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Arc of Radiance/Fall of Radiance #2
Doom Bringers
The Battle of Forest Hill is over. The war for Tarsynium has only just begun. The demons have been defeated in the Emberwood, and Owyn and Zara must travel to the capital city of Tarsys to bring word to the Conclave. However, not everything is as it seems in the city of mages.Assassins lurk in the shadows and whispers of demon plots follow a mysterious—and deadly—cult. The Arc of Radiance is failing, and if the heroes of Forest Hill aren't careful, they may help hasten its demise. The epic adventure continues in Book 2 of the Fall of Radiance series. Perfect for fans of Sabaa Tahir, Sarah J. Maas, and Brandon Sanderson. Grab your copy today!
348 pages, Paperback
First published July 14, 2018
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Blake Arthur Peel
21 books73 followersBlake Arthur Peel has been coming up with stories ever since he was a kid. He inflicted his scribblings on family members and friends throughout his youth, always drawing maps in the back of notebooks and daydreaming when he probably should have been paying attention. It wasn’t until he was out of college that he finally decided to get serious about pursuing his career as a fantasy author.
His favorite stories have always been about good conquering evil, about fantastic worlds and wondrous magic systems. The works that have most inspired him are The Lord of the Rings, The Dragonlance Chronicles, The Riftwar Saga, The Stormlight Archive, and The Wheel of Time, among many others.
Blake was born and raised in Hemet, California. He loves playing games, being outside, and spending time with his wife and two sons.
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His favorite stories have always been about good conquering evil, about fantastic worlds and wondrous magic systems. The works that have most inspired him are The Lord of the Rings, The Dragonlance Chronicles, The Riftwar Saga, The Stormlight Archive, and The Wheel of Time, among many others.
Blake was born and raised in Hemet, California. He loves playing games, being outside, and spending time with his wife and two sons.
Follow him at facebook.com/blakearthurpeel
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April 21, 2021
I am really enjoying this so far.
I am glad I stumbled on it :)
4 stars
I am glad I stumbled on it :)
4 stars
March 1, 2019
So Maloch was defeated at the battle of Forest Hill and whilst the people of Emberwood start to re-build their lives and mourn their many losses, Owyn and Zara are to travel to Tarsys to meet with the Conclave and warn them of the threat which the whole of Tarsynium is facing. On the road back however Owyn and Zara break off their good relations as both are stressed to their limit and once they arrive in Tarsys Zara is raised to the position of full Mage whilst Owyn is taken by a head ranger away from the city. Danger looms all around them and people are killed, and it seems that both the Conclave and the Rangers have been betrayed by one of their own and this is the worst form of betrayal. The Prophet and the Harbingers, a cult of religious zealots who believe in the end of days and who worship the R'laar as Gods are actively working to bring down the Arc of Radiance and usher in a new age. A very exciting and tense novel, full of conspiracy and betrayal but also one of courage and loyalty. Zara is very headstrong and impulsive and never considers the dangers she is exposing herself to, whilst Owyn is a man of integrity who is not afraid to do what he believes to be right and both characters are interesting to follow as they fight on to protect their beloved Kingdom. I love the world building in these novels especially of beautiful Tarsys in all its grandeur and look forward to the next book in the series which is so gripping.
August 18, 2024
Part 2 of this series picks up not long after the end of book 1, and finds our heroes cleaning up the mess left by the demon infestation. Owyn has been trusted with leading a band to take down a Gorgon, and Zara is dealing with the Mages, all of whom are quite proud of her efforts.
It is fascinating to see the comparison between Owyn and Zara from the start of Ranger’s Oath to Doom Bringers, how they have grown as Characters, and that shows a lot in the Authors ability as a Character writer, to allow us to take the trainees of the series, the Ranger in training and the Mage trying to pass her Magi test, and show the distinct difference, they have not just added experience in their skill sets, they have grown as actual people as well. Zara is no longer quite so shy (even though she was very courageous and bold), she is willing to take command now.
Owyn has come into his own, a true Ranger, even though he has not yet reached the rank, he is capable of leading strike forces to hunt down Demons, things that no one has heard of, let alone fought in a Millennia.
When it comes time to return to the Capital City of Tarsys and report what has happened, Elias decides that Owyn can go on without him, as he has an important deed that must be dealt with. This is very unusual, as an Apprentice Ranger is not meant to be separated from his Master under any circumstances as per the Ranger’s Oath.
And so Owyn and Zara head to Tarsys to make their report with the other Mages.
I don’t want to go into a huge amount of detail as it will give too much away.
This is a great second story though, as Owyn and Zara are separated from their Masters, and they have to fend for themselves to a large extent, and it is great to see (as I said before), how the characters have grown, and to see their Characters come into their own light, rather than under the shadow of others all the time.
There are a multitude of plots in this books that see it thrumming along at a furious pace.
Both Main Characters (as well as a lot of the secondary characters) are under threat from a group of assassins, trying to silence everyone from what they have seen in the first story.
Owyn, on reaching the city, is in stunned awe, never having seen anything like what he sees. However, he is quickly snatched up by a Senior Ranger, who has serious questions for him, not just about the incident, but about his loyalties as well. Suddenly Owyn finds that he has to defend himself as he doesn’t have Elias to speak for him, and he is not in his safe environment.
Without giving anything away, Owyn’s part in this story is utterly intriguing, and some of the best writing in the series so far. The Character work, dialogue, and interactions between Owyn and the other Characters is compelling, and leaves you wanting to skip chapters to find out what has happened. (the book alternates between Owyn and Zara, and you know you are reading a good book, when you just want to skip entire sections of a book to follow one characters story arc, but at the same time, you don’t want to miss out on the other main character as well. The Character writing is Inspired in this book)
Zara, having returned to the Mages, and having killed their High Mage, uncovering some other plots along the way, continues to investigate the Conclave. This allows us to learn a lot about the Conclave, and also allows the Author to really give some attention to the world building, not just for the Conclave, but for the city of Tarsys, as well as Tarsynium and Forest Hill as well.
The World Building has been one of the real highlights of this story, the Author has put a lot of effort into creating and developing this beautiful and enthralling set of locations, from deep forests, to sprawling cityscapes, to the terrifying decaying land that lays beyond the safety of “The Arc of Radiance”, where the Demons, and other things live, and if the barrier falls, it will be the end of them all. Peel’s descriptive work is both breathtaking, and at times, horrifying, it is masterfully done, in that it whilst it does make you feel unsettled, he doesn’t take it too far.
This is just an exceptionally well written book, and I am really excited to read the third part in the series and find out what happens. This is also one of those series that I will happily listen to it again, (I have the Audio and e-books), as it was just so good.
If you are a lover of Fantasy, or just like a good Character Driven Story (because I have to admit, I am more Sci-Fi than Fantasy, but when it is this good, I just love to dive into a good Fantasy read), you will not want to miss this.
I did get an ARC of the e-book, but I have since bought the Audiobook, and I have also bought the e-book so I had a full copy as I loved it so much.
It is fascinating to see the comparison between Owyn and Zara from the start of Ranger’s Oath to Doom Bringers, how they have grown as Characters, and that shows a lot in the Authors ability as a Character writer, to allow us to take the trainees of the series, the Ranger in training and the Mage trying to pass her Magi test, and show the distinct difference, they have not just added experience in their skill sets, they have grown as actual people as well. Zara is no longer quite so shy (even though she was very courageous and bold), she is willing to take command now.
Owyn has come into his own, a true Ranger, even though he has not yet reached the rank, he is capable of leading strike forces to hunt down Demons, things that no one has heard of, let alone fought in a Millennia.
When it comes time to return to the Capital City of Tarsys and report what has happened, Elias decides that Owyn can go on without him, as he has an important deed that must be dealt with. This is very unusual, as an Apprentice Ranger is not meant to be separated from his Master under any circumstances as per the Ranger’s Oath.
And so Owyn and Zara head to Tarsys to make their report with the other Mages.
I don’t want to go into a huge amount of detail as it will give too much away.
This is a great second story though, as Owyn and Zara are separated from their Masters, and they have to fend for themselves to a large extent, and it is great to see (as I said before), how the characters have grown, and to see their Characters come into their own light, rather than under the shadow of others all the time.
There are a multitude of plots in this books that see it thrumming along at a furious pace.
Both Main Characters (as well as a lot of the secondary characters) are under threat from a group of assassins, trying to silence everyone from what they have seen in the first story.
Owyn, on reaching the city, is in stunned awe, never having seen anything like what he sees. However, he is quickly snatched up by a Senior Ranger, who has serious questions for him, not just about the incident, but about his loyalties as well. Suddenly Owyn finds that he has to defend himself as he doesn’t have Elias to speak for him, and he is not in his safe environment.
Without giving anything away, Owyn’s part in this story is utterly intriguing, and some of the best writing in the series so far. The Character work, dialogue, and interactions between Owyn and the other Characters is compelling, and leaves you wanting to skip chapters to find out what has happened. (the book alternates between Owyn and Zara, and you know you are reading a good book, when you just want to skip entire sections of a book to follow one characters story arc, but at the same time, you don’t want to miss out on the other main character as well. The Character writing is Inspired in this book)
Zara, having returned to the Mages, and having killed their High Mage, uncovering some other plots along the way, continues to investigate the Conclave. This allows us to learn a lot about the Conclave, and also allows the Author to really give some attention to the world building, not just for the Conclave, but for the city of Tarsys, as well as Tarsynium and Forest Hill as well.
The World Building has been one of the real highlights of this story, the Author has put a lot of effort into creating and developing this beautiful and enthralling set of locations, from deep forests, to sprawling cityscapes, to the terrifying decaying land that lays beyond the safety of “The Arc of Radiance”, where the Demons, and other things live, and if the barrier falls, it will be the end of them all. Peel’s descriptive work is both breathtaking, and at times, horrifying, it is masterfully done, in that it whilst it does make you feel unsettled, he doesn’t take it too far.
This is just an exceptionally well written book, and I am really excited to read the third part in the series and find out what happens. This is also one of those series that I will happily listen to it again, (I have the Audio and e-books), as it was just so good.
If you are a lover of Fantasy, or just like a good Character Driven Story (because I have to admit, I am more Sci-Fi than Fantasy, but when it is this good, I just love to dive into a good Fantasy read), you will not want to miss this.
I did get an ARC of the e-book, but I have since bought the Audiobook, and I have also bought the e-book so I had a full copy as I loved it so much.
July 5, 2018
After battling demons that by all accounts shouldn't exist, it's left to ranger's apprentice Owyn and newly-raised mage Zara to bring news of the danger to the city of Tarsys. They've got proof this time, and allies in the mages who have seen the truth. The ruling powers will have to acknowledge the unthinkable: the Arc of Radiance is failing. Zara must uncover the rotten core within the city, while Owyn is drawn into an intrigue within the rangers. Both could have devastating consequences for Tarsynium, and reveals that there are far darker things at play where the R'Laar are concerned...
I really felt drawn into the events of this follow-up. As a strongly narrative-led story, it took a little while to build, but once the two main characters had gone their separate ways it was easier to see them shine. Let's be honest, Zara and Owyn have a fraught relationship. When it's not mysterious assassins accosting them on the road it's the awkwardness of their feelings for one another.
Owyn gets to show off his fighting prowess quite a lot in his part of the story. His stoic narrations keeps everything very blunt and arms-length. Zara displays her curious and hard-headed nature a lot more here too, building on what we'd seen of her previously and adding an extra dash of overly-confident sarcasm. She's no damsel in distress - she may have reason to cry, but she's never one for histrionics. Their investigations and revelations are paced quite slowly, but never drag as they tease out snippets of information to build the bigger picture. As world-building goes, we get to see two more locales in details: Tarsys, city of the Mages, and the Lodge that is the base of the rangers. These settings are carefully realised without being overboard. I love the nostalgic swords-and-sorcery feel they have.
Even having discovered the dangers within the Arc there are still so many unanswered questions. What are the Harbringers going to do? What can the mages do to protect the Arc? How will the rangers react to the truth? And how on Byrhala will Owyn and Zara ever get to understand that they don't always get on not because they're different, but because they're so alike?
An enjoyable read, drawing you deeper into this YA fantasy conspiracy of magic and mayhem.
-I received an ARC copy of this ebook from the author-
I really felt drawn into the events of this follow-up. As a strongly narrative-led story, it took a little while to build, but once the two main characters had gone their separate ways it was easier to see them shine. Let's be honest, Zara and Owyn have a fraught relationship. When it's not mysterious assassins accosting them on the road it's the awkwardness of their feelings for one another.
Owyn gets to show off his fighting prowess quite a lot in his part of the story. His stoic narrations keeps everything very blunt and arms-length. Zara displays her curious and hard-headed nature a lot more here too, building on what we'd seen of her previously and adding an extra dash of overly-confident sarcasm. She's no damsel in distress - she may have reason to cry, but she's never one for histrionics. Their investigations and revelations are paced quite slowly, but never drag as they tease out snippets of information to build the bigger picture. As world-building goes, we get to see two more locales in details: Tarsys, city of the Mages, and the Lodge that is the base of the rangers. These settings are carefully realised without being overboard. I love the nostalgic swords-and-sorcery feel they have.
Even having discovered the dangers within the Arc there are still so many unanswered questions. What are the Harbringers going to do? What can the mages do to protect the Arc? How will the rangers react to the truth? And how on Byrhala will Owyn and Zara ever get to understand that they don't always get on not because they're different, but because they're so alike?
An enjoyable read, drawing you deeper into this YA fantasy conspiracy of magic and mayhem.
-I received an ARC copy of this ebook from the author-
September 3, 2020
Doom Bringers is another exciting adventure that drives our heroes further into the chaos. It picks up a couple of weeks after the Battle of Forest Hill when the mages are summoned back to the Conclave and Owyn accompanies them. Zara soon becomes a mage and Owyn is called away to Ranger's headquarters. I was a little sad at first that Zara and Owyn spent a lot of the book apart, but it didn't take away from the story at all so I soon got over it. Zara and Owyn had their own mysteries to solve and battles to fight and their separate storylines really helped propel the series forward.
With Zara we learn that there is more to the story than a few demons slipping inside the arc, there's actually a cult actively working to bring about the fall of their world. I liked that there was a deeper element to the demonic invasion and that there are still mysteries to resolve.
My biggest problem with this book, what made it a four star instead of a 5, was Zara. She decides to help an investigation though asked to stay out of it. That's pretty standard for a MC so no problem there, what didn't work for me is that she lied, stole, and manipulated to solve the mystery. It just seemed so out of character for her. As she steals from the High Magus she contemplates being a thief and betraying their trust but she quickly brushes it aside. To her the end justifies the means. She seemed arrogant: they need me, I don't need to involve others or ask permission or follow the rules, it'll be fine when I solve everything, it won't be solved without me, I can go into this dangerous situation all by myself. When she went to spy on the cult all I could think of was you're not bringing any backup or telling anyone where you're going in case something goes south?? Zara pretty much disregards the thoughts and feelings of everyone in this book which seemed so weird after the first book. I've heard this gets better in the next book so it won't stop me from continuing. I may rant but I still enjoyed the book and would recommend it.
Owyn's trip to the Ranger headquarters draws all the Rangers into the fight against the demons and brings a possible stumbling block with the Nightengales. I loved Owyn in this book. He sticks to what he believes in and fights for it (yes Zara does this too but Owyn never uses/abuses people in the process). He also mentions that he sometimes has bouts of melancholy and I loved that this was brought up.
I appreciated the skill of the author to make Zara and Owyn each a believable unique person with distinct personalities, feelings, thoughts, and reactions. Overall, still a great series that I'm excited to continue.
With Zara we learn that there is more to the story than a few demons slipping inside the arc, there's actually a cult actively working to bring about the fall of their world. I liked that there was a deeper element to the demonic invasion and that there are still mysteries to resolve.
My biggest problem with this book, what made it a four star instead of a 5, was Zara. She decides to help an investigation though asked to stay out of it. That's pretty standard for a MC so no problem there, what didn't work for me is that she lied, stole, and manipulated to solve the mystery. It just seemed so out of character for her. As she steals from the High Magus she contemplates being a thief and betraying their trust but she quickly brushes it aside. To her the end justifies the means. She seemed arrogant: they need me, I don't need to involve others or ask permission or follow the rules, it'll be fine when I solve everything, it won't be solved without me, I can go into this dangerous situation all by myself. When she went to spy on the cult all I could think of was you're not bringing any backup or telling anyone where you're going in case something goes south?? Zara pretty much disregards the thoughts and feelings of everyone in this book which seemed so weird after the first book. I've heard this gets better in the next book so it won't stop me from continuing. I may rant but I still enjoyed the book and would recommend it.
Owyn's trip to the Ranger headquarters draws all the Rangers into the fight against the demons and brings a possible stumbling block with the Nightengales. I loved Owyn in this book. He sticks to what he believes in and fights for it (yes Zara does this too but Owyn never uses/abuses people in the process). He also mentions that he sometimes has bouts of melancholy and I loved that this was brought up.
I appreciated the skill of the author to make Zara and Owyn each a believable unique person with distinct personalities, feelings, thoughts, and reactions. Overall, still a great series that I'm excited to continue.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 24, 2019
Absolutely loved book 2! If you've read book 1, you cannot stop there! The fighting scenes are top notch, the story continues to pull you in and make you want more, and I just did not want to put this down!
In Bringers of Doom, we're brought right back along with Owyn and Zara. We start off not long after book 1 ends and the two seem to be getting on well with each other. But my goodness are these two boneheaded! They are your typical teens who over think and misunderstand a relationship and it's actually quite comical! You wonder if you yourself were just like this and you realize, yup, I sure was!
The two soon depart from each other and their stories both take their own paths. I really liked this deviation from the two characters being together. The story needed it for both characters to show their strengths and weaknesses.
Zara gets caught into a conspiracy between the mages and a secret society. Are the mages all that they really seem to be? Is there something that she finds that can upend the Conclave? We find out a lot about the Conclave and that there is definitely someone there trying to end the mages. Zara is a crafty little heroine and she does a marvelous job of getting herself out of a sticky situation.
Owyn continues to try to convince the order of Rangers that demons do exist and that some seeds layed here for the future books. I can't wait to read what comes next with these two characters.
Overall, Bringers of Doom is a great, fast paced story that sucks you in right from the beginning. I continue to love the alternating chapters between the two characters so that I don't become too invested in Owyn and then shuttled off to Zara. I really enjoy seeing the seeds that have been sown for the future books and they are sure to be just as great.
I received this book as an ARC from the author. This review and all thoughts on the book are mine alone.
In Bringers of Doom, we're brought right back along with Owyn and Zara. We start off not long after book 1 ends and the two seem to be getting on well with each other. But my goodness are these two boneheaded! They are your typical teens who over think and misunderstand a relationship and it's actually quite comical! You wonder if you yourself were just like this and you realize, yup, I sure was!
The two soon depart from each other and their stories both take their own paths. I really liked this deviation from the two characters being together. The story needed it for both characters to show their strengths and weaknesses.
Zara gets caught into a conspiracy between the mages and a secret society. Are the mages all that they really seem to be? Is there something that she finds that can upend the Conclave? We find out a lot about the Conclave and that there is definitely someone there trying to end the mages. Zara is a crafty little heroine and she does a marvelous job of getting herself out of a sticky situation.
Owyn continues to try to convince the order of Rangers that demons do exist and that some seeds layed here for the future books. I can't wait to read what comes next with these two characters.
Overall, Bringers of Doom is a great, fast paced story that sucks you in right from the beginning. I continue to love the alternating chapters between the two characters so that I don't become too invested in Owyn and then shuttled off to Zara. I really enjoy seeing the seeds that have been sown for the future books and they are sure to be just as great.
I received this book as an ARC from the author. This review and all thoughts on the book are mine alone.
June 19, 2022
Like Ranger’s Oath, I loved the pacing of this book. It makes The pages just fly by. I stay constantly engaged, which makes reading a lot more enjoyable. I felt the switch of viewpoint was done really well. The viewpoint characters weren’t together the whole time, which helped, but I actually really enjoyed how this book used the viewpoint switch at times of suspense. It left me wanting more and so I continue to read. I was always satisfied to return to the viewpoint after larger cliffhanger/suspenseful chapter endings as a “false suspense” was never used. This book also built up the enemy/larger danger which I really enjoyed.
However, despite these things, there were a lot of little things that did overshadow my enjoyment quite a bit during this book.
The romance came on strong, felt forced, was super cheesy, and cringy.
At the start, an event from the last book felt like it hadn’t occurred. It eventually is explained, although poorly in my opinion.
Ending felt rushed, it was like “we won” and the book ended. One of the character arcs didn’t work for me as it was constant action. As a result, the build up to the climax of the book felt overshadowed by this constant action.
The solution at the end of a character’s arc in the book felt like it came out of nowhere. Some quick glossing over, it was foreshadowed, but that foreshadowing was weak.
Anyway I feel like I am really picking on this book. There were little things that bothered me, and though I thought the first was better, I still enjoyed it overall.
However, despite these things, there were a lot of little things that did overshadow my enjoyment quite a bit during this book.
The romance came on strong, felt forced, was super cheesy, and cringy.
At the start, an event from the last book felt like it hadn’t occurred. It eventually is explained, although poorly in my opinion.
Ending felt rushed, it was like “we won” and the book ended. One of the character arcs didn’t work for me as it was constant action. As a result, the build up to the climax of the book felt overshadowed by this constant action.
The solution at the end of a character’s arc in the book felt like it came out of nowhere. Some quick glossing over, it was foreshadowed, but that foreshadowing was weak.
Anyway I feel like I am really picking on this book. There were little things that bothered me, and though I thought the first was better, I still enjoyed it overall.
May 24, 2022
I tried, I really did. The version I got had all of his books in one. Needless to say I'll be returning it.
I only made it part of the way through the second book and had to stop. There was no actual character development shown. Mr. Peel just said "And then the two characters fell in love" and that's how it was, even though they've only had three on-page interactions with each other and all of that was exposition.
He suffers from the classic "telling, not showing" problem that many first-time authors have and it left the world and the characters feeling flat and dull. In that sense, I blame his editor more than anything because a good editor could have convinced him to add another 100 pages to the first and the second book to flesh things out so they didn't feel so forced. But alas, that was not to be.
He borrows heavily from Brandon Sanderson, Robert Jordan, John Flannagan, and a lot of other fantasy staple writers, almost directly ripping off some phrases. I get that some of his fans are going to say that it's an "homage" to these writers and maybe I'm just not feeling that charitable today.
Overall, this could benefit from a good re-write or a solid editor. If you're looking for sub-par fantasy with unrealistic characters and plot points, magic systems, and world elements borrowed from your favorite series, this is a good comfort read for you. Otherwise, I'd avoid it.
I only made it part of the way through the second book and had to stop. There was no actual character development shown. Mr. Peel just said "And then the two characters fell in love" and that's how it was, even though they've only had three on-page interactions with each other and all of that was exposition.
He suffers from the classic "telling, not showing" problem that many first-time authors have and it left the world and the characters feeling flat and dull. In that sense, I blame his editor more than anything because a good editor could have convinced him to add another 100 pages to the first and the second book to flesh things out so they didn't feel so forced. But alas, that was not to be.
He borrows heavily from Brandon Sanderson, Robert Jordan, John Flannagan, and a lot of other fantasy staple writers, almost directly ripping off some phrases. I get that some of his fans are going to say that it's an "homage" to these writers and maybe I'm just not feeling that charitable today.
Overall, this could benefit from a good re-write or a solid editor. If you're looking for sub-par fantasy with unrealistic characters and plot points, magic systems, and world elements borrowed from your favorite series, this is a good comfort read for you. Otherwise, I'd avoid it.
February 28, 2024
I am continuing to enjoy the series. In this book, the characters spend more time away from each other than in the first however, the author doesn't have them forget each other which is really nice.
The story here, for me, starts to really develop the orders and politics. I enjoy the detective work as the mystery provides depth to the balance of good, the arc, vs evil, the oncoming horde.
I'm not forgetting that this book feels written for the younger audience however, now that I have read a few novels in that genre I can say that this Fall of Radiance series is much better than most. I do enjoy reading about the characters surrounding the protagonist such as in the first book of 'Red Rising' or in the second book of the Lightbringer series 'The Blinding Knife' and 'Harry Potter' and 'Ready Player One.' So I am hoping that either another character is introduced or the romance between Owen and Zara builds because Talon isn't much to like. Perhaps he will grow in the next book.
The story here, for me, starts to really develop the orders and politics. I enjoy the detective work as the mystery provides depth to the balance of good, the arc, vs evil, the oncoming horde.
I'm not forgetting that this book feels written for the younger audience however, now that I have read a few novels in that genre I can say that this Fall of Radiance series is much better than most. I do enjoy reading about the characters surrounding the protagonist such as in the first book of 'Red Rising' or in the second book of the Lightbringer series 'The Blinding Knife' and 'Harry Potter' and 'Ready Player One.' So I am hoping that either another character is introduced or the romance between Owen and Zara builds because Talon isn't much to like. Perhaps he will grow in the next book.
May 2, 2024
Again, descriptions were well written
**spoilers**
The only extra star was coz I expected the plot to be exact copy paste of Book 1 except on the "rangers" side. But, again, all the obvious expected plot notes.
The main characters fall in love in a very forced manner. Of course, even though she's a wizard, till he comes to save her, she can't even handle a lame assassin.
Then, a whole series of ridiculous situations that Zara decides to investigate without telling anyone and of course, survives with nary a scratch. On escaping, she first takes a bath before reporting to the superiors. Like, are you kidding me?!!
Owen, on the other hand, fights mind controlled rebels, and instead of being executed or imprisoned by the corrupt heads, they leave him to come back and kick their butts.
The climax fight is, again, stupid. The gorgon waits around, chilling and spectating before deciding its a good idea to cast a spell. The thing he could have done ages ago and won. But doesn't coz why bother when he can just die.
**spoilers**
**spoilers**
The only extra star was coz I expected the plot to be exact copy paste of Book 1 except on the "rangers" side. But, again, all the obvious expected plot notes.
The main characters fall in love in a very forced manner. Of course, even though she's a wizard, till he comes to save her, she can't even handle a lame assassin.
Then, a whole series of ridiculous situations that Zara decides to investigate without telling anyone and of course, survives with nary a scratch. On escaping, she first takes a bath before reporting to the superiors. Like, are you kidding me?!!
Owen, on the other hand, fights mind controlled rebels, and instead of being executed or imprisoned by the corrupt heads, they leave him to come back and kick their butts.
The climax fight is, again, stupid. The gorgon waits around, chilling and spectating before deciding its a good idea to cast a spell. The thing he could have done ages ago and won. But doesn't coz why bother when he can just die.
**spoilers**
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August 21, 2024
In an ambitious attempt to blend humor and action, the book falls short of expectations. The jokes, which are a crucial element in lightening the mood and enhancing character dynamics, unfortunately miss the mark. They lack the punch and timing necessary to elicit the intended laughter or smiles. Similarly, the fight scenes, pivotal in action narratives, are described in a manner that lacks clarity and excitement, failing to engage the reader's imagination. Furthermore, the characters' decisions, which drive the plot, are not only questionable but also poorly substantiated, leaving the reader perplexed about the underlying logic. This combination of elements results in a narrative that struggles to maintain coherence and fails to deliver a satisfying reading experience. The book, while an earnest effort, requires a more refined approach to its humor, action sequences, and character development to truly resonate with its audience.
November 2, 2020
An Excellent Continuation
Taking off immediately where Book 1 left off, this addition to the story brought real adventure, suspense, and treacherous activities to the forefront of an already exciting tale. Owen and Zara have separate paths in the fight against Demonic invaders bent on overthrowing the realm. The author takes us through their paths individually with descriptive skill and excellent writing techniques. So far I’ve really enjoyed reading these two books and am anxiously awaiting to read Book 3. I highly recommend this series and look forward to reading Mr. Peel’s other works.
Taking off immediately where Book 1 left off, this addition to the story brought real adventure, suspense, and treacherous activities to the forefront of an already exciting tale. Owen and Zara have separate paths in the fight against Demonic invaders bent on overthrowing the realm. The author takes us through their paths individually with descriptive skill and excellent writing techniques. So far I’ve really enjoyed reading these two books and am anxiously awaiting to read Book 3. I highly recommend this series and look forward to reading Mr. Peel’s other works.
January 5, 2021
Still interesting
Zara and Owyn were friends, well almost. He has been instructed to go to the capital with the Mages to report the activities they prevented. Fighting demons shouldn't have been part of the process just like working with the Nightengales was not sanctioned. Elias is not going with them. He has something he must do. When they arrive , no one believes their story until they empty out the body parts to prove their story.
With and Zara separate, as he is ordered back to the ranger compound. Nothing is as it seems and time shows the issues each of them must face.
It's still interesting.
Read on my friends
Zara and Owyn were friends, well almost. He has been instructed to go to the capital with the Mages to report the activities they prevented. Fighting demons shouldn't have been part of the process just like working with the Nightengales was not sanctioned. Elias is not going with them. He has something he must do. When they arrive , no one believes their story until they empty out the body parts to prove their story.
With and Zara separate, as he is ordered back to the ranger compound. Nothing is as it seems and time shows the issues each of them must face.
It's still interesting.
Read on my friends
June 18, 2022
Summary: Coming of age, a fairly straight forward premise, at least initially (more to be learnt), interesting magic, reasonable plot, but some convoluted actions to make things work out as needed. Writing is easy and enjoyable, light reading but recommended. Book 2 extends the theme, we learn more ...
Plotline: Fairly straight forward, moves along nicely, engaging the 2 main characters as it does
Premise: Nice little world, lots more to learn
Writing: Descriptive, light, reader is right there in the action
Ending: All good, next book lined up
Pace: Never a dull moment!
Plotline: Fairly straight forward, moves along nicely, engaging the 2 main characters as it does
Premise: Nice little world, lots more to learn
Writing: Descriptive, light, reader is right there in the action
Ending: All good, next book lined up
Pace: Never a dull moment!
October 14, 2023
A little confusing continuation. The main characters act as insecure (in terms of romance) teenager might do, but the confusion comes from them splitting up most of the book. I understand what they are doing and it's a good story, but I thought the idea was them doing it together. Since the chapters alternate between them the story gets a little broken up.
The travel times between areas seem way too short and that annoys me as it ruins the economic foundation, the sense of scale, the uniqness of the areas, and, well, everything.
The travel times between areas seem way too short and that annoys me as it ruins the economic foundation, the sense of scale, the uniqness of the areas, and, well, everything.
June 24, 2020
This is a Terrific book!
I love the Owyn and Zara characters. They are tasked with warning the Mages Conclave that Demons have breached the Arc of Radiance. No one seems to believe them, plus there is a traitor amongst them. It is the responsibility of the Mages to keep the Arc whole, but will they? With intrigue, betrayal and danger every step of the way, how will Owyn and Zara manage to survive? I thoroughly enjoyed this book that kept me glued to the pages. A must read!
I love the Owyn and Zara characters. They are tasked with warning the Mages Conclave that Demons have breached the Arc of Radiance. No one seems to believe them, plus there is a traitor amongst them. It is the responsibility of the Mages to keep the Arc whole, but will they? With intrigue, betrayal and danger every step of the way, how will Owyn and Zara manage to survive? I thoroughly enjoyed this book that kept me glued to the pages. A must read!
April 25, 2021
Thankfully, better than the first book. Overall, the story has gone better with Owyn and Zara separated and not mooning over each other one moment and arguing the next. That got really old! One thing that I find continually unplausible is that of rangers deferring to an apprentice, especially when they go into battle. The boy is lucky, but still...maybe it's just me.
May 10, 2024
4 stars for this book....but....
I read books to enjoy and relax, and this whole series met my requirements...until the end.
The end; Was it really necessary to wrap it up like that?
What a downer. Extremely unsatisfactory!!
I bet this was done to p*s people off.
I read books to enjoy and relax, and this whole series met my requirements...until the end.
The end; Was it really necessary to wrap it up like that?
What a downer. Extremely unsatisfactory!!
I bet this was done to p*s people off.
April 20, 2025
Absolutely glued! Flew through this book and straight on to the next one! Loving the story building, the different groups and the purpose of each! The demon descriptions are hard to picture but I’m sure as the books go on more information will be given!
June 22, 2020
This is a great series. It's interesting seeing the world from the two different points of view and seeing both Owyn and Zara struggle. Can't wait to read the next one.
January 26, 2022
Feels like book two of a five book series, I'm pretty sure by the end of this series I won't emember a single detail from this book. But I see that it must exist for the others to
August 5, 2022
So far, the characters remain shallow and the plot contrived. Probably better for a younger audience. But, I got the whole set in a single audio book, so I will continue to slog through it.
August 9, 2023
fantasy, search and resuce going on an on
December 30, 2020
Intrigue
Rangers and Mages fight against Harbingers and Demons 😈. You won't want to put it down! Secrecy, plots, danger, plus...
Rangers and Mages fight against Harbingers and Demons 😈. You won't want to put it down! Secrecy, plots, danger, plus...
February 6, 2024
A good read, a good story. Makes you want to keep reading.
August 8, 2018
Loved the first book , the second one in the series is even better , the story grabs you and doesn't let go , it brings you along for the ride and you get caught up in the action and the world , the action is fantastic and flows well his description of the fight scenes and the magic is great , so if you haven't taken the opportunity to read Blake's series I suggest you go get it ....you will not be disappointed...🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
August 25, 2018
Just as good as the first book! It was exciting to see the characters’ growth, and of course, be introduced to new ones. This whole series is just a page turner. You won’t want to put it down. I can’t wait to see what the rest of the series brings!
June 10, 2020
Enjoyed this second book to the series. Goid fast entertaining read. Only complaint is that the two main characters were split about a third of the way into the book. I enjoy them more together than apart. Will continue the sreies and am waiting for the third book.
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