Set in Germany in 2017, amid the excitement and unrest leading up to a major election, an anonymous influencer gains popularity as much for his political views and calls to action as he does for his claim that the is the grandson of none other and Adolf Hitler. This influencer uses speech patters and his physical appearance to support this claim, and the words he speaks are meant to whip the masses into voting in such a way as to leave Germany with a lame-duck government.
These events are conveyed directly, and through three other intertwining storylines, including a US special operations agent working to discover the identity of the influencer as well as assist a woman locate her missing children, who have also somehow gotten tangled up in the plot; a Middle Eastern prince whose motives are to help elevate his own country’s independence; and a newly promoted case manager back in Washington DC who is both learning the ropes of her new high-stakes job, and reconciling her own heritage with the events of the present day.
The story’s premise is promising, if a bit lacking in the execution. The biggest problem the book suffers from is timing. Each chapter, and there are 85 of them in a book of roughly 300 pages, are too short. Each chapter contains at least two storylines, each section amounting to a handful of paragraphs, some of which serve to recap what we learned the last time we were in that story line. While often times short chapters serve to make the reader feel like they are really making progress in a book, in this instance it feels like we aren’t getting enough in each story line to make a connection to either the plot or to any of the characters. The reader has far too many opportunities to take a break and put the book down, without having the opportunity to become immersed deeply enough in any element of the story to feel drawn to pick the book back up again. This problem could be mediated by combining the chapters, reducing their amount to half, without removing a single word.
The characters seem fairly well-rounded, if a little stereotypical. The secret agent, the middle eastern foe, the woman in need, and the mysterious catalyst. While they aren’t boring, per se, they can act a bit predictably. In a plot so ripe for twists and turns, it’s twists and turns on a road the reader has been on before.
The book is well-edited, with only a handful of minor formatting errors sprinkled throughout. The most disruptive part of the book was the near constant repeating of translations of foreign language terms and phrases. This was done in a very obvious way, either with stilted dialogue to force a character to explain, or with a direct translation in the exposition. Having a foreign language term defined or translated once, or even twice, within the context of the story is completely fine, but when it gets to the point that it’s done every single time the word or phrase appears it becomes a distraction, as it did here.
Despite the criticisms, if you’re looking for a political thriller this isn’t a bad choice. There are moments of action and intrigue that will satisfy someone looking for an entertaining adventure. And, it’s most certainly a different take on a theme that has fascinated readers for 80 years.