Yeah, so this one didn't do it for me.
WHAT HAPPENED TO THE ARCHITECT AND THE CONSPIRACY? ARE THEY REALLY IDLY SITTING ON THEIR ASSES?
I love Nalini Singh, I love the Psy-Changeling series, and when I have nothing better to read, I usually go back to either Mercy's book, or Heart of Obsidian.
But, it feels like after Heart of Obsidian, the stories are just... repetitive. I know, I know, it's romance, primarily, and the formula has been done over and over again, but Nalini seemed to have had something original about her own interpretation of romance, but it seems that after 18 books, even her own interpretation has become a cliche.
I was so looking forward to going back to the DarkRiver/SnowDancer world, except... it felt as if we visited it in passing. When this happened with Sahara in Heart of Obsidian, I was happy with the small glimpses we had from the packs, but here, it felt like some characters were over-utilized, while other characters were completely ignored.
For example, I was very curious to see how Zaira and Memory would interact, yet Zaira seemed to be forgotten. I thought Sascha was used way too much, when Ivy Jane should have taken just as big of a role. Jaya's inclusion was nice, and I liked Yuri too.
I felt like Pax Marshall was wasted as a villain, even if he was being possessed by the DarkMind (I assume).
Two things I always loved about Nalini's novels were the fact that the romance and the mystery/thriller aspect were well intertwined. However, everything felt choppy in this novel. It was more entertaining than Ocean Light (oh dear lord, that's probably the worst Psy-Changeling book, with Tangle of Need coming in a close second).
What I hated:
- Memory shrugging off her time in captivity, coming out saner than I am afterwards, and honestly, it feels like a slap in the face to the people in this world who HAVE suffered through similar situations. Sorry, you guys are not empaths, and probably have no psychic way of remaining sane. In comparison, Sahara purposefully scrambled her mind to protect herself, and her coming back from it was realistic. Her falling for Kaleb was realistic because she had fallen for him a LONG LONG time ago, and it was a completion of a love story that had begun nearly a decade before the book. Also, WHY DID SAHARA NEVER TALK TO MEMORY? Not only have both of them been through something similar, both of them have a "dark" power that can be abused by psychopaths. I thought when Memory asked the NightStar clan for the brain scans, and when word got out about Memory and her situation, that Sahara would be the one to help Memory the most, not just Sascha. Also, Alice, Sasha, Ivy and Sahara, they were the ones that should have interacted with Memory more, but we only got Sascha.
- The snippets at the beginning of each chapter: I just hated the excerpts from Wild Woman. It made me cringe to read them, because they were so over-the-top sexual in their nature, and the fact that this book's heroine was a woman who had been abused for 15 years, had her mind RAPED by a monster for said 15 years, but, no biggie, now she's just focused on having sex with Alexei because she chose him.
In Ashaya and Dorian's book, Dorian gets to save Ashaya because she's up in the trees and facing some wild cats. But it was Ashaya herself who got herself out, via her connection with Zie Zen and the Arrows. In the meantime, Memory has been captive for years, and is rescued by Alexei, so of course, she falls for him.
There were so many missed opportunities to raise the stakes for both Memory and Alexei, and for the rest of the world as well. And yeah, I understand that the PsyNet has an ongoing problem, and that the NetMind and the DarkMind are going bonkers, but why is NO ONE TALKING TO SOPHIA? Not only is her part of the Net stable because she's mated to a human, but the NetMind and the DarkMind are actually united inside her mind!
In addition, I understand that the cats wanted to keep Noor and Keenan and their Harmonizing ability secret, but surely - surely! - they're friends enough with the Arrows by now to offer their help? When Yuri was dying, I kept saying, come on, use the kids, or at least have them try.
Another thing that did not help this book was the fact that I knew that none of the characters were in danger. I knew that Abbot wasn't going to die, and I was sure that Yuri wouldn't either, especially when Pax revealed the existence of his twin and his unwillingness to perform the DarkMind's duties. In Caressed by Ice, I was so afraid that Drew was gonna die, that I couldn't put the book down until he was fine.
And, what the hell happened to the Architect and his conspiracies?
I was torn between Pax and Shoshanna as the one that was pulling the strings, and leaning towards Ming when the Architect came to pick up the rogue Arrow in Zaira's book disguised, to hide a highly recognizable face. So, either Ming or Shoshanna then, because Shoshanna and her hubby were the public face of the Psy Council, and Ming has that birthmark thingy.
What I liked:
- Anthony and Nikita! Give me their book already! I want Anthony to be Sascha's father so bad, I can taste it.
- Amara. She was, ironically, the heart and the soul of this book. I always felt that Amara had a chance of becoming something else than she was. I mean, sure, she's a psychopath, or a sociopath, without having murderous tendencies, and I always felt that she could make some progress, or a change.
- Memory's pain for Jitterbug was something I could relate to, having lost a cat I used to talk to.
What I disliked:
- The other empaths' reaction to Memory's scent/emotional taste after working with Amara. I mean, yeah, alright, they apologized, and it was fine, but I wasn't fine with how the SnowDancers reacted MUCH BETTER THAN THE EMPATHS. It sort of felt like, yeah, don't you worry, Memory, your own kind don't accept you, but we will. It was different when it was Sascha and emotion, Faith and emotion, Sienna and her fiery power, but I thought the world was changing, and I wish that this side effect of Memory's power was handled differently.
- We saw a lot of the action second hand. Like the above mentioned reaction to Memory, we only learn this from Jaya through dialogue. Why not have a dramatic moment when it happens? Even later, through Memory's own PoV, we only get a "this happened and I felt so bad" kind of flashback.
- There were too many characters that were just coming and going that it felt like someone was pulling on my emotional strings, making me want more from Mercy, or Vaughn (who isn't even named), or all the other characters. I liked Brenna's "I'll hack the PsyNet if I can jack into it." I wish we actually see it one day.
- Since when are Judd and Alexei best buds? It did not feel real. I thought Judd was best buds with Drew.
- I felt like Memory's situation and what happened with Hawke's parents and Alexei's parents would be somehow intertwined, especially since we get a quote from Hawke's mom. It felt like there was an opportunity for a bigger conspiracy - Memory's capture, Sahara's imprisonment, what happened with Hawke's parents. One thing that I loved about Aden and Zaira's book was the fact that all the people missing from BlackSea were taken seemingly at random, yet they were done by the same organization.
There was a quote about the Ruling Coalition not being successful, but it felt like it led nowhere.
And the last bit of the book, about many many dark Psy awakening after Memory "healed" Pax felt like "buy the next book, this glacial plot WILL MOVE FORWARD, WE PROMISE."
Also, if the effect from Silver and Memory on the PsyNet is the same, then why the hell did Memory have to go all Cinderella on the PsyNet to achieve this effect? Would Memory be actually able to heal the Net so widely that she would save it? Because it felt like Memory merely bought them time, just like Ivy with the Honeycomb.
This installment felt like a TV adaptation of a favorite novel, everything is just there somehow, the characters are recognizable just by their hair color and names, and except for Brenna's comment, Judd's "I'll take that secret to my grave" deadpan humor, Ben's inability to grow past 5, and Tamar's snarkiness, everyone else was sort of just there. (Give me Axl and Tamar's book next, please and thank you).
Even Sahara and Kaleb were just there.
Memory was as unmemorable as Silver and Kaia, and Alexei is still more memorable for all the dominance fights than what he did in this book.
Another thing I used to love about this series was the way Nalini set up so many characters and their situations. Like Samuel Rain, who we first see fighting off a compulsion to kill all humans, or Sahara, mentioned by Faith in the second book, but appears so much later. Sienna's struggled with her powers for years until her book came along, and while Alexei was a known character, either my memory (oh lord) fails me, or Brodie and Etta were never mentioned nor seen before, even though we've spent more than 10 books in the DarkRiver/SnowDancer clans. Judd interacted with Aden and Vasic, Alice was mentioned multiple times, and her rescue was both gut wrenching and heart lifting. Memory began as the most sympathetic character, just as much Sahara, but her shrugging off everything with zero emotional trauma was... disturbing. Alexei and Brodie were fun to read about, but it would have been more gut wrenching if Brodie had actually existed before this - and since he had only died a year previously, there could have been a scene with him previously, if he was to become so important.
I remembered Lucy from before, but did not actually feel anything for her. Unlike Lara, whom I remember vividly in Drew's book, with her yellow dress and angry demeanor.
On one hand, Nalini explained many unnecessary things about the world, the empaths, and everything else, on the expense of the characters actually sounding the same.
And why the hell did Lara get an off screen birth? Why was everything in the packs happening off screen?
It felt as if nothing was connected, and everything was happening just because, or off screen.