A three star review, bordering on 2.5, for Compete? What? I was, and am, just as surprised as you are. Let me explain.
I read Qualify. I loved Qualify! Five stars, easy, despite some minor concerns, and I read it over and over. So, naturally, I waited in eager anticipation for the second book and bought it as soon as it came out. Great, right? No problems yet.
So basically the book is about Gwen's journey through space traveling to Atlantis, a year-long trip. It talks about her job, her social life, her romantic life, et cetera. Still no problems.
Then, like every book in the universe (is that a pun?), there is a choice. Pick A or B, you know what I'm talking about, a life-changing choice that will define the MC's remaining time alive. Oh, the choice. This choice in particular is Civilian or Cadet. Civilians have safe lives, but lower pay and job choices or whatever and Cadets have higher standards of living but may have to pay the ultimate price in battle. So what does Gwen choose?
And Gwen, being Gwen, the loophole to end all loopholes, the anomaly, chooses Citizen. Now, note that the refugees from Earth are not actually citizens of Atlantis, so obviously this is not part of the choice, hence we have a big scene, resulting in Gwen's working under secondary-love-triangle-occupant Aeson Kass, prince of Atlantis. She and two other Atlantean guys are his assistants and they do stuff, as people usually do.
And the story progresses and stuff happens, a terrorist group riot, no biggie, and stuff started going downhill for me at the first dance, soon after the attack.
For every Atlantean season (think spring, summer, winter, fall) a quadrant hosts a dance, color-themed, and Gwen goes to the first one with Logan, her current boyfriend. The dances are zero-gravity, which was a cool concept that I enjoyed, but enough about that. Logan is jealous that Gwen is interested in Aeson and breaks up with her. Just like that, dream boyfriend is out of the picture.
After this Gwen has some weird phase of self-discovery about her feeling for Kass, at which point I set my Kindle down on my desk, took a calming breath, and said "No." No. Just... No. What??? Wait, what? I get that Gwen was attracted to Kass, as was obviously displayed in the first book, but it was tentative, not like this. Imagine a gently falling feather floating through the air and then wham - a huge brick falls on top of it. That is how Gwen's affection for Kass felt to me.
And now I should cycle into the romance. Okay. In the first book the romance was not bad. Really, it was not. Gwen's crush on Logan, the Atlantean sex appeal thing was maybe a little over the top, but it was fine. So, so fine! To add the the metaphors, scenarios, whatever you want to call it, picture yourself casually strolling across the street and suddenly getting smashed by an eighteen-wheeler. Accurate comparison to the romance from Qualify to Compete.
First Logan lies in bed with Gwen after her concussion, not with the intention to do anything, but something happens - and it was unclear in the book, and probably on purpose - but I don't know if he ejaculated or something, and he leaves in embarrassment. Here comes the eighteen-wheeler, bam! What??? Where did this come from all of a sudden?
Then there's the scene after the Jump... I can't ever really talk critically about this one, except Gwen and Kass end up in a bed together - which under the circumstances was not romantic at all, just practical, right? - and after the Jump some weird stuff goes down. Let me just say this - Gwen ends up topless in front of Kass (accidentally, mind) and there is some squeezing in all the wrong places.
Okay, make that a Boeing 747 smashing into me as I walk across the street. I skipped this part because, compared to Qualify, this was rather sensual. And then there's this whole awkward dance thing they do afterwards, like they're both trying to delete what happened after the Jump. Now it could have been Jump sickness that drove them to do this, I get it, yeah, but whoa. What????
Then Xelio whatshisname takes in interest in Gwen and invited her to the Red dance zero-gravity deal, and she gets a fancy dress and makeup and is a total Cinderella showstopper. Even the rock-solid Kass is stunned by her, and when she sings he accuses her of using some kind of compelling voice of attractiveness - which, oops, she wasn't! - awkward for him. The whole Xelio deal was strange, because suddenly everyone wants a piece of nerdy Gwen Lark. The whole Xelio deal was very strange indeed.
And, the cherry on top, Aeson admits loud loud he misses his betrothed and wants to push her against a wall and to do all kind of stuff with her. Freudian slip, much? Now the moon has smashed into me walking across the street - or, should I say an asteroid?
Now with my other complaints. First off, the italicizing. Have you ever seen that meme "when God made me," like "just a dash of _____," and the whole cup of whatever it is gets poured in with an "oops?" That was the italicizing, it kind of bugged me after a while. It was pretty overdone, and to the point of my noticing is definitely a lot.
If there were a chart in Gwen's interest in Kass it would be like a skyscraper. You have the steps coming up, some trees, showing a gradual interest, confusion, and then zoom! Straight on up! Maybe because she sees him every day, and Logan is on a different ship, but wooooow. What?????
And as much as daily activities go, not much happened. Which I'm so okay with - if someone gave me a day-by-day Harry Potter book I would read that all night - but sometimes ordinary life just can't compensate.
But all in all, it was the romance asteroid that killed me. Maybe I just wasn't used to it, I don't know, I can't say, but I can speak for myself, and yikes.
Yet amongst all this criticism, what did I like?
I liked the pilot class, which was descriptive and engaging. Gwen's partner Hugo is a total jerk.
And speaking of total jerks - ANU. But if the characters are well-written enough for me to dislike them, and I'm supposed to dislike them, that's a sign or great writing! Unless they're just badly written characters, but that was not the case here.
One part in particular, when Aeson invites one of Gwen's friends to dance, had me grinning.
Everything before they romance-y parts I liked, and some after, but the romance kind of smeared the whole thing and I didn't find myself liking the rest of the book as much as I did before.
The characters are good, too, like in Qualify, and some welcome new additions to the cast are great.
A few more things before I wrap up.
Gwen has a totally new mood in this book - a melancholy, depressed mood, not always but very overpowering in certain scenes (particularly after breakups or romantic upheavals.) Compared to the optimistic, powerful Gwen, this new vulnerable and alien Gwen feels strange and forced. Depressed characters are everywhere these days, and I hate to see the Atlantis Grail books conform to that norm.
The romance killed this book for me. Stabbed it with a knife. I'm sorry, and other people loved it, sure, but I did not. Not at freaking all. Gwen and Aeson both seem to find new romantic wells deep within them, positively brimming with violent passion that needs to be expressed. Honestly, this might be the only reason I did not enjoy a book that had so much potential. Had.
And Aeson asks Gwen to be his bride at the end. Spoilers!!! This is NOT okay. I knew Logan wasn't going to stay, we all knew Logan wasn't going to stay, but a bride??? Marriage??? NOT OKAY. I don't care what you say, and know this well - there was nothing stupid in Qualify that I can remember expressly. But this. Is. Stupid.
"Oh, but he's the prince and she's a lowly alien girl, a representative of the nerds, not a gorgeous princess!"
Exactly!!! That's the point - political upset, blah blah blah. A sub-par ending for a sub-par book.
And has this never been used before? Nope! Think America and Maxon in the Selection, Katniss and Peeta in the Hunger Games. And poor Gale, Aspen and Logan are sitting in the corner.
In the end, I did not enjoy this book. I liked parts of it, yes, I really liked parts of it, but the glut of sudden and violent romance totally unexpected after having read Qualify set it off on a foul note. While I will be reading the next two books my sky-high standard have been battered down, way down. I can't hope for them next books to be as good as Qualify, only to be better than my final impression of Compete.