"Jubilee" is written in a way that made it hard for me to access the story because I was distracted by the word choices and sentence constructions.
For instance, when I read a sentence like this one:
"She pressed her ear against the cool, smooth metal and listened as he slid on a condom, then thrust into her."
I experience all kinds of distracting questions in my head, like: "What does it sound like when you 'listen' to someone slide a condom on?" and also: "Why is she 'listening' to him thrust into her, vs. some other verb?"
It's an example of the way word choice interrupted my fictional dream in this novel. It happened to me every few sentences. My attention to the literal meanings of language is higher than most readers, and some people will read the sentence above, and many others just like it, and not get what the heck my problem is.
I also wondered if my problem might be as small as a missing comma. I spent some time thinking that if the author had instead written:
"She pressed her ear against the cool, smooth metal and listened, as he slid on a condom, then thrust into her."
adding a comma after "listened."
So now the sentence tips, where she's listening to the "cool, smooth metal." This is actually plausible in context, because she's in a laundry room, and the "cool, smooth metal" that she's pressing her ear to is a clothes dryer. So then I wonder, is the dryer running? Is she listening to the dryer? ... which sends me back a few pages to see if there is any mention of the dryer running...but no, there is not...and then I realize if she's "listening" to the dryer, then it would be "warm, smooth metal" anyway, not "cool, smooth metal."
So there you go. If you are the kind of reader who can leap immediately to a plausible explanation of what the author meant to write, and ignore what's actually on the page, then you might enjoy this novel a good deal more than I did.