Alpha Hates Alpha

by Beatrix Arden

Ever since they were children, Eliza dreamed of being together with Ted. Her hopes were crushed when she presented as an Alpha, but it seemed like destiny when Ted became an Omega. Her only problem is Seymour, a fellow Alpha, who has no intention of giving up Ted without a fight.

Female Alpha/Male Alpha/Male Omega hot Omegaverse erotica short story. Contains plenty of adult scenes.

Genres: Omegaverse, M F Romance

79 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 16, 2020

About the author

Romance and #erotica fiction writer. #mf #omegaverse #werewolf #dark and #fantasy.

https://twitter.com/beatrixarden

Reviews

[BBG · Rating 4 out of 5]

I love it

This one was written perfectly. I think that Eliza and Seymour were great characters. I wish there was more of an ending.

[Maxine Dixon · Rating 5 out of 5]

Eliza and ted grew up together as kids and have been friends ever since then Seymour came along and they all became friends.
But when the time for presenting Eliza and Seymour were alphas and ted omega.
Both Eliza and Seymour wanted ted so they started competing for his attention to own him.Eliza takes ted to a club and they meet Seymour there so she takes him on the dance floor and then she loses him but he phones her and said that he lefted with another alpha.
Eliza was upset so Seymour gave a hug and then they started kissing and things started to get very steamy between them..
I love how Eliza and Seymour pretend that they don’t like each other when they really do and they can’t keep away from each other.
The story is a great read and flows really well with some really steamy scenes thought out the book but I don’t like the book ends because we don’t know the relationship works/ends which would b good to know.
Although I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and can’t wait to read more by this author.

Recommend reading for 18+

[Icegaze · Rating 3 out of 5]

I thought this was going to go in a completely different direction, but I didn’t dislike it. By the end I felt so bad for poor Ted. I mean, did I like Seymour and Eliza together? Fuck yes! There’s a HFN so I am content with the story but there’s a niggling bit of feeling bad for a character who is -granted- one dimensional, but sympathetic and who deserves a little happiness after all that shit he went through.

[Shruti · Rating 4 out of 5]

Another great omegaverse book by this author. I love her clean and crisp writing style. The way she portrays the relationship development and tension between characters is an utter delight to read.

Seymour and Eliza are both alphas fighting over the same omega. Hot spicy scenes ensue once they realise that there is a way to fulfill BOTH of their needs.

I hope Beatrix Arden starts writing longer books that don't feel as incomplete, because I adore her writing and characterisation.

[Lady P ᘛ⁐̤ᕐᐷ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Two Alphas in a pairing? Sign me up!

This book was super enjoyable. Two alphas compete for their Omega friend and find something that was right in front of them all along.

I love this book and recommend it to everyone. Definitely check it out if you love contemporary OV and are looking for something a bit different.

[Esmee · Rating 3 out of 5]

Jammer dat het zo kort was. Dat ze het niet erg vond dat degene die ze leuk vond een voorkeur voor alpha mannen had. Dat ze uiteindelijk met die ander ging was wel hot echt summer dat het zo kort was en een afgeraffeld einde

[JP · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great Story 😁

Yummy and intriguing, guaranteed to keep you reading until the end 😉. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story and look forward to reading more 😊. Thanks again Beatrix, I can't wait to read all your stories 🤓.

[Greeneyes Belle28 · Rating 4 out of 5]

Alpha Hates Alpha

It was an okay read ... ... ... .. ... ... .. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... .

[Eitan · Rating 4 out of 5]

I liked the way Alphas were portrayed in this one. Also I thought the only thing Ted did that was decent was telling Eliza that Seymour had a crush on her. Either he was oblivious or skillfully kept two Alphas on the back burner. I would have preferred a love triangle because it would’ve made more sense.

[Diana Martins · Rating 4 out of 5]

Alpha Hates TO LOVE Alpha
There are 3 friends in which the girl and one boy are Alphas and the other boy is an Omega. The girl thinks she would stay with Omega forever and even fights with the other Alpha to "win" the Omega, but events make her see that her future is more the Alpha after all. 😀