I wanted to like this book more, but things didn't come together as nicely as I had hoped.
I like the world. The lore was a little sparse, but what I could see was interesting. I can tell this is a prologue for the author's other books, so maybe he thought people who already read them wouldn't want repeat info, but a book should be able to stand mostly on its own, even if it's part of a series. There were also portions that I could tell were references to later events or inside jokes that I'm sure were great, but they fell flat since I haven't read the other books, which is too bad.
Ynna started out okay and I was interested to see where she ended up, but as the story went on and she interacted with more people, she became more and more of a Mary Sue, which is really too bad. People either loved her because she was smart and pretty and a natural leader, or they disliked her because she was smart and pretty and a natural leader. She had some false modesty about herself but clearly the world revolves around her, right up to her mentor character giving her the "destined for greatness" speech.
The dialogue was a little flat in places, and some of the key characters did and said things that didn't fit their character or the context. The way her friends immediately switched from loving her to hating her for something that wasn't even her fault, and when they knew the risks involved, really hurt the story for me.
And in the latter portion of the book, a lot of things just kind of happened because they needed to happen. The reveal of what happened to her brother came out of nowhere and fell flat emotionally since I didn't know she had a brother until 80% into the book, and the logic didn't really check out with the prison sequence. The ending was very rushed, and obviously I'm supposed to know these characters, but they're paper thin and their taking her in as a random stranger off the street makes no sense. Her fixation on Carcer at the end rather than Killian, who caused literally all of her misery during the book, also didn't check out. I didn't get any sense of realness out of that last chapter, and it wasn't satisfying.
There's lots of potential for this world, and maybe the character of Ynna gets written batter in the other books, but this one didn't work out for me. It felt a little hasty and unedited in terms of story and flow. I think maybe he started with a solid idea--which I enjoyed in the beginning--and didn't know quite how to end it. Wish I could give it a better rating.