I was in the mood for a funny romance. I saw that many reviewers compared the whit of the heroine to the heroines in Penny Reid's romances. I am sad to say that for me, this story just bored me to death. I see how the heroine was supposed to be seen as funny, cute, and other things, but I just found everything boring.
The narrator, Romy Nordlinger, sounded a bit old to be the voice of the heroine. The heroine is supposed to be in her 20s, but the narrator sounded more like someone in her late 40s.
At first I had no idea what was going on. The heroine is a 911 operator, she gets a call from a woman whose husband or lover died while they were playing dress-up. The man dressed up as Batman for their sex night. If it was written correctly, I would have found it funny/entertaining, but it all felt awkward.
Then the next chapter the heroine complains about her boyfriend and how he wants to have sex but he smells like Cheetos and blah, blah, blah. Then she talked/complained about her parents and what they wanted for her. it felt like a circle of nothing. "The wheels on the bus go round and round..."
This may work for you, but it did not work for me.