First, I like Westerns and I'm always up to try a new one out.
Second, I really don't like ragging on authors because ANYONE that can get to "The End" of their writing a novel and get it published gets mad props in my world. So I'll try not to be too hard on the mysterious author.
Because you see, this book wasn't written by William W. Johnstone, he died. If you read the title page you get this:
"...the Johnstone family is working with a carefully selected writer to organize and complete Mr. Johnstone's outlines and many unfinished manuscripts to create additional novels..."
and..
"This novel was inspired by Mr. Johnstone's superb storytelling."
Well the whole book is a mess of love stories gone wrong and missed character opportunities.
The Pinkerton agent Hatie was the biggest opportunity missed. She's a frickin Pinkerton and a lady and someone that tracked Apache's with her dad as a kid - AWESOME backstory. But she's written like a spoiled teenage girl that is kinda stupid. She could have CARRIED the story if she was more like Ripley or Leia or Sarah Connor (T2). Make her strong, smart, kickass and sexy. But well she reads like a little whiny girl the whole time.
It just got tiresome all the women with love issues and the constant relationship discussions and how Slash and Pecos (rough and tough 50 year olds) seem to catch the eye of all the ladies.
Somewhere in all that there was a western heist plot.
Sorry for the downer.
I like Johnstone's books, but I will carefully make sure I read books HE has written, not this ghost-writer.