I have to be honest, I was expecting a lot more from this book, including more finesse around the writing itself. For me this was a quick easy read, easy to digest over a few hours but did not stand out as anything spectacular really.
What's it all about?
It was crazy really, she had never met the woman, had no idea of her real name but she thought of her as a friend. Or, at least, the closest thing she had to a friend in Dublin.
Struggling with a new baby, Yvonne turns to netmammy, an online forum for mothers, for support. Drawn into a world of new friends, she spends increasing amounts of time online and volunteers more and more information about herself.
When one of her new friends goes offline, Yvonne thinks something is wrong, but dismisses her fears. After all, does she really know this woman?
But when the body of a young woman with striking similarities to Yvonne's missing friend is found, Yvonne realises that they're all in terrifying danger. Can she persuade Sergeant Claire Boyle, herself about to go on maternity leave, to take her fears seriously?
My Review:
The book focuses on an online forum of mums that are connecting on a website called "NetMammy", so the book certainly plugs into current online trends in the way people communicate with each other. Some of the book is written as if you are privy to reading the actual online commentary between the mums, including their online names. At first I thought this was a quirky aspect to the book, after a bit of it I got quite bored and found it was getting to be overdone a touch.
Claire Boyle is a copper, she is also pregnant herself and gets involved in the investigation of a young women uncovered in an unused apartment in Dublin, she's a young mum (the victim) and it's a horrendously sad crime. Claire features then throughout the rest of the novel.
It's very hard to write a review of this book without giving too many spoilers, but the entire book essentially uses the web forum as a central point of theme, all other stories spin out around it. I found it at times a bit unrealistic and was also very frustrated with poor editing throughout the released Kindle version of this book, some of it was really blatantly bad. Could do with a re-edit.
Then there are paragraphs and sentences that just had me having to re-read them, for example:
There were three other customers in the place: a young high-viz-jacketed worker with razor-sharp Eastern European cheekbones, who was busily dissecting an all-day breakfast.
Ahem? You can tell the nationality of someone by their cheekbones? In a cafe, in a moment? Exceptional, and the use-of-the-hyphen-is-maybe-a-touch-over-the-top?
This took away at times from enjoying the plot of the book as I went over some paragraphs over and over again to check what I was reading. There are errors that are obvious too. In this same scene in the book two Danish Pastries are bought to eat, but over the page, the character is biting into "her cake", then it's back to a Danish again. Just a bit sloppy and obvious.
HOWEVER It's not all bad, it picks up pace as it goes along as more events happen, more crime, more questions. Whilst it's not the best thriller I have read ever, it's not the worst either and I did really like the twist at the end regarding the character of Yvonne that I did not see coming one bit. Huge spoiler that one, but you can read and find out for yourselves.
It's a three star read for me, mediocre, but readable.