I am one of those people who can’t get enough of stories like this. Even in the midst of a pandemic, I’ll happily sign myself up for a shitload of bloody and/or oozing orifices with a large side of international conspiracy. What I’m saying is ... I had to try this.
And I was disappointed. While the story is decent enough, the patchy writing and weird structure works against it, being both distracting and unnecessary.
It opens well (you can’t knock someone dying horrifically in the first few chapters) and the blurb sounds really fun. Even though I quickly realised it had really short POV passages that jump around more than I usually like, I thought it held some promise, and I can put up with that technique as a means of building tension, even if I prefer it to come from the writing rather than artificial cliffhangers.
Then the author started shoehorning in way too much information. You can’t have the immediacy of rapid POV switches and then load up the sections with meetings, someone’s romantic life, every acronym known to mankind (which you then have to explain), references to each and every terror or bio attack we’ve seen in the modern world, more meetings, the kind of dialogue you’d see in a cheesy 80s thriller, and a ton of repetition. Hardly anything actually happens in the book. Apart from of meetings. Lots of discussions about what should be done or about how terrible the outbreak will be. There’s a distinct lack of action for a book being touted as ‘an explosive thriller’.
Maybe it’ll work in the market it’s aimed for, but unless you’re really desperate, I wouldn’t recommend it.
ARC via Netgalley