I read Karen Kingsbury’s Truly, Madly, Deeply, which I thought was poorly written, but it mentioned Maddie and Dawson’s story, and I wanted to see how Kingsbury treated the subject of embryo adoption.
Someone Like You tells of Maddie, whose parents, Peter and Brooke, had her through an embryo adoption. She’s graduating college, and they’ve kept this information from her because, well, life got in the way. Yes, life happens, but how can you keep this from your child? And they lied to her, making her think she’s their biological daughter. But that Brooke didn’t believe in God or prayer back then seems like an acceptable excuse not to tell anyone the truth. I don’t care if you’re atheist, Christian, Muslim. Tell your adopted child about his/her roots from day one.
The other plot line involves London, who’s mother had a difficult first pregnancy, so she donated her other embryos. London’s boyfriend, Dawson, is a believer, and she occasionally mocks him for his faith. London is hit by a truck, and her parents want to tell her in the hospital that she has a sibling, but she suddenly tells them she knows this and has a death bed conversion, which I know can happen, but London suddenly knowing about Maddie was unconvincing. Kingsbury tends to make important things suddenly happen in her book to drive the plot instead of fleshing out the situation to make it believable. The descriptions of London’s accident and injuries were unrealistic, and the writing was amateur.
Dawson learns of Maddie’s existence and goes out to find her in Indiana. For some reason, her new job at the zoo was newsworthy enough to have an article written about it, which is how Dawson tracks her down. He tells her about her adoption. Maddie confronts her parents and travels to Oregon to meet her birthparents with Dawson’s help. I thought her anger toward her parents was the most well-written dramatic scene in the whole book. Maddie doesn’t know Dawson from Adam, but it’s okay to trust him.
As the story goes on, Maddie and Dawson develop a quick friendship. Dawson constantly compares and contrasts her to London, which is shallow. And Maddie’s doubt about her fiancé, Connor, is growing stronger. The way Connor spoke to Maddie was emotionally abusive sometimes. Earlier in the book, he doesn’t think her adoption is a big deal. This upsets her, and she wants to leave, but Connor says she can’t, because he’s her ride. (Take an Uber.) And when Maddie calls him from Oregon, their conversation is strained, and he demands she call him earlier next time. Maddie’s dealing with discovering her real identity and meeting her birthparents, and this is how he treats her. Maddie never brings these incidents up, but they could have been used for a reason why she breaks off their engagement.
Maddie is somehow allowed to take a bulk of time off from her new job to stay with her birthparents for a while, and she and Dawson quickly fall in love. They don’t want to have a long distance relationship, and Maddie returns to Indiana.
I won’t reveal the ending, but this book was a sloppy story with Bible verses and preaching woven in. I once heard that Christian fiction is supposed to tell a story of how having faith in God transforms and changes characters’ lives throughout the plot, and sadly, Kingsbury doesn’t seem to know how to do this. I understand this is a light read, but too much happened too quickly. Kingsbury also writes…like this…and puts ellipses where it doesn’t…make sense. Or like this. Chopping up sentences. In random places. It’s a distraction, and I don’t know why her publisher thinks this is quality writing.
And a final note about the author’s letter to the reader: she describes the inspiration for Someone Like You, and states that implantation is quick, often painless, and cheaper than other forms of adoption. I’m a transnational adoptee, and her word choice makes children sound like objects for sale. I don’t usually write reviews, but as an adoptee and a Christian, this book troubled me, and I don’t plan on reading anything else by this author.