Playing With Her Priests

Playing with Them #3

by S.E. Law

A MFM Menage Romance

My growly, alpha AF pastors broke the ultimate vow in order to be with me.

When Pastors Jordan and Jason stepped up to the pulpit, the breath caught in my throat. These were the new pastors at the Village Church? The men had perfect lips, tattoos swirling up their forearms, and cocky, knowing smiles that made my heart race. In fact, all the female congregants let out a collective sigh when Pastors Jason and Jordan got up to preach.

But Jason and Jordan are no average men of the cloth. The two handsome priests are godliness personified, yet with a taste for sin.

Because I’ve taken a Promise Vow. It’s a vow to keep myself sacred and pure for the touch of my future husband …

… but these gorgeous men are temptation personified.

Not only will they show me the Garden of Eden but they’ll put the apple in my mouth by doubling down every time we’re together. Jason and Jordan were taught in divinity school to be shepherds to their flock …

… but what happens when shepherds lose their way?

Reader beware: This book is *wildly inaccurate* and does not seek to represent the teachings of any particular church or denomination. But if you’ve ever dreamed about a hot preacher while drifting off into fantasy, then you’ll definitely adore Pastors Jason and Jordan. Let yourself engage in some hedonism for a fun-loving romp that breaks all the rules: real and make-believe.

As always, my books have a HEA with no cheating and no cliffhangers. This story is all about HER and no swords cross.

Genres: Romance, Menage, M F M, Contemporary

234 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 26, 2019

About the author

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Reviews

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[MrsJoseph *grouchy* · Rating 1 out of 5]

Man! This was a DNF.

I thought this was gonna be some sexy taboo romance...

...instead it was kinda weird and distasteful so I DNF'd.

It starts with the heroine hiding in her church after being [adult] bullied for no fucking reason. Strike 1. Then 1 male MC shows up to console her - but somehow it quickly ends with him performing anal on her because she's taken a virginity vow (rolls eyes).

THEN the very next time she goes to church BOTH priests find the time to get some anal. Back to back... So. We have a basically untouched virgin getting tag-team fucked in her [virgin] ass by two priests. *coughs and rolls eyes*

This is when I tossed in the towel.

[Mel · Rating 2 out of 5]

They're not priests. They have no Vow of celibacy idk bout you but when I reader a sexy priest story I want that angst from him trying not to break his vows. This is just a regular menage story without that plot device. Also she's a virgin and they dp her vaginally for her first time with their 10 inch cocks.

I mean, I can suspend my disbelief OK, I can even get behind monster cocks but a virgin taking two dicks for the first time? Yeah, that's a no from me, dawg

/r/BadWomensAnatomy could have a field day with their take on the hymen: they conflate virginity with an intact hymen. Yeah, no... Also You can't finger fuck someone with 2 fingers then say that her hymen is still intact

[Jessica Mitchell · Rating 5 out of 5]

Playing with her two Priests
A quick read of lusty romance and two handosome and well endowed men Priestly men. Who weren't looking for a sweet curvy girl until she walked into their parish with some problems. So curl up in your bed or on your couch and get ready to read a good quicky of a book.

[Linda ( Clary_Starfall ) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Jordan & Jason, Mira.

Notes 📝
Love is Love, chemistry, surprise, virgin, first time, drama, predictable, priests.

I liked reading this book, it’s an bit predictable but funny, and the bantering between the guys.

4 star ⭐️ read

[Kaye · Rating 5 out of 5]

ONE THRILLING EXPERIENCE!!!
Double dipping! Law totally blew this baby out of the water with it's sizzling storyline and raging plot. One unbelievable spin that brings a whole new meaning to the phrase "too hot to handle". She tosses out steamy, smoldering, dark and dreamy with all the action, drama and intrigue that blasts this baby to life spectacularly. The chemistry is intense, high octane and combustible that's so electrifying you can feel the hum running through your viens. Jaw dropping, mind blowing and off the wall as a vortex of swirling emotions melds this baby together with the force of an erupting volcano. The characters personalities are well matched and flow smoothly. Authentic, genuine and realistic with such depth and qualities that makes for one explosive connection. The scenes are so colorfully descriptive you have no trouble interrupting each scenario as they play off one another in perfect sync. Amazing job Law, thanks for sharing this baby with us.

[Maria · Rating 4 out of 5]

I don't know quite what to say about this book. You've got two best friends, hot pastors that hook up with an 18 year old virgin and they become a happy threesome. Without a doubt, this has to be a fantasy that sparks our imagination. What I do appreciate in this book is that S.E. Law shows that love between consenting adults (although 18 years old and "untouched" might be pushing it a little), should be acceptable and not judged. These two men, Jordan and Jason, have started a new kind of church in New York. One where all are welcome. Mira is one of the parishioners and seeks comfort in the church one day after being bullied for not conforming to what some think is how she should look. Pastor Jordan comes into the church while Mira is praying for comfort and he decides to comfort her in a different way. He has sexual relations with her without her having to break her Promise Vow. This reader has to believe he might have been taking advantage of the situation for his own reasons. But as the story continues, we find out that he and his fellow pastor have been involved in other threesomes, but never were they both sure that "this could be the one" to complete their lives. The story continues as they both experience Mira and become a permanent relationship. How are the other parishioners going to react to their pastors and Mira being together? Will this tear the parish apart? And how will the consequences of them being together eventually effect their relationship? It's an interesting story and one I will suggest you read, but definitely have an open mind about what these three characters experience.

[Maria · Rating 4 out of 5]

Tsk, tsk, tsk.
This is my first read by S.E. Law. It was a surprising read, and yes an enjoyable read. A love triangle of 2 Pastors - Pastor Jason, Pastor Jordan and the innocence of Miranda. A promise vow set by Miranda to withhold her innocence till marriage. But wait..... what innocence. This read is sexually revolved around anal play, so do be aware. All this has been described by the author, so, if you are not willing to read with an open mind, do pass.
There is more than just sexual play here. Lives are intertwined, decisions/respect a new look into church congregations etc. A new look into the modern Pastors of the church.
A side note, personally, Miranda was/is described as overweight. Yet, the cover has her as a voluptuous woman, though sad, it took me a while to settle on what Miranda looked like. She is described within the storyline as having a voluptuous body, not a fat body as portrayed at times. For me, Miranda being voluptuous made the storyline and yes the sexual side of her much more appealing. Again, a moot point but needed to be put there as there are other stories that portray some women as being overly large.
Be open minded if you are willing to read about Pastors/Churches-Congregations and sexual scenes.
Enjoy

[hottie men · Rating 4 out of 5]

Playing with Her Priests is the story of Mira, Jason, and Jordan.

So she goes to the church because some girls called her on her weight and then she meets Jordan and then it turns into full back door sex. Then she goes and he can’t stop thinking about her and he tells Jason and then when Jason sees her the next day they both including Jordan do back door as well. Then it gets out of hand due to it being against the Lord to have premarital sex so they just do back door then they drastically get married and then she leaves cuz she ruined their lives but she didn’t. Then she finds out she’s pregnant with June and Jill. Yh so HEA including her being preggers.

Solid 4/5

[Christine Rodriguez · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love is Love


This story is more than just a "Menage Romance". It's a romance about embracing love in all forms; even with two partners. It also reflects how accepting/unaccepting society can be.

Aside from that, the characters and storyline were compelling. I really enjoyed this book.

[Ninive Dominguez · Rating 4 out of 5]

Forbidden love!

First time I read a book from this writer and I was impressed. I love how love is love in this story of a forbidden romance between 2 pastors and their perichener. The book was well written and I couldn't put it down.

[P · Rating 2 out of 5]

I like the message...

**Playing with her Priests by S.E. Law: I like the message
The message is acceptance - and we sooo need inclusion and acceptance. Especially in these times. But. There is too much internalization and the story wasn’t well executed..

[Boo · Rating 4 out of 5]

Interesting

This was a very interesting book. I liked it. Was very fast paced and hot. Love the characters and the writing was good.

[Melissa Spansel · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow!

This book was so much more than I expected. It really touched on how love is love, no matter what.

[Judy Trahan · Rating 5 out of 5]

Very good read

[Kimme · Rating 4 out of 5]

Playing

Kind of sappy for my taste. The characters are compatible. The story is alright. The secondary characters are basically unimportant. The hot parts were hot.

[Haley · Rating 4 out of 5]

perfect short read to get you out of a slump, full of spicy scenes.

"Love is love."

[B. · Rating 4 out of 5]

Pastors Jordan and Jason Heat Up The Pages As They Seduce Young Curvy Mira!

Note: Despite what the title implies, Jordan and Jason are NOT Catholic priests. They are Christian Pastors, and as such, have not taken vows of celibacy. They are strong advocates of acceptance.

Miranda Corcoran, eighteen, is a chubby, curvy college freshman on a scholarship at the New School in NYC, and considering majoring in Art History. She is away from her small hometown in Kentucky for the first time. She had been bullied for her weight while growing up, but expected it to stop once she entered college. However, she now finds herself being harassed for both her weight and overeating. Praying helps her get through the day. Crying one afternoon, she decides to go to her safe place. The Village Church.

Although she was raised Southern Baptist, she visited many and various churches that turned out to be just okay after arriving in NYC. She didn't connect with any until she found the non-denominational Village Church. It felt like home. She loves the mix of people, but the big draw is the pastors: Pastor Jordan and Pastor Jason. They're young and very open and accepting of everyone. They happen to look like movie stars. Both are six feet three, with back hair, blue eyes, and muscles. The ladies love them.

Jordan MacKinnon and his best friend Jason Vanderbilt, in their late-twenties, co-founded their church together right out of seminary four years ago. They wanted to start a new grassroots congregation because they didn't feel comfortable conforming with any of the traditional denominations.

Jordan and Jason had attended undergrad together and went on to seminary in NYC. They shared a professor in school. It wasn't serious, but they learned it worked for them. Since then they've shared women on occasion, but it has only ever been casual. They keep it hidden from their congregation, yet they don't feel weird about it because they preach acceptance, without question.

When Pastor Jordan sees Mira alone and crying in the nave one afternoon, he is struck with how beautiful she is.
Jordan asks if she would like to talk, then takes her to his office so she can speak privately. He is overcome when she shares her insecurities, and when she gives him permission to kiss her, he is instantly a goner. He later goes to his friend Jason for counsel, who says it is bad but could be worse. Jason suggests they speak with her.

Things only get more heated when Jason speaks with Jordan and Mira! These alphas are super intense. Jordan and Jason find Mira rare: curvy, beautiful and vulnerable - and she loves church. She is a woman that could share a future with them. Mira might be their calling.

The alphas are totally out of control, but Mira is a surprisingly strong female. Society in general is against them, and the threesome faces numerous obstacles if they want to come out of hiding. Eventually the threesome earns their HEA!

This threesome works because the men have a history of sharing when they meet Mira. There is no jealousy or uncertainty; they are very comfortable with the arrangement, and feel more capable of making her happy together, rather than separately. This allows them to conduct their busy lives with less stress. Mira feels twice the love. With her history of harassment, it does wonders for her self esteem.

Despite the outlandish title, the story is more serious in tone, the immediate attraction and wild scenes aside. See the author's note, which has been copied below. The story tackles bullying and polyamourous relationships - both tough subjects - but in a somewhat light-hearted way. It does a good job of explaining the characters, although Jason's character development is weakest. There are occasional errors, including a few times in which Jason's and Jordan's names are mixed up. I rate this book 3.5 stars (4 stars if the title were "Playing With Her Pastors").

I received a free advance copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.


From the author: "Reader beware: This book is "wildly inaccurate" and does not seek to represent the teachings of any particular church or denomination. But if you've ever dreamed about a hot preacher and wondered what it might be like, then you'll definitely adore Pastors Jason and Jordan. Let yourself engage in some hedonism for a fun-loving romp that breaks all the rules: real and make-believe.

[Marla · Rating 4 out of 5]

I was really waffling between 3 or 4 stars and would have given it 3.5, if such an option was available. I enjoyed the writing of this author. I have read a couple of earlier books, and the flow of words has improved tremendously. Some issues that had me deducting 1+ stars were:

1)There were about a half dozen places the wrong name was used, mostly for the 2 pastors (the H's of this story). Their names are Jordan and Jason. Why use names so similar? It actually caused me a little confusion while reading and sometimes I'd have to go back to the beginning of a scene to verify which one was talking. In one other scene when Mira (the h) was talking with her roommate Jessie, their names were switched. There also a few of typos. I received an advanced copy and was warned there would be some errors. None of these were enough to take me out of the story.

2)The 2 H's were a bit interchangeable. Their names are Jordan and Jason. They were given the EXACT same physical description (black hair, blue eyes, tall, muscular). Why do that? This made me wish their individual personalities had been fleshed out a little more. As it stands, they are almost the same character. We're told they're different, but never shown.

3)At the very beginning the h states (in her mind) that she'd never kissed anyone, but a little bit later it says she has little sexual experience. Huh? This is probably me nitpicking, but never-been-kissed means she has NO sexual experience.

4)I know this is a BBW book, but the word curvy was completely overused. I found it a little hypocritical (ironic?) that in a book where the h wanted to be recognized for something besides her physical appearance, her body type was mentioned again and again and again. Also, I get that the h is plus-sized and the "mean girl" is thin. But it seemed as if EVERY female character who was thin, smaller, or even just average-sized was hateful, petty, evil, close-minded, etc. You get the picture. Where's all the inclusion and non-judgment the book is trying to reflect?

5)Lastly, and this is just me nitpicking again, but priest and pastor are not synonymous.

As to the story, yes, you will have to suspend belief that an 18 year old college student with zero sexual experience and not just one, but TWO men of God will immediately jump into a sexual relationship with very few qualms. However, the sex scenes are super steamy and one of the main reasons I read this genre. I would definitely read this author (and even this story) again.

H(s): Jordan and Jason. 2 pastors of a non-denominational progressive church called Village Church. Late twenties.
h: Mira. Freshman at a university called New School. Member of said pastors' church.
Villain: Cindy. Fellow student at university. Blond, blue-eyed, thin Barbie-type (of course).
Roommate: Jessie. Fellow student, congregation member, and plus-sized person.
Cheating: None
Heat Factor: 8 out of 10
MFM: No male interaction besides parts touching
POV: First person limited to the 3 main characters

I received an ARC copy for my honest review.

[Donna Feibusch · Rating 5 out of 5]

An Awesome Read!!!

I really enjoyed reading playing With Her. priests: A MFM Menage Romance(Playing With Them Book 3). All about Mia who is eighteen years old a freshman in college & Jason Vanderbilt a pastor at The Village Community Church and Jordan McKinnon the co-pastor. Mia went to the church seeking peace & quite while she contemplated why she was always big picked on for her size! Pastor Jordan finds her balling her eyes out and invites her to his office. While soothing her he preserves her promise vow, giving her pleasure thru the back door. Both are stunned and leave quickly. Jordan confesses to Jason and he sets up. A meeting before Sunday’s mass to confront Mia. She comes and sits down with both priests. The author wrote a story about a young women who has had to deal with mean people her whole life because of her size. Read about Mia & the co-Pastors and see how they negotiate life as a triade and if they can over-come adversity!!! It was an awesome story and kept your attention from page one to to the last page!! If you enjoy reading different stories give this a try!!!

[jayne hay · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love is for everyone

When two priests meet the woman off their love they just had to share her no matter what anyone though

[Linda Reads · Rating 4 out of 5]

Steamy taboo romance between 18yo innocent girl and 2 older men who are her pastors. What?!
Mira has just started college in NYC not being quite sure of the direction to go but excited to be on her own since leaving home in Kentucky. Besides school her other quest was to find a church where she felt comfortable. She found the Village Church where her new BFF, Jessie and she attend. The pastors are two youngish men, late 20’s or early 30’s and very charismatic. All the young girls in this congregation drool over these hunky 6’3” blue-eyed, black-haired Adonis-like men. They are not like any ministers that I have known. Maybe that’s a goodish thing???
Do NOT be confused, this is not a religious story but rather what might happen in a “new religion” church with a no-holds-barred, love-one-another philosophy. Jason and Jordan had been content to go on having anonymous one-night-stands until they meet Mira. After she’s had a heartbreaking event with one of the “mean girls” at her new college she goes to the Village Church to pray and meets Pastor Jordan. Whoa! What a scene…too hot and raunchy to tell here, that’s for sure. Besides the naughtiness, there are poignant moments, like Jordan’s little story about his grandma’s ring. Sweet moments, like when we realize Jordan and Jason are as nervous about proposing a relationship as Mira is.
I really enjoyed this story. Just the right amount of sexiness to story development. I volunteered to review an ARC of this book and I recommend it to readers who like steam with the sweet…

[Raecharmed · Rating 5 out of 5]

Mira is a Kentucky girl just starting her first year at college in New York. When she and her room mate look for a church to attend they find their place at a church called Village Church. Pastor Jason and Pastor Jordan run the church and its open to anyone of any religious background or sexual preference. One day when some mean girls at school bully Mira about her weight and what she's eating she ends up at the church. Pastor Jordan finds her and they go to his office to talk. Pastor Jordan tried to be professional but his attraction to Mira came out as she was talking down on herself. Things end up heating up between them and they use a loop hole around her Promise Vow to be together. Afterwards Pastor Jordan turns to Pastor Jason for guidance because he has feelings for Mira but he doesn't want to think he took advantage of her. Pastor Jason sets up a meeting between the three of them and soon sees why Jordan couldn't keep control of himself. Will they be able to be together in the triad that they want? What will happen within their church when the news comes out?

This is a great story once I started I couldn't put it down. The chemistry between them is blazing hot. This is a well written and very entertaining story. I would recommend this to any book lover.

This is not a book about religion in a regular sense of the world . Its what it could be in a more open world.

I voluntarily read and reviewed this book.

[Jennifer · Rating 5 out of 5]

First and foremost, I would personally like to thank S.E. Law for quite honestly recognizing that love is love. While love takes many forms; you are fortunate to have found it, none the less. While many people offer their own opinions, you have to remember that you didn't ask for them, nor do they define you.

Miranda, aka Mira, has come to NYC to attend college. As she came from a small town in Kentucky and is very Faith oriented, Mira took the time to discover a place of worship for herself and finally settled on the Village Church. Jordan and Jason spent years becoming ordained and through their immense efforts, created a Church where many of their flock feel at home. Seeing a weeping young woman, who is enduring so much pain, Jordan approaches Mira and this storyline takes off running. I do not like to give away any part of the plot so that I do not ruin it for reader's, however, I will say that I enjoyed everything about this publication. I am well aware that others might find this to be a touchy subject, but it is Fictional and extremely well crafted. Kuddos to S.E. for being brave.

I was beyond fortunate to have requested an advanced reader's copy of Playing With Her Priest's in exchange for my honest and voluntarily given opinion. I truly do recommend reading this book as well as anything written by S.E.

Simply Brilliant.

[Jen · Rating 5 out of 5]

The new pastors at the Village Church are not what one was expecting. Is this good? Is this bad? After all it is not fair to judge on appearance, right? Mira notices everything when she first sees the new pastors Jordan and Jason and really so does the rest of the female population in the congregation. Mira has planned and remained a virgin as she believes that her husband's right, she has yet to find a husband currently but she still keeps that promise to herself. Jordan and Jason have her challenging that promise. As things heat up between the three of them, the challenges they have to face also arise. Can they move forward in a relationship with all of them together or will outside pressures tear them all apart? A great story that is hot and sexy but also takes on some realistic challenges. Enjoy!
I received this book for free and I am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Lena · Rating 3 out of 5]

I've read several books by S.E. Law, all of them great. But this one was hard to me to finish coming from Christian background so I docked it a star. If the premise of the book was not about them being pastors/priests, I would have definitely rated it higher. If my pastors/priests start sleeping with an 18 year old or any member of the congregation, I'd have a problem with that as well, not to mention some of the other things that went on. And sadly, there are some churches out there just like this. But I had to keep telling myself it is not your church and just a work of fiction to keep reading. With that being said, it did like the book. The characters were well developed and likeable. Their chemistry was awesome and happy endings are always great.

[Dana Busenbark · Rating 5 out of 5]

This menage story was a very interesting read for me. Jason, Jordan, and Miranda were a treat to read about both individually and together. Miranda is just a small town girl from Kentucky. She was raised Southern Baptist. Jordan and Jason were raised in different religions as well with one Methodist and the other Baptist. What is "The VIllage" church like? Why was it built? What is the premise behind it? What do we learn about Miranda when she goes back to Kentucky? What does her Aunt Angie talk with her about? You should read this touching story about acceptance.


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[Sherry Westendorf · Rating 5 out of 5]

What a story. Makes you think about your values, morals and what a person would do if they were in her place. They seemed to genuinely love her. I thought at first these two priests were playing with her. But they seemed to really see her hurt and what she needed. They looked past the body and saw what was really important inside. I have seen these types of Churches out there and this author voiced a lot of the questions I have had. I thought it was well thought out and written. You have to be careful putting a story like this together and I thought the author did a wonderful job. I received a review copy and voluntarily review it.

[Diane · Rating 4 out of 5]

Mira is a girl from a small town down south. She's going to college in NYC and she found a church she likes and the two priests are hot and young. Jordan and Jason started their own church to include everybody. Mira had a bad day and went to the church to pray. Jordan sees her crying and invites her back to talk. It goes further than talking. Then Jason and Jordan invite her to talk and again it foes further. They like her and she likes "them". How far will this all go? Loved the story and ending.

[Karen · Rating 5 out of 5]

I found the plot of this book is quite entertaining and funny.
With out giving to much of the plot away the story is about
Mira and two priest.
Mira was having bad day at college with being bullied so she
went to the only place she felt completely comfortable in at that was
a church but not your typical one.
While there she was overheard crying by one of the priests and this is where the story really
starts.
Be warned there’s plenty of hot action in the plot.
I voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book.