There are so many issues with these books!! The first book alone has the worst grammar of them all but, once started, I have to read all of the books to the very end!! I bought them so as to read them with my 12 year old daughter, even she could recognise how particular sentences should have been worded correctly, to have the sentence actually make sense!! Now you might think my reading them with my 12 year old daughter is a bit odd, but it's something we both still enjoy from her younger years when I back then, would read bedtime stories!! But the one thing we constantly would notice in all the books, was that he'd constantly refer to the characters with different names! A prime example would be when all of a sudden the Albet surname had become Alton!!! There were so many more mistakes like this and if I was to name them all, I would still be writing this review this time next week!! Does Robyn not have proof readers or editors?? More importantly, did he not check it as he went along, just in case of glaring mistakes as this?? The worst part is, he didn't just refer to Verin or Avera as Alton once, it was throughout that entire chapter, to suddenly become Albet again the chapter after!! Ethan became Edward for a couple of paragraphs, well I'll stop there or this will become a novel in of itself!!! Perhaps he should employ either myself and my daughter to proof read his next lot of books, we'll charge a fraction of the price, but at least he'll then know that the characters would all have their correct names!!! Especially ones that are part of THE main characters of his stories!!! These are just a couple of things, as I'm not going to go into as much detail about the unnecessary repetitive parts as well!! There are more issues, but if they got rid of just a few of the aforementioned issues, the novels would actually be quite enjoyable!! Well my daughter and I agree that we'll leave this review as it is. Read the books for yourself, as the underlying idea is there and we both shed quite a few tears and had a "chuckle" (he really uses that word a LOT, everyone "chuckles" throughout) with the characters.....especially in book 6 😢😢😭😭 But make your own judgement with the novels, as our thoughts about them won't necessarily be yours!! You will fall in love with the characters, regardless of the constant name changes, and like I said, IF you can ignore the glaringly obvious mistakes, they do work out to be a really good idea and would be so much more enjoyable if fixed 😊😊