I have to admit to being rather disappointed with this book. It is supposed to be an intense, twisted murder mystery, but instead comes off as a cliche wrapped in a cliche, topped by a cliche. After reading Mr. Bremasi's previous novel, Ever Told, I was expecting another surprising reveal, but I didn't get it. Instead of the open-mouth ending I was expecting, I found myself rolling my eyes. That's never a good thing. The dialogue is stilted and wooden, the lead detective is behaving very unprofessionally and out of character and the remaining characters are flat and poorly developed.
I can't really go into detail about the issues I had with the book without spoiling it for everyone else, but, as with Ever Told, I can discuss two major issues I had. Once again Mr. Bremasi alternates between past and present as a method of telling the story, but also adds frequent changes in point of view. The majority of the story is told in the third person but changes into the first person when Amy is the focus of that particular chapter. It is very disconcerting because POV doesn't change every time Amy is mentioned, so it is difficult to determine why Mr. Bremasi changes up. It is very jarring, or at least it was for me.
The other issue is the lack of editing. Mr. Bremasi's previous novel was bad when it came to editing, but this one is worse. For example, "It was tucked away near acres of woodland surrounded by trees and woodland." Seriously? Did he even reread that sentence? And, "At the moment, I can barely help myself right now with my own health issues." "At the moment" and "right now" are the same thing!!! How can you not see this, especially when the "About the Author" section indicates Mr. Bremasi has an Advance Degree in Reading. So disappointing. I'm afraid I'm done with this author.
I received a review copy from Book Sirens and this is my honest opinion.