Taboo: Taking Dad's Place With My New Step Mom

by Jamie Beach

18-year-old college freshman Carson Davis is furious with his dad. When things get a little out of hand at a graduation party Carson ends up in bit of legal trouble that nearly cost him his full ride soccer and academic scholarship. As a result, Carson's controlling and cruel father overreacts by confining him to the house for a month and tells him he is not to see his girlfriend or any of his friends. To make matters worse, Carson's dad has just married a bratty gold-digger half his age that he met just a few months prior. Carson's new step mom is left in charge with strict orders to keep a close eye on him while his father leaves for a multi-week business trip to Asia. With his summer vacation plans ruined, Carson utilizes this time to exact revenge on his evil father and maybe even have a little fun in the process with the new stepmother. After gaining access to his stepmom's smartphone, Carson unearths a secret his step mother hopes to keep buried forever. With this new found information, Carson schemes to turn his gorgeous fertile step mother into his personal play thing by threatening to expose her darkest secret.

59 pages, Kindle Edition

Published June 18, 2019

Reviews

[Steve Naylor · Rating 2 out of 5]

Rating 2.0 stars


Not a good one. Guy’s father is a complete asshole. He calls the cops on his son because he drank some beer on the night of his graduation and leaves him in jail for the night. He makes fun of his son with his new wife while he has sex with her. The next day he comes home and his dad tells him he is grounded and needs to do a lot of chores around the house, otherwise he is going to sell the car his mother left him when she passed away. His stepmother is in charge and she is a complete bitch.

He gets his GF to sneak over to his house so they can have sex. Apparently the dad put in security cameras to his room and the stepmother caught her on video. She tells him he will need to do even more or she will call his father. While she shows him a video, a text from another man pops up on her phone. He later gets into her phone and finds out she has been cheating on his dad. She is a real gold digger. He downloads the evidence and now he has blackmail on her.

He makes her blow him and then they go to the bank so he can have access to the safety deposit box. He is trying to get the title to the car. He finds more than he bargained for. He finds out his dad is in extreme debt and that his mother left him a 300,000 dollar life insurance policy that his father has been using to pay for his lifestyle. There is 200,000 in cash in one of the boxes. He takes the money and goes home.

He then gets his GF to come over and they mess with his stepmom. His GF always had a fantasy of being with another woman. He tells his stepmother to go down on his GF and she loves it. They keep calling her a gold digger and other names. The GF wants him to f*ck the stepmother while she is giving her oral. She tells him to finish on her stepmothers face while she is still going down on her and makes her clean it up.

The next day he moves out and tells the stepmother he never wants to see either of them again. When the dad gets home he is worried about the late payment on the house and goes to the bank and finds the note the son left. He knows and took the rest of the money. He never wants to see him again, if he does, the son might get the police involved with the fraud case.

This wasn’t a good story. It is hard to imagine any father doing something that cruel. The sex scenes with the GF didn’t seem to fit with the story except to show he was having sex. The sex scenes with the stepmother didn’t do anything either. It didn’t feel like much revenge. She didn’t really seem to care that much. Another thing that could have happened was that she loved what she was being told to do, but that wasn’t part of the story either so the whole thing fell flat.

[James Evans · Rating 4 out of 5]

Eyebrow Raising.

Stepmother gets what she sewed. Love it when the tables are turned on greedy and cruel people, especially in the family.