This was a tricky read for me. I found the characters too obvious, too many to start with and the ending altogether convenient. I struggled to relate to the lead women in the story and found the final revelations lack-lustre and not very shocking. Despite my misgivings, it was an average story that sadly did not meet my expectations.
Based on the blurb, I was expecting Jason’s murder to dominate the narrative. However, although the prologue begins with the act taking place, two thirds of the story are about events leading up to Jason’s demise. The writer does not make the time period clear and it would have been helpful to have a reference to days before the crime occurs. As such, I thought I had missed something significant in the plot and was confused why the writer had put so much time in establishing the characters and only a third on the investigation of the murder.
The three women that dominate the story felt like over-used stereotypes. Rich, bored and conniving would summarise them accurately. The lure of a new social media site encourages the women to sign up in anticipation of meeting like-minded individuals who wish to see the tourist sites of London together. However, whilst one is blackmailing and using this site as a massive scam, two others are drawn into illicit affairs and encounters. Alexis is the convenient “detective” who is trying to divorce her scumbag husband (another obvious character “type”); Susan is the spoilt, rich woman who seeks more than what her husband offers. On the other hand, Caroline seemed to add a bit more depth as the one behind the website. However, she disappointingly does not feature as prominently and I was expecting more of a surprise at the closing of the story.
I found it difficult to connect with these women, mostly because they were such over-used, typical characters. Initially I struggled to engage with the plot because it kept switching between the different people and I could not remember who was who. This did lessen my overall enjoyment of the story because, by the time I was clued up on the characters, I was more frustrated with the plot development.
Whilst I so far have criticised the story, now is the time to explain why I did enjoy elements of it. The premise of the story is really interesting: I was drawn to the setting of an affluent close in the London suburbs where, actually, the neighbours do not really know one another. Olive, the road’s “spy” keeps tabs on who is coming and going and I thought that was something many readers could relate to! Riverside Close appears such an idyllic setting but, obviously, things are not what they seem.
The varied narrative perspectives means that readers experience different aspects of the plot development. If the writer had been more adventurous with the characters and plot, this novel could have been more mysterious and gripping. There were some surprises during the story which I think readers would appreciate. For me, it was too little too late – the frustration had already settled.
This is an average thriller and one that sadly, fell flat. I was hoping for more than this story delivered. There are plenty of stronger narratives out there than this and, whilst the premise was interesting, the delivery was not as exciting as anticipated.
With thanks to Bloodhound books for providing me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.