TW: pregnancy, rape, minors.
*Spoilers ahead* *And swearing, too (sorry).*
I wanted to read this since it had so many good reviews I was impressed, but honestly, I'm about two-thirds in and can't understand HOW would anyone enjoy this disgusting book.
1) Everything is so rushed, and I get it because it's a short book, but if the author had chosen another story I think it would've been more fitting because here everything happens at light speed and it's just awful. You can't fit 16 years of pining for each other and an enemies to lovers trope all in less than 200 pages, honey.
2) Abbie is fucking annoying. She's dumb, and childish, and completely irrational. She's supposed to be 26 but she acts likes she's 5. She keeps on jumping on Hunter, throwing him to the ground, and whining about every minor inconvenience. She's the worst main character there's ever been.
After they sleep together, she wakes up and acts like she doesn't know what happened, when there wouldn't be any chance of that happening because she wasn't drunk or drugged or whatever. I mean, so she just wakes up and casually has short term amnesia? C'mon.
She's also terrified of planes, then ends up flying and looking through the damn window: why would anyone with an irrational fear of flying ever do something like that ?!?!?!
And what had me wanting to kill her was the fact that she was oh so scared of the hurricane and etc, but she goes out in the middle of the storm to go to a fucking pharmacy? She knows there's a LOCKDOWN, that there's a HURRICANE out there, and that everybody is inside their own houses or whatever, so why would she ever think that there'd be a pharmacy open to buy something so not-primordial like THE PILL?!?!
I swear, she's the worst. Nothing about her makes sense.
3) The first scene, when they're around 10 and Abbie pins Hunter down, felt absolutely wrong. I don't want to read about how a 10 yr old feels when she's on top of a 13 yr old, thank you very much.
4) The whole "oh no, we didn't use protection!!" thing was unnerving. She went out in a fucking hurricane to get the pill but then comes back and fucks him again and lets him finish inside her. She made a whole ass problem about them not using protection and just makes the same mistake, twice. She's mad because she could get pregnant, but you know, there's also this thing called 'pre-cum', so you're not safe just because he didn't finish inside, sweetie.
5) I was kind of enjoying the banter between them, but after they slept together Hunter became this awfully sexist prick, I don't know where the hell it came from. First of all, he picks Abbie up like she's a child (which she acts like she is, for God's sake) every single time they're talking. Just put her down, she can walk on her own two legs, you idiot. Then, he sees her freaking out about the condom thing and etc, and he DECIDES that having a child with her wouldn't be so bad so he doesn't give a fuck and finishes inside her, without even having a word with her. They haven't seen each other in 16 years, he practically verbally abused her when he left her, they've been reunited for less than two weeks, hadn't had a conversation about their past or about anything else that wasn't work-related or about her cat, and then he thinks it's a good idea to get her pregnant and have kids?!?! What !! the !! fuck !!
What is more, he's not only sexist and an asshole but an abuser. She told him "no" and wanted to stop several times when they were having sex and he just ignored her and kept on going, because "it's obvious she's liking it". If she says no, if she wants to stop, then you do as she says.
6) The writing is horrible. No thoughts, just dialogue, and I feel like anyone could've written a shitty story like this. There's no depth to any conversation, no internal thinking, no nothing. It's plain boring.
So, conclusion: if you don't wanna waste your time, don't read this. If you do wanna waste your time, then good luck 🤞.