God this was brilliant. I’ll come back later with a full review for every story in the collection. For now -
Average rating: 4/5
Final rating: 4.5/5
Update 3/4/20:
Ok let's talk about how good this collection is. I'm obsessed with N.K. Jemisin and I've only read 2 books by her at this point, so I can only imagine how that obsession will grow with time. This is a thoughtful, inventive collection that takes so many risks and almost every single one of them pays off. How Long 'til Black Future Month gives every story in the collection the correct number of pages in order to work. The length varies from story to story, and it's always the right decision to let a story breathe or cut it off when it's time.
Jemisin is a fascinating and inventive writer. No story in this collection is the same, and they all have something meaningful to say. From the single perspective narratives on a world where we treat each other with care to sprawling historical fiction adventure tales in New Orleans to future worlds post-apocalypse where we are all left desperately alone save a few online connections. These stories breeze through easy definitions of sci-fi and fantasy, apocalypse and dystopia, magic and science.
I think that's enough general talk for now. Let's move into my individual ratings of all 22 of these stories.
The Ones Who Stay and Fight - 5/5
Fucking brilliant introduction to this collection. It's so full of heart and so full of refusal to confirm to the literary traditions of cishet white men. Humans have a capacity for love and understanding and it's horrific that we are forced to live in a world where we think differently. This is about getting to work, getting to a point where we can build a utopia where people are understood and valued as equals across the board. Just wow.
The City Born Great - 4.5/5
A clear inspiration/early concept for Jemisin's newest book, The City We Became. The fuck you, off-tempo, fantabulous feel of this story is off the damn charts. A city is a breathing thing, and like any great beast it has a monster. The narrative choices here are so interesting and unusual, so off the beaten track of what a story like this can look like. The story, like the city of New York, feels alive and breathing and angry. Loved this to the moon and back.
Red Dirt Witch - 3/5
It took a bit for me to get into this story and to understand all the details at work. It is a story about magic and fae and the pivotal point in time where the fight for civil rights was truly making waves up to Obama's presidency. I think some of it felt a little rushed (not surprising in a short story that covers this many decades of time), thus why I was a bit confused at the beginning and why it took so long to get into the magic. However, huge props for a story about fae that I didn't hate reading. Usually fae are my anti-buzzword but I loved the mythology around them in this world, it was very inventive and cool.
L'Alchimista - 5/5
This is the first story in the collection about a love of cooking, and the magical properties of making food and it is utterly delightful. It has a sort of timelessness, a refusal to clarify when exactly we might be. It's also a story about cooking, and how it is a bit like witchcraft. I think what is magical here is the idea of simple tasks, tasks that are usually considered "women's work", being turned from mundane to magical just through love and talent. It's a lovely concept and I'm very into it.
The Effluent Engine - 5/5
MY FAVE STORY IN THE ENTIRE COLLLECTION OH MY GOD. The rip roaring, spy-meets-engineer f/f story of my dreams. This is adventurous and fun, full of tension and romance, and it's all set in the gorgeous late 18th-century New Orleans. I would read a 10 book series imagined around this story. It's perfection.
Cloud Dragon Skies - 3/5
I'm not sure, I just feel like I didn't get this one? "Cloud Dragon Skies" is a commentary on climate change and space exploration, the old ways and the new, and it's also a love story. I think I didn't understand the romantic relationship of this one so the rest of the story felt unfulfilling by comparison. If the story is based around romance and that romance doesn't make sense to me, the whole thing really falls flat. I do think the climate change discussion was strong, and I liked the idea of this future world where people of color who live off the land kind of tell white people to fuck off into the sky so the planet can be fixed. Great concept, just not my favorite execution.
The Trojan Girl - 4/5
Brilliantly high concept. This is a future world with ingrained technology, and the creatures created in the midst of that mind sharing technology. It's also about a capacity to love and how dreaming can be the key to humanity and passion. It took me a bit to get into, like I said this is high concept and I had to adjust to this world and these characters, but I loved that this took compassionate twists I wasn't expecting.
Valedictorian - 4.5/5
This one goes out to the smart girls, the passionate, the ones who refuse to let the world's ideas make themselves small. It is also yet another story to introduce the idea of a future full of a different kind of human, and how we as humans would react to that given our history with different types of people. It's killer and sad but also kind of kicks ass. Huge love for "Valedictorian".
The Storyteller's Replacement - 4/5
I liked the tone and the conceit of this one. This is the second story in the collection that I would consider a story within a story (the first one being "The Ones Who Stay and Fight") and I'm very interested in that concept. When I say a story within a story, I mean that this is one of three narratives in the collection that is told through a one-sided conversation, a monologue of sorts, where the narrator is speaking to someone else but we never hear that other side of the conversation. It's a cool narrative choice. I think this could have used slightly more to flesh it out but it was suitably unsettling and the end of the story within a story was excellent.
The Brides of Heaven - 3.5/5
This was good, but I didn't quite understand the end? I read it through twice and I'm still unsure how this all panned out. I think this was a take on the myth of the Amazons, of this version of a "virgin" Mary, one impregnated by a god. But it's also got a hint of insanity, a bit of sci-fi, and the barest by of a dystopian/Handmaid's Tale elemtn. I like the method of storytelling, I just think the ending stumbled.
The Evaluators - 2/5
Sadly, my least favorite of the collection. Not to sound remarkably stupid but I'm unsure fully what happened in this story. It's told in the format of transcripts of conversations and posts and comments, but the timeline is very difficult to follow so I was constantly flipping back and forth trying to work it all out. This is a story about aliens, about the scientific discovery of a new species and studying that species, but I think it was rough and not super clear.
Walking Awake - 4/5
Really solid story. I am always a fan of a revolution, of overthrowing a tyrannical reign, because it feels current in a constantly terrifying way. This also uses the concepts of parasites and hosts and science going too far, too wrong. I loved the main character of "Walking Awake", Sadie, and I loved the descent into despair and eventually to anger and acceptance. I didn't get quite as emotionally invested in this one as other stories, but it was still a really incredible entry.
The Elevator Dancer - 4/5
Fascinating and incredibly quick story, only a few pages long. This feels like it is set in a conservative-driven dystopia akin to 1984. It's about small acts of rebellion, and it isn't entirely hopeful. But I liked it's simplicity, it worked for me and really drove home how some anthologies are constrained by their page requirements. Sometimes a story doesn't need 20 pages, sometimes 20 pages isn't enough. Reading a story this effective that is under 10 pages just served as a reminder that short fiction should be able to thrive with a less strict page count.
Cuisine des Memories - 5/5
Another cooking magic story! I adore how much Jemisin loves food and the magic of food. This is a brilliant, contained bit of small magic in an unmagical world. It is about a magic of recapturing a meal from any night and thus reliving those memories, good or bad. I adored it.
Stone Hunger - 4.5/5
I'll admit, I don't know if I should have read this one considering it seemed to be a part of the Broken Earth trilogy, which I haven't finished yet, but I'm still glad I got to discover this new part of that world. It took me a minute to get into it, just like the full books in the trilogy have. It's so vivid and refuses to slow down and explain things to you, which I commend it for. I love the viciousness of this story and the brutality built into this girl. She reminded me of Arya Stark during her time with the Faceless Men. I live and breathe for angry women wreaking the vengeance they deserve.
On the Banks of the River Lex - 3/5
Points for originality here, even if I didn't really vibe with it. This was set in some distant future/sideways world, a world where something has happened and many magical things walk among us. It has the traditional Jemisin love of New York and the quirkiness of a story following Death when he isn't quite sure of his place anymore. I think I could have used more world building, but it's a fine enough story as is.
The Narcomancer - 3/5
This was a somewhat exhausting read. I kept falling asleep (if you have also read this, yes I realize the irony here). There wasn't necessarily anything wrong with it I just couldn't stay awake to appreciate the story of this character. Fine, but not excellent. I did like the work it was doing in understanding and working through trauma, plus there was a gender nonconforming side character I would like to dedicate my life to.
Henosis - 4.5/5
LOVED the inventiveness of this one. It's a story told out of order, the chapters mixed up as you go, and is a quick tale of a world where artists are remembered for their deaths, whatever that might mean. It's a solid experiment in nonlinear storytelling and a fun read as you are quickly and horrifically introduced to this world.
Too Many Yesterdays, Not Enough Tomorrows - 4/5
I think this might have received a higher rating if it didn't make me so damn sad lol. This was super excellent and effectively horrifying Black Mirror-esque fiction at it's best. An apocalypse without an apocalypse, the terror of unending isolated existence, love being the possibility of doom or freedom. It's super solid, I just felt so anxious and sad reading it that I couldn't give this the 5 stars the writing probably deserves.
The You Train - 4/5
Another solid single-perspective monologue story! This was about wandering in New York City, plus some ghost trains, feeling listless and unsure of where to go. The voice was really innovative and great and I think it did a ton right, especially when you consider how short it was.
Non-Zero Probabilities - 3.5/5
I love the worldbuilding of this, the concept of good luck and bad luck not only existing but being absolutes - if only in one city. I did think that the plot was a little sparse and I don't know if it got it's point across quite well enough. This is another story where I would love to read chapters and chapters about this world, but the story itself could have used more work.
Sinners, Saints, Dragons, and Haints, in the City Beneath the Still Waters - 4.5/5
Jemisin has so much love for places. Places, cities, where a lot of people live and work and love take on identities for her and I think that's profound and fascinating. This is a take on Hurricane Katrina, set in a world of dragons and embodiments of hatred. It's hard and sad but has that burning passion for a place, for a home, and I think it's a damn good story.
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When I said near the beginning that I think N.K. Jemisin is writing fiction far beyond the literary traditions of cishet white men, what I mean is that even when her stories lack happiness they are never hopeless. The goal of her work isn't to manipulate you, it's about challenging you to see the good in people and also be willing to see the evil side of those to discriminate and hate. Her stories are political in the simplest of ways, asking you if it is fair that differences of opinion equal differences of respect. And I think that's revolutionary. I think that it is going against the grain of so much sci-fi and fantasy past and present.
If you managed to read this far into my review, I just want to say that I think this collection has something for everyone. I can't wait to fall even more in love with Jemisin as time goes on, and I'm so thrilled I spent this February of 2020 digging into so many different sides of her work.