This completes the first trilogy of the Yorkshire series. It starts not with the usual prologue but the murder in his home of Chris Fairchild a whiz financier, popular no known enemies – has only month to live from cancer anyway. Caslin is against his will promoted to Acting DCI. Jimmy a reporter friend-enemy of Caslin has a goddaughter Emily Coughlan who has disappeared, her body found tortures and brunt. The Fairchild case now brings in three high finance companies, an old excop friend of Caslin, Aiden Reece, turns up in one finance company in an ambiguous role, a German military secret agent turns up to murder and is murdered, then enter the IRA, plus the usual in Daldleish: a smooth talking extremely evil man, but here there are two, one a with name the other without. I think: hard to tell. The plot then gets out of control, who is on what side and why – ending with the mandatory fight to the death. I thought from the beginning this was story going to be an improvement but it’s much the same as the others.
Of the four I’ve read, The Dead Call set in Norfolk is the best. The other three in the York series with Caslin are too formulaic: the satanically clever evil villain, over detailed descriptions yet strangely the meaning is sometimes opaque as to what is going on and how we got there. A lot of deus ex machina to resolve the plots – there is usually more than one plot and they are at times loosely connected. Some page turning stuff – he likes giving detailed description of fights and gory scenes. He writes 4 novels a year and it shows in poor editing, repetitive phrases, “processing the information” (corny psychologese), Caslin bitterly cold but his hands sweating with fear, he constantly washes his face in cold water (how many times?), stereotypic fighting scenes. We think the story’s done, but no, another fight to the death. He writes writer-based stuff not reader-based – that is, he writes as a self-indulgence not from the reader’s perspective. I know that raises difficulties: some of the best writers write because they want to express themselves but there is a fine line between that and writing as a form of a self-gratification. Yet, he has a large following with 4-5 starts common so I guess he is simply not my style..