I have very conflicted and opposing thoughts on M. L. Farb's "The King's Trial". At times it is clever, heartfelt, and fun while at other times it is formulaic, heavy-handed, and self-indulgent. Portions of the book were great and other parts were so-so. It is not a bad story by any measure but the flaws shown enough to make the read, at times, a chore. It could easily become a five-star book in my opinion if the rough edges were smoothed out.
First, the great: The story is your somewhat tried and true formula of royal teens trying to save their kingdom with a quest. What makes this great is that it is cleverly subverted in interesting ways. For instance, one character goes on a quest to save their love interest but instead saves themself through improving their character. I honestly thought I would really hate the spoiled brat prince but through their storyline, I came to find them interesting and deep. The world-building is intriguing and creates a feeling of a larger sense of place. The characters are all pretty fun. The best parts of the story (from the spoiler section below) were when real historical precedents would peek through about how revolutions and governance work against what we think. For instance, just simply assassinating one bad person doesn't necessarily end a war. The fact that this book thought of that made it much stronger than several other similar books I've read.
Second, the not great: The story begins and ends with a lot of exposition to explain the setting and motivations of the characters. The lead, for example, is a member of a revolutionary group working against the kingdom's monarchy. Over the course of several matter-of-fact flashbacks, we learn some of why the lead is doing this. It feels more like the character is affirming their choice themselves rather than trusting us to trust they have a reason. The end has similar issues in which, after a time skip, we learn how things are going in rapid succession as stated facts. It's not terrible but it made getting into the story harder than it needed to. Secondly, the characters make lots of silent prayers to a god (or possibly gods?) but never discuss the matter in any depth. It seems to play a very important part of the story (as one character literary speaks to a god several times but the matter is left as just a thing that happens. As a fantasy nerd, I love learning about made-up religions. It's one of my favorite parts of games like the Elder Scrolls or Dragon Age. So, the metaphysics of the book left me with more world-building questions than answers but not in the right way.
*Light Spoilers*
Lastly, the story is a bit problematic. One major theme throughout is that the primary lead is not white but rather a member of a dark-skinned "desert people" with magical abilities. This seems to play on the concept of the magical other. The literary history of which is not wonderful. This bothered me only a little at the start as this character only talked about the ability as an abstract skill rather than an intrinsic power. Over the course of the book, however, it was shown to be a supernatural power that was unheard of in the largely white kingdom. It seems like, in a magical world, it would have been fun to have more different kinds of magic or explore why the character was magical. Other issues like how disability was discussed and shown had similar themes of nearing problematic issues. All of which were things that made me step back and distance myself from the story rather than add to it.
*Heavy Spoilers*
The best portion of this story was the heel turn of one of the characters. It turns out that there is more to this story than just an evil queen doing evil for fun. The true villain wants democracy at any stake. Even to the point of starting an unjust war to make it happen. This elevated the story a lot in my mind. Stories like the Lord of the Rings or Sword of Shannara make it seem like just getting rid of the big bad saves the day when in reality there is more nuanced than that to fix a broken system. I appreciated the even-handed exploration of those themes in a fantasy story.
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I'm interested to read other works by M. L. Farb. This series could grow into something really interesting if she builds on the ideas in this story.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.