will Beobrand find victory on his quest or has his luck finally abandoned him?
REVIEW
While the previous books in this series have shown Beobrand in all sorts of dilemmas, and in a wide range of emotions, Storm of Steel has managed to raise the bar. The opposing forces within this warrior chieftain; anguish, pride, brutal in war and anger, generous and kind, are displayed throughout this absolute page turning episode of Dark Age Britain. As is expected in a time where violence and brutality are seemingly constant companions, the tale is full of action, a storm of steel. But what really makes this part of the saga most appealing to me is the depth of character Beobrand has become. Without giving anything away, the situations, the anguish, angst, frustration, and doubts Beobrand has to deal with make this tale tick. He is long past the inexperienced young warrior in book 1, and with every ordeal he becomes more human, less exalted. The rest of the cast ain't too shabby either. The author continues his wonderful portrayal of the warrior band of brothers; their camaraderie, their fierce loyalty to their lord, their battle proven worthiness, their grief at the loss of a friend. Their mettle is tested again and again in this tale of rescue and revenge. Surprises aplenty as Beobrand navigates the tortuous path woven for him by The Norns. 5 stars
AD 643. Anglo-Saxon Britain. A gripping, action-packed historical thriller and the sixth installment in the Bernicia Chronicles. Perfect for fans of Bernard Cornwell.
Heading south to lands he once considered his home, Beobrand is plunged into a dark world of piracy and slavery when an old friend enlists his help to recover a kidnapped girl.
Embarking onto the wind-tossed seas, Beobrand pursues his quarry with single-minded tenacity. But the Whale Road is never calm and his journey is beset with storms, betrayal and violence.
As the winds of his wyrd blow him ever further from what he knows, will Beobrand find victory on his quest or has his luck finally abandoned him?
REVIEW
While the previous books in this series have shown Beobrand in all sorts of dilemmas, and in a wide range of emotions, Storm of Steel has managed to raise the bar. The opposing forces within this warrior chieftain; anguish, pride, brutal in war and anger, generous and kind, are displayed throughout this absolute page turning episode of Dark Age Britain. As is expected in a time where violence and brutality are seemingly constant companions, the tale is full of action, a storm of steel. But what really makes this part of the saga most appealing to me is the depth of character Beobrand has become. Without giving anything away, the situations, the anguish, angst, frustration, and doubts Beobrand has to deal with make this tale tick. He is long past the inexperienced young warrior in book 1, and with every ordeal he becomes more human, less exalted. The rest of the cast ain't too shabby either. The author continues his wonderful portrayal of the warrior band of brothers; their camaraderie, their fierce loyalty to their lord, their battle proven worthiness, their grief at the loss of a friend. Their mettle is tested again and again in this tale of rescue and revenge. Surprises aplenty as Beobrand navigates the tortuous path woven for him by The Norns. 5 stars
September 1, 2019
A thrilling tale
It was a bit of a jump from where the last book ended with the loss of characters, but the story itself is well constructed and written. I have enjoyed the story along with its twists and turns, right up to the last few pages. Beobrands story continues and is a great story to be told
It was a bit of a jump from where the last book ended with the loss of characters, but the story itself is well constructed and written. I have enjoyed the story along with its twists and turns, right up to the last few pages. Beobrands story continues and is a great story to be told
April 24, 2019
Beobrand loved his old king, but now he has a new one. One he doesn’t love so much. And this new king has given Beobrand an assignment that doesn’t make him too happy. Well, the assignment itself isn’t so bad. In fact, he can finish it rather quickly and then get back to more important matters. It’s the conditions that go with his assignment that ruffle his feathers. But Beobrand, being Beobrand and one of the reasons I love him so much, is an ‘honor and duty’ kind of guy. He is oath-bound to his new king, even if he doesn’t much like the man. He obeys, leaving his home and the trailing loose ends of some domestic matters. He’ll make a quick journey of it, he thinks, and then he can get back to the loose ends he left behind.
Except he can’t. Something more urgent distracts him. Because after all, this is a book series, and there wouldn’t be many books in the series if everything went smoothly for our hero would there?
While visiting his home village, Beobrand receives word of a young girl who has been kidnapped. There is much more to this, but since we can’t have spoilers, I’ll leave it at that. He struggles with this news, trying to decide between completing his oath-bound duty or diverting to find the girl. With the smooth words and encouragement of those in his entourage, of course, he chooses to go find the girl.
Like every other novel in this series, I jumped right in, engaged by the action, pace, and writing style. The characters I have come to know and love were as I remembered them. Characters and events from earlier books in the series return. I don’t have the best memory for these details, but once I recalled the significance of each, it was easy to slip into the narrative. All the ingredients of a good Matthew Harffy novel are here. He also (re)introduces a character who will play a vital role in the next book (I hope?), and I find her beyond intriguing.
Beobrand inhabits a violent, bloody world, and as such, this book reflects that. Harffy rarely pulls punches when writing about 7th century Bernicia and its surrounding kingdoms. Some really horrible things happen to some of the characters, and sensitive readers need to be aware of this. I think that’s always the case with books that deal with warriors, battle, and the violence that surrounds such things. Yet somehow this book felt more gut-twisting to me. At first, I couldn’t put my finger on why, but the more I thought on it, the more obvious it became to me.
I can’t explain more because it would create a significant plot spoiler, so I’ll have to remain vague. From the book’s own description: “Beobrand is plunged into a dark world of piracy and slavery [cue the foreshadowing music] when an old friend enlists his help to recover a kidnapped girl.” The heart of this story line involves a very disturbing aspect of Beobrand's dark, violent world. And I have to admit, this particular plot line made me squirm in my seat.
Thralls were slaves.
We use a variant of this word in our modern language. Enthrall. To captivate, bewitch, to hold one’s entire attention captive. It all comes down to captivity. (Yes, I was pretty proud of myself for making that etymological connection while reading this book. I might have looked smug when it happened.)
Slaves in Beobrand’s day were part of everyday life. They were, more or less, servants who tended household duties, or childcare duties, or farming duties, or whatever else needed doing under the watchful eye of the man or matron of the house. They were slaves.
They did what they were told.
Whatever they were told and whenever they were told to do it.
It happens to people who live ‘enthralled’ to the power of others. They are used and abused as those in control decide.
Slavery is a common enough thing in historical fiction. Slaves are in many stories. Unscrupulous men decide to use slaves for many things, and not all of them pleasant. While abhorrent, slavery itself is not so disturbing. But in the case of this book, it’s the darker underside of slavery that twisted my gut. In this book we travel along with the kidnapped girl, experiencing what happens to her from her perspective. Harffy does a terrific job developing the tension for the slave girl at the heart of this unfolding darkness. She sees the signs of what is coming, what will happen to her. We see and feel her fear, and it’s palpable. We are part of her experience. So we too are terrified.
To me, this is the beauty of fiction.
Not all books are easy to read because some types of subject matter make us more uncomfortable than others. This is why fiction is so vital, and arguably the reason not leaving out the uncomfortable yet real experiences of characters in a novel is important. When reading the kidnapped girl’s experience, we get to know her as a live, flesh and blood human with feelings of love, hope, and terror. Her problems become ours, and, while we cannot help her, our fate is somehow inexorably linked with hers. There is no escape in fiction.
It has been said that fiction helps us become immersed in the darkness of life while teaching us how to cope with it through the lives of others, all the while remaining at a safe distance. Science backs this up:
“[I]mmersion is supported by the way the brain handles language rich in detail, allusion and metaphor: by creating a mental representation that draws on the same brain regions that would be active if the scene were unfolding in real life. The emotional situations and moral dilemmas that are the stuff of literature are also vigorous exercise for the brain, propelling us inside the heads of fictional characters and even, studies suggest, increasing our real-life capacity for empathy.” - Annie Murphy Paul, science writer for Time Magazine
And because of this, I will make the argument that reading all types of fiction is good for us. Even the fiction that makes us squirm in our seats.
When writing about why fiction matters, Tiphanie Yanique states: “In fact, as both anthropology and neuropsychology seem to admit, fiction is designed to do this work of making us feel and act. This is why humans told stories to begin with. Our intention was to teach and to challenge. To examine and to explore. To say: This is human. This is our humanity. You are human. You are part of this. This is who you are.” (The Story of My Life (and Yours)) And who we are isn’t always pretty. Oftentimes what we are is quite ugly, dark, and messy. And to pretend dark things don’t happen to those around us is akin to turning a blind eye and allowing the darkness to win.
Yes, this book is set in the 7th century, but one of the things I love about Matthew Harffy’s writing is that his characters are real, and they are nuanced. The world they inhabit existed over a thousand years ago, but people are people, much as they are today. His characters are painted with all the colors of perfection and flaw that make up humanity, and it’s this part of Harffy’s writing that will always keep me coming back for more.
I want to add one final disclaimer before ending because my own books are geared toward a wider audience in age range, from mature teens to adults: If this book was a movie, the Motion Picture Association of America would rate the book R for its graphic violence. As I said earlier, it’s what you get with a book about warriors who go to battle, and all the books in the Bernicia Chronicles are this way. It’s a gritty book. But because of the major plot line, I advise more sensitive readers to consider the content. As much as I believe in fiction being good for us, the book might not be for all readers. Having said that, I will add that it’s more in tension than anything else. There is a happy ending. Honest.
This book was received as an ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. Opinions and thoughts expressed in this review are completely my own.
Except he can’t. Something more urgent distracts him. Because after all, this is a book series, and there wouldn’t be many books in the series if everything went smoothly for our hero would there?
While visiting his home village, Beobrand receives word of a young girl who has been kidnapped. There is much more to this, but since we can’t have spoilers, I’ll leave it at that. He struggles with this news, trying to decide between completing his oath-bound duty or diverting to find the girl. With the smooth words and encouragement of those in his entourage, of course, he chooses to go find the girl.
Like every other novel in this series, I jumped right in, engaged by the action, pace, and writing style. The characters I have come to know and love were as I remembered them. Characters and events from earlier books in the series return. I don’t have the best memory for these details, but once I recalled the significance of each, it was easy to slip into the narrative. All the ingredients of a good Matthew Harffy novel are here. He also (re)introduces a character who will play a vital role in the next book (I hope?), and I find her beyond intriguing.
Beobrand inhabits a violent, bloody world, and as such, this book reflects that. Harffy rarely pulls punches when writing about 7th century Bernicia and its surrounding kingdoms. Some really horrible things happen to some of the characters, and sensitive readers need to be aware of this. I think that’s always the case with books that deal with warriors, battle, and the violence that surrounds such things. Yet somehow this book felt more gut-twisting to me. At first, I couldn’t put my finger on why, but the more I thought on it, the more obvious it became to me.
I can’t explain more because it would create a significant plot spoiler, so I’ll have to remain vague. From the book’s own description: “Beobrand is plunged into a dark world of piracy and slavery [cue the foreshadowing music] when an old friend enlists his help to recover a kidnapped girl.” The heart of this story line involves a very disturbing aspect of Beobrand's dark, violent world. And I have to admit, this particular plot line made me squirm in my seat.
Thralls were slaves.
We use a variant of this word in our modern language. Enthrall. To captivate, bewitch, to hold one’s entire attention captive. It all comes down to captivity. (Yes, I was pretty proud of myself for making that etymological connection while reading this book. I might have looked smug when it happened.)
Slaves in Beobrand’s day were part of everyday life. They were, more or less, servants who tended household duties, or childcare duties, or farming duties, or whatever else needed doing under the watchful eye of the man or matron of the house. They were slaves.
They did what they were told.
Whatever they were told and whenever they were told to do it.
It happens to people who live ‘enthralled’ to the power of others. They are used and abused as those in control decide.
Slavery is a common enough thing in historical fiction. Slaves are in many stories. Unscrupulous men decide to use slaves for many things, and not all of them pleasant. While abhorrent, slavery itself is not so disturbing. But in the case of this book, it’s the darker underside of slavery that twisted my gut. In this book we travel along with the kidnapped girl, experiencing what happens to her from her perspective. Harffy does a terrific job developing the tension for the slave girl at the heart of this unfolding darkness. She sees the signs of what is coming, what will happen to her. We see and feel her fear, and it’s palpable. We are part of her experience. So we too are terrified.
To me, this is the beauty of fiction.
Not all books are easy to read because some types of subject matter make us more uncomfortable than others. This is why fiction is so vital, and arguably the reason not leaving out the uncomfortable yet real experiences of characters in a novel is important. When reading the kidnapped girl’s experience, we get to know her as a live, flesh and blood human with feelings of love, hope, and terror. Her problems become ours, and, while we cannot help her, our fate is somehow inexorably linked with hers. There is no escape in fiction.
It has been said that fiction helps us become immersed in the darkness of life while teaching us how to cope with it through the lives of others, all the while remaining at a safe distance. Science backs this up:
“[I]mmersion is supported by the way the brain handles language rich in detail, allusion and metaphor: by creating a mental representation that draws on the same brain regions that would be active if the scene were unfolding in real life. The emotional situations and moral dilemmas that are the stuff of literature are also vigorous exercise for the brain, propelling us inside the heads of fictional characters and even, studies suggest, increasing our real-life capacity for empathy.” - Annie Murphy Paul, science writer for Time Magazine
And because of this, I will make the argument that reading all types of fiction is good for us. Even the fiction that makes us squirm in our seats.
When writing about why fiction matters, Tiphanie Yanique states: “In fact, as both anthropology and neuropsychology seem to admit, fiction is designed to do this work of making us feel and act. This is why humans told stories to begin with. Our intention was to teach and to challenge. To examine and to explore. To say: This is human. This is our humanity. You are human. You are part of this. This is who you are.” (The Story of My Life (and Yours)) And who we are isn’t always pretty. Oftentimes what we are is quite ugly, dark, and messy. And to pretend dark things don’t happen to those around us is akin to turning a blind eye and allowing the darkness to win.
Yes, this book is set in the 7th century, but one of the things I love about Matthew Harffy’s writing is that his characters are real, and they are nuanced. The world they inhabit existed over a thousand years ago, but people are people, much as they are today. His characters are painted with all the colors of perfection and flaw that make up humanity, and it’s this part of Harffy’s writing that will always keep me coming back for more.
I want to add one final disclaimer before ending because my own books are geared toward a wider audience in age range, from mature teens to adults: If this book was a movie, the Motion Picture Association of America would rate the book R for its graphic violence. As I said earlier, it’s what you get with a book about warriors who go to battle, and all the books in the Bernicia Chronicles are this way. It’s a gritty book. But because of the major plot line, I advise more sensitive readers to consider the content. As much as I believe in fiction being good for us, the book might not be for all readers. Having said that, I will add that it’s more in tension than anything else. There is a happy ending. Honest.
This book was received as an ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. Opinions and thoughts expressed in this review are completely my own.
September 5, 2019
If Bernard Cornwell is the King of this genre, then in my opinion Matthew Harffy is next in line to the throne!!!
I sat here anxiously awaiting the next installment of the Bernicia chronicles, i expected a wonderful story and yet again the author didnt disappoint. This latest novel is as gripping as the rest of the Bernicia chronicles. Would recommend this series to anybody who enjoys reading stories based in the dark ages. Excellent characters and storylines that make you feel like you're in a shield wall next to them!
I sat here anxiously awaiting the next installment of the Bernicia chronicles, i expected a wonderful story and yet again the author didnt disappoint. This latest novel is as gripping as the rest of the Bernicia chronicles. Would recommend this series to anybody who enjoys reading stories based in the dark ages. Excellent characters and storylines that make you feel like you're in a shield wall next to them!
May 11, 2019
Anglo-Saxon Britain. The year AD 643. Beobrand returns in Storm of Steel.
Beobrand’s life takes a turn for the unexpected when Udela, a friend from his youth harbouring a secret, seeks him out to rescue her daughter Ardith, who was sold to pirates by her drunkard father.
Given consent to undertake the rescue mission, Beobrand gathers his band of battle-seasoned warriors, finds a captain with a ship and a crew, and sets sail after the ruthless band of pirates.
Beobrand and his loyal men encounter many exploits, surprise schemes, and treachery. There are ambushes, graphic blood-shedding, sword-fighting, seaxe and spear throwing, and devastating shipwrecks. Beobrand’s larger-than-life reputation continues to impress, but it is his great warrior status that make his enemies want to overpower him, and cause the weak to quake in his presence.
Historically, the author recreates the time periods knowledgeably and with excellent details. I am a big period fan and was very impressed with the precision that Harffy describes the brutality of the era, and the true-to-life conditions of the voyages at sea. The reader vividly pictures how rough the seas are when pummelled with fierce storms, and how the men, both experienced and novice, managed to survive. Those were dark days for ships and seamen, with disease and the ocean claiming their share of sailors, and pirates taking whatever might have been left.
Storm of Steel steeps the reader in Beobrand’s exciting, adventurous, gripping story of action and adventure on the high, stormy seas, and without skipping a beat, onto dry land facing new enemies and menacing dangers.
Thank you to NetGalley and Aria for the read of Matthew Harffy’s, Storm of Steel.
Beobrand’s life takes a turn for the unexpected when Udela, a friend from his youth harbouring a secret, seeks him out to rescue her daughter Ardith, who was sold to pirates by her drunkard father.
Given consent to undertake the rescue mission, Beobrand gathers his band of battle-seasoned warriors, finds a captain with a ship and a crew, and sets sail after the ruthless band of pirates.
Beobrand and his loyal men encounter many exploits, surprise schemes, and treachery. There are ambushes, graphic blood-shedding, sword-fighting, seaxe and spear throwing, and devastating shipwrecks. Beobrand’s larger-than-life reputation continues to impress, but it is his great warrior status that make his enemies want to overpower him, and cause the weak to quake in his presence.
Historically, the author recreates the time periods knowledgeably and with excellent details. I am a big period fan and was very impressed with the precision that Harffy describes the brutality of the era, and the true-to-life conditions of the voyages at sea. The reader vividly pictures how rough the seas are when pummelled with fierce storms, and how the men, both experienced and novice, managed to survive. Those were dark days for ships and seamen, with disease and the ocean claiming their share of sailors, and pirates taking whatever might have been left.
Storm of Steel steeps the reader in Beobrand’s exciting, adventurous, gripping story of action and adventure on the high, stormy seas, and without skipping a beat, onto dry land facing new enemies and menacing dangers.
Thank you to NetGalley and Aria for the read of Matthew Harffy’s, Storm of Steel.
August 16, 2019
Absolutely Brilliant yet again !!!!!!!
Having followed this series since I was lucky enough to come across book one, I am still as in awe of the storyline and I was the first time I picked up the Serpent Sword. The storyline never grows tired, the characters grow with each page, sucking you into understanding their way of thinking and the way they carried themselves in such times. Beobrand is a character that just keeps growing so far it's been one he'll of a journey, Storm of Steel is an awesome book expanding on a series that just keeps getting better,long may it continue
Having followed this series since I was lucky enough to come across book one, I am still as in awe of the storyline and I was the first time I picked up the Serpent Sword. The storyline never grows tired, the characters grow with each page, sucking you into understanding their way of thinking and the way they carried themselves in such times. Beobrand is a character that just keeps growing so far it's been one he'll of a journey, Storm of Steel is an awesome book expanding on a series that just keeps getting better,long may it continue
April 6, 2019
Storm of Steel
Matthew Harffy
Book 6
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Storm of Steel, is another masterly written historical fiction in The Berrnicia Chronicles.
Harffy is am immensely talented author. He delivers once again in creating each scene is richly atmospheric. Every detail has been put in place for a reason. Always brutally honest in recreating historical fiction time periods. This book lives up to its promise. Well developed characters and the authors strong ability to catapult you to that time period. Makes for thrilling adventurous read. I really enjoyed this last book in this series and highly recommend it. I look forward to reading more books by Matthew Harffy in the future.
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Storm of Steel, is another masterly written historical fiction in The Berrnicia Chronicles.
Harffy is am immensely talented author. He delivers once again in creating each scene is richly atmospheric. Every detail has been put in place for a reason. Always brutally honest in recreating historical fiction time periods. This book lives up to its promise. Well developed characters and the authors strong ability to catapult you to that time period. Makes for thrilling adventurous read. I really enjoyed this last book in this series and highly recommend it. I look forward to reading more books by Matthew Harffy in the future.
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May 21, 2019
Wow! Just wow. This is the sixth in the Bernicia Chronicles series and is every bit as compelling as the first five. Beobrand and his gesithas sail across the Whale Road to Frankia to rescue a girl sold to pirates by her father. As it turns out, there is much more to the story than first appears and as Beobrand gets deeper into the situation, facts are brought to light that will change his life forever.
As with the earlier books in this series, this one is well researched and well written. It makes the reader feel as if he or she is actually in the "Dark Ages." There is plenty of violence and bloodletting and enough suspense to keep the reader turning pages.
While not exactly a cliffhanger, there is enough of a hint of future adventures at the end of the book to let the reader know there will be future books. For me, that is terrific news. Matthew Harffy is one of my favorite historical authors. His work rivals anything out there and I cannot wait for the next chapter of this awesome series.
As with the earlier books in this series, this one is well researched and well written. It makes the reader feel as if he or she is actually in the "Dark Ages." There is plenty of violence and bloodletting and enough suspense to keep the reader turning pages.
While not exactly a cliffhanger, there is enough of a hint of future adventures at the end of the book to let the reader know there will be future books. For me, that is terrific news. Matthew Harffy is one of my favorite historical authors. His work rivals anything out there and I cannot wait for the next chapter of this awesome series.
August 12, 2020
“I did not demand that you come. No, you chose to board Brimblæd because one of your own had been taken. Ardith is but a child. In need of the strength of men. Brave men, like you all. I hope that we will find her and bring her safely back to her mother… But know this. Whatever happens, after last night, we no longer stand together as men. We stand together as brothers.”
“Well, in Albion we fight with spear, sword, and shield. It is with steel and iron that I have won my battle-fame, not with words and jibes delivered in a hall surrounded by men who dress like maidens. And when I wage war, it is against men. Warriors. Proud spear-men, shield-men, who are brave enough to fight for their lord and king. I do not fight against women.”
6th in the Bernicia Chronicles series, the books explore new adventures of Beobrand and his Gesthias, but this time it was over the sea. 643 AD. Anglo-Saxon Britain. When Oswiu, the new king of Northumbria sends Beobrand to escort back his betrothed from Cantware, Udela, an old friend from his childhood harboring a secret, seeks him out to rescue her daughter Ardith, who was sold to pirates by her drunkard father. To bring her back Beobrand gathers his battle-harden gesithas, enlist the help of a captain with a ship and a crew, and sets sail after those ruthless band of pirates on the Whale Roads to Frankia. On the way, they encounter chilling blizzard, devastating shipwrecks and seafaring battles. But will Beobrand ultimately succeed in rescuing Ardith from the bonds of slavery and prostitution? Or it will be too late for her to be rescued?
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🌊The glossy cover of the book with Brimblaed riding the waves is absolutely stunning & the title apt to the story. I also liked the detailed map and historical note given in the book.
🌊This time the plot of the books mainly revolves around the voyage over the Whale Roads, pursuing the seafaring pirates and saving a girl from slavery and prostitution, where losing means for Beoband not only the lives of his Gesithas but also the lost kin that he never knew as his own.
🌊Matthew's writing is captivating. His evocating narrative connects the readers with the characters and his vivid descriptions make you more invested with the story and the time period. However since the book is longer than the previous ones, I feel it was a bit dragging in the middle.
🌊Matthew had done his research very well in recreating the time periods with excellent details that make the reader feel as if one is actually in the "Dark Ages and included plenty of seafaring battles, violence and bloodletting, and enough suspense to keep the reader turning pages.
🌊With each book, I'm falling in love with Beobrand's character anew. Other characters are also well-conceived and grow through their triumphs and adversities over the book. By the end of the book, you will connect with them, understand their way of thinking, and know them inside out.
🌊The climax of the book is as usual satisfactory since Beobrand never fails to fulfill his oath. There is no cliffhanger and it ends at a point that paved the way for further adventures and more complications in Beobrand's life.
Overall, I completely enjoyed Storm of Steel and already ordered the next issue. I highly recommend every lover of historical fiction to read it and also read the other books in the series, they are all brilliant.
𝑴𝒚 𝑹𝒂𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
May 3, 2023
another topnotch chapter about Beo and his warriors
So Beobrand’s adventures continue. Unfortunately he must listen to the new king, Oswiu, who isn’t his best supporter. As he goes to get the future queen, he worries about his son’s fate in Oswiu’s household. I hope he doesn’t keep him long.
There are some very strong female characters in this story: Eanflæd, Ardith, even Udela. There are some new male characters I like too who are part of Beo’s journey to Frankia. I look forward to more about Ferenbald and Brinin. We also see more of Coenred, who I think must be a reader favorite. He’s really showing his mettle here.
Beo’s health seems a little bit weakened from a blow to his head. I wonder how this will play out down the road.
There is a very mind blowing revelation which steers all Beo’s decisions. It is a wild ride Beo, his warriors, and sailors take to Frankia.
Battles are still tension filled and exciting. Just when I though the story was over, there were still some loose ends around Draca and Scrydan that needed to be resolved. Very satisfying ending!
So Beobrand’s adventures continue. Unfortunately he must listen to the new king, Oswiu, who isn’t his best supporter. As he goes to get the future queen, he worries about his son’s fate in Oswiu’s household. I hope he doesn’t keep him long.
There are some very strong female characters in this story: Eanflæd, Ardith, even Udela. There are some new male characters I like too who are part of Beo’s journey to Frankia. I look forward to more about Ferenbald and Brinin. We also see more of Coenred, who I think must be a reader favorite. He’s really showing his mettle here.
Beo’s health seems a little bit weakened from a blow to his head. I wonder how this will play out down the road.
There is a very mind blowing revelation which steers all Beo’s decisions. It is a wild ride Beo, his warriors, and sailors take to Frankia.
Battles are still tension filled and exciting. Just when I though the story was over, there were still some loose ends around Draca and Scrydan that needed to be resolved. Very satisfying ending!
August 10, 2019
Once more, Matthew Harffy delivers another exciting Beobrand adventure.
This time, the heroic thane is on a quest that takes him beyond the familiar ground of Albion: an open sea, ruled by pirates, and a province of the kingdom of Francia, dominated by a depraved overlord. Beobrand must fulfill his quest against all odds, battling his own self-doubt along with pirates and foreign men-at-arms. The tale is full of menaces we still fear in the 21st century as much as in Beobrand's time. Harffy has conquered sea battles in this story just as in previous installments he mastered medieval battles on land. It makes for a refreshing change of pace.
Harffy has a deliciously evocative style, capturing the poetry of an Anglo-Saxon epic in modern and often earthy prose. It's very satisfying.
The way is paved for further adventures and complications in the life of Beobrand and I look forward to future installments of the Bernicia Chronicles.
This time, the heroic thane is on a quest that takes him beyond the familiar ground of Albion: an open sea, ruled by pirates, and a province of the kingdom of Francia, dominated by a depraved overlord. Beobrand must fulfill his quest against all odds, battling his own self-doubt along with pirates and foreign men-at-arms. The tale is full of menaces we still fear in the 21st century as much as in Beobrand's time. Harffy has conquered sea battles in this story just as in previous installments he mastered medieval battles on land. It makes for a refreshing change of pace.
Harffy has a deliciously evocative style, capturing the poetry of an Anglo-Saxon epic in modern and often earthy prose. It's very satisfying.
The way is paved for further adventures and complications in the life of Beobrand and I look forward to future installments of the Bernicia Chronicles.
August 18, 2019
I'm enjoying the series. The pacing was off a bit on this one. Although I am emerged in the story and characters I found the middle of the book slow and it took too long to get to the point of action which all happened in the last chapter. Because it's a series there were some loose ends but concluded in a surprise and rewarding ending. I will definitely pick up the next book (#7) in the Bernicia Chronicles series by Matthew Harffy.
September 14, 2021
The best book in a good series, "Storm of Steel" includes kidnapping, piracy, more than one storm, a host's despicable treachery, shipwreck, combat, a relentless chase or two, unrequited love, and a desperate rescue. What more could a book provide?
June 6, 2024
Great adventure like always!!!
September 27, 2024
High adventure, sometimes, on the high seas.
I really enjoy this. Between books I forget how much I like Beobrands adventures, then I read another and it's really good.
I really enjoy this. Between books I forget how much I like Beobrands adventures, then I read another and it's really good.
June 9, 2019
King Oswald is dead. Beobrand swore his allegiance to his new king. And in this installment, King Oswie tasked Beobrand in fetching his betrothed. Rather than escort the young princess, Beobrand & his Gesithas travelled back to his home and received a surprise of his life. This is a story of steel against steel, an amazing battle scenes and a daring rescue in the high seas. War casualties are unavoidable, my heart misses Acennan. Storm of Steel is an excellent summer read!
October 31, 2020
I like this series and following Beobrand in his many physical challenges both on land and sea, The seafaring action in this tale is vividly told.
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‘Storm of Steel’ features a blend of quality battles, tense encounters, and some decent drama; however, of Books 1–6, I feel this is the weakest in the series. I liked it in parts rather than on the whole.
Like with many historical novels I’ve read, the author puts so much effort in getting the history elements correct that essential creative writing skills are neglected. Main problem being too much ‘telling’ and not enough ‘showing’. Don’t tell the reader that a character ‘was confused’ – show his confusion with action, or body language, or a facial expression.
Adverb overuse is another evil, and the biggest problem with adverbs is they ‘tell’. For example, at one point we’re told that someone ‘walked determinedly’, which tells us the character got from A to B but we don’t see it. Cut the adverb and use a strong verb to ‘show’ the determination.
Adverbs are pointless in instances like ‘vomited noisily’ (do people ever vomit at any other volume?) and ‘squirmed uncomfortably’ (‘squirmed’ alone implies the discomfort).
Among the worst adverbs is ‘clearly’. To tell the reader that a character was ‘clearly waiting’ or ‘clearly curious’ is ‘telling’ at its worst. In fiction, if you use ‘clearly’ or ‘obviously’, be assured that you’re not ‘showing’ the reader anything.
Two other style issues that irritated me are the overuse of ‘then’ (to state what happens next), and ‘had’ (past perfect).
To keep using ‘then’ is lazy and unimaginative. It’s fine in children’s books, but for gritty historical fiction I expect more imagination. Most can be cut, the rest replaced.
‘Had’ appears in this and previous novels in the series like an infection. It may not bother most readers, but I find it a major distraction. In fact, before I started reading ‘Storm of Steel’, I made a bet with myself that ‘had’ would feature in the first sentence. It did – and in most sentences of the opening page.
The frequent use of ‘had’ in the past perfect tense is something all authors should avoid. It reports on the scene as opposed to taking the reader into the action as it unfolds. The odd one is inevitable, but in this book it’s consistent, even though it’s easy to cut them down.
For one thing, this narrative is in the past tense, so ‘had’ should only be used if a sentence sounds odd without it. For example, ‘He had said’ works fine as ‘he said’ because ‘said’ is in the past tense. ‘She had sat down’ works better as ‘She sat down’ because ‘sat’ is past tense. If a scene that’s past is being recalled, all that’s needed is to inform the reader that these events have already happened, after which the frequent use of ‘had’ is unnecessary.
In this novel, we get the likes of ‘had come', which annoys and baffles me when ‘came’ is available.
The frequency of ‘had’ stands out in all novels in this series, but in this one and Book 5 most prominently, owing to a lot of jumping around the story’s chronology. In several cases, I pondered why this scene or that scene couldn’t have been fitted in as they happened, rather than open with a character located in a certain place, only to start with the, ‘He had done this, and then he had done that’ type of thing. Stories flow better if kept linear, and when backstory is needed, there’s no need to over-swell it with ‘had, had, had’.
So, the opening scene is slowed down through the overuse of ‘had’, as is the final chapter. The penultimate chapter, which features an exciting battle with pirates, is great, but in last chapter, scenes from the battle are told from different viewpoints after the event, rather than being dramatized alongside the main character’s point of view, leading once again to ‘he had done this, he had done that’, etc. It’s devoid of drama this way. It would’ve been way better to have included these scenes alongside the main character’s actions *as they happened*, and not report it afterwards as added information.
Similar, in the last chapter, we see events from an antagonist's viewpoint, which is dramatized and engaging. Following this, we see the scene from one of the protagonists, only this time it’s like reading another report, as we’re told ‘He had done this, he had done that’, etc.
One other general criticism I have for this novel, and all sequels in the series, is that every so often a character from a previous book is referred to with the assumption that the reader has read all previous novels. Not everyone reads full series. Some people might see Book 5 for sale, like the synopsis, and decided to buy. So, if a character who dies in, say, Book 3 is briefly referred to when the main character is reminded of them, the reader is locked out of the story.
Also, those people who do read an entire series may have long gaps between books, in which case it could be a challenge to remember a character from Book 1 when you’re reading Book 6 five years later.
Sometimes an explanation is given regarding who a past character is, but even then it’s debatable whether there’s much point in mentioning them if it has no real significance to the current narrative. To me, I see no point in having main character Beobrand remember a friend being hanged in Book 1 because he sees someone hanging in Book 6.
Another downside to remarking on characters killed off in earlier books, or recalling in detail past battles or such like, is that if someone picks up Book 6 first, they may not want to go back to the beginning and read through the series because they’ve now read several spoilers.
While it’s good to have continuity in a series, an ideal sequel should also work as a stand-alone novel. Thinking about it, a key to writing a quality novel is to always keep the story moving forwards, so this trait should apply even more so to a series.
Criticisms aside, this author uses some excellent similes. I was impressed with his creativity in this department. Also, he recreates the period well, making me feel like I’m in the seventh century.
He’s gifted at creating child characters. Children don’t surface often in this novel or its predecessors, but when they do appear, they’re vivid and believable. Better still are his depictions of animals and birds.
Like with many historical novels I’ve read, the author puts so much effort in getting the history elements correct that essential creative writing skills are neglected. Main problem being too much ‘telling’ and not enough ‘showing’. Don’t tell the reader that a character ‘was confused’ – show his confusion with action, or body language, or a facial expression.
Adverb overuse is another evil, and the biggest problem with adverbs is they ‘tell’. For example, at one point we’re told that someone ‘walked determinedly’, which tells us the character got from A to B but we don’t see it. Cut the adverb and use a strong verb to ‘show’ the determination.
Adverbs are pointless in instances like ‘vomited noisily’ (do people ever vomit at any other volume?) and ‘squirmed uncomfortably’ (‘squirmed’ alone implies the discomfort).
Among the worst adverbs is ‘clearly’. To tell the reader that a character was ‘clearly waiting’ or ‘clearly curious’ is ‘telling’ at its worst. In fiction, if you use ‘clearly’ or ‘obviously’, be assured that you’re not ‘showing’ the reader anything.
Two other style issues that irritated me are the overuse of ‘then’ (to state what happens next), and ‘had’ (past perfect).
To keep using ‘then’ is lazy and unimaginative. It’s fine in children’s books, but for gritty historical fiction I expect more imagination. Most can be cut, the rest replaced.
‘Had’ appears in this and previous novels in the series like an infection. It may not bother most readers, but I find it a major distraction. In fact, before I started reading ‘Storm of Steel’, I made a bet with myself that ‘had’ would feature in the first sentence. It did – and in most sentences of the opening page.
The frequent use of ‘had’ in the past perfect tense is something all authors should avoid. It reports on the scene as opposed to taking the reader into the action as it unfolds. The odd one is inevitable, but in this book it’s consistent, even though it’s easy to cut them down.
For one thing, this narrative is in the past tense, so ‘had’ should only be used if a sentence sounds odd without it. For example, ‘He had said’ works fine as ‘he said’ because ‘said’ is in the past tense. ‘She had sat down’ works better as ‘She sat down’ because ‘sat’ is past tense. If a scene that’s past is being recalled, all that’s needed is to inform the reader that these events have already happened, after which the frequent use of ‘had’ is unnecessary.
In this novel, we get the likes of ‘had come', which annoys and baffles me when ‘came’ is available.
The frequency of ‘had’ stands out in all novels in this series, but in this one and Book 5 most prominently, owing to a lot of jumping around the story’s chronology. In several cases, I pondered why this scene or that scene couldn’t have been fitted in as they happened, rather than open with a character located in a certain place, only to start with the, ‘He had done this, and then he had done that’ type of thing. Stories flow better if kept linear, and when backstory is needed, there’s no need to over-swell it with ‘had, had, had’.
So, the opening scene is slowed down through the overuse of ‘had’, as is the final chapter. The penultimate chapter, which features an exciting battle with pirates, is great, but in last chapter, scenes from the battle are told from different viewpoints after the event, rather than being dramatized alongside the main character’s point of view, leading once again to ‘he had done this, he had done that’, etc. It’s devoid of drama this way. It would’ve been way better to have included these scenes alongside the main character’s actions *as they happened*, and not report it afterwards as added information.
Similar, in the last chapter, we see events from an antagonist's viewpoint, which is dramatized and engaging. Following this, we see the scene from one of the protagonists, only this time it’s like reading another report, as we’re told ‘He had done this, he had done that’, etc.
One other general criticism I have for this novel, and all sequels in the series, is that every so often a character from a previous book is referred to with the assumption that the reader has read all previous novels. Not everyone reads full series. Some people might see Book 5 for sale, like the synopsis, and decided to buy. So, if a character who dies in, say, Book 3 is briefly referred to when the main character is reminded of them, the reader is locked out of the story.
Also, those people who do read an entire series may have long gaps between books, in which case it could be a challenge to remember a character from Book 1 when you’re reading Book 6 five years later.
Sometimes an explanation is given regarding who a past character is, but even then it’s debatable whether there’s much point in mentioning them if it has no real significance to the current narrative. To me, I see no point in having main character Beobrand remember a friend being hanged in Book 1 because he sees someone hanging in Book 6.
Another downside to remarking on characters killed off in earlier books, or recalling in detail past battles or such like, is that if someone picks up Book 6 first, they may not want to go back to the beginning and read through the series because they’ve now read several spoilers.
While it’s good to have continuity in a series, an ideal sequel should also work as a stand-alone novel. Thinking about it, a key to writing a quality novel is to always keep the story moving forwards, so this trait should apply even more so to a series.
Criticisms aside, this author uses some excellent similes. I was impressed with his creativity in this department. Also, he recreates the period well, making me feel like I’m in the seventh century.
He’s gifted at creating child characters. Children don’t surface often in this novel or its predecessors, but when they do appear, they’re vivid and believable. Better still are his depictions of animals and birds.
November 11, 2021
Beobrand and his Personal sidequest
After the emotional ending on previous chapter, our favorite Bernician goes in search of a lost daughter, whom has been kidnapped and sent into Frankia. Beobrand will once again pack his gear and joined by his most trusted followers will go hunting the evil pirates who are responsible for abducting his daughter leading everyone to a final confrontation at Rodomo (current Rouen, France).
New characters and places are introduced as Beo will find himself in lands unknown before to him, with new companions and enemies in each corner.
Despite this tale is well written it was hard for me to be engaged with story (i struggled with this, as normally I read a Beobrand's book in 1-2 weeks). I found too much of the book to endevour into not important things. Regardless, it was a good read and at the 1/3 of the end things start to be more interesting.
If you are with Beobrand and find his feats interesting, this read might be skipabble but the last part of it, worths the struggle of reading all the book. I think that the same story could be told with less words.
Looking forward to read next chapter in this series.
After the emotional ending on previous chapter, our favorite Bernician goes in search of a lost daughter, whom has been kidnapped and sent into Frankia. Beobrand will once again pack his gear and joined by his most trusted followers will go hunting the evil pirates who are responsible for abducting his daughter leading everyone to a final confrontation at Rodomo (current Rouen, France).
New characters and places are introduced as Beo will find himself in lands unknown before to him, with new companions and enemies in each corner.
Despite this tale is well written it was hard for me to be engaged with story (i struggled with this, as normally I read a Beobrand's book in 1-2 weeks). I found too much of the book to endevour into not important things. Regardless, it was a good read and at the 1/3 of the end things start to be more interesting.
If you are with Beobrand and find his feats interesting, this read might be skipabble but the last part of it, worths the struggle of reading all the book. I think that the same story could be told with less words.
Looking forward to read next chapter in this series.
December 7, 2019
I thought I would like this series given the historical fiction setting of the Dark Ages, but wasn't expecting to get so drawn in. It's been an outstanding read and I've really enjoyed seeing the characters grow through triumphs and adversity. This one seems like a longer book than the previous, and also differs in that rather than Bernica, a large amount of the story involves seafaring (hopefully not a spoiler given the cover illustration and blurb) and a foray across to the continent. The main protaogonist Beobrand is a little broken and subdued, which is not surprising following events in the previous book. A mission back to the lands of his upbringing brings him into contact with people from his past and revelations lead to Beobrand discovering something worth fighting and living for. Looking forward to see where his Wyrd takes him in future books - hopefully many more to come.
May 14, 2019
Beobrand delivers yet again with a sweeping saga!
Beobrand, Lord of Ubbanford, warrior of Bernicia, is a noble character whom one loves, admires and cheers for as he seeks to do the Will of God - or the gods - through this enthralling series of novels, The Bernicia Chronicles. As with all the previous installments, this book was quite simply impossible to put down. I have eagerly waited for this latest episode in the saga of Beobrand; and was, once again, swept away in the scope of this new chapter of the warrior’s tale - which exceeded my most hopeful expectations. Brilliantly written, this book has it all. My only complaint is in having to now wait for the next episode in the series.
Beobrand, Lord of Ubbanford, warrior of Bernicia, is a noble character whom one loves, admires and cheers for as he seeks to do the Will of God - or the gods - through this enthralling series of novels, The Bernicia Chronicles. As with all the previous installments, this book was quite simply impossible to put down. I have eagerly waited for this latest episode in the saga of Beobrand; and was, once again, swept away in the scope of this new chapter of the warrior’s tale - which exceeded my most hopeful expectations. Brilliantly written, this book has it all. My only complaint is in having to now wait for the next episode in the series.
September 12, 2020
Beobrand’s Continuing Journey - EPIC
Another book I couldn’t put down. Matthew Harffy’s characters in the book come alive and while reading the series you get to know them well. Beobrand I feel is getting older, he feels he is slowing down but he is a battled hardened warrior who consistently has good luck. It is as if his fate has not been decided by God and his journey carries on for another day!
Currently reading Matthew’s newest book ‘The Wolf of Wessex’ which will be a blockbuster!
I highly recommend reading the Bernicia Chronicles Series, you will not be disappointed : )
Another book I couldn’t put down. Matthew Harffy’s characters in the book come alive and while reading the series you get to know them well. Beobrand I feel is getting older, he feels he is slowing down but he is a battled hardened warrior who consistently has good luck. It is as if his fate has not been decided by God and his journey carries on for another day!
Currently reading Matthew’s newest book ‘The Wolf of Wessex’ which will be a blockbuster!
I highly recommend reading the Bernicia Chronicles Series, you will not be disappointed : )
January 29, 2021
Another amazing story by an amazing writer!
I’ve read the chronicles more than once and each addition to the adventures of Beobrand become more alive and intriguing. This particular book was hard to put down! Just when you think things are calm, another event pulls you deep into the story. If you want a series that will keep you glued to the pages, I highly recommend Harffy’s Bernicia Chronicles. The words really put you right in the middle of the battles, romance, and this book put you on the high seas many times. Thanks Matthew for sharing Beobrand with us! Can’t wait for the series to be put on film!
I’ve read the chronicles more than once and each addition to the adventures of Beobrand become more alive and intriguing. This particular book was hard to put down! Just when you think things are calm, another event pulls you deep into the story. If you want a series that will keep you glued to the pages, I highly recommend Harffy’s Bernicia Chronicles. The words really put you right in the middle of the battles, romance, and this book put you on the high seas many times. Thanks Matthew for sharing Beobrand with us! Can’t wait for the series to be put on film!
January 4, 2020
Thrilling Must Read
Well written with a twisted plot and adventure and while reminiscing of those who died before, our beloved hero Beobrand once again is truly lucky. I didn't give the last book a good review because I was too heart broken from the deaths in it. But in this book I can feel Beobrand's grief as well and have to come to grip with the author's choice to kill off key people. I highly recommend this book and all of the others in this series The Bernica Chronicles.
Well written with a twisted plot and adventure and while reminiscing of those who died before, our beloved hero Beobrand once again is truly lucky. I didn't give the last book a good review because I was too heart broken from the deaths in it. But in this book I can feel Beobrand's grief as well and have to come to grip with the author's choice to kill off key people. I highly recommend this book and all of the others in this series The Bernica Chronicles.
June 3, 2020
Haŕyffy's hero Beobrand continues his tour-de-force of dark-age Britain
Reluctantly sworn to the new king, Beobrand is sent south to escort the party negotiating a marriage alliance to strengthen Oswiu 's ambitions to expand his petty kingdom.
He encounters pirates and old enemies, but makes new friends too, which is just as well, given Beobraand's warlike response to any who cross him, and the brotherhood set sail on a daring rescue mission .
That's enough reviewing for now; I need to read the next book in the series!
Reluctantly sworn to the new king, Beobrand is sent south to escort the party negotiating a marriage alliance to strengthen Oswiu 's ambitions to expand his petty kingdom.
He encounters pirates and old enemies, but makes new friends too, which is just as well, given Beobraand's warlike response to any who cross him, and the brotherhood set sail on a daring rescue mission .
That's enough reviewing for now; I need to read the next book in the series!
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