"The gloved hand responds by squeezing on the trigger. The gunshot is deafening and in split seconds, the bullet makes impact, mangles the woman's face and send her chair falling backward as her lifeless body slams against the floor. Denver drips the controller to the ground, turns his head, and vomits."
Not me sat here disappointed that this was not a thriller about chocolate eggs 🙄🙄
(PSA - this is a joke)
My thoughts on this one were great story, poor execution.
The premise was really good. It was giving me Die Hard 3 vibes, where instead of the bad guy making the cop play Simon Says, he gives them clues through a computer game.
I feel like this story had so much potential, but unfortunately, it just didn't hit the mark for me. The author states at the beginning that this started off as a screenplay, and honestly, it makes sense because, at times, it still reads a little like a screenplay. My biggest issue was the fact that the whole thing just felt kind of rushed. I mean, it's 198 pages, and there's only so much you can fit into that many pages. It felt like there was just too much being shoved into this story, and it ended up falling a little flat. I would love it if the author came back to this and stretched it out into a full-length novel because I think it would end up being so much better.
One other little thing that I didn't like was that when the little flashbacks happened, there was no clear indication that we've suddenly gone back in time. Not a big issue, but slightly frustrating.
Overall, it's not a bad book, and if you're looking for a quick, easy read, definitely give this one a go.