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My Myth Trilogy #1
Riven
Which Reality Would YOU Choose?Seventeen year-old Emily's dad is in prison for securities fraud and her mom's strung-out on pain meds, leaving Emily to parent herself and her younger brothers and sister. She's got things mostly under control until a couple weeks before Dad's release, when voices start whispering in her head, and Gabe, the hot lifeguard at the pool, notices the strange brands engraved on her arm...the ones she's trying desperately to hide. Emily doesn't know how the symbols got there or what they mean. They appeared overnight and now they're infected and bleeding. She's pretty sure she's losing her mind.Stress, insomnia, and her wounded egos drive Emily to self-medicate, which has to be why the nightmares from her childhood have resurfaced, why they're commandeering her conscious even when she's awake. It has to be why the fairytale creatures she created as a little girl insist they need her help. Triggered by the return of her childhood abuser and unable to cope with reality, Emily slips completely inside her elaborate fantasy world. She's powerful in the First Realm, maybe even more powerful than her attacker. It would be so easy to stay there, to lose herself in enchantment...to lose herself in love. But something sinister lurks in the forest shadows. Emily soon discovers her demons have followed her inside her fairytale. They're hunting her. With the help of the Fae, she frantically searches for the weapons she needs to defeat her greatest fears and escape back to reality before the man who tortured her can prey on her younger brothers and sister, too. Time is running out...
326 pages, Paperback
First published August 25, 2016
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Jane Alvey Harris
8 books140 followersMs. Harris is the author of the award-winning YA psychological fantasy thriller series, the My Myth Trilogy. Book One, RIVEN, is optioned for a feature film. Jane loves to watch and study what makes us tick as humans. She’s definitely a dreamer. Her favorite thing to do is use her wild imagination to weave together settings and stories for characters to live and learn in...herself included. Jane also enjoys writing short stories, which provides her the perfect opportunity to delve into her emotions and psyche in order to breathe life into the characters and scenes that beckon to her in her waking and sleeping dreams. Her shorts are published in several anthologies.
When she isn’t working on her own manuscripts, you can find Jane teaching private creative and academic writing classes, and narrating audiobooks. You might say she’s a bit obsessed with the written word.
When she isn’t working on her own manuscripts, you can find Jane teaching private creative and academic writing classes, and narrating audiobooks. You might say she’s a bit obsessed with the written word.
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April 29, 2017
Guys! I didn't know I could review my own book! Anways, I'm straight up in love with RIVEN because it's MAGIC and because the Uni gave it to me and patiently waited 4 years until I learned to write well enough to tell it. I love it because my kids are in it...Jacob, Aidan, and Claire (for reals Jacob would sell his own mother down the river for a rare Magic the Gathering card. Oh wait. I am his mother). I love it because my maiden name really is Alvey and it really does mean Elf Warrior, and that is like, the coolest thing EVAH. I also love it because I believe it is IMPORTANT.
Is it an easy-peasy read? NOPE. It's not meant to be. Riven means violently torn apart. When someone (or something) is torn apart violently it's bound to be messy.
On the surface, RIVEN is an enchanting fairytale adventure. Layers below the surface explore the lifelong ramifications of childhood abuse, not just for the abused, but for the entire family of the victim as well, generationally. On an even deeper level, Emily grapples with a dissociative disorder and her discordant egos in order to learn how to best protect herself when her childhood abuser suddenly re-enters her life.
I worked passionately researching the My Myth Trilogy. I attended therapy for YEARS making peace with my own egos (some of the scenes in RIVEN are taken directly from my hypnosis and EMDR sessions). I read case files and text books, and attended trials. Perhaps most importantly, I have had the distinct honor of acting as an Outcry Witness for six different adult male and female survivors of childhood abuse. I hold their stories sacrosanct.
For far too many people old and young, this story is NOT confusing, because far too many of us, when we were young and terrified, created elaborate fantasy worlds in order to escape a reality that was too ugly and violent for our violated bodies, our wounded souls.
If you find yourself struggling between what is real and what is fantasy in the book (not in your life), you are lucky. Maybe be willing to let go of timelines. Be open to the idea that BOTH what's happening in Emily's mind and what's happening in the real world make up her reality. Don't worry so much about when something happened or where...only that it happened.
Editors and Agents and wise consultants always tell us writers to trust our audience. I wrote RIVEN trusting you more than a little. Trusting that you'd look for clues and tropes and symbols. Trusting that if something makes you uncomfortable you'll realize it probably means something isn't right. There is a WHOLE LOT not right in Emily's world. She might not respond to situations in healthy ways, and not everyone she meets will be trustworthy (like, did you know that strange men helping struggling women in parking lots is a trope? Cuz it IS). If characters say or do things that jar you, trust yourself...be jarred. If you would never do something a character does and it creates tension in you, BE tense. Those are clues, yo.
This isn't just a story about nothing, and it isn't a story about no one. It is a story about Something Important and it belongs to All Of Us.
But it might not be for you. If you are too thrown off that some people call the main character Emma and some call her Emily (including the voices in her head) and aren't willing to consider that it might be an important distinction, this might not be the book for you. If you think that molestation is okay in a YA book but a dozen swear words aren't, this might not be the book for you. If you'd rather have either all fantasy or all contemporary realism, this probably isn't the book for you.
But.
Ifffffff you keep an open mind and like to be transported, and if you don't mind light introspection and thinking, and if you are low-key curious about the world you live in and are interested in joining a social discussion about abuse, addiction, ptsd, mental illness, recovery, self-acceptance, and self-mercy in an imaginative genre-bending, reality blurring way, Step Right This Way, cuz we gonna have some FUN.
Read. Enjoy. And then join a conversation. With me or anyone else. Let's bring our stories out in the open and get rid of the shame and the guilt. Let's stop predators in their TRACKS. Let's start Healing.
Is it an easy-peasy read? NOPE. It's not meant to be. Riven means violently torn apart. When someone (or something) is torn apart violently it's bound to be messy.
On the surface, RIVEN is an enchanting fairytale adventure. Layers below the surface explore the lifelong ramifications of childhood abuse, not just for the abused, but for the entire family of the victim as well, generationally. On an even deeper level, Emily grapples with a dissociative disorder and her discordant egos in order to learn how to best protect herself when her childhood abuser suddenly re-enters her life.
I worked passionately researching the My Myth Trilogy. I attended therapy for YEARS making peace with my own egos (some of the scenes in RIVEN are taken directly from my hypnosis and EMDR sessions). I read case files and text books, and attended trials. Perhaps most importantly, I have had the distinct honor of acting as an Outcry Witness for six different adult male and female survivors of childhood abuse. I hold their stories sacrosanct.
For far too many people old and young, this story is NOT confusing, because far too many of us, when we were young and terrified, created elaborate fantasy worlds in order to escape a reality that was too ugly and violent for our violated bodies, our wounded souls.
If you find yourself struggling between what is real and what is fantasy in the book (not in your life), you are lucky. Maybe be willing to let go of timelines. Be open to the idea that BOTH what's happening in Emily's mind and what's happening in the real world make up her reality. Don't worry so much about when something happened or where...only that it happened.
Editors and Agents and wise consultants always tell us writers to trust our audience. I wrote RIVEN trusting you more than a little. Trusting that you'd look for clues and tropes and symbols. Trusting that if something makes you uncomfortable you'll realize it probably means something isn't right. There is a WHOLE LOT not right in Emily's world. She might not respond to situations in healthy ways, and not everyone she meets will be trustworthy (like, did you know that strange men helping struggling women in parking lots is a trope? Cuz it IS). If characters say or do things that jar you, trust yourself...be jarred. If you would never do something a character does and it creates tension in you, BE tense. Those are clues, yo.
This isn't just a story about nothing, and it isn't a story about no one. It is a story about Something Important and it belongs to All Of Us.
But it might not be for you. If you are too thrown off that some people call the main character Emma and some call her Emily (including the voices in her head) and aren't willing to consider that it might be an important distinction, this might not be the book for you. If you think that molestation is okay in a YA book but a dozen swear words aren't, this might not be the book for you. If you'd rather have either all fantasy or all contemporary realism, this probably isn't the book for you.
But.
Ifffffff you keep an open mind and like to be transported, and if you don't mind light introspection and thinking, and if you are low-key curious about the world you live in and are interested in joining a social discussion about abuse, addiction, ptsd, mental illness, recovery, self-acceptance, and self-mercy in an imaginative genre-bending, reality blurring way, Step Right This Way, cuz we gonna have some FUN.
Read. Enjoy. And then join a conversation. With me or anyone else. Let's bring our stories out in the open and get rid of the shame and the guilt. Let's stop predators in their TRACKS. Let's start Healing.
February 12, 2018
The character of Emily was the first reason that I found this novel interesting. Sassy, smart, seemingly level-headed, a confident teenager poised for womanhood yet still struggling with shaking off the last bonds of her young life. As I continued reading, my view on Emily changed as author Jane Harris began revealing more and more about her. While it is difficult to share much of this story without ruining it for other readers, I will do my best to describe the book without spoilers.
Emily stumbled upon the First Realm when she was a young girl. She periodically enters this world of Faes and fantasy, and recent events concerning the Queen and Princess Nissa propel Emily (as well as her younger siblings) into a pivotal role. Before you write this book off as just another young-girl-saves-the-fantasy-world, I assure you it is much more than that. This book takes a number of genres, from paranormal thriller to young romance to fantasy to YA and horror, tangling them all together and coming up with something different.
The dark themes and occasional adult language make this book a perfect fit for older teens and up (as an adult, I thoroughly enjoyed the story). Ms. Harris displays talented descriptions throughout: “His sister is dead. The loss in his eyes skips like polished river rocks across my surface.” Another example: “I lean into him, resting my head on his shoulder. He’s stronger and safer than any blanket I can imagine.” It is descriptive passages like these that say so little but contain so much meaning.
Bottom line – This is an entertaining tale, complete with characters that make it easy for readers to become involved. The plot has no holes, and despite being a trilogy, there is an end to this part of the story. Even after I thought I had everything figured out, the Epilogue dropped one more bombshell into my lap. Highly recommended. Five stars.
My thanks to the author for a complimentary copy of this book.
Emily stumbled upon the First Realm when she was a young girl. She periodically enters this world of Faes and fantasy, and recent events concerning the Queen and Princess Nissa propel Emily (as well as her younger siblings) into a pivotal role. Before you write this book off as just another young-girl-saves-the-fantasy-world, I assure you it is much more than that. This book takes a number of genres, from paranormal thriller to young romance to fantasy to YA and horror, tangling them all together and coming up with something different.
The dark themes and occasional adult language make this book a perfect fit for older teens and up (as an adult, I thoroughly enjoyed the story). Ms. Harris displays talented descriptions throughout: “His sister is dead. The loss in his eyes skips like polished river rocks across my surface.” Another example: “I lean into him, resting my head on his shoulder. He’s stronger and safer than any blanket I can imagine.” It is descriptive passages like these that say so little but contain so much meaning.
Bottom line – This is an entertaining tale, complete with characters that make it easy for readers to become involved. The plot has no holes, and despite being a trilogy, there is an end to this part of the story. Even after I thought I had everything figured out, the Epilogue dropped one more bombshell into my lap. Highly recommended. Five stars.
My thanks to the author for a complimentary copy of this book.
December 11, 2016
I recieved this book through goodreads giveaway.
it was an enjoyable read but it didnt really grip me at first. Some bits were a bit choppy due to the fact that this book is based around fantasy and reality and sometimes you couldnt tell which one you were in which is not really a bad thing as your experiencing what the main character Emily is feeling. Also, because it is an advanced reader copy, there were some grammatical mistakes but it didnt take anything away from the book. I also liked the fact that she used a fantasy world to cope with past trauma of abuse by her dad. The parellels were really well done. The endng could have been better as it felt rushed to me. if this book was not based around family abuse it could have been a good children's tv show or movie. On the other hand, i think those who have suffered abuse from their family will be able to relate to this book more than i did. But, it was a good insight into how children and even young adults cope and deal with the past to help their present and future relationships be healthy or unhealthy. Overall, it was an enjoyable read.
it was an enjoyable read but it didnt really grip me at first. Some bits were a bit choppy due to the fact that this book is based around fantasy and reality and sometimes you couldnt tell which one you were in which is not really a bad thing as your experiencing what the main character Emily is feeling. Also, because it is an advanced reader copy, there were some grammatical mistakes but it didnt take anything away from the book. I also liked the fact that she used a fantasy world to cope with past trauma of abuse by her dad. The parellels were really well done. The endng could have been better as it felt rushed to me. if this book was not based around family abuse it could have been a good children's tv show or movie. On the other hand, i think those who have suffered abuse from their family will be able to relate to this book more than i did. But, it was a good insight into how children and even young adults cope and deal with the past to help their present and future relationships be healthy or unhealthy. Overall, it was an enjoyable read.
June 12, 2020
'Riven by Jane Alvey Harris' is the first volume in Myth series. Driven by magic, thriller and dark mysteries this book is a power house of electrifying elements that this book possess.
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Emily and her siblings are deprived of their parents for some critical reasons. Dad's in prison and the mother caught up in pain meds which keeps her out of the picture.
Soon the event starts weaving the plot further and takes a turn which is totally unexpected. The magical side is revealed in the head of Emily, it is her imagination that controls her and drives the plot further.
The strange brands or impressions on Emily's arms and suspicious appearance brings becomes first conflict for the readers to probe. Once the curtains starts to fall off from those marks, the entry of Emily's child abuser escalates the plot further making it more deep. More imaginative, fantasy world building starts taking it shapes and drama gets more intense.
The author has inculcate many social issues which happens inside the four walls of a room. Child abuses, sexual assaults, murder and mayhem takes shapes in this pacy thriller drama. The narrative can slightly be disturbing for some who has unfortunately gone through any of the situations mentioned above.
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Writing and narration are spot on. It is descriptive and dreamlike ambience gets created when you read it. The only criticism I would like to throw light on is that world building could have been more clearer. Also, the book falling under the popular category is slightly complex, you cannot take longer breaks. But, if you're someone who loves mind twisting novels get this book.
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Emily and her siblings are deprived of their parents for some critical reasons. Dad's in prison and the mother caught up in pain meds which keeps her out of the picture.
Soon the event starts weaving the plot further and takes a turn which is totally unexpected. The magical side is revealed in the head of Emily, it is her imagination that controls her and drives the plot further.
The strange brands or impressions on Emily's arms and suspicious appearance brings becomes first conflict for the readers to probe. Once the curtains starts to fall off from those marks, the entry of Emily's child abuser escalates the plot further making it more deep. More imaginative, fantasy world building starts taking it shapes and drama gets more intense.
The author has inculcate many social issues which happens inside the four walls of a room. Child abuses, sexual assaults, murder and mayhem takes shapes in this pacy thriller drama. The narrative can slightly be disturbing for some who has unfortunately gone through any of the situations mentioned above.
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Writing and narration are spot on. It is descriptive and dreamlike ambience gets created when you read it. The only criticism I would like to throw light on is that world building could have been more clearer. Also, the book falling under the popular category is slightly complex, you cannot take longer breaks. But, if you're someone who loves mind twisting novels get this book.
March 6, 2018
Rating: 3.5/5
Genre: YA Fantasy/Contemporary
Recommended Age: 18+ (trigger warnings for child molestation, domestic violence, and sexual assault. Language and violence)
Pages: 326
Author Website
Amazon Link
I received a copy of this book courtesy of KidLitExchange. Thanks! All opinions are my own.
Synopsis: Which reality would you choose? Seventeen year-old Emily’s dad is in prison for securities fraud and her mom's strung-out on pain meds, leaving Emily to parent herself and her younger brothers and sister. She’s got things mostly under control until a couple weeks before Dad’s release, when voices start whispering in her head, and Gabe, the hot lifeguard at the pool, notices the strange brands engraved on her arm...the ones she's trying desperately to hide. Emily doesn't know how the symbols got there or what they mean. They appeared overnight and now they're infected and bleeding. She's pretty sure she's losing her mind. Stress, insomnia, and her wounded egos drive Emily to self-medicate, which has to be why the nightmares from her childhood have resurfaced, why they're commandeering her conscious even when she's awake. It has to be why the fairytale creatures she created as a little girl insist they need her help. Triggered by the return of her childhood abuser and unable to cope with reality, Emily slips completely inside her elaborate fantasy world. She's powerful in the First Realm, maybe even more powerful than her attacker. It would be so easy to stay there, to lose herself in enchantment...to lose herself in love. But something sinister lurks in the forest shadows. Emily soon discovers her demons have followed her inside her fairytale. They're hunting her. With the help of the Fae, she frantically searches for the weapons she needs to defeat her greatest fears and escape back to reality before the man who tortured her can prey on her younger brothers and sister, too. Time is running out...
Well I didn’t want to sleep at all this weekend after I finished this book. Deep, personal, and disturbing all in one, this book weaves a beautiful tale about a girl who retreats into a fantasy world as a stress response when her abusive father is being released from prison… or is it? Is she dreaming or is it real? That’s the question you’ll ask yourself throughout the book. The plot of this book is certainly intriguing as it’s a mystery the reader is constantly trying to solve and the pacing is well done.
However, I felt that the world building of the book could have been better, for both the real and the fantasy world. The dissent into the fantasy world comes unexpectedly and the writing doesn’t help the transition. It really takes the reader a few minutes to realize which world I was in. And beyond Emily’s own development (which arguably doesn’t really get resolved in the end) none of the other characters are developed.
Verdict: If you’re really into psychology and/or like reading about mental illness then this book may be for you. However, it’s not for the faint of heart so please take measure to care for yourself if you read this book.
Genre: YA Fantasy/Contemporary
Recommended Age: 18+ (trigger warnings for child molestation, domestic violence, and sexual assault. Language and violence)
Pages: 326
Author Website
Amazon Link
I received a copy of this book courtesy of KidLitExchange. Thanks! All opinions are my own.
Synopsis: Which reality would you choose? Seventeen year-old Emily’s dad is in prison for securities fraud and her mom's strung-out on pain meds, leaving Emily to parent herself and her younger brothers and sister. She’s got things mostly under control until a couple weeks before Dad’s release, when voices start whispering in her head, and Gabe, the hot lifeguard at the pool, notices the strange brands engraved on her arm...the ones she's trying desperately to hide. Emily doesn't know how the symbols got there or what they mean. They appeared overnight and now they're infected and bleeding. She's pretty sure she's losing her mind. Stress, insomnia, and her wounded egos drive Emily to self-medicate, which has to be why the nightmares from her childhood have resurfaced, why they're commandeering her conscious even when she's awake. It has to be why the fairytale creatures she created as a little girl insist they need her help. Triggered by the return of her childhood abuser and unable to cope with reality, Emily slips completely inside her elaborate fantasy world. She's powerful in the First Realm, maybe even more powerful than her attacker. It would be so easy to stay there, to lose herself in enchantment...to lose herself in love. But something sinister lurks in the forest shadows. Emily soon discovers her demons have followed her inside her fairytale. They're hunting her. With the help of the Fae, she frantically searches for the weapons she needs to defeat her greatest fears and escape back to reality before the man who tortured her can prey on her younger brothers and sister, too. Time is running out...
Well I didn’t want to sleep at all this weekend after I finished this book. Deep, personal, and disturbing all in one, this book weaves a beautiful tale about a girl who retreats into a fantasy world as a stress response when her abusive father is being released from prison… or is it? Is she dreaming or is it real? That’s the question you’ll ask yourself throughout the book. The plot of this book is certainly intriguing as it’s a mystery the reader is constantly trying to solve and the pacing is well done.
However, I felt that the world building of the book could have been better, for both the real and the fantasy world. The dissent into the fantasy world comes unexpectedly and the writing doesn’t help the transition. It really takes the reader a few minutes to realize which world I was in. And beyond Emily’s own development (which arguably doesn’t really get resolved in the end) none of the other characters are developed.
Verdict: If you’re really into psychology and/or like reading about mental illness then this book may be for you. However, it’s not for the faint of heart so please take measure to care for yourself if you read this book.
June 7, 2017
*Gifted a copy via Goodreads giveaway* Very interesting premise and some strong faerie-fantasy writing. Non-explicit, but trigger warning for child molestation, child and spousal abuse.
Due to the premise, which involves childhood abuse and the resulting trauma with fantasy/storytelling as a coping mechanism, the reading experience gets a bit confusing. There are multiple realities overlapping and intruding on one another, and it can be hard to follow, which could be an interesting artistic choice to make you really feel the protagonist's confusion and disorientation. I feel like this story is about 80% of the way to being absolutely excellent and could have benefited from another round of refining - but that said, it's still an enjoyable read, has a unique approach to meaningful discussions, and sets up the series well.
For an indie-published work, it's excellent; clean, beautifully designed and enjoyable. While fast-pacing is usually something we applaud, I think the tension and story could have been drawn out more, maybe leaving some of the reveals for further books in the series, as it felt like a bit too much going on, with magical powers, multiple realities, psychological trauma and sort of new-age-y self-actualization concepts coming on a little too strong and fast in a block part way through. The story might have done a little better with more room to breathe - but the flip side is, I think the series may be a lot of fun going forward with more of the fantasy stuff coming through. A solid debut effort; Harris has a lot of potential and has done a great job on producing her first book.
Due to the premise, which involves childhood abuse and the resulting trauma with fantasy/storytelling as a coping mechanism, the reading experience gets a bit confusing. There are multiple realities overlapping and intruding on one another, and it can be hard to follow, which could be an interesting artistic choice to make you really feel the protagonist's confusion and disorientation. I feel like this story is about 80% of the way to being absolutely excellent and could have benefited from another round of refining - but that said, it's still an enjoyable read, has a unique approach to meaningful discussions, and sets up the series well.
For an indie-published work, it's excellent; clean, beautifully designed and enjoyable. While fast-pacing is usually something we applaud, I think the tension and story could have been drawn out more, maybe leaving some of the reveals for further books in the series, as it felt like a bit too much going on, with magical powers, multiple realities, psychological trauma and sort of new-age-y self-actualization concepts coming on a little too strong and fast in a block part way through. The story might have done a little better with more room to breathe - but the flip side is, I think the series may be a lot of fun going forward with more of the fantasy stuff coming through. A solid debut effort; Harris has a lot of potential and has done a great job on producing her first book.
March 12, 2018
RIVEN (MY MYTH TRILOGY BOOK I) is a young adult fantasy novel about the world of the fae and a teenaged girl who possesses powers she doesn’t fully understand. When the lines between fantasy and reality begin blurring in Emily Alvey’s life, she starts to question her own sanity. With her mother suffering from depression, she is the sole caretaker for her three younger siblings and now her father is being released from prison after ten years. No wonder Emily is stressed and beginning to manifest the stress in physical ways. But there is more to Emily than meets the eye. She begins to put the pieces together when she remembers a mysterious box from her childhood. Now, as her story unfolds, she begins to understand from where her strength comes. She finds she must enter the realm of the fairies to seek answers, but what will she find? And which world will she choose? Will she choose to stay in the realm of the fairies or will she return to her life with her family?
Jane Alvey Harris’s novel a well-written story that leads the reader on a journey of imagination and adventure. There are plenty of plot twists and surprises to keep the reader up past bedtime reading. But more than that, it’s a book about the power of the mind. At its core, it’s a story of survival – the struggle between good and evil. It is a tribute to the human spirit and the capacity of the individual to rise above one’s fate and overcome adversity. Kudos to Harris for tackling a dark subject in a book that reveals the truth that we don’t have to become victims of our past, but can garner strength from family, friends and the will to survive.
Jane Alvey Harris’s novel a well-written story that leads the reader on a journey of imagination and adventure. There are plenty of plot twists and surprises to keep the reader up past bedtime reading. But more than that, it’s a book about the power of the mind. At its core, it’s a story of survival – the struggle between good and evil. It is a tribute to the human spirit and the capacity of the individual to rise above one’s fate and overcome adversity. Kudos to Harris for tackling a dark subject in a book that reveals the truth that we don’t have to become victims of our past, but can garner strength from family, friends and the will to survive.
September 26, 2017
What a fantastic book. It just draws you right in. Looking forward to the next in the series.
May 10, 2018
Riven is a refreshing YA story. Jane Alvey Harris has a powerful way with words and she uses them masterfully as she brings to life the story of Emily, a young girl with scars of the past who retreats into a fantastical world to escape the abuse of her reality. The presence of some minor characters could have been better developed, but overall this story impresses. Rich and imaginative and meaningful, Riven is an unexpected breath of fresh air.
August 24, 2018
Riven (My Myth #1) by Jane Alvey Harris showed up in my Goodreads recommendations. Intrigued by both the cover and the blurb, I added it to my TBR list. Read on for my thoughts!
Synopsis (from the author):
Which reality would you choose? Seventeen year-old Emily's dad is in prison for securities fraud and her mom's strung-out on pain meds, leaving Emily to parent herself and her younger brothers and sister. She's got things mostly under control until a couple weeks before Dad's release, when voices start whispering in her head, and Gabe, the hot lifeguard at the pool, notices the strange brands engraved on her arm...the ones she's trying desperately to hide. Emily doesn't know how the symbols got there or what they mean. They appeared overnight and now they're infected and bleeding. She's pretty sure she's losing her mind. Stress, insomnia, and her wounded egos drive Emily to self-medicate, which has to be why the nightmares from her childhood have resurfaced, why they're commandeering her conscious even when she's awake. It has to be why the fairytale creatures she created as a little girl insist they need her help. Triggered by the return of her childhood abuser and unable to cope with reality, Emily slips completely inside her elaborate fantasy world. She's powerful in the First Realm, maybe even more powerful than her attacker. It would be so easy to stay there, to lose herself in enchantment...to lose herself in love. But something sinister lurks in the forest shadows. Emily soon discovers her demons have followed her inside her fairytale. They're hunting her. With the help of the Fae, she frantically searches for the weapons she needs to defeat her greatest fears and escape back to reality before the man who tortured her can prey on her younger brothers and sister, too. Time is running out...
*Non-Explicit Trigger Warning: This book deals with the issues of child molestation and child abuse.
What I liked: Riven had many of the elements of classic fantasy. From the Fae, the First Realm, and the dragonflies in the real world, to the runes cut into her arm, the intrigue and magic made the story seem real. Emily’s substance abuse and her mother’s illness provided the perfect reasons to slip between worlds. The abuse noted at the end of the synopsis, though horrible and uncomfortable, wasn’t explicit and didn’t overtly dominate the story. Emily’s escape mechanism from the trauma did dominate the story and, by using fantasy elements to depict her protection, Jane Alvey Harris did an exceptional job handling the topic.
What I didn’t like: At times, the story was difficult to follow, especially when Emily interacted with her siblings. It was sometimes unclear whether she imagined everything or if her siblings also saw what she saw. Gabe’s insistence to be included in Emily’s life (despite the fact it was explained late in the book) was a bit odd for me.
Overall impression: Excellent characters, a good story, and memorable fantasy elements made Riven (My Myth #1) a book to read. Certainly not for early YA, this one is geared more toward older teens. The book handles a difficult subject well, but with the fantasy elements dominating the story, it is a good read. Fantasy fans should read it!
My rating: 4 Stars
Synopsis (from the author):
Which reality would you choose? Seventeen year-old Emily's dad is in prison for securities fraud and her mom's strung-out on pain meds, leaving Emily to parent herself and her younger brothers and sister. She's got things mostly under control until a couple weeks before Dad's release, when voices start whispering in her head, and Gabe, the hot lifeguard at the pool, notices the strange brands engraved on her arm...the ones she's trying desperately to hide. Emily doesn't know how the symbols got there or what they mean. They appeared overnight and now they're infected and bleeding. She's pretty sure she's losing her mind. Stress, insomnia, and her wounded egos drive Emily to self-medicate, which has to be why the nightmares from her childhood have resurfaced, why they're commandeering her conscious even when she's awake. It has to be why the fairytale creatures she created as a little girl insist they need her help. Triggered by the return of her childhood abuser and unable to cope with reality, Emily slips completely inside her elaborate fantasy world. She's powerful in the First Realm, maybe even more powerful than her attacker. It would be so easy to stay there, to lose herself in enchantment...to lose herself in love. But something sinister lurks in the forest shadows. Emily soon discovers her demons have followed her inside her fairytale. They're hunting her. With the help of the Fae, she frantically searches for the weapons she needs to defeat her greatest fears and escape back to reality before the man who tortured her can prey on her younger brothers and sister, too. Time is running out...
*Non-Explicit Trigger Warning: This book deals with the issues of child molestation and child abuse.
What I liked: Riven had many of the elements of classic fantasy. From the Fae, the First Realm, and the dragonflies in the real world, to the runes cut into her arm, the intrigue and magic made the story seem real. Emily’s substance abuse and her mother’s illness provided the perfect reasons to slip between worlds. The abuse noted at the end of the synopsis, though horrible and uncomfortable, wasn’t explicit and didn’t overtly dominate the story. Emily’s escape mechanism from the trauma did dominate the story and, by using fantasy elements to depict her protection, Jane Alvey Harris did an exceptional job handling the topic.
What I didn’t like: At times, the story was difficult to follow, especially when Emily interacted with her siblings. It was sometimes unclear whether she imagined everything or if her siblings also saw what she saw. Gabe’s insistence to be included in Emily’s life (despite the fact it was explained late in the book) was a bit odd for me.
Overall impression: Excellent characters, a good story, and memorable fantasy elements made Riven (My Myth #1) a book to read. Certainly not for early YA, this one is geared more toward older teens. The book handles a difficult subject well, but with the fantasy elements dominating the story, it is a good read. Fantasy fans should read it!
My rating: 4 Stars
August 18, 2016
I won this book as part of the GoodReads giveaway program. This is the first book I won from Goodreads, I am so excited!
Overall, this book is easily one of the more descriptive novels I have ever read. When she talks about Emily's (the main character) cuts and oozing of the pus from the healing of the scars, I cringed a bit. I have never felt that way about a book before, heck no movie has made me feel that way so Jane Alvey Harris has earned my respect at making me cringe with such descriptive text.
Initially, the story was a little hard for me to read as there was kind of a lot going on from the get-go but once the story begun to unfold and things were falling into place, the story flowed very well. Again, very descriptive, fast-paced, a strong sense of place, very character driven and atmospheric, the author did an exemplary job of creating this book over all. The side stories of the fantasy land were confusing at first but of course, that was only the intro. Again, once the characters begun to assert themselves and establish themselves in Emily's world, the analogy of the characters really made sense and the excitement of the story began to take place.
In the end this book is highly recommended for YA readers. For those who have had some sort of abuse in their life, whether it be physical, emotional or mental, this book really will submerse you in a relatable affair. You will not feel alone with this book and I am very much glad that this book is Part 1, so you know that this is part of an upcoming exciting series. Time to get on the My Myth bandwagon and claim bragging rights before the masses do! 9.5/10
Overall, this book is easily one of the more descriptive novels I have ever read. When she talks about Emily's (the main character) cuts and oozing of the pus from the healing of the scars, I cringed a bit. I have never felt that way about a book before, heck no movie has made me feel that way so Jane Alvey Harris has earned my respect at making me cringe with such descriptive text.
Initially, the story was a little hard for me to read as there was kind of a lot going on from the get-go but once the story begun to unfold and things were falling into place, the story flowed very well. Again, very descriptive, fast-paced, a strong sense of place, very character driven and atmospheric, the author did an exemplary job of creating this book over all. The side stories of the fantasy land were confusing at first but of course, that was only the intro. Again, once the characters begun to assert themselves and establish themselves in Emily's world, the analogy of the characters really made sense and the excitement of the story began to take place.
In the end this book is highly recommended for YA readers. For those who have had some sort of abuse in their life, whether it be physical, emotional or mental, this book really will submerse you in a relatable affair. You will not feel alone with this book and I am very much glad that this book is Part 1, so you know that this is part of an upcoming exciting series. Time to get on the My Myth bandwagon and claim bragging rights before the masses do! 9.5/10
June 11, 2016
I was awarded this book through a goodreads giveaway. This book and just a few others have truly raised my rating standards, wishing there were extra stars I could give.
This book is about pain, strength, and survival-the amazing coping mechanisms a person has to survive the most horrific events.
Emily, a 17 year old, is acting as sole parent to her younger siblings. Her father has been incarcerated and her mother has been locked in her room for months with an addiction to prescription drugs.
For years she has told her siblings of a fairytale land. But this is no average fairytale, Emily has actually been there-and lived these scenes.
When her father is about to be released from prison, strange symbols appear on her arm and the lines between reality with her family and the land in the fairytale begin to overlap. She thinks she's losing her mind.
How easy it would be to lose yourself in a fairytale land when your reality is too hard to face.
This book is amazingly fresh. I don't believe I've read another like it. The characters and scenes are so vivid, so beautifully written with such detail that you can see and feel yourself in the story. I'm eagerly waiting for the others in this series! There's so much more I could add but hate to ruin this beautiful book for anyone!
This book is about pain, strength, and survival-the amazing coping mechanisms a person has to survive the most horrific events.
Emily, a 17 year old, is acting as sole parent to her younger siblings. Her father has been incarcerated and her mother has been locked in her room for months with an addiction to prescription drugs.
For years she has told her siblings of a fairytale land. But this is no average fairytale, Emily has actually been there-and lived these scenes.
When her father is about to be released from prison, strange symbols appear on her arm and the lines between reality with her family and the land in the fairytale begin to overlap. She thinks she's losing her mind.
How easy it would be to lose yourself in a fairytale land when your reality is too hard to face.
This book is amazingly fresh. I don't believe I've read another like it. The characters and scenes are so vivid, so beautifully written with such detail that you can see and feel yourself in the story. I'm eagerly waiting for the others in this series! There's so much more I could add but hate to ruin this beautiful book for anyone!
July 26, 2019
This was an awesome YA fantasy novel about a girl named Emily who tells these fairy tales to her siblings, but those tales begin to creep into her reality. It was incredible to see the web between the two worlds weaved so deeply and perfectly! I loved the story, the characters, and ALL the layers and meaning under the base of the story line. I look forward to seeing what happens next in this trilogy from debut author, Jane!
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July 29, 2019
Riven by Jane Alvey Harris
5⭐
This book is disastrously beautiful and magical. A dark fantasy YA read that gave me strong Labyrinth vibes, and the main character Emily also reminded me a little of Clary in The Mortal Instruments. This book is going to take you on a trip!
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Seventeen year old Emily is on the brink of adulthood. In most ways she has already left her childhood behind her, as she cares for her siblings alone- her father is jailed for fraud and her mother is bedridden with an assortment of causes. However Emily hangs on her childlike hope to keep her siblings together forever, safe and happy, unchanging.
Change is imminent, and it coming whether Emily wants it to or not. Strange things are happening, starting with runes carved in her arm. Suddenly the faerytales she invented long past as stories to her siblings are coming to life, and they need her more than ever. Emily needs to help the Fae in the battle to return to their realm- but Emilys own world is falling apart as her mother declines and her fathers release from prison sends her into a downward spiral. She is exhausted and self medicating, how can she fights battles in two worlds, one with thousands of lives at stake, but fantasy- and her reality, which could cost her family?
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This is a dark but beautiful YA fantasy. I was able to picture this story so vividly in my mind, the author did an astounding job of world building in a very complex story where the lines were often blurred. I felt I was with the main character every step of the way and it was truly magical. I am overjoyed to say this is part of a trilogy and the second book is out now!
Content warnings as mentioned in the synopsis, if that's not for you then I wouldn't recommend this story as its very involved, however I am one who enjoys real and hard topics especially when the are wrapped in a beautiful fantasy as this was.
A big thank you to @film.14 for hosting a giveaway where I won this signed copy!
5⭐
This book is disastrously beautiful and magical. A dark fantasy YA read that gave me strong Labyrinth vibes, and the main character Emily also reminded me a little of Clary in The Mortal Instruments. This book is going to take you on a trip!
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Seventeen year old Emily is on the brink of adulthood. In most ways she has already left her childhood behind her, as she cares for her siblings alone- her father is jailed for fraud and her mother is bedridden with an assortment of causes. However Emily hangs on her childlike hope to keep her siblings together forever, safe and happy, unchanging.
Change is imminent, and it coming whether Emily wants it to or not. Strange things are happening, starting with runes carved in her arm. Suddenly the faerytales she invented long past as stories to her siblings are coming to life, and they need her more than ever. Emily needs to help the Fae in the battle to return to their realm- but Emilys own world is falling apart as her mother declines and her fathers release from prison sends her into a downward spiral. She is exhausted and self medicating, how can she fights battles in two worlds, one with thousands of lives at stake, but fantasy- and her reality, which could cost her family?
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This is a dark but beautiful YA fantasy. I was able to picture this story so vividly in my mind, the author did an astounding job of world building in a very complex story where the lines were often blurred. I felt I was with the main character every step of the way and it was truly magical. I am overjoyed to say this is part of a trilogy and the second book is out now!
Content warnings as mentioned in the synopsis, if that's not for you then I wouldn't recommend this story as its very involved, however I am one who enjoys real and hard topics especially when the are wrapped in a beautiful fantasy as this was.
A big thank you to @film.14 for hosting a giveaway where I won this signed copy!
November 26, 2019
Riven brings you into the mind of Emily, a teenage girl who is trying to hold her family together while her dad is in prison and her mom is trying to cope with depression and a pill addiction. While trying to cope with her responsibilities and hormone Emily also deals with visions of a fairy world in trouble. Join Emily on a journey of trying to determine what is real and what is Emily trying to cope with abuse that she hides from herself and everyone around her. Jane Alvey Harris does a great job of weaving a tale with fairy’s that is in no way a fairy tale and will keep you guessing at what is real and what are hallucinations. If you like the average person in the US knows someone who has suffered from childhood abuse or has suffered yourself this story will bring up tons of emotions and at times is hard to read/listen to. This is a testament to the writing ability of Jane Harris but please be aware of the trigger warning in the author’s description. This book was given to me for free at my request and I provided this voluntary review.
December 25, 2019
Fantasy and magical realism are both genres that I enjoy so this clever mix of both was absolutely captivating.
Emily feels as if she’s losing her mind. When markings start to appear in her skin, she doesn’t know what to think or do. She tries to go about life as normal but as more things appear, she realizes she can’t ignore it. As she’s slowly plunged into a fantasy world, she realizes she has power. And she’s determined to learn how to use it to protect those closest to her.
Once I started listening to this book, it was very hard to stop. I tried to listen to the entire thing in one sitting because it was just that good. The characters were immersive and so was the worldbuilding. Beautiful blend of suspense of drama.
It’s always interesting to listen to audiobooks narrated by the author themselves. Jane did a fantastic job of bringing her characters to life, giving them a depth not possible by reading alone.
This book was given to me for free at my request and I provided this voluntary review.
Emily feels as if she’s losing her mind. When markings start to appear in her skin, she doesn’t know what to think or do. She tries to go about life as normal but as more things appear, she realizes she can’t ignore it. As she’s slowly plunged into a fantasy world, she realizes she has power. And she’s determined to learn how to use it to protect those closest to her.
Once I started listening to this book, it was very hard to stop. I tried to listen to the entire thing in one sitting because it was just that good. The characters were immersive and so was the worldbuilding. Beautiful blend of suspense of drama.
It’s always interesting to listen to audiobooks narrated by the author themselves. Jane did a fantastic job of bringing her characters to life, giving them a depth not possible by reading alone.
This book was given to me for free at my request and I provided this voluntary review.
May 21, 2017
I HIGHLY RECOMMEND FOR EVERYONE TO READ!!!!!
I'm done & I couldn't be sadder😭😭😭. It was written so beautifully getting lost in the realms made it so much better! Jane painted beautiful pictures in my head as I was reading every word. There was times where I was so lost in book that coming back to reality felt weird and wanted to get lost in the book again!!! The way Emily overcomes what she's dealing with is so great. Emily's connection and raw emotions makes getting lost and invested in what's going on. Understanding the trauma of what she sufres makes it so much grater because you feel for her. I CANT WAIT TO GET THE SEOCND BOOK!!!!!! when it comes out because I need to know what happens to J and if the make it back to 1st realm. So many EMOTIONS!!! 🙃🙂😩😨😭🤔😬🗡🗝🛡⚔️ LOVE IT!!!!!❤️❤️
I'm done & I couldn't be sadder😭😭😭. It was written so beautifully getting lost in the realms made it so much better! Jane painted beautiful pictures in my head as I was reading every word. There was times where I was so lost in book that coming back to reality felt weird and wanted to get lost in the book again!!! The way Emily overcomes what she's dealing with is so great. Emily's connection and raw emotions makes getting lost and invested in what's going on. Understanding the trauma of what she sufres makes it so much grater because you feel for her. I CANT WAIT TO GET THE SEOCND BOOK!!!!!! when it comes out because I need to know what happens to J and if the make it back to 1st realm. So many EMOTIONS!!! 🙃🙂😩😨😭🤔😬🗡🗝🛡⚔️ LOVE IT!!!!!❤️❤️
August 27, 2020
Emily is a 17-year old sassy girl. She had to start taking care of herself and her brothers and sisters because of the imprisonment of his dad and the unstable medical conditions of her mother. Soon she hears voices in her head and eventually finds herself in a fantasy land in her imagination. The whole book is a tour of the same land.
The author has used very lucid yet descriptive language and made it interesting with the many magical elements. There is a switch between narratives but the flow is never broken. It proceeds smoothly. All the elements of the fantasy world are well connected and the build-up of the story is amazing.
The author has used very lucid yet descriptive language and made it interesting with the many magical elements. There is a switch between narratives but the flow is never broken. It proceeds smoothly. All the elements of the fantasy world are well connected and the build-up of the story is amazing.
May 11, 2018
I found myself quickly fascinated with this book. The author has an amazing talent for weaving stories that are visual, intriguing, and leave you guessing. I didn't want to put it down each time I started reading.
I have always been fascinated by fairy stories, so I was extremely delighted when the fae began to appear in this tale. The twists and turns are divine; you'll doubt your beliefs just as much as Emma doubts hers by the time you get to the end of the story. I can't wait to read the second book!
I have always been fascinated by fairy stories, so I was extremely delighted when the fae began to appear in this tale. The twists and turns are divine; you'll doubt your beliefs just as much as Emma doubts hers by the time you get to the end of the story. I can't wait to read the second book!
January 20, 2020
I struggled to get into this book. It’s not badly put together, just not for me. The characters didn’t connect well for me. Please try it for yourselves though. Not every book is for every reader but that doesn’t make the book unreadable.
June 30, 2016
This review and more can be found at A Reader's Diary!
Holy.... Wow.
I had no idea what to expect when I started this book, but I'm so glad I did.
Emily Alvey is trying so hard to be a typical 17 year old girl and raise her three siblings, but that's hard to do when your father is in prison and your mother is drugged up...
One day she wakes up with runes burned into her arm. The hot lifeguard, Gabe, happens to notice them, but ignores it and takes an interest in Emily, even though she kicks him square in the face and proceeds to have a panic attack in his presence.
That day the voices start back, the little girl and the stern older lady begin telling Emma how she should live her life. Could it be because her father is getting out of prison? Could it be because there's a new boy hanging around? Could it be because her mother is finally in a good mood instead of a drug induced coma? It's possible... But it's actually a combination of all of those. The voices started when she was a little girl. "Hannah" the child in her mind, wants to keep her innocence and believe in magic. But Margaret wants to protect their secrets.
The First Realm was created by Emily in a fairytale she told her siblings. However, Emily can see the Fae and the Faeries. She can talk to the insects. She can cross between Realms. When she begins telling the story again, picking up exactly where they left off years earlier, she gets stuck in a trance and cannot break free even when her mother has overdosed. She believes her family has to fight the crimbal to save her mother and all the power she holds.
Aunt Nancy, Aunt Meg, and Uncle Ian intervene and start taking care of the siblings, but why? They don't like the family... While Emily and her siblings are in their care, Emily's vision start getting worse. Her trances are lasting longer. The voices are getting stronger. Another voice has emerged. But what do they want from her?! Nancy suggests listening to what the voices are trying to say...
Could that hurt Emily?
Could it all be in her head?
Mental disorders are growing in our society. We cannot turn a blind eye to the things that are happening all around us. Yes, it's scary to think about. But some people need our support and help. They don't understand what is happening to them. Fantasy becomes reality and that is accurately portrayed in Jane Alvey Harris's debut novel. I love that someone finally tackled this topic and even made it a teen novel!
If you or someone you know is experiencing something like this, get help.
Mental and physical abuse happens daily.
Please utilize these resources if necessary.
Childhelp National Child Abuse Hotline: 1-800-422-4453
Adult Survivors: www.ascasupport.org
A huge thank you to Jane Alvey Harris for sending me a copy of Riven through a Goodreads Giveaway!
Mark your calendars, Riven hits shelves October 2016!
Holy.... Wow.
I had no idea what to expect when I started this book, but I'm so glad I did.
Emily Alvey is trying so hard to be a typical 17 year old girl and raise her three siblings, but that's hard to do when your father is in prison and your mother is drugged up...
One day she wakes up with runes burned into her arm. The hot lifeguard, Gabe, happens to notice them, but ignores it and takes an interest in Emily, even though she kicks him square in the face and proceeds to have a panic attack in his presence.
That day the voices start back, the little girl and the stern older lady begin telling Emma how she should live her life. Could it be because her father is getting out of prison? Could it be because there's a new boy hanging around? Could it be because her mother is finally in a good mood instead of a drug induced coma? It's possible... But it's actually a combination of all of those. The voices started when she was a little girl. "Hannah" the child in her mind, wants to keep her innocence and believe in magic. But Margaret wants to protect their secrets.
The First Realm was created by Emily in a fairytale she told her siblings. However, Emily can see the Fae and the Faeries. She can talk to the insects. She can cross between Realms. When she begins telling the story again, picking up exactly where they left off years earlier, she gets stuck in a trance and cannot break free even when her mother has overdosed. She believes her family has to fight the crimbal to save her mother and all the power she holds.
Aunt Nancy, Aunt Meg, and Uncle Ian intervene and start taking care of the siblings, but why? They don't like the family... While Emily and her siblings are in their care, Emily's vision start getting worse. Her trances are lasting longer. The voices are getting stronger. Another voice has emerged. But what do they want from her?! Nancy suggests listening to what the voices are trying to say...
Could that hurt Emily?
Could it all be in her head?
Mental disorders are growing in our society. We cannot turn a blind eye to the things that are happening all around us. Yes, it's scary to think about. But some people need our support and help. They don't understand what is happening to them. Fantasy becomes reality and that is accurately portrayed in Jane Alvey Harris's debut novel. I love that someone finally tackled this topic and even made it a teen novel!
If you or someone you know is experiencing something like this, get help.
Mental and physical abuse happens daily.
Please utilize these resources if necessary.
Childhelp National Child Abuse Hotline: 1-800-422-4453
Adult Survivors: www.ascasupport.org
A huge thank you to Jane Alvey Harris for sending me a copy of Riven through a Goodreads Giveaway!
Mark your calendars, Riven hits shelves October 2016!
August 9, 2016
RIVEN
Jane Alvey Harris
Jane Alvey Harris (2016)
ISBN 9781944243715
Reviewed by Faryal (Age 14) for Reader Views (8/16)
“Riven,” by author Jane Alvey Harris, is pleasantly distinct from the mainstream flow of utopian/dystopian young adult novels. Harris has created a book that tackles abuse, fantasy, and psychological thrill.
Emily, the seventeen-year-old protagonist, has gone through many hardships. Her dad is in jail for security fraud, and her mother is no help taking care of the family, as she is bed-ridden on pain medication. Emily loves her younger siblings Claire, Aidan, and Jacob, and stays strong for them, hiding her pain as well as the mysterious symbols cut into her arm. Her dad is due to come home soon, setting Emily on edge. More events are added to the mix when Gabe, the hot and intrigued lifeguard, discovers the brands on Emily's arm. Also, two opposite voices start to battle in her head, a young girl who wants Emily to escape into a fantasy world, and a stern woman who wants to keep Emily’s secrets hidden. Amid the chaos, Emily struggles to find her own voice and loses herself to sleeping pills and the dreaded nightmares from her childhood. The line between reality and fantasy becomes blurred among the faerie of her imagination, as Emily realizes she is very powerful, causing her to be hunted by a dangerous man, greedy for her power. Emily must realize and conquer her demons in both her fantasy and reality worlds before it’s too late.
This was the first psychological thriller I have ever read, and I was a little overwhelmed and confused while I was in Emily’s mind during the scene changes. However, being able to see her alter egos and vivid dreams, made me really understand the impact abuse has on a person. I was aware of abuse beforehand, but when I read “Riven,” it felt as though I was discovering the issue for the first time. I felt connected to Emily, repulsed and upset about her abuse. Emily was unique compared to the other heroines I have read about, and I saw the side of her people usually keep to themselves, in other words, her raw feelings and emotions. “If I hold my breath I can even hear the surface of the pool swirling in every direction, absorbing and being absorbed by the calm depth of the blue-green pond.”(Page 144). As much as I loved the main characters, I think some of the secondary characters could have been more developed, as I had questions about them after completing the book.
I would recommend this book for people ages 14 and older because it contains mature topics and complex ideas. Personally, I have always been curious about people who have split personalities and human psychology, so I was excited and surprised to find a book that features the different voices of a character. “Riven” by Jane Alvey Harris is truly unlike any book you will ever read, combining so many components into one book!
Jane Alvey Harris
Jane Alvey Harris (2016)
ISBN 9781944243715
Reviewed by Faryal (Age 14) for Reader Views (8/16)
“Riven,” by author Jane Alvey Harris, is pleasantly distinct from the mainstream flow of utopian/dystopian young adult novels. Harris has created a book that tackles abuse, fantasy, and psychological thrill.
Emily, the seventeen-year-old protagonist, has gone through many hardships. Her dad is in jail for security fraud, and her mother is no help taking care of the family, as she is bed-ridden on pain medication. Emily loves her younger siblings Claire, Aidan, and Jacob, and stays strong for them, hiding her pain as well as the mysterious symbols cut into her arm. Her dad is due to come home soon, setting Emily on edge. More events are added to the mix when Gabe, the hot and intrigued lifeguard, discovers the brands on Emily's arm. Also, two opposite voices start to battle in her head, a young girl who wants Emily to escape into a fantasy world, and a stern woman who wants to keep Emily’s secrets hidden. Amid the chaos, Emily struggles to find her own voice and loses herself to sleeping pills and the dreaded nightmares from her childhood. The line between reality and fantasy becomes blurred among the faerie of her imagination, as Emily realizes she is very powerful, causing her to be hunted by a dangerous man, greedy for her power. Emily must realize and conquer her demons in both her fantasy and reality worlds before it’s too late.
This was the first psychological thriller I have ever read, and I was a little overwhelmed and confused while I was in Emily’s mind during the scene changes. However, being able to see her alter egos and vivid dreams, made me really understand the impact abuse has on a person. I was aware of abuse beforehand, but when I read “Riven,” it felt as though I was discovering the issue for the first time. I felt connected to Emily, repulsed and upset about her abuse. Emily was unique compared to the other heroines I have read about, and I saw the side of her people usually keep to themselves, in other words, her raw feelings and emotions. “If I hold my breath I can even hear the surface of the pool swirling in every direction, absorbing and being absorbed by the calm depth of the blue-green pond.”(Page 144). As much as I loved the main characters, I think some of the secondary characters could have been more developed, as I had questions about them after completing the book.
I would recommend this book for people ages 14 and older because it contains mature topics and complex ideas. Personally, I have always been curious about people who have split personalities and human psychology, so I was excited and surprised to find a book that features the different voices of a character. “Riven” by Jane Alvey Harris is truly unlike any book you will ever read, combining so many components into one book!
August 10, 2016
I think this novel will do well in the YA category, however, it's definitely not hitting the 4-5 star reviews I've been reading....I'm actually wondering if I read the same novel.
We've got our teenage protagonist Emily (emma?, ava?), taking care of her three siblings while dad's locked up for securities fraud (but should be serving for child abuse) and Mom's whacked out on meds (which our darling Emily steals and imbibes on regularly). With her father's upcoming release from prison Emily's stress levels rise initiating a coping mechanism within her mind, creating an alternate reality complete with Elves, Fairies, realms, knights, ovates, etc....one from when she was a kid. This combined with her (annoying) inner voices, leaves the reviewer confused between what is real and what is fantasy (other reviewers refer to this as "twists", I refer to this as confusing and unnecessarily complicated). Several times I'm not sure if I'm reading a fantasy novel, or a novel of a girl who is very emotionally damaged. This may have been the author's intent, however, I would have preferred living in the fantasy world throughout and being brought down to reality at the very end (without the ridiculous epilogue).
The characters are superficial - I don't feel like we got to know anyone and then the personalities became so conflicted. Mom is a magical beautiful fairy princess - oh wait, nope, she is a meek abuse victim, abusing drugs instead of taking care of her children. Kaillen is an annoying adopted cousin - nope he is a sexy elf bodyguard that Emma sexually daydreams about.
My BIGGEST issue is with Gabe the "super-hot" lifeguard who takes an interest in Emily after seeing her self-mutilated arm at the pool. He becomes obsessed with her and follows her across states to be a part of her life because she "interests" him, taking care of her and her family during her mother's attempted suicide...This is not a message we should be sending teenage girls. Hot lifeguards DO NOT immediately fall in love and become emotional rocks during family crises.
There's going to be two more books in this series but I'm going to pass....maybe I'm just too old :(
I gave 2 stars for the premise - some hard issues to tackle here and I think there's some potential if matched with the right editor.
I received a copy of this novel through Goodreads giveaways
We've got our teenage protagonist Emily (emma?, ava?), taking care of her three siblings while dad's locked up for securities fraud (but should be serving for child abuse) and Mom's whacked out on meds (which our darling Emily steals and imbibes on regularly). With her father's upcoming release from prison Emily's stress levels rise initiating a coping mechanism within her mind, creating an alternate reality complete with Elves, Fairies, realms, knights, ovates, etc....one from when she was a kid. This combined with her (annoying) inner voices, leaves the reviewer confused between what is real and what is fantasy (other reviewers refer to this as "twists", I refer to this as confusing and unnecessarily complicated). Several times I'm not sure if I'm reading a fantasy novel, or a novel of a girl who is very emotionally damaged. This may have been the author's intent, however, I would have preferred living in the fantasy world throughout and being brought down to reality at the very end (without the ridiculous epilogue).
The characters are superficial - I don't feel like we got to know anyone and then the personalities became so conflicted. Mom is a magical beautiful fairy princess - oh wait, nope, she is a meek abuse victim, abusing drugs instead of taking care of her children. Kaillen is an annoying adopted cousin - nope he is a sexy elf bodyguard that Emma sexually daydreams about.
My BIGGEST issue is with Gabe the "super-hot" lifeguard who takes an interest in Emily after seeing her self-mutilated arm at the pool. He becomes obsessed with her and follows her across states to be a part of her life because she "interests" him, taking care of her and her family during her mother's attempted suicide...This is not a message we should be sending teenage girls. Hot lifeguards DO NOT immediately fall in love and become emotional rocks during family crises.
There's going to be two more books in this series but I'm going to pass....maybe I'm just too old :(
I gave 2 stars for the premise - some hard issues to tackle here and I think there's some potential if matched with the right editor.
I received a copy of this novel through Goodreads giveaways
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 4, 2021
⚫tbh Initially, the story was a little confusing for me as there was kind of a lot going on but once the story begun to unfold, things were falling into place, and the story flowed very well.
⚫Seventeen year-old Emily's father is in prison and her mom's strung-out on pain meds, leaving Emily to parent herself and her three siblings. She's got things mostly under control until a couple weeks before her father's release.Triggered by the return of her childhood abuser and unable to cope with reality, Emily slips completely inside her elaborate fantasy world which she had created as a little girl. She is more powerful in her Fantacy world. Emily soon discovers her demons have followed her inside her fairytale.With the help of the Fae, she frantically searches for the weapons she needs to defeat her greatest fears and escape back to reality.
⚫it was really an amazing read. Book is based around fantasy and reality and sometimes you couldn't tell which one you were in. It had many of the elements of classic Fantacy.
⚫The characters and scenes are so vivid, so beautifully written with so much detail that you can see and feel yourself in the story.
⚫It's not just an enchanting fairytale but a story highlighting the topics child abuse, depression and mental health issues through a fantasy tale.
⚫As I said earlier it was very confusing initially to understand whether this was her dream or is it real? But once the characters started establishing themselves, the characters' resemblance really made sense and I think the series is going to be a lot fun with more of the fantasy stuff coming through.
⚫If you love reading fantasy books and / or have internet in books on mental health issues then surely give this a try.
⚫ I'm definitely looking forward to the next book in the series.
Happy Reading 😊
⚫Seventeen year-old Emily's father is in prison and her mom's strung-out on pain meds, leaving Emily to parent herself and her three siblings. She's got things mostly under control until a couple weeks before her father's release.Triggered by the return of her childhood abuser and unable to cope with reality, Emily slips completely inside her elaborate fantasy world which she had created as a little girl. She is more powerful in her Fantacy world. Emily soon discovers her demons have followed her inside her fairytale.With the help of the Fae, she frantically searches for the weapons she needs to defeat her greatest fears and escape back to reality.
⚫it was really an amazing read. Book is based around fantasy and reality and sometimes you couldn't tell which one you were in. It had many of the elements of classic Fantacy.
⚫The characters and scenes are so vivid, so beautifully written with so much detail that you can see and feel yourself in the story.
⚫It's not just an enchanting fairytale but a story highlighting the topics child abuse, depression and mental health issues through a fantasy tale.
⚫As I said earlier it was very confusing initially to understand whether this was her dream or is it real? But once the characters started establishing themselves, the characters' resemblance really made sense and I think the series is going to be a lot fun with more of the fantasy stuff coming through.
⚫If you love reading fantasy books and / or have internet in books on mental health issues then surely give this a try.
⚫ I'm definitely looking forward to the next book in the series.
Happy Reading 😊
October 31, 2016
The first book in a new fantasy trilogy.
I suspect that this story will be a surprise to many of the young readers that call this genre their favorite.
The author does an amazing job of creating a wonderfully rich world and characters that draw you in and keeps you turning page after page because you just have to know what happens next!
All the while she is also exposing those same minds to a subject that does and will affect them at some point, either on a personal level or by acquaintance. Take that same subject and write it in real world terms and you'd be hard pressed to get most people to read it. It's just too painful of a topic.
Through the story we watch as a young girl's entire life is changed in ways she couldn't possibly envision both positively and negatively. Her struggles are real as she learns how to deal with the old world she is leaving behind and the new world she's thrust into. Along the way she discovers love and trust but more importantly, that she is capable of almost anything.
As her list of allies grows, so to do the forces pitted against her. Will she have the strength to persevere even in times of self-doubt and darkness? We'll have to wait and see but we do know that she has the will to be more than she'd ever dreamed and more to those around her that need and want her to succeed.
Get a copy for your teens and let them discover some life lessons in a new and exciting world that is sure to get even better.
I suspect that this story will be a surprise to many of the young readers that call this genre their favorite.
The author does an amazing job of creating a wonderfully rich world and characters that draw you in and keeps you turning page after page because you just have to know what happens next!
All the while she is also exposing those same minds to a subject that does and will affect them at some point, either on a personal level or by acquaintance. Take that same subject and write it in real world terms and you'd be hard pressed to get most people to read it. It's just too painful of a topic.
Through the story we watch as a young girl's entire life is changed in ways she couldn't possibly envision both positively and negatively. Her struggles are real as she learns how to deal with the old world she is leaving behind and the new world she's thrust into. Along the way she discovers love and trust but more importantly, that she is capable of almost anything.
As her list of allies grows, so to do the forces pitted against her. Will she have the strength to persevere even in times of self-doubt and darkness? We'll have to wait and see but we do know that she has the will to be more than she'd ever dreamed and more to those around her that need and want her to succeed.
Get a copy for your teens and let them discover some life lessons in a new and exciting world that is sure to get even better.
July 27, 2016
Wow oh wow does Jane have a grasp on descriptive writing! The imagery was so vivid that it was like a movie unfolding in my mind as I read this book.
Jane has such a mastery over the English language- the plot was well constructed and characters rich and evolved; and surprising...The twists and turns of the story takes lead the reader on a journey of suspense and intrigue as you try to wrap your head around the alternative reality that surrounds Emily (Emma) Alvey. It's fantasy, but has such a cool true to life element that it's realistic- Harry Potter-esque in that its fantasy yet feels very plausable.
The protagonist's story of a young girl trying to get through life, dealing with tragedy, loss, forgiveness, insecurity and self discovery is compelling, rich and thought provoking. Was she ever amazing. "I am one giant nerve ending (page 152)". I was like, uh,YEA! That's such a cool way to describe it!
Loved it! You will read it for pure enjoyment and find yourself thinking about it over and over ... I can't WAIT for the sequel!!!
Jane, I sure hope you send a copy to Marion Martin- she would be so proud!
Jane has such a mastery over the English language- the plot was well constructed and characters rich and evolved; and surprising...The twists and turns of the story takes lead the reader on a journey of suspense and intrigue as you try to wrap your head around the alternative reality that surrounds Emily (Emma) Alvey. It's fantasy, but has such a cool true to life element that it's realistic- Harry Potter-esque in that its fantasy yet feels very plausable.
The protagonist's story of a young girl trying to get through life, dealing with tragedy, loss, forgiveness, insecurity and self discovery is compelling, rich and thought provoking. Was she ever amazing. "I am one giant nerve ending (page 152)". I was like, uh,YEA! That's such a cool way to describe it!
Loved it! You will read it for pure enjoyment and find yourself thinking about it over and over ... I can't WAIT for the sequel!!!
Jane, I sure hope you send a copy to Marion Martin- she would be so proud!
April 18, 2016
The world-building in this book is INTENSE! The constructed fantasies/realities in Riven are so alive and complex. I can't wait to explore them even further in the next books. I kinda want an expansion book just on the First Realm and perhaps how realms work because I'm a nerd like that, just in case the trilogy isn't enough to elaborate on the worlds as much as I want them to. The characterization is also fascinating. Watching (reading about?*) Emma grow from and cope with her drastically changing circumstances in the most vivid way was so cool. And the different personalities and people, how they all react to the situation, and their levels of understanding of what's happening create beautiful characters...it was just a really GOOD read. Would 100% recommend to any person who has an imagination, aka everyone (I hope). It's a very immersive read, too; I'd recommend you to read it in as little number of sittings possible. Also, it's a really good title. Just putting that out there.
*idk I feel too strongly about this book and its characters to merely consume it in a passive tense.
*idk I feel too strongly about this book and its characters to merely consume it in a passive tense.
September 21, 2016
All I can say is WOW! Jane does an amazing job combining fantasy and reality in this amazing story of a girl finding her inner voice and figuring out what is important in her life. Although there are some dark themes in this book it is totally appropriate for young adults to read. I had a hard time pacing myself through this story and finally had to give in and finish it, and it was thrilling to say the least. Jane is an amazing author, and I look forward to continuing the journey that her characters are going to go through. I really like her writing style, she has a way of pulling you into the story and making you wonder what is real and what is fantasy as the story unfolds for Emma. Great visualization in her writing, I can't wait for the next book!
June 9, 2016
I received an advanced reading copy of this book, signed by the author - thank you so much, Jane!
The concept for this book is intriguing: a teenager's coping mechanism (fantasy) gone awry. I really enjoyed how the author handled the reality of the protagonist's life; it felt true-to-life and unforced. For me, the fantasy portions weren't as successful.
I think young adults will really enjoy this story, especially young women, as the lead character, a 17 year-old girl, is so strong and relatable.
The concept for this book is intriguing: a teenager's coping mechanism (fantasy) gone awry. I really enjoyed how the author handled the reality of the protagonist's life; it felt true-to-life and unforced. For me, the fantasy portions weren't as successful.
I think young adults will really enjoy this story, especially young women, as the lead character, a 17 year-old girl, is so strong and relatable.
July 21, 2016
Riven is a delightful book for any fantasy genre reader. Jane Alvey Harris slips from reality to fantasy and back again so seamlessly it sometimes takes a few seconds to figure out which world Emily is in. Harris deals with the horrid crime of child abuse in such a way that is both subtle and yet unmistakable. Her descriptions are so bright and colorful it brings the fairy world right to the reader. I enjoyed the book greatly, and it was with a great sigh that I finished the last page. I'm definitely eager to read the next volume.
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