Eric Asks for Discipline

by Will Grant

This story represents a rite of passage for Eric as he transitions from an angry and aggressive young man into someone finally content with his lot following his acceptance that discipline is what he needs and desires. Luckily for him, he gets it, initially from his athletics coach, Janice, and later from his girlfriend and fellow athlete, Trish. Janice soon gets Eric in shape with the help of her hard hand and a gym shoe pounding on his bare bottom. The lesson is reinforced when Trish turns up armed with a bathbrush. Eric is turned over her lap for another painful session, yet the spanking helps to motivate him as well as fulfil a long-held secret fantasy. As time goes on, Trish takes over as his disciplinarian, and proves to be very efficient with the paddle. The Olympic-hopeful Eric was previously driven to succeed by his own simmering anger, but is now transformed by regular spankings... many of which lead to sexual satisfaction. Ultimately, a traumatic incident from years ago can finally be laid to rest, but one thing's for sure... Eric's discipline will continue.

142 pages, Kindle Edition

Published September 11, 2019

Reviews

[Zakfar Magni · Rating 2 out of 5]

This could be a good story if the author realized who were the main characters of the story he wanted to write. The focus was on Janice, completely, for a big part of the book, while the story was all about Eric, and later on, about Trish. Scenarios were forcefully created so that Janice could participate actively into the story, and some scenes of her spanking Eric could be created. As the story had full focus on Janice, characterization of Eric and Trish was left completely. And the book could never recover from that early buildup mistake.

Even more irritating than that is the impact on Eric's mind of the incident in his childhood. He was showed to have so much anger for that incident that his anger drove him to keep succeeding in all his efforts. His anger was so intense that he became the strongest athlete of his time. Then, he also desired similar incident to be repeated by his girlfriend? Doesn't make any sense to me.

Rating it two stars instead of one for the flow of the story. But I don't consider it a good story, and won't recommend this.

[JW David · Rating 4 out of 5]

An excellent novella using spankings for motivation. More romance than erotica and very vanilla except for the spankings.