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32 pages, Hardcover
First published January 1, 2022
If you’re like me, you’re dumbfounded that no one has thought to write this book before. I mean, a children’s book about Pride? Brava Ms. McClintick, for jumping on that idea.
'the Night Before Pride has good and bad things about it.
What I liked:
History. In a very succinct and age-appropriate way, McClintick explains the history of how Pride began as an equal rights movement that began at the Stonewall Inn in New York City. And she does it in rhyme! This is something I would never have thought was possible.
Drag queens. If there had been no mention of drag queens in a book about Pride, I would have given this zero stars. They’re not front-and-centre, but they do arrive early (which, if you know drag queens, is almost unheard of).
Representation. Aside from drag queens, McClintick gives air time to families with two moms, bikers, and the numerous genders. That said…
Here’s what I didn’t like:
Lack of representation. No two dad families, no poly relationships, no trans folk, no bears, no PFLAG, no bisexuals. While I acknowledge that it must be difficult to include a fluent narrative, a history of Pride, and represent all factions of the LGBTQIA+ rainbow in a child-appropriate manner, I insist that a book about Pride should represent as much diversity as it can. That said, it should be noted that I am reviewing the audiobook, so I’m hopeful that the published copy includes more diverse representation in picture form.
The poetry meter is sometimes flawed. It’s annoying when a line in a poem could be reworded to make the beat count work. The perfectionist in me wants to edit this to fix it, which begs the question, who edited this? Because it wasn’t me. That said, I AM reviewing an advanced copy, so maybe some of those issues are being ironed out as I type this.
The narration of the audiobook. Skip the audio version. Why they didn’t get a kid to do it is beyond me.
Two lines in particular bothered me:“My mom told us all we should go to bed early. She’s that kind of mom who’s more boyish than girly. ” If there were words I did not expect to cross during this story, two were definitely “boyish” and “girly.” The second irksom line was “It sometimes happens we’re not given respect; It can take a long time for some to accept. ” It’s just too passive for me, as if to say, “Hey, not everyone accepts us, it’s just taking them longer #whatever shrugging-emoji. Um, no queen.
All in all, this is a book that I maintain should have existed years ago. It’s got some minor flaws, but in lesser hands it could have been a hot mess.