3rd Reading:
There is something flat about this book compared to the most of the rest of the series. This would be in my bottom 3 books. I would rate things as Skysworn as worst, Unsouled as the next book at the bottom and this would be 3rd from the botton in my opinion. It still really bugs me that the tournament was broken up and not one book and I don't feel that worked well.
There are many interesting happenings in this book, but overall, it's simply flat. I didn't like the way it started. I'm a little tired of Lindon always having to be the outsider. Even Mercy is gone so it's Lindon against the world here. They need to be a team and you would that eventually, there would be a little bonding. Lindon could at least win over a few people. I still have a hard time believing that Pride would be able to strain Lindon's madra chennel's so much. Come on. Then how could he beat them so soundly later. It's too convenient.
I do like that LIndon was able to learn so much from the Akura about combat and the fundamentals. The tournament is fun and all.
The abidan storyline is beginning to merge more and more with our story and you can see how those 2 threads will converge here soon. It's been set up since book 4, or even 1, really.
Well, since the tournament is still ongoing and we are only in the middle of it, I'm going on with book 8 to finish up this story.
2nd reading:
I did my re-read of this book and I still can't understand why Will didn't make the entire tournament 1 book. It would have been an 800 page book and that would be okay. It is a great start to the events and its easy to get hooked on the story.
No one levels up in this story. I do enjoy the first parts of the arc and the ending is amazing, but the good stuff happens in the next volume, which is one of the best books in the series.
Previously,
I call fowl. Will set up a series of events and instead of finishing that series, he ended in the middle of it to keep the book at 300ish pages. He could have let this be a 500+ page book and that would be okay.
SPoilers:
The Uncrowned Tournament is going on and we get halfway through the tournament, or a little more and just as the 4th round is starting, Will ends the book. It is so cruel.
To me, this felt a lot like Skysworn. I love this series, but both of these books are a bit of a let down. I do love the characters in this story, but there isn't enough character development in each book. We are introduced to new people and it's skimmed over their relationship.
In this story we meet Fury Akura, a Herald. He is a character and I liked him in the beginning of the story, but then Lindon asks Fury to help him choose a prize weapon and Will doesn't show us this. Why? That would have been wonderful. We didn't get any characters from the Ninecloud Court to get to know and learn about their culture. So many opportunities are missed to keep the pacing fast and always moving, but it's really beginning to hurt the story and the world building. The pace is too fast for me. I need more real moments.
We don't get enough Eithan in this story. We see the rest of the Arelius clan at the tournament and we find out that their Monarch was killed leaving the clan weak, but there are so many questions left unanswered.
I loved the first part of the story with Lindon training at the Akura compound. That could have been the whole book and that would have been a better ending spot. He can expound on information happening.
The beginning did pick up in Sacred Valley with Orthos, which I'm so happy about. We realize that Orthos is losing power. He's going from Truegold to Jade since he's been there. We also realize why Yerin Sage master was killed, because he lost his power level. Otherwise Jade could never have killed him. Somehow, something in Sacred Valley reduces people's powers in the Valley. It's a curse. I want to know more.
We also see there is a heavenly war among the Abideon and now they are recruiting more members from cradle, from the tournament.
I enjoyed the beginning of this story very much, but the ending tournament was weak I felt and the ending was false. It was not the climax of the story. He just ended it because he hit is page limits. I'm annoyed I have to wait.
Plus, I don't like it when the people don't level up. It's not as much fun. This book and Skysworn, Lindon does not level up, well, the first one too, but that's different. I think Yerin will be the 1st person to hit Overlord.
I still love the series and now I have to wait like everyone else for the next book. I would love for Will to publish two this year like 2019. I am hungry for more.