This is by far the worst book I've read in 2020. It's also the most disappointed I've ever been in both a book and author. Shaun David Hutchinson has always been one of my favorite authors, arguably my favorite author ever, so it's so frustrating and sad to know that he wrote this. It's not only badly written, but also offensive and dangerous.
I don't have a single good thing to say about it so I'm just going to go on and list the major problems I have with The State of Us. These aren't all of the problems, because frankly I don't have the time or character limit to list them all, but these are the main ones.
1. The writing and dialogue is terrible. Yes, the book is offensive, dangerous, and racist, but it's not even well-written. I've read all of SDH's previous books and he's always been such a great writer. I don't know what happened here. The dialogue is so awkward and the writing is clunky and doesn't make a lot of sense.
2. The characters were flat. As you can imagine, bad writing and awkward dialogue makes for bad characters. Dre is the son of the democratic candidate for president and Dean is the son of the republican candidate for president. They fall in love but they are both boring and their romance makes zero sense. They bond over the shared experience of being a presidential candidate's son, but they don't have anything else. Obviously it's possible to write this well. Opposites can attract. But it's not written well in this book. The romance is just cringe-worthy and unbelievable.
3. The book ignores race-specific experiences. Dre's background isn't explored too much. We only learn that if his dad is elected, he will be the "First ever Mexican-American president." However, there is zero exploration of Dre's identity as a Mexican-American, and the only time Dre ever brings it up is in a footnote in one rant to Dean about his republican mother's harmful policies. There is obviously a HUGE problem with a Mexican-American democrat falling in love with a white, rich, republican whose mother is against women's rights, LGBTQ+ marriage, trans soldiers in the military, and gun control. However, the issues are explored no further than about 3 fights between Dre and Dean. It always goes the same way too. First, Dean mentions something about how he believes in his mom. Second, Dre makes a poor, non-specific argument, about how Dean's mother's policies are harmful. Third, Dean storms away refusing to face that his mother is evil. Fourth and finally, Dre follows him and apologizes. I was so frustrated every single time. It's bad enough that Dre, as the Mexican-American character, has to try to explain to a (supposedly very intelligent and educated) white boy why the policies are so harmful, but Dean never even even confronts his own shortcomings. He goes the whole book barely changing his beliefs about anything. Alternatively (and sadly and confusingly), Dre actually changes his stance on guns. In the beginning, he wants to ban all guns, but we later learn he changes his stance to being that "we can't take away guns, we have to improve mental healthcare for boys." It wasn't given any buildup and I was so off-put by it. I also need to emphasize that we are repeatedly told that Dre doesn't care about politics. This is bizarre coming from a Mexican-American gay kid who loves to make political statements in public and has a best friend that protests every chance she gets. It seemed like an excuse to overlook all of Dean's problematic political stances.
4. Furthermore, the book ignores all issues regarding race. The book ONLY gives any depth to LGBTQ+ issues and gun control (barely). There is no mention of immigration, discrimination, police brutality, the drug crisis, or anything that would affect members of communities who aren't white. How can Dre, as a Mexican-American, not have a conversation with his white republican boyfriend about his views on immigration???? The fact that this just isn't mentioned or brought up once made me so angry. Dre could have been white, and nothing in this story would have changed. SDH didn't do enough research to accurately represent a Mexican-American gay character and was too lazy to write any scenes that would force him to put some political depth into this book.
5. Similarly, the book ignores issues relating to class. There are some moments where class issues are hinted at, but never explored with any depth. Mel makes a comment about how "some people have to work to pay for college" to Dre, and Dre comments on how Dean "lives in a mansion," but that's about all we get. Dean never gets to confront that poor people exist and that his mother's policies severely hurt them.
6. Bad secondary characters. Dre's mom is essentially absent for most of the book. She contributes nothing other than telling Dre he could befriend people with different political views than him because "we have to understand both sides." His dad is in the book slightly more, but only to create an internal conflict in Dre. Dre is upset that he can't see his dad. That's pretty much it. It's quite annoying, especially when Dean's mom, the republican nominee for president, is given a lot more exploration (and not in a good way). She is a terrible person with terrible policies, and at one point, SDH tries to humanize her by pointing out that because she's a women, the media attack her for her looks all the time. Yes, this is probably true as a female politician, but it doesn't put her in the same category as Dre's dad who is a Mexican-American. The non-parent side characters are Mel, Mindy, and Tamal who are all bad in their own ways. Tamal is a token POC character who is used as a plot device. He's the friend whose good at tech which enables the kids to figure out their phones were hacked and to take down the antagonist at the end. Mindy is an interesting character, but goes from being good to bad really fast. She's a closeted lesbian with a sarcastic personality, but supports McMann, the terrible, racist, third-party candidate (and main antagonist in the book). I'll get more into McMann later, but basically supporting him made what could have been a good character a terrible one. Mel is Dre's best friend and was the only character I actually liked for most of the book. She acts as the voice of reason by calling Dre out for dating republican trash. I felt like she was echoing all of my thoughts. But then she ends up accepting the relationship in the end (despite everything wrong with it) which made me mad at her.
7. The asexual/demisexual rep. So our republican white boy MC, Dean, is struggling with his sexuality. I think this is handled well in the beginning of the book, with Dean being confused and struggling to explain how he feels, but it quickly spirals into offensiveness and poor handling. Dean's asexuality doesn't come up much after the beginning and when he explains it to Dre, he doesn't sounds like a teenager, he sounds like a textbook. It's an example of the poor dialogue in the book, but it's one of the parts of the book we NEEDED the dialogue to be good. There's so little demi/ace rep in young adult books and so it's sad how ignored and un-genuine it feels in this book. Also, the ace sensitivity reader apparently pointed out all of the reasons the rep was problematic (one of the big ones being Dean's stereotypical robotic personality) and SDH ignored the comments and even negatively subtweeted the asexual sensitivity reader.
8. McMann, the main villain of the book. He's basically a mix between Donald Trump, Jeff Bezos, and Elon Musk. He's a terrible, corrupt, billionaire who is turning Americans against each other. Essentially, he is the epitome of our current republican president and administration. If this is the case, then please tell me WHY he is an outsider "third-party candidate" and not the republican candidate??? The message this is sending is that it's not the republicans who are bad, it's the outside bad people. The ones out of the two party system. This was actually my BIGGEST problem with the book and why it makes it so dangerous. The implication that both democrats and republicans are different, but both have valid policies, and that there is a different threat, is ludicrous. This book completely fails to demonize all of the terrible policies that the republican party stands for in 2020. Corruption, greed, racism, homophobia, etc. McMann only exists to make dean's mother, the republican candidate, look good and not extreme. But... that's not true. She's actually just as bad as he is, reader!
9. Dean's mom is a terrible person and character. What would you expect from the republican nominee for president? I've outlined some of this already, but basically she is against LGBTQ+ rights, is against trans soldiers in the military, wants to arm teachers, and wants to give corporations tax cuts. She's probably has a similar stance on immigration as Donald Trump, but we don't know because that issue is not brought up in this book. On top of being a terrible politician, she is a terrible mother. She says she supports Dean no matter what, but then is appalled when he tells her he wants to be a teacher, not a politician. You can imagine how she reacts when she learns that he has been dating a boy. She manipulates her son and never fully accepts him for who he is. At the very end of the book, a reporter asks her what she thinks of her son's relationship with Dre, and she gives an awful answer where she basically implies that she is going to only tolerate it. We don't get to see any actual changes in her. The only thing we get is that now she wants to set her son up with a republican senator's son. Why? Is she racist? Probably, but we don't know because that's never explored. I wanted to feel bad for Dean for being so treated terribly by his mother, but he defended her so strongly (and never changed his beliefs) the entire book, so I couldn't bring myself to feel sympathy. I understand that many closeted LGBTQ kids go through the process of having to unlearn their parents backwards thinking, but SDH doesn't treat Dean with the proper nuance to express this. Dean just comes off as an asshole.
10. Dean and Dre are dumb af. It's so funny because they both get into Ivy League schools at the end of the book but they are both so dumb. When they first meet, Dre tells Dean they should use this special app to communicate because it's totally private. They spend the whole book using it to communicate. But plot twist, McMann is the inventor of the app! It's not even that much of a plot twist, it's revealed around half-way through the book. Dre should have known this in the first place, and when he learns, he doesn't think anything of it. There's also a really embarrassing scene where Dean and Dre go on a secret date and Dre pays with his credit card. Guess what? His parents find out where he was and Dre is shocked! I couldn't believe that was written into this book. Similarly, We are told over and over again how smart Dean is, but then his phone gets hacked super easily. He acts confused how it could have happened, even though it's pretty basic tech knowledge that a teenager should know. Yes, you should update your phone, Dean. Another weird thing that felt off to me was that Dre was constantly making fun of Dean for the way he dressed and looked. He tells Dean that he dresses boring and like an accountant and thinks Dean needs to loosen up. He even makes fun of Dean for having a boring bedroom. And yet, he always followed this with telling Dean that the boringness is something he likes about him. He thinks it's cute. So why does he keep criticizing Dean for being boring throughout the book? Make it make sense.
11. Dean and Dre's Relationship: I'm probably repeating myself on this one, but I need to emphasize how ALL of the points I've made should lead you to the conclusion that Dre and Dean's relationship is extremely problematic. Dean never uses any critical thinking to come to any conclusions about why Dre might be mad at him for supporting his mother's policies. Dean NEVER confronts his mother about her policies. Neither of them have any conversations about the place race has in politics. The main message a reader takes away from the relationship is "you CAN date someone in the opposite political party as you. Just don't talk about politics!" This is a terrible and alarming message to send to TEENS (who this book targets) in 2020 (the year of an extremely important presidential election). You can disagree about your favorite pizza toppings. You can't disagree about whether certain people should have rights. I do really think Dre and Dean's relationship COULD have worked if it was written with the right nuance and exploration. However, it wasn't. So, we are left with a problematic and uncomfortable relationship.
12. The ending. Yes, after suffering through the whole book, the ending was far worse than I could have even imagined. There is this weird last-minute plot moment where the kids learn that McMann is behind Dre and Dean's relationship being exposed to the world (surprise!) and so they use Tamal's tech skills to defeat him. It's all really contrived and stupid, especially for the last 3 chapters of the book. McMann is also such a cartoon villain. It's pathetic. However, the main issue is that the last chapter takes place after the election. Dean and Dre go off to different colleges, but they maintain their relationship. However, we don't learn who wins the presidential election. Based on the ending, we're 99.9% sure it's not McMann, but is the winner Dean's mom or Dre's dad? Who knows? How convenient. It seems the message is that it doesn't matter who wins, as long as you have someone you love. Imagine that message in a book about politics in 2020. Ha!
Whether there is a democrat or republican in the office DOES matter, and I think you SHOULD have a conversation with your significant other about their political beliefs and hold them accountable for being okay with stripping rights away from other people. The fact that this book's resolution actively goes against both of those statements is appalling.