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This story is about Rian and Carlos. Rian has been labeled "morbidly obese" by her doctor, and so she joins a gym to get her health back on track. Carlos works out there, and is a 40 year old bachelor who doesn't do relationships (where have I heard that one before *rolls eyes*). They have a group dinner with some friends at the gym, and thus starts a I guess you could say fascination with each other.
I always like to try books that explore a heroine who is overweight or heavy just to see if the author can pull it off. I haven't found one that does it totally to my satisfaction, but that is why I gave this book a try. I actually quite liked Rian, she didn't dwell on her weight, and the author didn't spend a lot of time describing her, other than a mention in the book she resembled Mia Tyler, the model. She was funny, witty and ok with her station in life even if she didn't have everything she wanted. She was working out for her health not to be any certain size. I felt this aspect was probably the best part of the book so that is where most of the stars I gave it came from.
If this had just been a book about Rian, strictly from her POV, meeting a great guy (her trainer, more on this in a bit) than it probably would have been a four star read for me, unfortunately the book was also about Carlos, and he had a POV every other chapter and he totally bought the whole book down. He was vain and shallow, it just sucked so much being in his head throughout the book. Not only did we have to hear about his gross thoughts about women or how great he thinks his body is, we also had to constantly be in his confusion on how he could possibly be attracted to someone like Rian, see because he likes slim women, with large breasts (I really need my rolling eyes emojis for this review). These were some of his thoughts:
What in the world is happening to me? I shouldn't be attracted to this woman for any reason except some interesting conversation while our friends ignore us...This woman has caught my eye and I don't understand it. At All."
And there goes my opportunity to get laid. I have no interest in daring smart, motivated women.
Just constant stuff like this, where the author was trying to make him more palatable by saying he always was straight up with women, because he just knew he wasn't meant to be in a relationship, he thought he was meant to give pleasure to women, so essentially he thought he was gods gift to women....literally LMAO Anyways, he just came off like the creepy guys at the gym me and my friends avoid when we go work out, which we certainly don't try to get their attention, we try to make sure we get to our cars before ending up in their trunks. I will give the author credit that it wasn't JUST her looks he was not understanding his attraction with, but also because she was smart and had depth which meant she would want more from him then one night. I guess my problem is there was never any moment that bought him down a peg or two to show you why he learned being shallow and vain are not good traits, it was framed more that Rian was just special and she changed him. I would have wanted to see him have some character development to give some depth to his 180 of wanting a relationship.
Overall though I just never bought his 180 of wanting a relationship, there was no finesse to the turnaround. Also they don't even spend more than dinner together by 60%, but yet he is consumed by thoughts of her, and she of him. I had no idea why she liked him other than his looks. There is a whole plot where she ends up working for him, it all just was weak. I sensed no true chemistry between them, no sexual tension was developed, and the sex scene was fade to black probably because the author didn't know how to write a love scene between them. I honestly think she didn't know how to mingle these two character prototypes together romantically, a plus size heroine with a manwhore, which is why they barely had any time together before the book was over.
This brings me to Abel, her trainer at the gym, he should have been the hero. They had chemistry, banter, he was sweet, and wasn't a manwhore. Lost opportunity!
One other aspect I didn't like, creepy Carlos slept with a women after meeting Rian (a no no for me on top of everything else) who he referred later to as a "dead fish in the sack", this guy is such a catch *blank stare into the distance* Anyways Rebecca was one of those OW characters designed to show how the hero treats the heroine differently, he even referred to as a "loose woman" IT IS 2019, STOP THIS! Jeez, a woman doing the exact shit he is doing isn't LOOSE she is just having fun the way he can, you don't have to bring the heroine down to calling petty names and make the hero look like a jerk to show he likes the heroine more, maybe you should have had them interact prior to 60% and that wouldn't have been needed! They have a whole fight over this woman when they barely had talked prior to her entering the story. Also just this constant need to have OW drama, the ability for the hero to be able to have sex to fulfill needs, but the heroine not having had sex in years. Why is it always that way? Why can't authors just write about normal people who have had lives and sex lives? Why do they always have to fit into these stereotypical boxes of how men and women have sex?
Anyways, I would not recommend the book if you want romance, or if you want safe. If you want to maybe see what could have been of an awesome female character in a different plot and you have KU, it might be worth it.