They say opening paragraphs are important to hook the reader. The author certainly nails it here. The whole first chapter is only a few lines, and by the end of it you know that the main protagonist, Ray, has been executed by lethal injection… and then wakes up. Don’t worry, I’m not getting into spoiler territory here, we’re told this in the book’s blurb.
The premise is unlike anything I’ve read before. Ray will no long been treated as a human, but rather as a dog. Caged, trained, expected to be obedient — and punished in various painful ways if he isn’t. Around his neck is now a metal collar carrying his new name, “Kaiser.”
His ‘owner’ is a super-rich German, Stephan, who has no problem introducing his pet to his daughter Amelia, despite the fact that she’s clearly pre-teen, and Kaiser is completely naked. There’s nothing sexual about this, but it’s an example of the strange behavior we’re going to see plenty more of.
What unfolds is a well-written story of the captive’s increasingly desperate attempts to escape and, as each one fails, a descent towards madness. Ray is not the most likable guy (let’s not forget he’s been executed for murder) but he is cunning and resourceful. The insanity of his owner, and the untouchability of the hyper-wealthy, comes across well. The other characters — in particular two servants — are authentic and believable. Perhaps a little stereotypical, but certainly not just caricatures.
At times, where the author delves into Ray’s state of mind and the inhumanities force upon him, I was concerned that we might get sidetracked. It doesn’t happen. While the exploration is good for the development of the story, it’s never dull or meandering. The narrative pulls you along. It’s sometimes explosive, sometimes dark and brooding. Stephan’s increasing dehumanization keeps the pressure on.
That there will eventually be retribution you can probably guess — but it’s unlikely you’ll guess how it unfolds. Like the rest of the story, it’s well handled. There are twists and surprises to keep you intrigued almost right to the end.
Why ‘almost’? Well here’s where I have a slight problem with the book. It’s not much, but it did temper my enjoyment a little. We reach what I think will be the end, but it isn’t. There’s a final end — if you’ll excuse that cumbersome description.
In the first ending (?), while things don’t exactly turn out great, they could have been worse. It’s a bleak outcome, but I think it serves the story well. I’d have been happy if it stopped right there. Unfortunately (in my humble) it doesn’t, and we then have a soft and gentle, fluffy clouds finale where everything works out kind of all right after all… ish (you’ll have to bear with me there, any more would risk giving it away).
For me, it just took the edge off. So it gets a 3.5 rather than a 4. I would still recommend it — it’s well-paced, entertaining read — and I would look forward to the next book from Asher Ellis.