Fair warning, this was my first foray into reading about Kashmir in such detail or even in this format. Given that background, was overall a good read but what I found more fascinating was the unconventional structure in the book which I would like to explore in this review.
The core essence of the book describes the interaction of a Hindu girl and a Muslim guy, who are grappling with their unique and conflicting stories of belongingness to Kashmir. When their dire histories results in their romance fizzling out, they pose the question that if two people so fond of each other are unable to reconcile over these differences, how challenging it really must be for ordinary people.
If I try to evaluate this as a novel in comparison to the standard, one can come up with a number of qualms, the story moves incredibly slow and most of the characters developed are given no page time (trying to invent a term analogous to screen time). However, the author carries the book in a very refreshing way and does a number of things really well.
Almost the entire first half of the book is filled with character development (or establishment) with almost no traversal into the actual story. With each character, the author goes into incredible depth, describing not just the background, present space but also emphasising their motivations, fears, most prevalent thoughts and certain formative memories. As we move from character to character there are just enough connections between consecutive descriptions that you don't get lost.
The drawback for me however, was that I got too invested in each of the characters but couldn't get to see anything happen to most of them or at least soon enough.
Even the story moves weirdly slowly, if seen holistically you won't notice a lot changing. The events are described more based on the feelings, thoughts and dreams of some of the characters involved than actual interactions, which I now realise can be done so well in books which is hardly possible in movies (to which I seem to be subconsciously relating to while imagining the structure).
As for the descriptions of Kashmir, it is rightly, mostly described through the perspective of certain individuals, rather than presenting a macro view, which is certainly interesting, but as someone unaware of most of the realities in these regions, I found most of it hard to relate to.
Overall, if I had to give a verdict, I wouldn't rate the story too highly, but what kept me in it was the unconventional narration and the mesmerising character descriptions.