Exile [流放 (种田)]

by Jin An Yule, 金鞍玉勒

On a dark night, drunkard Su Qingbai was pulled into an alley, and a few months later, he had a big belly.

Su Qingbai couldn’t help mourning that his father had been dismissed from officialdom. It was difficult for him to support himself and a little brat.

However, it’s not over yet…

Another dark night, Su Qingbai was pulled into an alley again…

Genres: Romance, LGBT

551 pages, Unknown Binding

Reviews

[Nessa · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fan translation is complete at https://www.novelupdates.com/series/e...

It was cute and had low angst majority of the time. A nice quick read that was refreshing 👍

[P2wo · Rating 1 out of 5]

Exile doesn't feel like a novel but more like a summary of a long novel. There is nothing new and original about it. The writing style is very mediocre. Neither the plot is interesting nor are the characters. The transmigration of ML holds no meaning. MC and ML's relationship started with r*pe because ML was drugged but how this came to be is not explained at all. And MC just accepts ML as his partner without caring that he is a rape victim. If this is not romanticizing r*pe then what is? In fact, many things are not explained and just brushed off. Also, ML is the cliche type, you know the one who is only thinking about harassing MC all the time. He even gets jealous of his own son if his son gets more attention from MC than him. Also, ML calls MC, who is clearly a man, his wife. I so hate this everytime an author does this. Furthermore, MC wasn't acknowledged until the end as ML's partner. Only his children were acknowledged.
In conclusion, the novel is nothing outstanding, only mediocre at best.

[Hasmiera Hashim · Rating 2 out of 5]

Light read only.

[TofuBao · Rating 3 out of 5]

Rating: 3/5- This book’s high points are the babies! So cute and chubby and sweet! Otherwise it’s mediocre at best.

It’s a very badly written story with a constant feeling of rushing through a half baked idea. I read it to pass time mostly but I genuinely enjoyed the babies in this book.
I usually love reading about dads with kids so this book caters to that really well.

If you’re looking for a solid plot or good writing or likeable characters, you won’t find any of that here.

Nothing really made much sense at all. I did not understand why anything happened in the first place?

Why did the r*pe even happen in the first place? Why was the r*pe ignored? How do you fall in love with your rapist? What did they even like about each other? How can only one man get pregnant out of the blue? Was it genetic? Did he eat something? Is he a ger? What was with the Emperor? What was with the princes? What was with the prime ministers? What was with the transmigration? What even...?

I could go on and on and none of my questions will have appropriate answers because nothing made sense from start to finish- except the babies!

So my advise is to just read it for the babies- they’re cute!

[Selin · Rating 4 out of 5]

A reasonably long slice of life story, took me only a few hours to finish reading. Characters are nice, they don't have too much to them in my opinion but it doesn't actually bother the reader either, interactions of the main couple and people around them are rather amusing. There is no angst, some people cause annoyances but everything gets taken care of without any problems. I would say this is for people who want to read something light.

It's not quite a 3, not quite a 4 rated story but since I think it's higher than 3 I gave 4.

[Hitsuaya · Rating 2 out of 5]

Very light read. The family stuff, especially the kids were quite realistic, they weren't perfectly behaved and cute fantasy children and it was nice. Every other part of the story, the characters, the plot felt very surface level and unfocused. The last big drama was the only really good part that I enjoyed.

[Blanca · Rating 4 out of 5]

It's an entertaining story that is a fast read, there's only a little angst at the beginning. It focuses mainly on the romance and not the political scheming. One of the characters is a transmigrator but it doesn't seem that relevant to the plot.

[Anis · Rating 4 out of 5]

translation ; 3/5
plot ; 3/5
character ; 3.5/5
overall ; 3.5 stars

the story starts with our MC's family got exiled by the emperor. first chapter, MC was in a pub waiting for his buddy to pay his debt so he can use the money to help his family. but sadly that buddy didnt come and mc was knocked out cuz he cant pay the drink. so out he went and accidentally met with the ML who are in rut(? idk). then they did it.
chapter 2, i really like this chapter as the translator/author play with our feeling here (or just me idk). When MC woke up in the evening, he didnt see his family and thought that his family abandoned him. ouch my heart at that time.. fortunately, it was not lol. then so on with the other chapters.. etcetc

what i dislike/makes me curious is..
1. the author didnt explain how MC can get pregnant. will his children will be able to have this ability too?
2. the 'transmigrator' ML. oh well, i'll let this slide because this is kinda from MC's pov so maybe thats why.
3. About MC's family, first and second brother, what exactly happened to them?
4. I dislike that MC doesnt really have that 'maternal feelings' lol but he's a dad so um okay

[Sandy Chan · Rating 4 out of 5]

THE CHILD SU CAI CAI IS SO CUTE AND NAUGHTY