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First Everything
I’m at that kind of rough party you wouldn’t want to see your daughter at.
That’s when I see her.
A cute little rich girl who’s found herself on the wrong side of the tracks.
I know immediately that she doesn’t belong here and it sends a protective streak surging through me.
She reminds me of a chipmunk. Just as small, adorable, and helpless.
These guys will eat her alive.
I want to go over there, pick her up, and take her away from this place.
I want to lock her in my room where it’s safe.
Where only I can lay eyes on those soft tender curves.
But I can’t move.
I’ve never been like this… so, paralyzed in the presence of a girl. Utterly helpless in my feelings for her.
But when I see another man touch her, something in me snaps.
My civility is gone. Hundreds of years of human progress, culture, and civilization are wiped out with a single touch.
I’m back in the dark ages. I’m primal. Barbaric.
I’m a goddamn caveman about to beat the life out of a rival mate who dared to step into my territory.
The touch breaks me. The restraints of society crack and fall to the floor.
I’m free to defend and take what’s mine.
And most importantly, I’m free to claim her as my own.
After one look at his girl, Colton shows just how much of an Over-The-Top possessive alpha he really is. SAFE, no cheating, and a sweet HEA that will have you grinning and blushing!
That’s when I see her.
A cute little rich girl who’s found herself on the wrong side of the tracks.
I know immediately that she doesn’t belong here and it sends a protective streak surging through me.
She reminds me of a chipmunk. Just as small, adorable, and helpless.
These guys will eat her alive.
I want to go over there, pick her up, and take her away from this place.
I want to lock her in my room where it’s safe.
Where only I can lay eyes on those soft tender curves.
But I can’t move.
I’ve never been like this… so, paralyzed in the presence of a girl. Utterly helpless in my feelings for her.
But when I see another man touch her, something in me snaps.
My civility is gone. Hundreds of years of human progress, culture, and civilization are wiped out with a single touch.
I’m back in the dark ages. I’m primal. Barbaric.
I’m a goddamn caveman about to beat the life out of a rival mate who dared to step into my territory.
The touch breaks me. The restraints of society crack and fall to the floor.
I’m free to defend and take what’s mine.
And most importantly, I’m free to claim her as my own.
After one look at his girl, Colton shows just how much of an Over-The-Top possessive alpha he really is. SAFE, no cheating, and a sweet HEA that will have you grinning and blushing!
91 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 16, 2019
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September 30, 2019
I am a fan of insta everything and Olivia T Turner always does provide that and a great story too.
Mackenzie didn’t want to go to a party with her friend Joy especially when she saw where they were going, so when Joy ditches her and she’s in danger and Colton rescues her, little did she realise the trouble they were in. Escaping to the lake house where they spend days hiding out and giving into the passion they feel but it’s not long before things catch up with them. Can they escape the danger they now face together?
Colton is the tattooed bad boy from the wrong side of the tracks but when he sees Mackenzie he knows that he is right where he is meant to be. When he sees her in danger there nothing he won’t do or face to protect her. Will they escape unharmed and will everyone accept their love?
Great story with some steamy scenes. 4 🌟 read.
Mackenzie didn’t want to go to a party with her friend Joy especially when she saw where they were going, so when Joy ditches her and she’s in danger and Colton rescues her, little did she realise the trouble they were in. Escaping to the lake house where they spend days hiding out and giving into the passion they feel but it’s not long before things catch up with them. Can they escape the danger they now face together?
Colton is the tattooed bad boy from the wrong side of the tracks but when he sees Mackenzie he knows that he is right where he is meant to be. When he sees her in danger there nothing he won’t do or face to protect her. Will they escape unharmed and will everyone accept their love?
Great story with some steamy scenes. 4 🌟 read.
December 22, 2021
The kind of book that leaves you wanting more.🥵🥵🥵💖💖💖💖💖
This will fulfil your "sex-with-a-hot-mechanic" fetish. 😏
This will fulfil your "sex-with-a-hot-mechanic" fetish. 😏
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September 19, 2019First Everything is LIVE!!!
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“So, what do you do?” I ask as I watch him take the cover off the gas tank and start to pour.
“For fun or for money?”
“Both,” I say as I shift my weight from one foot to the other.
“I’m one of the lucky few who do both at the same time,” he says as he takes a sip of his lemonade. “I fix up motorcycles.”
“You’re a mechanic?”
“No. A mechanic repairs motorcycles. I’m more of an artist. I customize them and make them so much more.”
“Wow,” I say as I watch him in awe. I haven’t met too many blue collar workers in my life. My parent’s circle has always been professionals, politicians, professors, and anyone else that’s on the same ‘level’ as them. My dad would never associate with someone like Colton.
“So, do you work in a garage?”
“No,” he says with a heavy sigh. His eyes fill with anguish and melancholy as they drop back down to the gas tank. “I have my own shop. Well, I did…”
“What do you mean?” I ask as my body tightens in alarm.
“I work in the garage attached to my house,” he says with a shrug. “It’s either trashed, or looted, or burning as we speak.”
“It won’t be so bad,” I say, trying to find any positive in this. “The insurance money—”
He scoffs.
“Insurance is a your-side-of-the-tracks thing,” he says as the gas tank fills up. It clicks and he puts the gun back and screws on the cap.
“I’ll repay you,” I say as my back straightens. “Anything you need. I’ll make sure you get it.”
He’s staring right at me and the heated look gives me warm shivers.
“I’m not taking anything from you, Mackenzie.”
It’s the first time he’s said my name and it makes my whole body go on full alert. My pulse is racing, my heart is hammering against my ribs, I have goosebumps all over.
“That’s nonsense,” I say with my voice racing as I step up to the bike. He’s on one side and I’m on the other. We’re close enough to touch and I can feel the sexual tension charging in the air between us. “You saved my life. You’ll take it. You’ll have to take it!”
“I don’t want your money.”
I’m leaning forward, desperate for him to agree.
“Why not?” I ask as I lick my lips. “Then what do you want?”
He stares at me like I’m the most precious thing he’s ever seen.
“You. All I want is you.”
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“So, what do you do?” I ask as I watch him take the cover off the gas tank and start to pour.
“For fun or for money?”
“Both,” I say as I shift my weight from one foot to the other.
“I’m one of the lucky few who do both at the same time,” he says as he takes a sip of his lemonade. “I fix up motorcycles.”
“You’re a mechanic?”
“No. A mechanic repairs motorcycles. I’m more of an artist. I customize them and make them so much more.”
“Wow,” I say as I watch him in awe. I haven’t met too many blue collar workers in my life. My parent’s circle has always been professionals, politicians, professors, and anyone else that’s on the same ‘level’ as them. My dad would never associate with someone like Colton.
“So, do you work in a garage?”
“No,” he says with a heavy sigh. His eyes fill with anguish and melancholy as they drop back down to the gas tank. “I have my own shop. Well, I did…”
“What do you mean?” I ask as my body tightens in alarm.
“I work in the garage attached to my house,” he says with a shrug. “It’s either trashed, or looted, or burning as we speak.”
“It won’t be so bad,” I say, trying to find any positive in this. “The insurance money—”
He scoffs.
“Insurance is a your-side-of-the-tracks thing,” he says as the gas tank fills up. It clicks and he puts the gun back and screws on the cap.
“I’ll repay you,” I say as my back straightens. “Anything you need. I’ll make sure you get it.”
He’s staring right at me and the heated look gives me warm shivers.
“I’m not taking anything from you, Mackenzie.”
It’s the first time he’s said my name and it makes my whole body go on full alert. My pulse is racing, my heart is hammering against my ribs, I have goosebumps all over.
“That’s nonsense,” I say with my voice racing as I step up to the bike. He’s on one side and I’m on the other. We’re close enough to touch and I can feel the sexual tension charging in the air between us. “You saved my life. You’ll take it. You’ll have to take it!”
“I don’t want your money.”
I’m leaning forward, desperate for him to agree.
“Why not?” I ask as I lick my lips. “Then what do you want?”
He stares at me like I’m the most precious thing he’s ever seen.
“You. All I want is you.”
February 21, 2020
A quick sexy read with 3 epilogues ❤ loved it this author never disappoints me 👍
September 19, 2019
Rich girl and a guy from the opposite side.. he isn't poor since he owns his own shop.. so i didn't get the whole rich girl stuff since he wasn't really poor lol
Mackenzie girl had horrible taste in friends.. i do wish these girls have better friends.. this friend who drags her to wrong side of town to fk her new fling.. Mackenzie doesn't trust her gut and her friend abandons her, being harassed by a guy who wants to get in her pants she turns him down heck she even makes up a lie about a cop boyfriend so he would leave her alone.. it doesn't work until Colton steps in and takes matter into his own hands..
Colton is already spung he takes Mackenzie away from the drama and up to her place.. tension is high and well clothes are coming off and dirty times between the sheets...
Beside that only other drama was the big fight between guys and Colton who makes sure Mackenzie and her family are safe...
Where do authors come up with these nicknames.. chipmunk is her nickname... and its cute but nope..
No ow drama but om drama, No cheating, Drama-ish, sex times, virgin gal no manwhore no real info on his
Recommend- maybe
Cover-⭐⭐⭐
Instalove/lust
27H/19h
Safe-ish
No condom
Hea
Epilogue
Mackenzie girl had horrible taste in friends.. i do wish these girls have better friends.. this friend who drags her to wrong side of town to fk her new fling.. Mackenzie doesn't trust her gut and her friend abandons her, being harassed by a guy who wants to get in her pants she turns him down heck she even makes up a lie about a cop boyfriend so he would leave her alone.. it doesn't work until Colton steps in and takes matter into his own hands..
Colton is already spung he takes Mackenzie away from the drama and up to her place.. tension is high and well clothes are coming off and dirty times between the sheets...
Beside that only other drama was the big fight between guys and Colton who makes sure Mackenzie and her family are safe...
Where do authors come up with these nicknames.. chipmunk is her nickname... and its cute but nope..
No ow drama but om drama, No cheating, Drama-ish, sex times, virgin gal no manwhore no real info on his
Recommend- maybe
Cover-⭐⭐⭐
Instalove/lust
27H/19h
Safe-ish
No condom
Hea
Epilogue
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 3, 2020
Mackenzie, obligada por su mejor amiga acude a una fiesta en la parte más peligrosa de la ciudad. Pero pronto ella la abandona dejándola sola y en peligro. Hasta que un hombre lleno de tatuajes la salva y la saca de allí en moto. Su manera de conocerse no fue la mejor, pero Mackenzie y Colton enseguida entienden las palabras amor a primera vista.
Ay me encantan las historias de esta mujer. Nunca me aburro. Son cortitas, chorras e inverosímiles pero son el vicio más grande que tengo 😁 no tienen drama, siempre final feliz y muchos bebés por el camino. Perfecto para pasar el rato!
Ay me encantan las historias de esta mujer. Nunca me aburro. Son cortitas, chorras e inverosímiles pero son el vicio más grande que tengo 😁 no tienen drama, siempre final feliz y muchos bebés por el camino. Perfecto para pasar el rato!
November 14, 2019
“𝕀 𝕝𝕠𝕧𝕖 𝕪𝕠𝕦, 𝕄𝕒𝕔𝕜𝕖𝕟𝕫𝕚𝕖. 𝕀 𝕜𝕟𝕖𝕨 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕖𝕔𝕠𝕟𝕕 𝕀 𝕤𝕒𝕨 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕨𝕒𝕝𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕙𝕣𝕠𝕦𝕘𝕙 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕥𝕪. 𝕐𝕠𝕦’𝕣𝕖 𝕚𝕥 𝕗𝕠𝕣 𝕞𝕖, 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕡𝕞𝕦𝕟𝕜. 𝕋𝕙𝕖𝕣𝕖’𝕤 𝕟𝕠 𝕠𝕟𝕖 𝕖𝕝𝕤𝕖.”
°Virgin heroine
°Hero's sexual/romantic past was not mentioned
°Switching POVs
°Hero is 27, heroine is 19
°Both faithful after meeting
°Insta love/lust
°Alpha hero
°Slight OM drama
°No OW drama
°No cheating
°No pushing away
°Intimate scenes only between hero and heroine
°Epilogue: 8 months, 5 years and 25 years later
°Virgin heroine
°Hero's sexual/romantic past was not mentioned
°Switching POVs
°Hero is 27, heroine is 19
°Both faithful after meeting
°Insta love/lust
°Alpha hero
°Slight OM drama
°No OW drama
°No cheating
°No pushing away
°Intimate scenes only between hero and heroine
°Epilogue: 8 months, 5 years and 25 years later
September 18, 2019
MaKenzie is left at a party that she doesn't want to be at by her "friend". When things turn from bad to worse, Colton is there to protect her. Feeling the instant connection, she leaves with them and the rest as they say is history. Only he didn't know he would have to save them both before they could get their HEA.
-safe read
-h is a virgin
-no talk of H history
-om tries to get to h but H stops it
-no ow drama
-epilogues 8 months, 5 years and 25 years
-safe read
-h is a virgin
-no talk of H history
-om tries to get to h but H stops it
-no ow drama
-epilogues 8 months, 5 years and 25 years
September 30, 2019
I loved this story. For some reason, this book felt different. Olivia is known for her shorter stories, but still, have enough information to keep the story going. However, First Everything is such a deeply emotional story that you don't even realize you are almost over with it till you are. First Everything is the kind of writing I hope Olivia sticks with.
Great story.
October 15, 2019
First, both the H and the h refer to the h as a slut. How about quitting with the slut shaming, already. Then, the h gets a phone call and just gives out her location, knowing that the guy that tried to roofie her was still looking to find them. She's not a slut but she is dumb. Why do so many female authors hate their characters?
December 1, 2019
3.25 stars
I wanted this book to be so much more. The potential was there it just needed to be fleshed out more. Doing that would have given me the connection I was looking for and given the characters the depth I needed.
I wanted this book to be so much more. The potential was there it just needed to be fleshed out more. Doing that would have given me the connection I was looking for and given the characters the depth I needed.
June 10, 2022
The couple: Colton and Mackenzie
Romance trope: insta-love
Length: 91 pages
Plot: Colton meets Mackenzie at a party. She shouldn't really be there - she's an innocent rich girl who ended up at a party on the wrong side of the tracks because of her friend's bad choices. Once there, Colton saves her from harassment by some other guy. He takes her home and then from there, nature takes its course.
Commentary: This is a sort of class rich girl/bad boy opposites-attract trope (despite the fact that he's a shop owner with a successful business, that's how it's portrayed). Mackenzie wasn't meant to be at the party, so she needed Colton to step in and save her. She's not the smartest, but a lot of 19-year-old girls make dumb mistakes like that. Most of them don't (hopefully, in real life) have 27-year-old men doing the saving. This was a cute story though, insta-love, insta-lust, insta-everything.
Romance trope: insta-love
Length: 91 pages
Plot: Colton meets Mackenzie at a party. She shouldn't really be there - she's an innocent rich girl who ended up at a party on the wrong side of the tracks because of her friend's bad choices. Once there, Colton saves her from harassment by some other guy. He takes her home and then from there, nature takes its course.
Commentary: This is a sort of class rich girl/bad boy opposites-attract trope (despite the fact that he's a shop owner with a successful business, that's how it's portrayed). Mackenzie wasn't meant to be at the party, so she needed Colton to step in and save her. She's not the smartest, but a lot of 19-year-old girls make dumb mistakes like that. Most of them don't (hopefully, in real life) have 27-year-old men doing the saving. This was a cute story though, insta-love, insta-lust, insta-everything.
September 18, 2019
Not Bad
I liked this book for the most part. I thought this story was going to be a bit different. With the title I thought it was going to be the first everything for both characters but it was just firsts for Mackenzie. Colton definitely wasn’t a virgin. I liked his dirty talk and OTT protectiveness he had. I also really liked the cover, the guy on front is delicious!
Safety and Spoilers
Safe. No ow drama, guy at a party tries to get with the h first giving her what appears to be a drugged drink then stealing her phone trying to get a kiss from her. Same guy causes problems later in the book too. H is definitely not a virgin but nothing is mentioned about his past. h is a virgin. No abuse towards h but H gets in a horrible fight at the end trying to save h and her family.
I liked this book for the most part. I thought this story was going to be a bit different. With the title I thought it was going to be the first everything for both characters but it was just firsts for Mackenzie. Colton definitely wasn’t a virgin. I liked his dirty talk and OTT protectiveness he had. I also really liked the cover, the guy on front is delicious!
Safety and Spoilers
Safe. No ow drama, guy at a party tries to get with the h first giving her what appears to be a drugged drink then stealing her phone trying to get a kiss from her. Same guy causes problems later in the book too. H is definitely not a virgin but nothing is mentioned about his past. h is a virgin. No abuse towards h but H gets in a horrible fight at the end trying to save h and her family.
September 21, 2019
First Everything
Wow just wow!!! This is by far my favorite OTT book. Bad boy hero. Poor little rich girl. It's love at first sight from across a crowded party. Trouble brews almost as quick as their love. Colton saves Mackenzie and proves to her father that he will ALWAYS protect her. A very happily ever after with an epilogue that's 25 years out. The only complaint that I have is that it ended long before I was ready.
Wow just wow!!! This is by far my favorite OTT book. Bad boy hero. Poor little rich girl. It's love at first sight from across a crowded party. Trouble brews almost as quick as their love. Colton saves Mackenzie and proves to her father that he will ALWAYS protect her. A very happily ever after with an epilogue that's 25 years out. The only complaint that I have is that it ended long before I was ready.
September 20, 2019
Quick and dirty
This quick read gave me all the feels!!! Mackenzie and Colton were so sweet and intense together. The chemistry was hot! The sex scenes were smoking🔥🔥🔥. We also had a wonderful epilogue. Olivia Turner did not disappoint ❤️😍❤️😍
This quick read gave me all the feels!!! Mackenzie and Colton were so sweet and intense together. The chemistry was hot! The sex scenes were smoking🔥🔥🔥. We also had a wonderful epilogue. Olivia Turner did not disappoint ❤️😍❤️😍
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October 18, 2020TW/CW:
internalized misogyny, sexual harassment, violence, death, classism.
Not the best, not the worst, but I could do without the really bad slut shaming and misogyny. Otherwise, it had pretty good moments.
internalized misogyny, sexual harassment, violence, death, classism.
Not the best, not the worst, but I could do without the really bad slut shaming and misogyny. Otherwise, it had pretty good moments.
June 11, 2023
Mac & Colton were cute together, the regular ott/p/j H & innocent h.
Steam-2/3 breeding kink
Steam-2/3 breeding kink
September 18, 2019
Awesomely EPIC!!!
THIS is the steaming, sexy, sizzling, sweet goodness I’ve come to expect from OTT. An innocent heroine who ONLY belongs to the hero just makes a smexy love story more meaningful, more intense, with a deeper and more powerful connection and no one does it better than OTT.
The h is a shy, sweet girl who gets dragged to a party on the wrong side of the tracks. Totally out of her element, she’s cornered by a scumrat who is looking to slither into her pants.
When the hero sees the heroine, he’s immediately knocked on his ass. He knows she’s the one for him and when he witnesses her fending off the advances of a thug, every veneer of self-control and civilization melts away. He attacks like a barbarian and carries his girl off into the night. To claim her as his and be given the precious and irreplaceable gift of her innocence.
They know they’re meant for each other but her family can only see his tattoos and zip code. Will she defy her parents, leave the luxury and comfort of her wealthy life and choose him over her own family? No spoilers!
THIS is the steaming, sexy, sizzling, sweet goodness I’ve come to expect from OTT. An innocent heroine who ONLY belongs to the hero just makes a smexy love story more meaningful, more intense, with a deeper and more powerful connection and no one does it better than OTT.
The h is a shy, sweet girl who gets dragged to a party on the wrong side of the tracks. Totally out of her element, she’s cornered by a scumrat who is looking to slither into her pants.
When the hero sees the heroine, he’s immediately knocked on his ass. He knows she’s the one for him and when he witnesses her fending off the advances of a thug, every veneer of self-control and civilization melts away. He attacks like a barbarian and carries his girl off into the night. To claim her as his and be given the precious and irreplaceable gift of her innocence.
They know they’re meant for each other but her family can only see his tattoos and zip code. Will she defy her parents, leave the luxury and comfort of her wealthy life and choose him over her own family? No spoilers!
October 4, 2019
What a fun little ride
This was written really well. I loved the pacing of this story. The dialogue was like everything I ever wished for in a quick story. Mackenzie was so sweet and I loved her insights. I thought for being a rich and sheltered girl she handled herself pretty well. Love that by the end of the story she finally stood up for herself. Her love for Colton made her stronger. Colton is so hawt!!! He’s 27 to her 19. He’s trying to make his motorcycle detailing company on his own. At a party on the rough side of town he spots the only girl to ever make him feel an instant attraction and connection. Bring on the OTT!!!! This was fun and had some steam. I might not be into OTT as I thought so some parts just didn’t really hit the mark for me, so I gave this four stars. But I like this author’s style.
This was written really well. I loved the pacing of this story. The dialogue was like everything I ever wished for in a quick story. Mackenzie was so sweet and I loved her insights. I thought for being a rich and sheltered girl she handled herself pretty well. Love that by the end of the story she finally stood up for herself. Her love for Colton made her stronger. Colton is so hawt!!! He’s 27 to her 19. He’s trying to make his motorcycle detailing company on his own. At a party on the rough side of town he spots the only girl to ever make him feel an instant attraction and connection. Bring on the OTT!!!! This was fun and had some steam. I might not be into OTT as I thought so some parts just didn’t really hit the mark for me, so I gave this four stars. But I like this author’s style.
September 14, 2019
I love this newest addition to the novellas of Olivia T Turner! Mackenzie - the sweet, innocent shy girl who ends up on the wrong side of the tracks at some party that her friend, Joy, drags her to. When Mackenzie finds herself cornered by some creepy loser, breathtakingly handsome Colton comes to her rescue. It’s love at first sight for the both of them - but will it survive when Mackenzie’s parents meet him at their lake house?
Olivia has this fantastic ability to write characters that you will remember, with a good plot and so much heat - while keeping the story short. Her Hero’s are the perfect amount of alpha and heroines aren’t weak. So if you are looking for a quick, hot, and good read - this is a good pick.
*I received an advanced reader copy in exchange for my honest review*
Olivia has this fantastic ability to write characters that you will remember, with a good plot and so much heat - while keeping the story short. Her Hero’s are the perfect amount of alpha and heroines aren’t weak. So if you are looking for a quick, hot, and good read - this is a good pick.
*I received an advanced reader copy in exchange for my honest review*
September 22, 2019
I was looking for a smutty book and I hadn’t read one from this author. It was a decent read. I liked the fact it’s more dialogue based which is nice since most smutty authors are heavily descriptive writers which isn’t my thing.
The scenes were mild at best and the storyline was okay. The side characters like joy was annoying and the main heroine was really stupid BUT she is 18. Although tip to the author no teenager uses Facebook. They say that is for old people (like me and probably the author). All the young kids use insta.
I liked the OTT hero though.
I would pick up other books by this author. I also liked that the full book was loaded on my kindle. I hate it when I read novellas and it ends at the 70% mark.
The scenes were mild at best and the storyline was okay. The side characters like joy was annoying and the main heroine was really stupid BUT she is 18. Although tip to the author no teenager uses Facebook. They say that is for old people (like me and probably the author). All the young kids use insta.
I liked the OTT hero though.
I would pick up other books by this author. I also liked that the full book was loaded on my kindle. I hate it when I read novellas and it ends at the 70% mark.
September 15, 2019
Barbaric, muscles, tattooed body. Oh My!
First Everything is an Insta-love romance. Mackenzie is a 19 year old sweet young virgin that comes from a wealthy family. Colton comes from the other side of the tracks. He is a 27 year old, with long dirty blond hair and tattoos from top to bottom. Everything you want in an OTT man! Mackenzie finds herself in trouble and Colton is there to rescue the little "chipmunk". You get bikers fighting, family drama, lots of Olivia T. Turner hot sex scenes that only she can write, HEA and 3 epilogues! It doesn't disappoint.
First Everything is an Insta-love romance. Mackenzie is a 19 year old sweet young virgin that comes from a wealthy family. Colton comes from the other side of the tracks. He is a 27 year old, with long dirty blond hair and tattoos from top to bottom. Everything you want in an OTT man! Mackenzie finds herself in trouble and Colton is there to rescue the little "chipmunk". You get bikers fighting, family drama, lots of Olivia T. Turner hot sex scenes that only she can write, HEA and 3 epilogues! It doesn't disappoint.
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September 18, 2019
This book had all of this author's trademark insta-everything, OTT alpha H sexy goodness wrapped up in a"good girl meets knight in shining armor from the wrong side of the tracks" story. There is not a lot of time to develop a fully fleshed out storyline, but the writing is smooth, the characters are great and the epilogues are so satisfying.
I received a complimentary copy in exchange for an unbiased review.
I received a complimentary copy in exchange for an unbiased review.
September 13, 2019
This was a great young love story. Colton is way hot! Mackenzie is a rich girl who meets down to earth Colton. Great telling of how to stand up for yourself and make something of yourself.
September 19, 2019
this was a really cool, fast and insta-everything, i loved them <3
September 23, 2019
This is the dumbest book I've ever tried to read...DNF
September 29, 2022
First Everything is the story of Colton and Mackenzie.
Tropes:
-bad boy x good girl
-rich girl x middle class
-motorcycle riding alpha hero
-sweet innocent and kind heroine
-breeding kink
Her and her friend, Joy go to a party and she gets cornered by a guy named Scorpion who later shows up to the lake house after they escaped the party. Colton sees her uncomfortable in Scorpion’s arms due to her being from the richer side of the tracks. Her family is rich. He’s middle class and gives bad man vibes. He beats Scorpion up at the party to which they escape to her families lake house. He claims her and this man rides a motorcycle to which makes him even more hotter and he was just so self assured it was almost making me flustered. Anyways yeh they do the deed many times and then she gets a fake phone call who turns out to be Scorpion but she ignores it and gets on with her day. So her parents show up first and her mother is suspicious and her father is downright furious. Then Scorpion and his goons show up and Colton shows them what’s up and beats them up. Scorpion dies sadly💀. Her father is thankful but still against their relationship due to him being middle class. He decides to leave due to her father not wanting him anywhere near her. A day later she leaves and goes to the address he gave her and yeh. HEA and kids.
Solid 4/5
Tropes:
-bad boy x good girl
-rich girl x middle class
-motorcycle riding alpha hero
-sweet innocent and kind heroine
-breeding kink
Her and her friend, Joy go to a party and she gets cornered by a guy named Scorpion who later shows up to the lake house after they escaped the party. Colton sees her uncomfortable in Scorpion’s arms due to her being from the richer side of the tracks. Her family is rich. He’s middle class and gives bad man vibes. He beats Scorpion up at the party to which they escape to her families lake house. He claims her and this man rides a motorcycle to which makes him even more hotter and he was just so self assured it was almost making me flustered. Anyways yeh they do the deed many times and then she gets a fake phone call who turns out to be Scorpion but she ignores it and gets on with her day. So her parents show up first and her mother is suspicious and her father is downright furious. Then Scorpion and his goons show up and Colton shows them what’s up and beats them up. Scorpion dies sadly💀. Her father is thankful but still against their relationship due to him being middle class. He decides to leave due to her father not wanting him anywhere near her. A day later she leaves and goes to the address he gave her and yeh. HEA and kids.
Solid 4/5
April 10, 2023
3.5
Rápido.
Mackenzie obligada por su mejor amiga acude a una fiesta en la parte más peligrosa de la ciudad y ahí conoce a Colton donde enseguida saltan las chispas, ella descubre que su mejor amiga la abandonó y Colton decide llevarla se van a la casa del lago de ella a pasar unos días a solas.
Sinceramente no me esperaba el final de esa historia ya que creí que solo se quedaría en el papá de Mackenzie separándolos y listo; pero me agradó el final aunque el principio haya pasado todo tan rápido.
Rápido.
Mackenzie obligada por su mejor amiga acude a una fiesta en la parte más peligrosa de la ciudad y ahí conoce a Colton donde enseguida saltan las chispas, ella descubre que su mejor amiga la abandonó y Colton decide llevarla se van a la casa del lago de ella a pasar unos días a solas.
Sinceramente no me esperaba el final de esa historia ya que creí que solo se quedaría en el papá de Mackenzie separándolos y listo; pero me agradó el final aunque el principio haya pasado todo tan rápido.
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