DNF
I love big books, but at 1072 pages on my laptop, this was a chore to read, and with 100 pages to go I abandoned it.
Firstly, the number of people in this book, some of them adding nothing to the story, is mind-boggling, and it was exhausting trying to keep track of everyone. I had to keep a notepad and pen beside me and at one point I honestly contemplated doing a family tree.
Marjorie, a church friend of Tom Lynch’s mother, Dolores, makes an appearance in the first 322 pages and then is never heard of again. She plays no part in the murders, and I can’t see the point in including her. Really, you can skip those pages without any detriment to the story, and I wish I had!
There was too much background information about every single person mentioned, most of it unnecessary. I didn’t need to know where they went to school, what churches they attended, who their neighbours were, or every employer they’d ever worked for.
There were too many insignificant details that added nothing to the story. I found myself skimming paragraph after paragraph.
While the story is well written, and obviously well researched, it’s too long. Way too long. It failed to hold my interest and I became bored. But, I bravely soldiered on until I got to the last 150 pages or so. Then, when we finally got to the last murders, which were related in minute detail, we then had to suffer through the post mortem…again in minute detail…of the crime, law enforcement’s actions, who saw what, who did what, who knew what, who said what…and on…and on…and on! I was ready to scream.
So, I abandoned the book and googled, wishing I’d had the good sense to do this sooner.
I came across an interesting article that has nothing to do with the murders themselves, and puts Tom Lynch, the boys’ father, in a very unfavourable light.
Article from the Star News:
“Two years after the explosion, Mr Lynch sued Mr Newsom and the estates of Mrs Lynch, her parents and grandmother. He said he should receive the money Mrs Lynch would have inherited from her family, because of her role in the murders and those of her sons.”
He had already received a share of the $400,000 estate of his ex-wife, Susan Lynch.
Whatever made him believe he was entitled to any money from the estates of his ex-wife’s parents, and her grandmother? Perhaps, if his sons were still alive, but not just to fill his, and his second wife’s, greedy pockets.
Any sympathy I had for Tom Lynch disappeared when I read this.