Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book in exchange for my open and honest review. This has, in no way, affected my opinion of the book.
*Also: Slight spoiler warning*
It has taken me much longer than usual to sit down and write this review for one simple reason: I did not like this book. I commend any author who has the stamina and courage to sit down, write an entire novel and send it out into the world where it’ll be read and judged by countless people. That takes courage, and I applaud Ms. Abigial Mangin for having that kind of courage.
That being said, I really didn't like this book. I picked it up to read because
A. The cover looks amazing and
B. The description of the book really sounded like something I'd enjoy.
The principle behind the book was really cool. The execution, though? Not so much.
First and foremost, this book could have definitely benefited from better editing. I'm not sure if there will be another round of edits before the book's actual publication or if it’s going out in this form, but if so, whew. It shouldn't. It definitely needs some work. At first, I was highlighting errors so that I could point them out in case there was time to correct them before publication. Once I realized how many there were, however, I just stopped.
Some of the most glaring ones that I found before I stopped my highlighting were as follows:
There were some instances of double words, such as location 1667 of 6531 (on the Amazon Kindle app)
'Margaux was already using her cane cane as a pathetic blockade.'
Then there were instances of wrong words and leaving words out, such as location 1685 of 6531
'A reported whispered a bit too loudly the woman next to him.'
There were multiple instances of wrong tenses, wrong words, wrong pronouns, misspellings (why spell check didn’t catch these is beyond me) and things of that nature.
(location 3885) - 'She manipulating the shape of the butterfly over her arm.'
(location 6204) - 'left a train set of handmade cars from Italy is his eill.'
(location 4270) - 'Everyone who seems they like they have control is faking it.'
These kinds of errors can ruin a book for me, especially if there are a ton of them, and there were in this particular book. Those are only a very few examples.
However, the thing that really killed the book for me was how absolutely unrealistic it was. It’s true that I’ve never been a model, and with my super curvaceous (read: overweight) figure, I never will, but come on now. Some of this crap was just absolutely ridiculous. I can believe that some awful, shady stuff goes down in the modeling world. I can believe girls starve themselves to death, and I can even believe that modeling is just a front for human trafficking. In fact, I do believe those things, but that was not nearly the extent of the crazy in this book.
First of all, the characters were absolutely, 100% unbelievable. There was nothing about them that seemed even remotely plausible. I’m talking about could not ever, would not ever happen in real life! Take, for example, the police detective working the murder investigation. This is actually a description from the book of a grown woman working as a law enforcement professional talking seriously to someone about pertinent information for her murder investigation:
"She hopped onto the hood of an ambulance, and unscrewed a jar of honey. (Yes, that unnecessary comma is in the book. I didn’t add it.) Her bare fingers dunked into the golden goodness. She reminded him of a grizzly bear. At first, she seemed cute and lovable, and then he remembered she had giant claws and a pistol. (etc. etc. etc. I’m skipping ahead a little here for the sake of brevity.) She slurped the honey over her tongue, puffing out her cheeks. And then she clicked the briefcase closed and handed it back to him. "I can't take these," Roosevelt said with a somber drawl. (What she couldn't take was actual proof that a murder suspect had stolen models' birth certificates, faked VISAs and passports to get them over country borders and forced them and their parents - who mostly couldn't read or speak English - to sign slave contracts. I'd think a cop should probably take those, but I digress. Here’s my favorite part...) Roosevelt said, scrubbing a hand through her short hair. She spiked it up into adorable horns, using the honey as gel."
In my experience, law enforcement professionals, particularly women who have to work even harder to be taken seriously in the field, don’t usually sit around using honey to make horns of their hair during murder investigations. This could have possibly been one of the most unrealistic scenes I’ve ever read in a book in my entire life, and I’m honestly not being hyperbolic.
Sadly, up until this point, this cop was actually one of the most believable characters in the story.
We also have the sex addicted, slave-driving mother with a penchant for Shirley Temple and erotic sex canes who ends up living in an abbey with monks because, of course, monks love when random women come to live with them - especially random, sex-addicted women.
There's also the entire city of NYC that has models posed in store windows, chained down with bidding sheets attached to them so that people can buy them for the night in order to perform deviant sexual acts with them (or in some cases, torture and murder them). I mean, I know New York City has its flaws, but you'd think someone would notice a whole block or two of the city trafficking in sex slavery.
I could give at least a dozen more examples, but I think that's enough to make my point. The entire book was absolutely unbelievable and unrealistic starting at about chapter three and going until the end. I wanted to throw in the towel several times and just say, "Nope. I'm done." However, when I get a free book in exchange for a review, I feel obligated to finish it, regardless of how bad it is.
Again, my total respect to the author, and despite the fact that I hated her book, I actually mean that sincerely. I can't even imagine how hard it is to write a book and put it out into the world. That being said, though, this one was absolutely, 100% not for me.