The Poe Consequence

by Keith Steinbaum

After the death of an innocent bystander in a drive-by shooting, the two rival street gangs responsible for his murder soon face an Edgar Allan Poe inspired vow of revenge from beyond the grave.

Genres: Horror, Thriller

313 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 28, 2017

About the author

THE POE CONSEQUENCE:

WINNER - 2021 Book Excellence Awards for Best Fiction novel

WINNER 2022 Maincrest Media Awards in the Supernatural genre category

WINNER - 2024 American Fiction Awards in the Horror:Supernatural/Paranormal category

WINNER - 2024 Global Book Awards for Suspense Action Fiction

Premise:
After the drive-by shooting of an innocent bystander, the two gangs responsible for his murder face an Edgar Allan Poe inspired vow of revenge from beyond the grave.

“Keith Steinbaum crafts one of those thrillers that resolutely refuses to let go until you have read the last sentence. Then you want to read it again."

- TheBookCommentary.com

YOU SAY GOODBYE:

WINNER for the Fiction/Intrigue category in TopShelf magazine's 2020 Book of the Year competition.

FINALIST - Book Excellence Awards for Mystery

WINNER 2022 Maincrest Media Awards Mystery category

WINNER 2024 Global Book Awards for Traditional Detective Mysteries

Premise:
The murder of an ex-rock star’s girlfriend leads a detective to conclude that the perpetrator is not only a renowned serial killer, but probably somebody the singer knows.

"One of the most touching and inspiring crime thrillers you'll ever read."
- Donald Richard, TopShelf Reviews

"The difference between Steinbaum's two novels is almost night and day, yet each provides readers with a depth of complexity that is beyond the norm and originality."
- GABixler Reviews

IN LIEU OF FLOWERS - release date 3/26/24

WINNER - sub-category of the 2024 Shelley Paranormal Fiction Chanticleer International Book Awards

FINALIST - 2024 American Fiction Book Awards

BRONZE MEDALIST - Global Book Awards

WINNER of the 2026 Rising Reader Choice Award

Premise:
There are over 300,000 gravesites in Evergreen Cemetery, and all of the occupants are resting in peace. Except for two. One with a warning to give. The other who the warning is about.

"Keith Steinbaum crafts a thoroughly engrossing horror saga that moves between worlds and purposes to draw readers into darkness similar to what classics such as Dracula achieved."
-D. Donovan, Sr. Reviewer, Midwest Book Reviews

For more information about the author and his books visit:http://www.keithsteinbaum.com

Reviews

[Briar's Reviews · Rating 5 out of 5]

Keith Steinbaum’s The Poe Consequence is a compelling mix of supernatural suspense and deep emotional exploration. After a tragic drive-by shooting, the ghost of an innocent victim embarks on a chilling Edgar Allan Poe-inspired revenge mission against two rival street gangs. What could have been a simple revenge story quickly evolves into something much more profound, as the book tackles heavy themes like grief, trauma, racism, and loss. With its fast-paced narrative and Poe-inspired atmosphere, the story keeps you hooked from start to finish, blending horror and mystery with a literary flair that will satisfy fans of both genres.

What sets The Poe Consequence apart is not only its gripping plot but its emotional depth. Steinbaum explores the complex impact of violence and loss, delving into the struggles of the characters with nuance and sensitivity. The writing is accessible, making it easy to get lost in the story, while the inclusion of Edgar Allan Poe references adds a unique layer of intellectual intrigue. Although the book touches on difficult topics like gang violence and systemic racism, it never feels exploitative, instead offering a thought-provoking experience. This book is a fantastic read for anyone looking for a story that’s as emotionally resonant as it is thrilling.

Five out of five stars.

I received this book for free from the author, Keith Steinbaum, in exchange for an honest review.

[Autumn · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received this book to give an honest review.

First let me say yes there is references to Edgar Allen Poe but you do not have to fully understand Poe's way of writing to read this story. Two brothers start this book off Kevin and Warren. Warren is very much into Poe and into psychics which I think is pretty amazing when he gets a reading he doesn't want to hear it all the way through which can be expected especially when it says he will be dying. When the unthinkable happens Warren's son Seth is all alone besides his Uncle Kevin who has no clue how to take care of a young boy. We see how Seth holds a lot of hatred in his heart for Mexicans because his father was killed in front of him by two rival Mexican gangs. Seth eventually learns to let go of things but it takes time not only for him to understand not everyone is the same, but to heal properly.
Kevin turns to the bottle that is until a very young Mexican-American woman catches his eye. Veronica has her own hidden past something that is very troubling and you feel for her on so many levels especially when the rape scene occurs. Eventually we learn that the two rival gang members the Diablos and the Lobos are dying left and right from their heart being turned cold. It is a rare case that has everyone baffled until eventually Kevin and Seth put it all together the person or thing that is doing this believes to be doing the right thing.
I honestly did not want to put this book down I was very intrigued on how Poe was woven into the story line. I enjoyed the Mexican slang through out the book and found myself attempting to say some of the words.
There is a lot of cussing and a rape scene that makes you get the chills and want to hurt the person involved but you got to tell yourself it is a book there will be justice somewhere down the line.
Overall a very enjoyable book that has us readers learn that you shouldn't judge everyone just by the wrongs of those of the same race, not only that but love will find you even from beyond the grave.

[Geza Tatrallyay · Rating 5 out of 5]

In The Poe Consequence, author Keith Steinbaum connects his interest in poetry and the tales of Edgar Allen Poe with his research into the violent lives of the young LatInos who end up in the gangs of Los Angeles to weave a mystery horror tale of retribution from beyond the grave. After a frightening consultation with a Tarot card reader in New Orleans, Professor Warren Palmer—a lover of Poe’s stories and poems—is accidentally killed in a botched robbery that turns into gangland warfare. He leaves behind an orphan son, Seth, who as a result hates all Latinos, until he slowly develops a respect and admiration for Veronica, his beautiful Latina tutor, with whom his uncle Kevin, his guardian, ends up falling in love. In the meantime, the LA police are puzzled by a series of strange heart attack deaths that plague the two gangs involved in Warren’s death, always coupled with a gangland murder and always at 4 am in the morning. Kevin and Seth, with the help of Veronica and her gangland member brother, intervene to unravel the mystery of the deaths and to help put an end to them.

Keith Steinbaum shows an impressive knowledge of LA gangland life and weaves a gripping story with strong, well-created characters that carry the plot forward. As someone who does not read many tales that involve beyond the grave actors or events, this reader found the link to Edgar Allen Poe’s stories an engaging ploy and an excellent point of departure. A great read!

[Join the Penguin Resistance! · Rating 5 out of 5]

Review: THE POE CONSEQUENCE by Keith Steinbaum


THE POE CONSEQUENCE is very, very good. No, that's an understatement: the talent with which author Keith Steinbaum creates and maintains multiple levels of meaning, juggling a vast cast of characters, and reaching into the inner recesses of each of these characters, is awe-inspiring! For each character, I felt as if I lived inside that individual, comprehending the character's motivations and understanding the thoughts. Then there is the incredible framework, which makes this a trans-genre novel, even transcending genre limitations. Definitely a Best of its Year, and I will be seeking it out to reread.

[Laura · Rating 2 out of 5]

“The Poe Consequence” is a paranormal thriller set in present day Los Angeles, California. The story centers around an 11 year old boy named Seth Palmer, his father, Warren Palmer, and his uncle, Kevin Palmer.

We begin in New Orleans where Warren, a college poetry professor in L.A. who is obsessed with Edgar Allen Poe’s work, seeks a psychic to tell him if he has gotten a position he applied for at USC. After some searching and divine intervention, he finds Madame Sibilia. During his tarot reading we find out that part of his past is filled with pain. Warren explains that Seth’s mother, Michelle, has died only months ago from cancer. She continues and foretells Warren’s death and explains that after his he will become a restless spirit seeking revenge, and in the process of revenge will become evil. Not wanting to hear anymore, he runs out of her shop before learning the last card of his fortune and jumps on a plane back to L.A.

Days later, Warren and Kevin take Seth to a Dodger’s game and before going home, Warren has to stop at a local market to get aspirin for a building migraine. In the parking lot, on their way out of the store a gang, the North Rampart Lobos, takes Warren’s wallet and threatens them both. While the Lobos are terrorizing them a rival gang, Alvarado Street Diablos, conduct a drive by shooting to exact revenge for the Lobos murdering one of their own. Through the scrambling of bodies and bullets flying, Warren is shot and killed. Now alone, Seth goes to live with his Uncle Kevin who drinks all day and then works nights as a news reporter for the L.A. Times and Daily News.

While we continue to follow Seth and Kevin as they struggle to adjust, young and healthy Lobo’s and Diabol’s are dying of heart attacks. We follow members of each gang as they experience a series of nightmarish symptoms right out of the work’s of Edgar Allen Poe before each heart stops at 4:00 AM. The L.A. police investigate and discover a pattern; a gang related murder has taken place prior to every heart attack. Curious, it’s almost like…revenge.

Keith Steinbaum does an excellent job holding the readers attention as he weaves an emotional tale of a young boy struggling to trust the adults in his life as he tries to make sense of life’s tragedies. I’ve cheered for characters as they overcome their obstacle’s, but the empathy I felt for Seth was more intense than I’ve felt before. I contribute my strong reaction to Seth’s character to the author’s ability to portray the hurt and anger felt by a young boy forced to learn some early lessons in adulthood. As I read, I’m appreciative of the time and thought the author poured into developing his characters. Veronica and Alex are two supporting character’s who come into the lives of the Palmer’s when Seth falls behind in school and begins fighting with some of the Latino students. The story then transforms further and we see a heart warming group of people develop and grow individually as they provide support and encouragement for one another.

The book does fall short in its attempt at involving the paranormal. The concept that a victim of a shooting extends beyond the grave to exact his revenge by using various theatrical themes from the works of Edgar Allen Poe is very ambitious. Unfortunately, the author is unsuccessful at his attempt to develop this concept. It seemed Mr. Steinbaum was content with leaving abstract description of after-life events and trusting the reader to make sense of his concept of revenge turning a spirit evil. To me, it felt incomplete, disjointed and placed too much responsibility on the audience to be a successful part of the book. It would have been more advantageous to leave this concept out of the book all together.

Overall, I enjoyed the story our author was able to tell, but felt the paranormal and spiritual part of the book was neglected.

[Rich Stoehr · Rating 4 out of 5]

Los Angeles gangbangers, vengeful spirits...and Edgar Allen Poe? That couldn't possibly work...could it? As it turns out, it does - and pretty well overall.

When I first read the idea behind The Poe Consequence - a story that blends inner-city gang violence with Poe-inspired vengeance - I pretty much knew I'd have to read it, if only to see how wrong it could go. Imagine my surprise when it turned out to be a book that, while not perfect, mostly overcame the early threat of stereotype and told a cracking good story to boot.

On the surface it's a fairly simple story - a single father, whose wife passed away only months earlier, is caught in the crossfire of two warring gangs in Los Angeles and killed right in front of his young son. Soon after, gang members from both sides of the gun battle that killed Warren start to die of sudden, inexplicable heart attacks - events which leave their hearts literally frozen.

The mystery unravels as Warren's surviving family must deal with their loss, while the police and the gangs try to find out why so many young men are dying. Lives intertwine in unexpected ways, anger gives way to understanding, and the possibility of redemption is at hand - for a price.

And yes, the influence of Poe is felt throughout, though honestly not as strongly as I would have liked. Warren, the murdered father, is teacher and a devotee of Edgar Allen Poe. When his spirit tries to protect his son from beyond the grave, it's in Poe's obsession with death that he finds inspiration, and each killing incorporates elements of "The Pit and the Pendulum," "The Fall of the House of Usher," and most especially, "The Tell-Tale Heart." And at first, the effect of these references is chilling - but eventually it gets a little repetitive. With such a rich body of work to draw on, why not dig even deeper with it? Bring in the chilling yowls of "The Black Cat" perhaps, or the impending sense of unstoppable doom of "The Masque of the Red Death," or even the deep-seated subtle horror of "The Premature Burial" would have worked well here. And why, in a story fueled by revenge, would the ultimate tale of cold-blooded vengeance - "A Cask of Amontillado" - not even get a mention? While I very much appreciated the references and allusions to Poe's work in The Poe Consequence, I must confess I was hoping for even more.

Still, all in all, The Poe Consequence is a well-crafted book. Keith Steinbaum's writing style isn't flashy, but it serves the story well, only occasionally showing its seams in a piece of clunky dialogue or curious word choice. The characters, who start out feeling a little flat (the angry child, the troubled alcoholic, etc.), grow past their stereotype into people with dimension, the capacity to change, and with a life beyond the pages. The story is paced well and ends well, satisfying without pandering too much to the reader.

It was an audacious concept, for sure - one I was ready to think wouldn't work at all. Keith Steinbaum's trick in blending the subtle darkness of Edgar Allen Poe with the brash violence of L.A. street gangs shouldn't have worked - but somehow, it did.

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I received a free copy of The Poe Consequence for the purpose of reviewing.

[Sadie Forsythe · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was an interesting book. It held my attention. I thought the writing was perfectly passable and I only noticed a few editing mistakes (mostly missing spaces, oddly). So, a solid middle of the road read.

However, it did feel very much like an indie book, if you know what I mean. If you read a lot of indies you probably do and if you don't I'm not sure how to explain it to you. They often have a certain feel to them. The stories often have a certain blunt, straightforwardness. Not necessarily inelegance, at least not in this case, but things move along in very plodding, determined ways. They are heavy on the tell instead of show. Emotions tend to be shallow or stated instead of experienced. Flashbacks are used a lot. Names and titles are often used too frequently. That's especially apparent here where names are Face, Swat, King, and such. Stories often have moral themes or lessons that are heavy handed. 'Please' seems to be over used and people are often too polite. Conversations are often stilted or to abbreviated.

Similarly, but I think deserving of its own point; the bad guy is often a rapist. Even when there are numerous bad men in a book, if you want to find THE bad man look to see who is sexually abusing a woman. Apparently rape has become a flag for true evilness. It's like a secret book code or something. But it's so overused as to have become cliché and meaningless. As a package, all of this becomes recognizably indie. Not bad necessarily, but recognizable.

I thought Steinbaum did a nice job of showing Seth's devastation and trouble adjusting. But the depiction of the Latino gangs, gang culture and language couldn't have been a whiter middle class imitation of it if the author had set out to write a satire. It didn't come across as natural or real at all. Further, I found the frequent use of Spanish distracting. It never seemed to blend into what should have been a natural mesh of the two languages. It felt gimmicky. There was a mild spiritual/religious undertone, but not enough to chafe.

All in all a decent read.

[Bobbie · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book is not like any other I've read. I'd classify it as thriller/mystery/ horror. It begins when a man Warren goes to New Orleans and goes down an alley way to see a fortune teller though he doesn't really believe in these things. She reads his Tarot cards and gives him an extremely grim destiny. She tells him not long from now he's going to come into an extremely violent situation that will end tragically. with this man who goes to New Orleans and while there goes to visit a fortune teller. She does not give him a pleasant reading. In fact, she tells him not long from now he's going to be in a dangerous situation that leads to tragedy. And there is where our story begins. The paranormal horror is indeed horrifying but yet fascinating in its connection with Poe. I felt like I was watching a horror movie yet covering one eye and then uncovering it to see what's going on. Steinbaum writes this tale cleverly, and I will definitely read more of his books!

[Jneener · Rating 4 out of 5]

A gritty, well researched, well written book by a good friend of mine.

[Tucker · Rating 4 out of 5]

I closed The Poe Consequence by Keith Steinbaum and just sat there for a few minutes.

Not because I was confused.
Not because I didn’t understand what I had read.

But because I felt like I had just witnessed something larger than a story.

At its core, this novel begins as a gang revenge thriller set in Los Angeles two rival gangs locked in generational hatred, a drive-by gone wrong, and an innocent life lost. But what unfolds afterward is where this book separates itself from typical crime fiction. The retaliation doesn’t come from another gang. It comes from something… else. Something precise. Something intentional. Something that arrives at the exact same time of day, every time.

That detail alone sent chills down my spine.

But what truly elevates this novel is that the supernatural force is not random horror. It feels like consequence personified. It feels like judgment. It feels like the embodiment of a question the book relentlessly asks:

What happens when violence finally meets something stronger than itself?

Steinbaum doesn’t glorify gang culture. He dissects it. He forces readers to examine why someone becomes violent, how hatred is inherited, and whether redemption is even possible in a system built on retaliation. The psychological layers here are intense. Every act feels like it carries spiritual weight.

The integration of Edgar Allan Poe themes adds a literary sophistication I didn’t expect. The influence isn’t superficial it deepens the atmosphere and gives the supernatural elements intellectual grounding. There’s a haunting rhythm to the narrative that mirrors Poe’s moral darkness and obsession with guilt.

And then there’s the emotional core: the young boy who despises gangs yet attempts to save a gang member. That storyline pierced me. It introduces the possibility that compassion can interrupt destiny that maybe cycles of violence aren’t as permanent as they seem. The spiritual undertones regarding souls, prophecy, and eternal consequence make this more than a thriller. It becomes a meditation on fate, morality, and hope.

What struck me most is how balanced the novel is. It explores darkness without drowning in it. It acknowledges brutality but never celebrates it. It asks uncomfortable questions about racism, loyalty, masculinity, and generational despair yet it also plants seeds of transformation.

The pacing is relentless, but the ideas linger long after the final page.

This is not a casual read. It demands thought. It demands emotional participation. It demands that the reader confront the cost of revenge not just physically, but spiritually.

If you’re expecting a simple supernatural horror novel, you’ll be surprised. This is a social commentary wrapped in suspense. A moral inquiry disguised as a gang thriller. A story about what happens when hate collides with something unstoppable.

And perhaps most haunting of all it asks whether enemies can ever unite when faced with a greater reckoning.

By the end, I wasn’t just thinking about the characters.

I was thinking about consequence itself.

Highly recommended for readers who want intensity, depth, and something that lingers in the mind long after the last page.

[Brannon]

The Poe Consequence operates on two planes simultaneously: the visible world of gang rivalry and the invisible architecture of moral reckoning. What initially presents as a retaliatory act between rival factions slowly evolves into something far more philosophical a meditation on consequence that feels almost sentient.

The recurring deaths at the exact same time of day are one of the most unsettling structural choices in the novel. This repetition transforms horror into ritual. It removes randomness and replaces it with inevitability. Violence, in this world, no longer feels chaotic it feels scheduled. That precision is psychologically disturbing because it suggests design rather than coincidence.

What struck me most profoundly was the inversion of power. The Diablos and the Lobos are accustomed to operating through intimidation and control. Yet as the supernatural presence closes in, fear migrates. The predators become hyper-aware prey. Steinbaum subtly asks: What happens when those who inflict terror must live inside it?

This novel doesn’t glorify violence it dissects it. And by the end, I was left contemplating whether justice, when denied by society, manifests in other forms.

This is not just a thriller. It is a philosophical reckoning wrapped in suspense.

[Amy Ingalls · Rating 2 out of 5]

I won this book in a giveaway.

I am struggling to review this. Usually a book takes me 2-3 days tops to get through. This one took me 28. In the beginning I was struggling to get into it. I was reading it simply because I felt bad that I won it and it had been sitting on my Kindle for so long. I ignored it to read other books.

However, somewhere around the time Veronica joins the book I started to get interested. The story was still a bit clunky but I was beginning to car about the characters. However, the author's writing style kept pulling me back out of the story.

. . . another swallow and cherished the deep rich texture of the golden nectar as it swan dived from the back of his tongue into his belly.

. . . Face's hourglass of patience trickled down to its final few grains.

Honestly, what is that? So even though I started to care about Veronica and Seth and Face I wasn't really pulled in. I also didn't understand the instant love between Veronica and Seth. I didn't get why she agreed to date him, and we didn't get to see their relationship develop-- we were just told that they were in love.

I love Poe and this idea of coming back and using his poems for revenge but I do agree with another reviewer-- why not go further into his body of work? There was so much to draw from.

So I am rambling, because the book annoyed me but I kind of liked the second half. It was like watching a TV show that you know is cheesy but you stick with it to the end because it hooked your interest just enough to make you want to see how it ends. Or a B movie. Yep, this book is a B movie.

[Saralyn Richard · Rating 5 out of 5]

The characters are what resonate most with me in this roller coaster ride of a thriller. So many people today have a good-guy-bad-guy mentality, but this book shows us that no one is all good or all evil. Our lives can turn in a moment, and we are all subject to being overcome by negative emotions, unless we find the way to rise above them. Steinbaum takes on the difficult topic of gang violence and turns it into a love story. Brilliant!

[Michele · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is definitely a book you will not want to put down! It combines the supernatural with everyday events. At least the everyday events in the lives of ruthless gangs determined to kill each other off. And the lives of those who get caught up in between. I can totally understand why it won an award as a Supernatural Thriller Book of the Year.

Warren, a teacher, had just lost his wife and was attempting to get his young son and himself through it. He decides to go see a psychic in New Orleans who tells him some pretty disturbing things which he decides to ignore and walks out before she is totally finished, but he does tell his twin brother some of what was said. Warren is an authority on Edgar Allen Poe-he can recite many of the works verbatim. I don't know if any of you have read any of Poe's work--it is pretty dark and gruesome stuff! Well, Warren stops in a store to get some aspirin and gets in the middle of the shootout between the two rival gangs. His son was with him and saw his Dad murdered. Seth went to live with his Dad's twin and strange things started to happen which the police could not figure out! (NO, I'm not telling you what-----).

Seth had some serious problems and began to act out-completely understandable and was finally introduced to a tutor who was able to help him. This young woman just happened to be the sister of one of the gang members. Through her, Seth was finally able to reconcile that not all Mexicans are bad people and starts the healing process. Meanwhile gang members are still dying in a very strange way-but only after they have killed someone in the rival gang-it happens at precisely the same time. The police really can't figure this out--no fingerprints., no nothing!

If I go much further I will give the plot away and I really do not want to do that-just know that good prevails over evil in every way possible!The Poe Consequence

[Darcia Helle · Rating 4 out of 5]

Taking on Poe is a tough challenge, but Keith Steinbaum handles it well. The subject is dark, as we look at death and inner city gangs. But we're also given glimmers of hope and redemption, which keeps this story from veering into unbearable despair.

A familiarity with Poe's writing is not required in order to enjoy this book. The character's focus here is on a few of Poe's most popular works, with specific bits woven continuously throughout the story. Someone unfamiliar with Poe might overlook a few references with the murders along the way but, as I said, it shouldn't alter how this story is understood.

The surprise for me was the underlying theme of prejudice. Steinbaum dives right in and handles this incredibly well. The story never gets preachy. In fact, the realism is striking. We aren't handed a magical, fairy tale solution. Instead, we're shown the injustice of it in a way that makes it understandable, almost forgivable, but never tolerable.

The stumbling points for me are relatively minor. There are a lot of characters, many with point of view parts, that we get to know in a fleeting moment before we move on to the next. While I appreciate Steinbaum's attempt here, I think development of the important characters suffered because of the sheer volume of characters we were expected to get to know.

Mostly, I wanted more from Warren. His character is central to this entire story, yet we didn't get to stay with his point of view. I don't want to give any spoilers, so I'll just say that I think a continued POV from Warren, with a little less from minor characters, would have added more depth and power to this story.

Overall, this is a dark but thoughtful piece.

[Angela · Rating 4 out of 5]

I was drawn to The Poe Consequence because the premise sounded unusual. A story about rival gangs in Los Angeles mixed with supernatural horror and a prophetic element is not something you see every day. After finishing the book, I can say that the story does a fascinating job blending these elements into something that feels both suspenseful and thoughtful.

The novel begins by focusing on the long standing rivalry between the Alvarado Street Diablos and the North Rampart Lobos. These gangs control parts of the neighborhood and their hostility toward each other has shaped the lives of many people in the area. The conflict has already taken lives, and the anniversary of one of those deaths becomes the starting point for the events of the book.

The Diablos decide to carry out a drive by attack as a way of honoring their fallen friend and sending a message to their rivals. Unfortunately, the plan does not go the way they expect. Instead of hitting their intended target, the shooting results in the death of an innocent bystander.

That moment immediately sets a tragic tone. It highlights the way violence spreads through a community and harms people who have nothing to do with the conflict. The emotional weight of that event stays with the reader as the story continues.

Only a few hours later something even more disturbing occurs. The gang member responsible for the shooting dies under circumstances that no one can explain. The death is strange, frightening, and unlike anything anyone in the story has ever seen before.

At first it seems like a bizarre coincidence. Then another death happens. Then another.

Each victim belongs to one of the two rival gangs. Even more unsettling is the pattern that begins to emerge. Every death happens at exactly the same time of day.

This detail creates a strong sense of mystery and dread. The characters begin to realize that something beyond their understanding may be targeting them.

One aspect of the novel that impressed me was the way it avoided turning the gang members into simple villains. While the story does not ignore their violent behavior, it also shows their humanity. Some of them struggle with guilt, fear, and the realization that their actions may have led to consequences they cannot escape.

Another important part of the narrative involves a young boy who despises gangs but becomes connected to the unfolding events in a surprising way. His attempt to save the life of a gang member is driven by deeply personal reasons tied to the spiritual fate of someone he loves.

This storyline adds an emotional depth that balances the darker elements of the plot.

There is also a mysterious psychic whose prophecy, delivered earlier in New Orleans, becomes increasingly important as the story progresses. At first it seems disconnected from the events in Los Angeles, but eventually the connection becomes clearer.

By the end of the book the different pieces of the story begin to come together in a way that feels both surprising and meaningful.

What I appreciated most about The Poe Consequence is that it is not simply a horror story or a crime drama. It is also a story about consequences, redemption, and the possibility that even people who have made terrible choices might still have the opportunity to change.

The book explores darkness, but it also leaves room for hope.I was drawn to The Poe Consequence because the premise sounded unusual. A story about rival gangs in Los Angeles mixed with supernatural horror and a prophetic element is not something you see every day. After finishing the book, I can say that the story does a fascinating job blending these elements into something that feels both suspenseful and thoughtful.

The novel begins by focusing on the long standing rivalry between the Alvarado Street Diablos and the North Rampart Lobos. These gangs control parts of the neighborhood and their hostility toward each other has shaped the lives of many people in the area. The conflict has already taken lives, and the anniversary of one of those deaths becomes the starting point for the events of the book.

The Diablos decide to carry out a drive by attack as a way of honoring their fallen friend and sending a message to their rivals. Unfortunately, the plan does not go the way they expect. Instead of hitting their intended target, the shooting results in the death of an innocent bystander.

That moment immediately sets a tragic tone. It highlights the way violence spreads through a community and harms people who have nothing to do with the conflict. The emotional weight of that event stays with the reader as the story continues.

Only a few hours later something even more disturbing occurs. The gang member responsible for the shooting dies under circumstances that no one can explain. The death is strange, frightening, and unlike anything anyone in the story has ever seen before.

At first it seems like a bizarre coincidence. Then another death happens. Then another.

Each victim belongs to one of the two rival gangs. Even more unsettling is the pattern that begins to emerge. Every death happens at exactly the same time of day.

This detail creates a strong sense of mystery and dread. The characters begin to realize that something beyond their understanding may be targeting them.

One aspect of the novel that impressed me was the way it avoided turning the gang members into simple villains. While the story does not ignore their violent behavior, it also shows their humanity. Some of them struggle with guilt, fear, and the realization that their actions may have led to consequences they cannot escape.

Another important part of the narrative involves a young boy who despises gangs but becomes connected to the unfolding events in a surprising way. His attempt to save the life of a gang member is driven by deeply personal reasons tied to the spiritual fate of someone he loves.

This storyline adds an emotional depth that balances the darker elements of the plot.

There is also a mysterious psychic whose prophecy, delivered earlier in New Orleans, becomes increasingly important as the story progresses. At first it seems disconnected from the events in Los Angeles, but eventually the connection becomes clearer.

By the end of the book the different pieces of the story begin to come together in a way that feels both surprising and meaningful.

What I appreciated most about The Poe Consequence is that it is not simply a horror story or a crime drama. It is also a story about consequences, redemption, and the possibility that even people who have made terrible choices might still have the opportunity to change.

The book explores darkness, but it also leaves room for hope.

[Shani · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is the perfect read for those that love gritty thrillers mixed with a touch of supernatural/paranormal. Kevin is a man who has been pushed into the role of a parent after his brother passes. Through his grief he turns to the wrong things to help him deal. In some ways he’s neglectful to Seth, his nephew. Seth has a lot of anger and resentment, and rightfully so. He doesn’t understand why these things happened to him and his family. Though it's difficult to wander through the chaotic feelings they both are dealing with, they come through it as better people.

Kevin meets a young woman named Veronica that has a very hidden past. One that can cause even greater issues than she’s been handed through a very traumatic and violent experience. he’s drawn to her but doesn’t quite understand why. Her connection to those involved in their own past is concerning.

When the two factions that were at war and caused the death of his brother start dying off, Warren is stumped. Together he and Seth venture out to find out what “being” is causing the hearts of the members to die off and drop like flies. They’re determined to find out the truth.

The whole book was beyond intriguing and fantastic! I will say there are some extremely hard scenes to deal with. There are sexual assault and detailed violence that may be a trigger for some. Overall though, well written, thought out, and fabulous!

[Romaine Heart · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Poe Consequence is a suspenseful thriller set in modern day California involving two rival gangs with a touch of paranormal.
One tarot card changed the lives of a family.
The Poe Consequence is a  tragic story of what twelve year boy had to endure will break your heart.
Seth witnessed his father's murder one night by Latino gang members. He begins to struggle in school when Latinos start bullying him. It's hard for Seth to trust adults.
Gangbangers are dropping like flies. They are mysteriously dying with no traces of foul play.
Uncle Kevin's girlfriend Veronica who is Latino and her brother Alex show Seth that not all Latinos are bad.
Alex may have lead a bad life as a gang member but he was wise and had a good heart.
I felt the characters emotions throughout the story. Pain. Revenge. Redemption. Trust.
King and Alex's fight scene had my heart racing. Loved it!
Poe's references of literature in the story was the cherry on top of the cake.
Found a new author and will be reading more of his masterpieces.
Thank you Hidden Gems and the author for a fabulous complimentary copy in exchange for my honest opinion.

[MELODY · Rating 4 out of 5]

The Poe Consequence is based around the Palmer family – 11 year old Seth whose mother has recently died, his dad Warren and his uncle Kevin. The story starts with Warren visiting a Psychic and you feel the foreboding. Shortly after Warren is killed the gang members start having heart attacks, somehow their hearts become frozen. The gangs and the police are trying to figure out what is happening. And the story takes you along for a ride.

If you have read any Poe – you will feel the parallels in through the novel. Mr. Steinbaum’s writing is well thought and his research into Poe’s stories is evident. I enjoyed the story very much – it dragged a bit in the beginning but the undertaking of translating some of Poe’s works into a modern story is done quite well.

If you are a fan of Poe or looking for a good mystery with a bit of paranormal flair then I strongly recommend this one.

[Trish Meade · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hi Bookies! This book was selected for my Book Club, because 1. Our member knew the author & 2. She thought it would be fun to have him come to the next meeting to hear our reviews.

When I first started to read the book I thought, "Okay, just what I want to read... a book about gang members!" My second thought was, "Get over your Lilly white self and start reading." After all I didn't want to let the Book Club down! It didn't take long before I was totally drawn into the story and the mystery that unfolds. I definitely am happy I continued to read The Poe Consequence and would recommend it highly to you Bookies out there in Goodreads land.

It was so much fun to actually meet Keith at our Book Club meeting and ask him questions regarding the characters and why he went in some of the directions he chose. It is a very well written piece of work and it gets 5 stars from me.

[Jay Williams · Rating 5 out of 5]

While this book has elements of the supernatural, none of them are unrealistic or detract from the great story. It provides a broad reflection on human nature and how it impacts the world around us both good and bad. A dire fortune from a strange seer in New Orleans leads twin brothers into a wild confrontation with all the evil in the gangs of LA and the good that manages to survive in that environment. If you have experienced and enjoyed the works of Edgar Alan Poe, you will appreciate the many references in this story. The style of writing tends toward big words, not always apt in the context. Perhaps that is meant to mimic Poe, but he does a much better job of using old English words and structure. The plot was clever and interesting, and ended in a "feel-good" conclusion. I received an advanced copy of this book from Hidden Gems, and found it worthy of a review.

[Cyndi · Rating 4 out of 5]

Warren and his son Seth stop at a convenience store after a baseball game so Warren can get something to help his pounding headache. In the parking lot, they are attacked by one gang, while another gang is plotting their revenge against this gang. They get caught in a drive by shooting and Warren dies trying to save his son. This event starts strange killings within both gangs. Every time one of these gang members kills another gang member, they end up suffering a very unique death that no one can explain.

The police and gang members are all trying to figure out these unexplained deaths, while Seth and his Uncle have to deal with their loss. These two main stories are connected in many ways and I love how the author brings everything together. This is a great paranormal thriller!

[Richard Howard · Rating 1 out of 5]

There are poor books, there are bad books and there are terrible books. Then there are books so excruciatingly awful that, as you keep reading, you fear a portal will open up and you'll be sucked into hell. 'The Poe Consequence' is such a book. Marketed as a paranormal thriller it is largely an endless description of two Latino gangs cursing each other and vowing vengeance. The paranormal element appears at the beginning and towards the end but in between the reader is subjected to page after page where nothing happens of any relevance to the story. Oh, there are also some of the most embarrassingly bad sex scenes ever set down. There is maybe enough content here to make a half decent short story but that content is stretched and stretched to form a truly terrible novel.

[Cair-Paravel Emyth Brenn De Luney Morrow · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was really good. EAP is one of my favourite authors and he has taken essential pieces from works by Poe, incorporating it into a marvellous story. Gangs, murder, love, trauma and so much more are packed into this wonderful ghost story. I love it.

I received a free copy from Hidden Gems Books in return for an honest review.

[Eunice Fuller · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was very good. I liked the real life stuff mixed with paranormal. 2 rival gangs and trying to save lives. Good job

[Jonathan · Rating 5 out of 5]

When I first started reading The Poe Consequence, I expected a gritty crime story about gang rivalry in Los Angeles. What I didn’t expect was a novel that would slowly evolve into something far more haunting and thought-provoking. This is the kind of book that begins in a familiar place—territory disputes, loyalty between friends, and the cycle of revenge that often traps young people in violent neighborhoods—but then gradually transforms into a supernatural mystery that forces both the characters and the reader to ask deeper questions about fate, guilt, and consequences.

The story centers on two rival gangs: the Alvarado Street Diablos and the North Rampart Lobos. Their hostility toward each other has been simmering for years, but it becomes even more intense after the murder of one of the Diablos’ closest members. In honor of their fallen friend, a drive-by retaliation is planned. What is supposed to be an act of loyalty quickly spirals into tragedy when the attack goes wrong and an innocent bystander is killed instead.

At that point the novel takes a chilling turn.

Only hours after the shooting, the person responsible for pulling the trigger suffers a bizarre and horrifying death—one that cannot easily be explained. Soon afterward, more deaths follow, each one stranger than the last. What makes these events truly unsettling is the pattern behind them: every death occurs at the exact same time of day.

The repetition of that moment becomes almost like a ticking clock hanging over the characters. Every time the hour approaches, the tension builds. Someone knows another death might be coming, but no one understands why or how it’s happening.

What impressed me most about the novel is how carefully the supernatural elements are introduced. The author doesn’t rush into the horror. Instead, he allows the mystery to unfold gradually, giving readers time to question whether there might still be a rational explanation. That slow buildup creates an atmosphere that feels genuinely unsettling.

Another powerful aspect of the story is the way it humanizes characters who might easily have been portrayed as simple stereotypes. The gang members are not just violent figures moving through the plot; they are young men shaped by their environment, loyalty, and fear. Their reactions to the unexplained deaths—confusion, denial, anger, and eventually terror—make the story feel grounded even as it moves into supernatural territory.

The novel also introduces a young boy whose hatred of gangs comes from painful personal experiences. His storyline adds an emotional counterbalance to the violence and introduces the possibility that the events unfolding in Los Angeles might be connected to something much larger. As pieces of a mysterious prophecy begin to surface, the narrative expands beyond gang rivalry and becomes something closer to a spiritual or moral puzzle.

There is also a fascinating thread involving a psychic prophecy delivered earlier in New Orleans. At first it feels disconnected from the gang conflict, but as the story progresses, the connection between that prophecy and the unfolding deaths becomes increasingly clear. This element adds a layer of inevitability to the narrative, as if the characters have stepped into a chain of events that may have been set in motion long before they realized it.

What ultimately makes The Poe Consequence memorable is the way it blends darkness with reflection. The novel explores violence not just as an action but as something that leaves spiritual and emotional echoes. The title itself begins to feel symbolic—the idea that every action carries consequences that may extend far beyond what we can see.

By the time the story reaches its final chapters, the novel feels less like a traditional horror story and more like a meditation on justice, fate, and redemption. The supernatural elements remain chilling, but they also serve a deeper purpose: forcing the characters to confront the impact of their choices.

In the end, The Poe Consequence stands out because it refuses to stay within a single genre. It is part crime drama, part supernatural thriller, and part moral reflection. Readers who enjoy stories that blend suspense with philosophical questions will likely find themselves drawn into its dark and mysterious world. And once that strange clock of recurring deaths begins ticking, it becomes almost impossible to stop reading until the truth behind it is finally revealed.

[Lu · Rating 5 out of 5]

I picked up The Poe Consequence not really knowing what to expect. The description mentioned gangs, supernatural horror, and some kind of mysterious force tied to fate. That combination alone was enough to make me curious. After finishing the book I can honestly say it turned out to be a much more layered and thoughtful story than I initially anticipated.

At the center of the novel are two rival Los Angeles gangs, the Alvarado Street Diablos and the North Rampart Lobos. Their conflict is not new. These groups have been locked in hostility for years, and the tension between them is part of the environment they live in every day. The story begins with the anniversary of a gang member's death. The Diablos are preparing a retaliatory drive by attack meant to honor their fallen friend and strike back against the Lobos.

What happens instead sets the entire story in motion.

The shooting goes wrong and an innocent bystander ends up dying. That moment alone already carries emotional weight. The tragedy shows how violence spreads far beyond the people who think they are fighting each other. It damages the surrounding community and leaves consequences that nobody planned.

Not long after the incident something far stranger occurs. The shooter dies in a horrifying and unexplainable way. The death is not just unusual but deeply unsettling. Soon more deaths follow and each one shares a disturbing pattern. Every victim belongs to one of the two rival gangs. Even more unsettling is the fact that each death occurs at the exact same time of day.

The mystery surrounding these deaths quickly becomes one of the most gripping aspects of the story. The characters struggle to understand what is happening to them. Is it revenge? Is it something supernatural? Is it punishment for their past actions?

The novel does not rush these questions. Instead it slowly builds tension as more strange events occur. The sense of dread grows with each chapter.

One thing I appreciated while reading was how the author did not treat the gang members as simple stereotypes. It would have been easy to present them as one dimensional villains. Instead the story shows glimpses of their humanity, their fears, and their complicated relationships with each other.

This approach makes the unfolding horror feel more meaningful.

There is also an interesting thread involving a young boy who strongly dislikes gangs yet finds himself in a situation where he must try to save the life of a gang member. His personal struggle becomes an important emotional element in the narrative. His motivations are tied to something deeply personal involving the fate of a loved one's soul.

This aspect of the story adds a surprising layer of spirituality and moral conflict.

Another fascinating piece of the puzzle involves a mysterious psychic whose prophecy was delivered earlier in New Orleans. At first the connection between that prophecy and the gang related events in Los Angeles is not clear. As the story progresses the pieces begin to fit together in unexpected ways.

The supernatural element in this novel is handled carefully. Instead of overwhelming the reader with constant shock moments, the story focuses more on atmosphere and slow building tension.

By the time the book reaches its later chapters the sense of inevitability becomes powerful. The characters realize they may be facing a force that cannot be fought using violence or intimidation.

What makes the novel stand out is the way it explores both darkness and hope at the same time. The gang conflict represents one form of destruction, but the mysterious events force the characters to question the path they have chosen.

In many ways the story becomes a reflection on consequences and choices.

Overall I found The Poe Consequence to be an intriguing blend of crime drama, supernatural horror, and philosophical reflection. It asks interesting questions about fate, redemption, and the ripple effects of violence in a community.

It was not the type of book I expected when I first started reading, but it ended up being memorable because of its unusual mix of themes and the sense of mystery that runs throughout the entire narrative.

[Kim · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Poe Consequence by Keith Steinbaum stands as a compelling example of how genre fiction can be expanded into a vehicle for deeper philosophical inquiry. While the novel initially presents itself as a story rooted in the familiar territory of gang rivalry and urban conflict, it quickly evolves into a complex narrative that examines the intricate relationship between action, consequence, and the possibility of unseen forces shaping human experience.

The setting of Los Angeles is rendered with a level of detail that enhances both the realism and the thematic depth of the story. Steinbaum captures the fragmentation and tension inherent in a city marked by cultural diversity and disparity, using this environment to underscore the challenges faced by his characters. The rivalry between the Alvarado Street Diablos and the North Rampart Lobos is depicted not as a simplistic confrontation, but as a multifaceted conflict influenced by history, identity. This nuanced portrayal provides a strong foundation for the novel’s more speculative elements.

Central to the narrative is the phenomenon of the recurring deaths, each occurring at the same precise time of day. This pattern introduces a sense of order that stands in stark contrast to the apparent chaos of the characters’ lives. It suggests the presence of a governing principle—an unseen mechanism that enforces a form of justice or retribution. Steinbaum’s decision to avoid explicit explanation is particularly effective, as it allows the phenomenon to function on multiple levels. It can be interpreted as a literal supernatural force, a symbolic representation of moral consequence, or a combination of both.

The novel’s exploration of consequence is both comprehensive and nuanced. Steinbaum does not limit his focus to immediate outcomes; instead, he considers the broader and often unpredictable ways in which actions can reverberate over time. This perspective is reflected in the structure of the narrative itself, which weaves together multiple threads to illustrate the interconnectedness of events. Each character’s decisions contribute to a larger pattern, reinforcing the idea that individual actions are rarely isolated.

Character development is handled with considerable care, with Steinbaum demonstrating a clear understanding of the complexities of human behavior. The characters are neither wholly virtuous nor entirely flawed; rather, they exist within a spectrum of choices. This balanced portrayal enhances the reader’s engagement, encouraging a more empathetic and thoughtful response to the narrative.

The inclusion of the young boy’s storyline adds a crucial dimension to the novel’s thematic framework. His actions, driven by a desire to prevent further harm, introduce an element of moral clarity that contrasts with the ambiguity surrounding the supernatural events. This contrast serves to highlight the importance of individual agency, suggesting that even within a system governed by larger forces, personal choices remain significant.

From a stylistic perspective, Steinbaum’s prose is characterized by clarity and precision. He employs a straightforward narrative style that allows the story’s complexity to emerge naturally, without reliance on excessive detail or ornamentation. This approach ensures that the reader remains focused on the unfolding events and their implications.

The pacing of the novel is carefully managed, with Steinbaum maintaining a steady progression that balances tension and reflection. The result is a narrative that is both engaging and intellectually stimulating, offering readers a reading experience that is as rewarding as it is thought-provoking.

In summary, The Poe Consequence is a novel that successfully combines strong storytelling with meaningful thematic exploration. Keith Steinbaum has created a work that not only entertains but also invites readers to consider the broader implications of their actions and the systems within which those actions occur. It is a sophisticated and impactful novel that leaves a lasting impression.

[Michael · Rating 5 out of 5]

Keith Steinbaum’s The Poe Consequence is a novel that distinguishes itself not only through its compelling premise but through its deliberate and methodical exploration of consequence as both a narrative engine and a philosophical framework. While the surface narrative centers on the escalating conflict between two rival gangs in Los Angeles the Alvarado Street Diablos and the North Rampart Lobos the deeper architecture of the story reveals a far more intricate design, one that interrogates the nature of causality, justice, and the unseen forces that shape human experience.

What is particularly striking about Steinbaum’s approach is his refusal to rely on conventional genre shortcuts. Rather than presenting the gang rivalry as a simplistic binary of good versus evil, he constructs a morally complex environment in which each character operates within a web of , cultural, and personal pressures. This nuanced portrayal allows the reader to engage with the narrative on a more sophisticated level, recognizing that the violence depicted is not merely an isolated phenomenon but part of a broader systemic reality.

The introduction of the supernatural element the inexplicable deaths that occur at the exact same time each day serves as a pivotal turning point in the narrative. This phenomenon is handled with remarkable restraint, avoiding overt exposition and instead allowing its implications to unfold gradually. The precision of these events introduces a sense of inevitability that permeates the story, suggesting that the characters are subject to a form of cosmic accountability that transcends their immediate understanding. This structural choice is particularly effective, as it reinforces the novel’s central theme without diminishing its sense of mystery.

Another aspect of the novel that merits attention is its exploration of moral agency. While the recurring deaths imply a deterministic framework, Steinbaum carefully balances this with moments that emphasize individual choice. The inclusion of the young boy’s storyline is especially significant in this regard. His attempt to intervene in the cycle of violence introduces an element of hope, suggesting that even within systems governed by seemingly immutable laws, there remains space for ethical action and transformation.

From a stylistic perspective, Steinbaum’s prose is characterized by clarity and precision. He demonstrates a disciplined approach to language, avoiding unnecessary embellishment in favor of direct and effective communication. This restraint enhances the overall impact of the narrative, allowing the thematic elements to emerge organically rather than being imposed upon the reader.

The pacing of the novel is equally commendable. Steinbaum maintains a steady progression, carefully balancing moments of tension with periods of reflection. This rhythm ensures that the reader remains engaged while also providing the necessary space to contemplate the novel’s deeper implications.

In conclusion, The Poe Consequence is a thoughtfully constructed and intellectually engaging novel that succeeds on multiple levels. It is at once a gripping narrative, a nuanced character study, and a philosophical exploration of consequence and accountability. Keith Steinbaum has created a work that not only entertains but also challenges readers to consider the broader implications of their actions, making it a truly memorable and impactful reading experience.

[Steve · Rating 4 out of 5]

The Poe Consequence by Keith Steinbaum is an ambitious and meticulously crafted novel that operates at the intersection of realism and the supernatural, offering readers a narrative that is as engaging as it is thought-provoking. At its core, the story examines the cyclical nature of violence and the far-reaching consequences of human actions, using a blend of grounded storytelling and speculative elements to achieve a powerful and lasting impact.

The novel’s setting in Los Angeles is rendered with a high degree of authenticity, capturing the complexities of a city marked by both diversity and division. Steinbaum’s depiction of the gang rivalry between the Alvarado Street Diablos and the North Rampart Lobos is particularly noteworthy for its depth and nuance. Rather than relying on stereotypes, the author presents a multifaceted portrayal of individuals navigating a challenging and often unforgiving environment. This approach not only enhances the realism of the narrative but also provides a strong foundation for the introduction of its more extraordinary elements.

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The characters in The Poe Consequence are developed with considerable care, each contributing to the narrative’s overall complexity. Steinbaum demonstrates a keen understanding of human behavior, portraying his characters as individuals shaped by a combination of internal desires and external pressures. This balanced approach ensures that their actions feel both authentic and meaningful, adding weight to the novel’s exploration of consequence.

The inclusion of the young boy’s storyline introduces an important counterpoint to the pervasive sense of inevitability. His actions, motivated by a desire to prevent further harm, serve as a reminder that even within a system governed by seemingly rigid rules, there remains the possibility for change. This element of hope is crucial, as it prevents the narrative from becoming overly deterministic and instead highlights the enduring significance of individual agency.

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Ultimately, The Poe Consequence is a novel that succeeds in balancing entertainment with intellectual depth. Keith Steinbaum has crafted a story that not only captivates but also invites readers to consider the broader implications of their actions and the possibility that consequences may extend beyond immediate perception. It is a work that resonates long after the final page has been turned.