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Royal States #3
The Captive King
Listening Length 8 hours and 53 minutes
In the Royal States of America, magic rules all, but life - and love - always finds a way.
At the Texas Charity Auction, money can buy anything, and Summer Cassidy is under orders to take advantage of the opportunity. While she believes the marital collar once worn by an Aztec queen belongs in a museum, it's up to her to sell the priceless treasure to one of the elite in attendance.
Meeting Bachelor #103, a man who finds her descriptions of human sacrifice charming rather than appalling, hadn’t been part of her plans. Buying his company for a quarter hadn’t been part of her plans, either.
One coffee date, a dinner, and a curse later, Summer’s catapulted across the Royal States on an adventure that will forever change her life, alter the course of an entire kingdom, and give her a chance to earn a love capable of defying even death.
In the Royal States of America, magic rules all, but life - and love - always finds a way.
At the Texas Charity Auction, money can buy anything, and Summer Cassidy is under orders to take advantage of the opportunity. While she believes the marital collar once worn by an Aztec queen belongs in a museum, it's up to her to sell the priceless treasure to one of the elite in attendance.
Meeting Bachelor #103, a man who finds her descriptions of human sacrifice charming rather than appalling, hadn’t been part of her plans. Buying his company for a quarter hadn’t been part of her plans, either.
One coffee date, a dinner, and a curse later, Summer’s catapulted across the Royal States on an adventure that will forever change her life, alter the course of an entire kingdom, and give her a chance to earn a love capable of defying even death.
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First published February 12, 2018
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Susan Copperfield
14 books239 followersSusan Copperfield is the royal romance, urban fantasy loving alter ego of award-winning & USA Today bestselling novelist R.J. Blain.
Under the super not-so-secret identity of Susan, the Royal States of America is explored, where the work of sixteen founding royal families preserved the United States from destruction and civil war when magic swept over the world.
In the Royal States, life, love, and magic always finds a way.
Under the super not-so-secret identity of Susan, the Royal States of America is explored, where the work of sixteen founding royal families preserved the United States from destruction and civil war when magic swept over the world.
In the Royal States, life, love, and magic always finds a way.
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July 23, 2020
This is third in a series but unlike most UF, there isn't a lot of continuity between the books. Characters from the second (Null and Void) show up and there's a bit of *nudge* *nudge* that is palpable, but you won't really be missing anything if you don't read in order.
So the title of this is nonsensical. There's never a king in any kind of duress at all, really. Okay, maybe for, like, two seconds there's a guy restrained but that doesn't have any plot effect at all. The only one ever really captured is Summer. Titles are hard, as I know all too well. But you can do better than that, I hope.
Anyway. I liked Summer, though she's prickly and always expects the worst from men and that wore a bit. Fortunately, she isn't unreasoning about it and seeing her warm to Landon was outstanding—not least because she's explicit (in her head) about the trust he has earned and her willingness to give him the benefit of the doubt when it is needed and important. I kind of loved that, actually.
The plot is a bit far-fetched but it's internally consistent and fast-paced so I made the choice to be along for the ride. And that choice was amply rewarded. I'm pretty sure Copperfield played fast and loose with ancient American history and culture for the purposes of the story, but I kind of liked how that worked. Melissa had to do enough digging into the Aztecs for one of her books that I know more about how brutal and bloody they were than I wish. So I know there's some mitigating going on there in this story. Kudos for not making it a whitewashing or downplaying those aspects while she was at it.
There was a stronger theme of abuse of power and specifically in male sexual predation in this story than in Null and Void. Summer takes some of the predators head-on and that was emotionally satisfying, even if I could see that she's also indirectly reinforcing the system that let it happen while she's at it*. In other words, her solution to the systemic problem is to have better people in pivotal positions. Which is one way to solve those kinds of problems, but is also inherently fragile.
There's a final roadblock as a new antagonist pops out of the woodwork near the end and I found that kind of extra, frankly. It involves someone going crazy and being unaccountably lucky in putting Summer under their power and I find that kind of thing cheap. It's certainly unearned. It's the biggest flaw in the story and my enjoyment of it, I think, though it wasn't so bad that I was tempted to stop reading.
Anyway, I loved Summer and Landon both separately and together. I really like their banter, even though it's more than a little like the banter in the other book. I don't know if that's the only kind Copperfield does, but if it is, at least it's in tune with my personal tastes. That final roadblock dropped this to four stars, but I'm still eager to get the next in the series.
A note about Chaste: Sex happens in this story. We know that it's good and that it has emotional resonance for the participants. But there are zero details as Copperfield pulls back before anything explicit happens. I consider this chaste, but others could reasonably disagree.
* A note about Political Theory: I bring this up because it's a bit endemic to the series as a whole. But I've thought for a long time that the "benevolent king" is probably the most desirable form of government in terms of justice and prosperity. It's certainly the government humans seem the most drawn to as even our democracies want to make our executive leaders effectively kings. When we agree with them, at any rate. The problem with that system is that it is inherently fragile. The power that is benevolent in the hands of one is tyrannical in the hands of another, less worthy ruler (i.e. the people we disagree with). The thing is, the "tyrannical king" is the least desirable form of government. I bring this up because the biggest weakness of this series, conceptually, is that Copperfield has it both ways. Her characters start out oppressed by the "elites" of the upper class and they have the appropriate resentments and discontent. Tyranny bad. But then they gain status in that same system and, lo and behold, that's good because now they can fix wrongs and bring benevolent rule where there was abuse before. Benevolent ruler good. Same system, just different people. Since I'm a systemic thinker, I have to consciously put aside Copperfield's having it both ways and wasting brain-space on "fixing" her background. I suspect that other systemic thinkers will have the same problem, at least to some degree. How willing you are to overcome it will depend on how well the other elements of the story engage your attention, I expect.
So the title of this is nonsensical. There's never a king in any kind of duress at all, really. Okay, maybe for, like, two seconds there's a guy restrained but that doesn't have any plot effect at all. The only one ever really captured is Summer. Titles are hard, as I know all too well. But you can do better than that, I hope.
Anyway. I liked Summer, though she's prickly and always expects the worst from men and that wore a bit. Fortunately, she isn't unreasoning about it and seeing her warm to Landon was outstanding—not least because she's explicit (in her head) about the trust he has earned and her willingness to give him the benefit of the doubt when it is needed and important. I kind of loved that, actually.
The plot is a bit far-fetched but it's internally consistent and fast-paced so I made the choice to be along for the ride. And that choice was amply rewarded. I'm pretty sure Copperfield played fast and loose with ancient American history and culture for the purposes of the story, but I kind of liked how that worked. Melissa had to do enough digging into the Aztecs for one of her books that I know more about how brutal and bloody they were than I wish. So I know there's some mitigating going on there in this story. Kudos for not making it a whitewashing or downplaying those aspects while she was at it.
There was a stronger theme of abuse of power and specifically in male sexual predation in this story than in Null and Void. Summer takes some of the predators head-on and that was emotionally satisfying, even if I could see that she's also indirectly reinforcing the system that let it happen while she's at it*. In other words, her solution to the systemic problem is to have better people in pivotal positions. Which is one way to solve those kinds of problems, but is also inherently fragile.
There's a final roadblock as a new antagonist pops out of the woodwork near the end and I found that kind of extra, frankly. It involves someone going crazy and being unaccountably lucky in putting Summer under their power and I find that kind of thing cheap. It's certainly unearned. It's the biggest flaw in the story and my enjoyment of it, I think, though it wasn't so bad that I was tempted to stop reading.
Anyway, I loved Summer and Landon both separately and together. I really like their banter, even though it's more than a little like the banter in the other book. I don't know if that's the only kind Copperfield does, but if it is, at least it's in tune with my personal tastes. That final roadblock dropped this to four stars, but I'm still eager to get the next in the series.
A note about Chaste: Sex happens in this story. We know that it's good and that it has emotional resonance for the participants. But there are zero details as Copperfield pulls back before anything explicit happens. I consider this chaste, but others could reasonably disagree.
* A note about Political Theory: I bring this up because it's a bit endemic to the series as a whole. But I've thought for a long time that the "benevolent king" is probably the most desirable form of government in terms of justice and prosperity. It's certainly the government humans seem the most drawn to as even our democracies want to make our executive leaders effectively kings. When we agree with them, at any rate. The problem with that system is that it is inherently fragile. The power that is benevolent in the hands of one is tyrannical in the hands of another, less worthy ruler (i.e. the people we disagree with). The thing is, the "tyrannical king" is the least desirable form of government. I bring this up because the biggest weakness of this series, conceptually, is that Copperfield has it both ways. Her characters start out oppressed by the "elites" of the upper class and they have the appropriate resentments and discontent. Tyranny bad. But then they gain status in that same system and, lo and behold, that's good because now they can fix wrongs and bring benevolent rule where there was abuse before. Benevolent ruler good. Same system, just different people. Since I'm a systemic thinker, I have to consciously put aside Copperfield's having it both ways and wasting brain-space on "fixing" her background. I suspect that other systemic thinkers will have the same problem, at least to some degree. How willing you are to overcome it will depend on how well the other elements of the story engage your attention, I expect.
May 3, 2023
Fantastic, Indiana Jones with magic!
Sucked in from the first chapter.
When I was a practicing archaeologist I would have loved to had some of the magic used in the story. But our world is more mundane than the Royal States world. Sigh.
Cassidy is stubborn and possibly cursed, answer is in the book. She just keeps going when others would give up. This is who I am, take it or leave it personality.
Bachelor 103 may also be cursed, again in the book. He doesn't emerge as a more complex character until later in the book.
Definitely Cassidy's story with her personal growth a focus point. The two come together then separate several times but the story is compelling whether they're together or not.
Some hard issues in one kingdom are addressed, more is revealed of the overall world and the caste system that is based on magic. Some characters from Null and Void appear, subtly and not so subtly.
Terrific story, what I've come to expect from RJ Blain and why her books are on my auto buy list. Looking forward to the next Royal States story and definitely re-reading this one as soon as I can, I'm sure that I missed many details in my rush to read to the end.
Get the story and start reading, it's worth the lost sleep.
Sucked in from the first chapter.
When I was a practicing archaeologist I would have loved to had some of the magic used in the story. But our world is more mundane than the Royal States world. Sigh.
Cassidy is stubborn and possibly cursed, answer is in the book. She just keeps going when others would give up. This is who I am, take it or leave it personality.
Bachelor 103 may also be cursed, again in the book. He doesn't emerge as a more complex character until later in the book.
Definitely Cassidy's story with her personal growth a focus point. The two come together then separate several times but the story is compelling whether they're together or not.
Some hard issues in one kingdom are addressed, more is revealed of the overall world and the caste system that is based on magic. Some characters from Null and Void appear, subtly and not so subtly.
Terrific story, what I've come to expect from RJ Blain and why her books are on my auto buy list. Looking forward to the next Royal States story and definitely re-reading this one as soon as I can, I'm sure that I missed many details in my rush to read to the end.
Get the story and start reading, it's worth the lost sleep.
April 13, 2020
I liked it. I like how each character in the series has a specialist subject. Archeology has never been my thing and it was more about that, dead languages and mercury poisoning rather than romance. Nice to see the Montana couple again. I enjoyed the castle scenes.
February 12, 2018
In the Royal States of America, magic rules all, but life—and love—always finds a way.
Summer Cassidy, a pre-doctorate archeologist determined to achieve that objective at all costs, is forced to sell a priceless Aztec necklace at the Texas Charity Auction to raise money for further exploration of a temple in Mexico. Here she meets Bachelor #103, a man who finds her description of human sacrifice charming rather than appalling. He buys her necklace for millions; she buys his company for a quarter. One coffee date, a dinner, and a curse later, Summer is thrown into a deadly adventure where magic, cinnabar, gods, and ghosts control her destiny as she struggles to solve a mysterious curse that could give her everything she’d dreamed of or cost her life.
In “Captive King,” one of three stand-alone novels in the Royal States Series, Susan Copperfield has delivered a romantic fantasy tale of unequaled suspense, adventure, mystery and imagination. In a future world, that followed a revolution, the United States has been into individual kingdoms. The populations of these kingdoms consist of royals, elites, regular folks and a group of talents—those who can manipulate the elements, foretell events or determine a person’s truthfulness; among other things. Summer is an earth weaver, prized at archeological sites for her ability to move, reshape, or excavate dirt and stone with her mind and hands. She discovers the jade, marital necklace, the crux of the story, she sells at auction, and kicks-off the events for the rest of the story.
“Captive King,” is among the most compelling, imaginative and dynamic stories in this genre I’ve read in a long time. Summer and Bachelor #103, aka Landen, provide a constant series of the most facetious, sarcastic, and alternatively loving and allegorical dialogue I’ve ever read. Their story is fast paced, the characters beautifully and perfectly portrayed. The mystery and the magical elements of the story are mesmerizing and unforgettable. I’ve become a fan of Susan Copperfield and this series... it’s irresistible.
Summer Cassidy, a pre-doctorate archeologist determined to achieve that objective at all costs, is forced to sell a priceless Aztec necklace at the Texas Charity Auction to raise money for further exploration of a temple in Mexico. Here she meets Bachelor #103, a man who finds her description of human sacrifice charming rather than appalling. He buys her necklace for millions; she buys his company for a quarter. One coffee date, a dinner, and a curse later, Summer is thrown into a deadly adventure where magic, cinnabar, gods, and ghosts control her destiny as she struggles to solve a mysterious curse that could give her everything she’d dreamed of or cost her life.
In “Captive King,” one of three stand-alone novels in the Royal States Series, Susan Copperfield has delivered a romantic fantasy tale of unequaled suspense, adventure, mystery and imagination. In a future world, that followed a revolution, the United States has been into individual kingdoms. The populations of these kingdoms consist of royals, elites, regular folks and a group of talents—those who can manipulate the elements, foretell events or determine a person’s truthfulness; among other things. Summer is an earth weaver, prized at archeological sites for her ability to move, reshape, or excavate dirt and stone with her mind and hands. She discovers the jade, marital necklace, the crux of the story, she sells at auction, and kicks-off the events for the rest of the story.
“Captive King,” is among the most compelling, imaginative and dynamic stories in this genre I’ve read in a long time. Summer and Bachelor #103, aka Landen, provide a constant series of the most facetious, sarcastic, and alternatively loving and allegorical dialogue I’ve ever read. Their story is fast paced, the characters beautifully and perfectly portrayed. The mystery and the magical elements of the story are mesmerizing and unforgettable. I’ve become a fan of Susan Copperfield and this series... it’s irresistible.
February 20, 2018
Summer Cassidy was an earthweaver with a passion for archaeology. A passion her university exploited. Her talents made her an asset, she could manipulate the earth, unbury sites, all without the others needing to lift a finger. If she ever got her doctorate she would rise through the ranks and earn herself a comfortable living, that was, if she ever got her doctorate. She had failed twice, and it was only since the words of bachelor 103 that she realised this was a deliberate ruse by the university to allow them to exploit her gifts for a meagre sum. Fate had crossed their paths that night. She was devastated at having to sell a priceless artefact to fund their dig. But there is where the real trouble begins, anyone whose worth their grain in salt knows that with ancient artefacts come curses. Summer had never known the jade necklace, she would have changed everything, but it was too late for that, now she has no choice but to roll with the punches and attempt to set things to rights. Find out if she can succeed in Susan Copperfield’s, The Captive King.
I really enjoyed how well Summer Cassidy’s brash and stubborn nature was put across throughout the book, she is a strong character and her partnering with billionaire. I really enjoyed the infusion of history, and the world filled with magic. The book, while being Indiana Jones meets Tomb raider in some parts, is also m a lot about Summer’s growth as a character. She really blooms throughout the book, and gains some great depths of character. I really enjoyed this urban fantasy, and it has certainly made me want to pick up more books in the series. If you’re looking for an action-packed, thrilling adventure with magic and ancient curses then look no further than Susan Copperfield’s, The Captive King, A Royal States Novel.
I really enjoyed how well Summer Cassidy’s brash and stubborn nature was put across throughout the book, she is a strong character and her partnering with billionaire. I really enjoyed the infusion of history, and the world filled with magic. The book, while being Indiana Jones meets Tomb raider in some parts, is also m a lot about Summer’s growth as a character. She really blooms throughout the book, and gains some great depths of character. I really enjoyed this urban fantasy, and it has certainly made me want to pick up more books in the series. If you’re looking for an action-packed, thrilling adventure with magic and ancient curses then look no further than Susan Copperfield’s, The Captive King, A Royal States Novel.
June 19, 2023
Book:The Captive King
Read By: Ebook
Author: Susan Copperfield
Genre: Dark Romance, Reverse Harem, Criminal
Main Characters: Summer and Landon
Recommend: Yes
Spice: 🌶️️
Age recommendation: 16-30+ Years
My feelings:
This is the third book in this series, however you don’t need to read the first 2 to get the story, as the people and storyline changes along the way. There are mentions and comments from the others but this can be read as a stand lone without much issue.
I liked Summer the way she expected the worst from every man she meet did annoy me alittle bit towards the end but. I liked the way she warmed up to Landon as time went on. I liked there dynamic together and apart.
I normally like my books a lot mote dark romance, this was soft, and a hell of a lot more smutty. This had some chapters but they were not described and only more implied. Great for young adults, older teenagers.
Read By: Ebook
Author: Susan Copperfield
Genre: Dark Romance, Reverse Harem, Criminal
Main Characters: Summer and Landon
Recommend: Yes
Spice: 🌶️️
Age recommendation: 16-30+ Years
My feelings:
This is the third book in this series, however you don’t need to read the first 2 to get the story, as the people and storyline changes along the way. There are mentions and comments from the others but this can be read as a stand lone without much issue.
I liked Summer the way she expected the worst from every man she meet did annoy me alittle bit towards the end but. I liked the way she warmed up to Landon as time went on. I liked there dynamic together and apart.
I normally like my books a lot mote dark romance, this was soft, and a hell of a lot more smutty. This had some chapters but they were not described and only more implied. Great for young adults, older teenagers.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 12, 2018
I really liked this story and will be rereading it soon to pick up on the details I missed at 3 AM.
Cassidy is an interesting character who many a former doctoral student or intern will identify with and the book shows lots of personal growth kickstarted by an interesting evening with the H.
I was keeping my eyes peeled for updates on characters from Null and Void.
Cassidy is an interesting character who many a former doctoral student or intern will identify with and the book shows lots of personal growth kickstarted by an interesting evening with the H.
I was keeping my eyes peeled for updates on characters from Null and Void.
February 13, 2018
I seriously loved this book. The depth and detail of the information that is in this book is astounding. The MFC is an archaeologist digging Mesoamerican tribal temples and the drama, magic and intrigue that plays out along the story is amazing. A well written story full of depth. Can recommend it highly enough
October 1, 2021
2021 bk 303. I am amazed at the imagination, the talent, and the research that went into this novel. I've enjoyed the earlier books I read in the series - but this was just WOW! I read this straight through as there was no place in which I wanted to put it down, leading to a very drowsy Eden the next day. I'm eager to read more in the series, but if this were the last one in the set - I would not be disappointed.
February 20, 2018
Solid book 2 with loveable new characters
With archeology being the focus of the heroine, I was wondering how the title would be referenced. I was pleasantly surprised.
The heroine goes through so much! It was gratifying to see her grow and accept her own worth. The hero is fun and so good for her.
There is a lot of danger and a pack of rapists that get taken down.
A few typos but those were mostly in the beginning.
With archeology being the focus of the heroine, I was wondering how the title would be referenced. I was pleasantly surprised.
The heroine goes through so much! It was gratifying to see her grow and accept her own worth. The hero is fun and so good for her.
There is a lot of danger and a pack of rapists that get taken down.
A few typos but those were mostly in the beginning.
February 22, 2018
I really don't know what to say about this book. I have read nearly all of the books from this author and her pen names. I absolutely loved null and void, and have reread it countless time. I was looking forward to this book being released, preordered it as well.
I REALLY HATE to say this but I am only 25% into it and I am struggling to carry on, Cassidy is repeating her self a lot, there is a lot description about the temples and sacrifices and lethal poison. It good but I feel like it's a history book with odd bits of storyline. It nice to have some information but most of the first quarter has been about history info. This might mean something later on in the book but at the begging it's just too heavy and boring.
The first chapter had the humour and quirkiness that I have come to love from this author, but since there is a lot of describing of temples and inner dialogue about the list of things she got to do, about how the university should have granted her doctorate instead of using her for cheap labour - we got it the first time. The FMC is treating every male like they seconds away from assaulting her - it's kinda degrading and make her seem immature and naive. It's really off putting and making what should be a enjoyable read into torture.
I don't know whether I am going to continue with this book, other reviews have been really positive and others have really loved the book, personally I think it down to individual taste. Some might like this book and some won't. It hasn't put me off buying other books from this author as this is the first book I have brought from her that I haven't liked.
I REALLY HATE to say this but I am only 25% into it and I am struggling to carry on, Cassidy is repeating her self a lot, there is a lot description about the temples and sacrifices and lethal poison. It good but I feel like it's a history book with odd bits of storyline. It nice to have some information but most of the first quarter has been about history info. This might mean something later on in the book but at the begging it's just too heavy and boring.
The first chapter had the humour and quirkiness that I have come to love from this author, but since there is a lot of describing of temples and inner dialogue about the list of things she got to do, about how the university should have granted her doctorate instead of using her for cheap labour - we got it the first time. The FMC is treating every male like they seconds away from assaulting her - it's kinda degrading and make her seem immature and naive. It's really off putting and making what should be a enjoyable read into torture.
I don't know whether I am going to continue with this book, other reviews have been really positive and others have really loved the book, personally I think it down to individual taste. Some might like this book and some won't. It hasn't put me off buying other books from this author as this is the first book I have brought from her that I haven't liked.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 5, 2018
Liked it
Decided to update my review upon rereading this series. The second time around, all the references to the Aztecs habits to ripping out beating hearts, failed to distract me from me actual story (I guess the shock value had worn off). Because of that I enjoyed the book a lot more, and decided to upgrade it to four stars.
Decided to update my review upon rereading this series. The second time around, all the references to the Aztecs habits to ripping out beating hearts, failed to distract me from me actual story (I guess the shock value had worn off). Because of that I enjoyed the book a lot more, and decided to upgrade it to four stars.
March 4, 2018
I did enjoy this book as a whole. I enjoy reading about female archaeologists. Did I enjoy the fact that, like the first book, the main character seemed to spend half of her page time in the hospital or bedridden? Nah. Did I enjoy the greater focus on the evils of rape and underage marriage? Yes. Was it frustrating to see that . Yes. Like the first book, did the author add in random sort of important things about the characters 75% into the book? Yes. () Did I wish there was more explanation into how the Royal States became the way that they are, in which a well educated, independent woman believes that the only way to have children is by getting married? You betcha.
I have questions about the Royal States' university system and treatment of females in academia, but I will be a good reader and tell myself that during the upheaval between USA and RSA, a field that was majority female reverted back to being mostly male because all the ladies were too busy getting married and having children and except for Summer, largely stopped caring about pursuing their academic degrees in archaeology.
Kudos to the author, she did definitely do research into the Mesoamerican societies that were described, although it really worried me that someone like Simon could get a doctorate and still not know how to read the language of the culture he focused on. Also why didn't everyone spend all their time in labs trying to piece together pottery sherds or writing endless reports and papers on their findings? Usually you just get 1000000 bug bites and find like, two pots and maybe an old hoe (takes deep breath, reminds self that actual archaeology is too boring to make a good novel and that earthweaving allows people to find the cool stuff with little to no hassle, lets out breath)
I liked that there were less adult tantrums in this book, that was nice. I did like Summer and Landen as a couple, and wish that there was actually more page-time devoted to exploring their relationship. Instalove always weirds me out, and I'm pretty sure they'd spent less than 12 hours being able to have coherent conversations with each other before Landen .
Ummm I'm making it sound like I hated this book, but I really didn't.
3.75/5 stars
I have questions about the Royal States' university system and treatment of females in academia, but I will be a good reader and tell myself that during the upheaval between USA and RSA, a field that was majority female reverted back to being mostly male because all the ladies were too busy getting married and having children and except for Summer, largely stopped caring about pursuing their academic degrees in archaeology.
Kudos to the author, she did definitely do research into the Mesoamerican societies that were described, although it really worried me that someone like Simon could get a doctorate and still not know how to read the language of the culture he focused on. Also why didn't everyone spend all their time in labs trying to piece together pottery sherds or writing endless reports and papers on their findings? Usually you just get 1000000 bug bites and find like, two pots and maybe an old hoe (takes deep breath, reminds self that actual archaeology is too boring to make a good novel and that earthweaving allows people to find the cool stuff with little to no hassle, lets out breath)
I liked that there were less adult tantrums in this book, that was nice. I did like Summer and Landen as a couple, and wish that there was actually more page-time devoted to exploring their relationship. Instalove always weirds me out, and I'm pretty sure they'd spent less than 12 hours being able to have coherent conversations with each other before Landen .
Ummm I'm making it sound like I hated this book, but I really didn't.
3.75/5 stars
March 12, 2018
Difficult to get into but satisfying to finish
I had a fair amount of difficulty getting into this book. It really came down to the protagonist. Summer is bold, snarky, and refuses to take any crap. But atthe the beginning I found her almost too abrasive. She was cynical about all royals and all men, and even when she met a guy she liked it didn't show. Her interactions with Landen were all about tests, and waiting for him to mess up. From that I didn't really get the feeling she was into him, but as soon as the magic starts all she talks about is finding Landen and marrying him. Between how she had acted and how she was saying she felt, I was having a lot of difficulty buying the romantic connection, so it took a bit more story before I could really settle in and enjoy it.
As we learn more about Summer it becomes more obvious why she acts so harsh to the outside world. Between her education, her thesis, her power, and the men she worked with, she had a long history of all bad with no good, no matter how hard you worked. She was cynical as she looked to a future of more of the same. The magic that happens in the book make a life crazy, but it also gives her a chance to see a future that could be different than what she ever imagined. Between the magical trials and the people standing in her way to stop her, that future isn't easy to get to, but all the hard work she's done her whole life make her unafraid to fight. By the end Summer has a new future, and finally has happiness, which makes it all worth the troubles before.
I had a fair amount of difficulty getting into this book. It really came down to the protagonist. Summer is bold, snarky, and refuses to take any crap. But atthe the beginning I found her almost too abrasive. She was cynical about all royals and all men, and even when she met a guy she liked it didn't show. Her interactions with Landen were all about tests, and waiting for him to mess up. From that I didn't really get the feeling she was into him, but as soon as the magic starts all she talks about is finding Landen and marrying him. Between how she had acted and how she was saying she felt, I was having a lot of difficulty buying the romantic connection, so it took a bit more story before I could really settle in and enjoy it.
As we learn more about Summer it becomes more obvious why she acts so harsh to the outside world. Between her education, her thesis, her power, and the men she worked with, she had a long history of all bad with no good, no matter how hard you worked. She was cynical as she looked to a future of more of the same. The magic that happens in the book make a life crazy, but it also gives her a chance to see a future that could be different than what she ever imagined. Between the magical trials and the people standing in her way to stop her, that future isn't easy to get to, but all the hard work she's done her whole life make her unafraid to fight. By the end Summer has a new future, and finally has happiness, which makes it all worth the troubles before.
March 22, 2019
4.33 GR stars: archaeology (archaeolinguistics, even!), magic, misadventure, a heroine who takes no guff, a lovable royal hero, ... What's not to love?
This may be my favorite R.J. Blain story so far (though I've still got a bunch to catch up on).
I loved the conversations (including arguments), and how she worried about being a queen when she's a "queen b****" (though her first major act in his realm was to put right a long-standing grievous wrong — trigger warning only needed if even general mention of past sexual assault spoils a mainly light story for you).
I loved the twists on the tribal history and mythology of Mexico et al. The unpredictable leaps the relics and ruins lead to provide a fun mix of challenging settings.
A few past Royal States characters show up, without its feeling forced.
I only made eight nitpicky notes in the book (not counting the highlighted lines to be *savored*!), for a couple goofs that look like rewording remnants, a couple duplicated word-choices that can be avoided, a couple instances of a regional [mis]use of the past participle (instead of the present participle, e.g., "Do you need rescued?" ) that I hate nearly as much as "I could care less" but probably shouldn't call errors, and a couple other minor proofreading slips.
I think I'm going to read another Royal States romance now. See ya!
This may be my favorite R.J. Blain story so far (though I've still got a bunch to catch up on).
I loved the conversations (including arguments), and how she worried about being a queen when she's a "queen b****" (though her first major act in his realm was to put right a long-standing grievous wrong — trigger warning only needed if even general mention of past sexual assault spoils a mainly light story for you).
I loved the twists on the tribal history and mythology of Mexico et al. The unpredictable leaps the relics and ruins lead to provide a fun mix of challenging settings.
A few past Royal States characters show up, without its feeling forced.
I only made eight nitpicky notes in the book (not counting the highlighted lines to be *savored*!), for a couple goofs that look like rewording remnants, a couple duplicated word-choices that can be avoided, a couple instances of a regional [mis]use of the past participle (instead of the present participle, e.g., "Do you need rescued?" ) that I hate nearly as much as "I could care less" but probably shouldn't call errors, and a couple other minor proofreading slips.
I think I'm going to read another Royal States romance now. See ya!
February 13, 2018
I don't know how to review this without giving too much of the wonderful storyline away.
It's a tombraider meets billionaire romance adventure novel. It's like having all my favourite flavours of ice cream into one bowl. One scoop each. Enough to make me happy, because there's enough of all the flavours I want.
I must say I really appreciate the amount of effort the author puts into creating the history and myths for the ancient civilization in the story. I really felt like I went on a Lara croft adventure, esp with the size of her boobs as described in the novel. This is a story I would like for Lara to have if she ever settles down from tomb raiding.
This novel has all the right elements. Kickass heroine, billionaire with unlimited funds, fantasy elements but in a modern setting with toilets and electricity. Highly recommend. (esp if you like romance without explicit sex)
It's a tombraider meets billionaire romance adventure novel. It's like having all my favourite flavours of ice cream into one bowl. One scoop each. Enough to make me happy, because there's enough of all the flavours I want.
I must say I really appreciate the amount of effort the author puts into creating the history and myths for the ancient civilization in the story. I really felt like I went on a Lara croft adventure, esp with the size of her boobs as described in the novel. This is a story I would like for Lara to have if she ever settles down from tomb raiding.
This novel has all the right elements. Kickass heroine, billionaire with unlimited funds, fantasy elements but in a modern setting with toilets and electricity. Highly recommend. (esp if you like romance without explicit sex)
May 15, 2020
This is a fun speculative fiction series that focuses on a number of societal failings. Magic and the fall of the USA has lead to the formation of a coalition of kingdoms loosely organized into the Royal States of America. The stronger a person's magic, the higher their caste is, and the monarchs have the most powerful magic of all. Those without any magic are considered to be the lowest of lows and are treated abominably. This series focuses on many human rights issues. I was sure I was going to hate it but, instead, I freakin' love it! If you are expecting high literature, give this a miss, but if you need some good, old fashioned escape, Susan Copperfield is a great investment of your time.
February 24, 2024
The narrator for this book, Keira Grace grated on my nerves. Her cadence accentuates the end of a word at the end of every sentence. Her character voices leave a lot to be desired. If I wasn't so interested in the plot line of the book, I would not have made it thru.
As far as the writing, it had an interesting storyline, but too many. The author repeated the same thing over and over and left so many other areas flat that could have been flushed out. There are definitely to many twist that could have been flushed out but then things just happened quickly and fell flat.
This is the first book I have read by this author and I will be interested in more but will not even try if Keira Grace narrating it.
As far as the writing, it had an interesting storyline, but too many. The author repeated the same thing over and over and left so many other areas flat that could have been flushed out. There are definitely to many twist that could have been flushed out but then things just happened quickly and fell flat.
This is the first book I have read by this author and I will be interested in more but will not even try if Keira Grace narrating it.
August 13, 2019
At first I thought this book was remarkably similar to the first one (the auction, similar type of a heroine), but then, of course, the focus of this book turned out to be on an entirely different subject and of a very different direction.
Incidentally, since I know very little about the cultures touched in this book, I was able to enjoy it as a fantasy without wondering if the historical/cultural details seemed believable enough.
P.S. Typos...I see you. I can't unsee you. I love these books, and almost want to beg the author to let me beta-read/proofread (it's my paid job most of the time), because there is a place in this book where a typo level practically reaches 'fatal' mark (wrong character's name is used in a scene)...
Incidentally, since I know very little about the cultures touched in this book, I was able to enjoy it as a fantasy without wondering if the historical/cultural details seemed believable enough.
P.S. Typos...I see you. I can't unsee you. I love these books, and almost want to beg the author to let me beta-read/proofread (it's my paid job most of the time), because there is a place in this book where a typo level practically reaches 'fatal' mark (wrong character's name is used in a scene)...
April 14, 2020
The United’s States is no longer as we know it. Magic destroyed the world and now the Elite run the kingdoms. I was happy to see the king and queen of Montana in this tale. Landon meets an archeologist at the Texas “ ball”. Trying to get her PhD, speaking dead languages, and using her power to work with earth Summer Cassidy can’t get a break. With a mythical artifact necklace and a itty bitty bet at a ball her adventures take off. Her colleagues want to keep her down but she will get her doctorate and prove her thesis if that is the last thing she does. But Landon has other ideas for the lady who digs in the dirt.
December 27, 2019
Rape warning
This novel deals with the abuse of power and rape of multiple women and children. It was not what I was expecting. It’s not a passing reference but at the core of the story. The shifting was also challenging it made the story disjointed, which I’m sure is the point. The heroine was jolted so are the audience. But it was confusing and frustrating not intriguing. I liked the main characters but you don’t get to see them together much. Cameo appearances from book 1 William. If rape wasn’t a trigger I would have rated this higher.
This novel deals with the abuse of power and rape of multiple women and children. It was not what I was expecting. It’s not a passing reference but at the core of the story. The shifting was also challenging it made the story disjointed, which I’m sure is the point. The heroine was jolted so are the audience. But it was confusing and frustrating not intriguing. I liked the main characters but you don’t get to see them together much. Cameo appearances from book 1 William. If rape wasn’t a trigger I would have rated this higher.
May 6, 2020
This series really surprised me. I wasn't expecting to be so drawn in. Having said that, this one was a little too weird...not my favorite. After a few books, it became a little difficult to keep track of who belongs to whom and to which State; a Cast of Characters wouldn't go amiss. My only complaint that all the books, to a greater or lesser degree, needed a visit with a good editor. Since this can be a huge issue for me, as a reader, the fact that I carried only regardless is a testament to the storytelling.
July 23, 2024
Weirdest of the Royal States books thus far. Our girl is an archeologist (think Mexican/South American tribes) and encounters ruins with magic in them... magic that no one expects or understands, not even her. And there may or may not be unexpected teleporting between ruins, ghosts, and other (mild) goosebumpy business involved. This feels a lot more like Indiana Jones, crossed with magic and "star-crossed lovers" / fate, whereas the rest of the series that I've read thus far has felt very "urban magic" ot "rural magic" (depending on the number of horses).
April 10, 2020
This is the second book that I've read in this series and it was a completely different story. Even though everything is set in the same world, we are dealing with totally different characters - even though we do get to see some of our favorites when things begin to go a bit crazy.
The two MC's are good together and I liked following them on their journey. The one thing I kind of had a problem with was the sexual assaults. I had a hard time buying into the fact that EVERY ONE on the council was sexually abusing all of the women and had not only been doing it for years, but these women were assaulted by most of the men at one time or another. That is a bit difficult to stomach when the King's talent is supposed to be prescience. And...he is such a nice guy (the king, not the jerks) and I have a hard time believing that not one person felt comfortable coming forward. Again, that was just what I was thinking when I was reading this. I mean, they ALL came forward the minute a stranger asks them to- which in of itself, I would think would be even harder to do...but what do I know? I'm just glad they got what was coming to them (the bad guys, that is)
This was a good addition to the series and I enjoyed reading it.
The two MC's are good together and I liked following them on their journey. The one thing I kind of had a problem with was the sexual assaults. I had a hard time buying into the fact that EVERY ONE on the council was sexually abusing all of the women and had not only been doing it for years, but these women were assaulted by most of the men at one time or another. That is a bit difficult to stomach when the King's talent is supposed to be prescience. And...he is such a nice guy (the king, not the jerks) and I have a hard time believing that not one person felt comfortable coming forward. Again, that was just what I was thinking when I was reading this. I mean, they ALL came forward the minute a stranger asks them to- which in of itself, I would think would be even harder to do...but what do I know? I'm just glad they got what was coming to them (the bad guys, that is)
This was a good addition to the series and I enjoyed reading it.
January 27, 2021
Just a warning this book deals with subject of rape, very lightly but love how Summer gets it resolved
Never mess with a New Yorker
This series deals more serious issues but still romantic and love how blunt Summer can be
Very much enjoyed and look forward to reading more about the world and how they resolve the issues
Also nice to get a quick update on William and Mackenzie from Null and Void on how they are doing
Never mess with a New Yorker
This series deals more serious issues but still romantic and love how blunt Summer can be
Very much enjoyed and look forward to reading more about the world and how they resolve the issues
Also nice to get a quick update on William and Mackenzie from Null and Void on how they are doing
January 25, 2026
digging up love
This was an exciting adventure full of history and action. I fell in love with Summer, this amazing character has so much heart that she hides behind her nastiness. She has these walls to keep people out and to keep her safe. The only thing that has kept her going is her archaeological degree and her obsession of her degree. When bachelor #103 opens her eyes to lust everything changes. She realizes that maybe there is more to life than just digging.
This was an exciting adventure full of history and action. I fell in love with Summer, this amazing character has so much heart that she hides behind her nastiness. She has these walls to keep people out and to keep her safe. The only thing that has kept her going is her archaeological degree and her obsession of her degree. When bachelor #103 opens her eyes to lust everything changes. She realizes that maybe there is more to life than just digging.
July 6, 2018
Love the characters, love the series, but I can't say I liked this storyline. I'm not a fan of teleporatation-style stories (too much like time travel, I find them disjointed and confusing). The plot is easy enough to follow, and the romance is great, and the dialog is fun. Lots of good things to say, even with the strange feel of the plot. Can't wait to read the next book of the series.
April 3, 2019
One of the best
I love this author and I've read the majority of her books. The plot moved at a galloping pace, the characters were original and real, and the history was enthralling. My only 2 complaints: the was too much use of the f word and I wish the love story was focused on just a little more. Otherwise, loved every minute and couldn't put it down. Enjoy it!
I love this author and I've read the majority of her books. The plot moved at a galloping pace, the characters were original and real, and the history was enthralling. My only 2 complaints: the was too much use of the f word and I wish the love story was focused on just a little more. Otherwise, loved every minute and couldn't put it down. Enjoy it!
December 1, 2019
Beautiful and Tough
Wow, what a book. This is a book of adventure. Not about it..., it was adventure. From beginning to end you're on a thrilling ride. I am truly impressed with how fast and deep I feel in love with Summer. She is just amazing in all ways. This book deserves to be read by you and everyone you know. Have fun. I know I did!
Wow, what a book. This is a book of adventure. Not about it..., it was adventure. From beginning to end you're on a thrilling ride. I am truly impressed with how fast and deep I feel in love with Summer. She is just amazing in all ways. This book deserves to be read by you and everyone you know. Have fun. I know I did!
April 16, 2025
Chaos, curses, and Kings - Oh, my!
I absolutely love the idea for the history in this book. I'm continuously awed by the author's creativity and world building. I've yet to be disappointed or discouraged by her storytelling. I try not to give away the tale in my reviews, so please read it yourself. I hope you get as much enjoyment from her storytelling as I do!
I absolutely love the idea for the history in this book. I'm continuously awed by the author's creativity and world building. I've yet to be disappointed or discouraged by her storytelling. I try not to give away the tale in my reviews, so please read it yourself. I hope you get as much enjoyment from her storytelling as I do!
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