What in the world happened? The first book really got me hooked, it was so good - the world building, the characters, the development. But this? It's literally like someone said "hey, let's take the same story, but just turn it up a hundred notches?". The first warning should have been that I never read second-generation books, because I didn't want to hear about the kids from the start, even less reading about their story. Sable was such a badass, but River is just so... uh. So bland in comparison to her. And when it comes to Omen, I literally couldn't have cared less about her as a character. I think this was a big problem in general in this book, the author wanted to get in all these characters, all this action and all the boring romance all at once - and it just became hasty, or straight out a mess. Because of course since Sable had this fate of meeting the love of her life, River had to outdo this both when it came to Fate, but also apparently his bond to Omen being something so extraordinary it hadn't been seen in at least 500 years. Honestly, the author relied to heavily on them being soulmates that it just felt extremely forced and kinda weird. Like these kids were 19 but the writing was an attempt at making him sound so grown up? No, just no. It was literally horrible.
With that said, there was no character development at all. And that isn't a surprise since the book is not that long. But then came the action, and dear lord save us all - when I thought it couldn't become worse than it already was, it did. Because hey, let's build up this tension only to make it culminate in a war that lasts like two pages? I'm literally laughing because it was so bizarre. It was portrayed as being the war of a lifetime, their entire world was on the brink of destruction, and not a single character died. Like come on, at least try. And then the end is just the dream for all those who want action that won't hurt your feelings, but get as many people as possible paired up in relationships. This book put me in the worst reading slum I've had in at least two years. I cannot fathom how it plummeted between book one and two. The writing suddenly became childish, which came truly as a surprise because I remember how nicely done it was in Sable's story. I don't know what happened, but I'm glad I got through this havoc, and let this serve as a painful refined to learn to DNF books in the future.