Is was like a discount version of New Species.
I'd been looking for something similar and thought this might be a decent read but it was pretty weak and just didn't make sense. There were also some grammar and spelling problems which is really irritating.
The story itself is confusing. There's this 'Tribe' that has a leader called Titus. You get the impression that it's secret and mysterious and that only the leader is ever seen. So I'm thinking ok - so they're just jumping right in with the genetically modified people. But then, there's an allusion to the Tribe being Native American, I guess Titus is meant to look Native American (Though his only description is that he's massive with dark hair and 'tanned skin . . .) and there's no mention of where this 'tribe' came from or why they're having this party - at one part it's a grand opening and another it's a conference. Well . . . which is it? I'm also not that clear on what the lodge is? Is it a hotel? Surely not - because, these guys are trying to remain out of the public eye . . . very confusing.
Then, it's revealed that a year ago these modified men were found somewhere off the coast of Italy, south of Rome. I'm not sure where the fuck this was meant to be, especially considering that Rome isn't even a coastal city. Has the Author ever looked at a map? Also, the Italian Government want the US to take the lead on this. Uhuh, sure they do. Why!? And how is Interpol not involved? Surely, if there was an international drug and human trafficking racket that was being investigated, someone would have given the organisation enabling international police cooperation a call? And how, after a year of having these guys, is there so few answers as to how they were made?
I also didn't get how Erica was fired from her last job as a Forensic Accountant. She seems to want to champion the little guy. Most small companies don't routinely have forensic accountants on staff, they're usually hired specifically to investigate fraud and other financial misrepresentation, not just to sit around and generally keep an eye on the books. If someone hired her to investigate someone 'skimming' then why didn't they listen to her when she tried to tell them someone was skimming? It's like a Dr suspecting someone has cancer, calling in a specialist and when the Oncologist says 'yeah, it's cancer' they original Dr fires the guy. See? Silly. Also silly how later we learn that the Horatius Group made it happen. Made what happen, exactly?
It was also pretty silly how she takes one look at the top sheet of a pile of paper and immediately knows someone is stealing from them. How? When she doesn't even know anything about their business or contracts? Also, how are they even meant to be able to run a business when a year ago they were locked away, only trained to fight? But after a year of 'help' they're off on their own? What sort of education or experience have these guys got to run their own business? At least in Laurann Dohners world, it was explained how much help New Species had in setting up their infrastructure . . .
It just didn't make sense. I get with PNR/Sci-Fi/Fantasy/UF you have to suspend your disbelief but this was just silly, the writing was also pretty weak and the dialogue stilted.
Waste of time!