An Unforgettable Night

by Brea Alepoú

An Unforgettable Night Jay knew he shouldn't drive to the address on the mysterious invitation. He shouldn't... But maybe he’s done living inside his boring box called life. Jay makes some weird decisions that lead him to a caring and beautiful demon, a Vasilikó daímono plokámi to be exact. Will the night be a disaster or an unforgettable night?

Genres: Paranormal, M M Romance, Romance, Erotica, Fantasy, Short Stories, Ebooks

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About the author

Brea Alepoú realized her dream was to write and tell stories after spending five years in college getting a degree. She has since been writing and letting her imagination free. She thought she would only write contemporary at first but soon found her love for making worlds. So now she writes it all. With her wild imagination, expect lots of different stories, from fairies ruling to vampires killing everyone, to the sweet loving between two men, passion between two fierce women, or the love of multiple partners. She believes that everyone deserves love even if not all of her characters get it right away. Love is passionate, hot, needy, confusing, painful, fulfilling, and all-consuming.
(pnr, contemporary, fantasy, erotica, romance, shifter mpreg, & rh)
There will be a book for everyone.
Insanity is Contagious.
Brea Alepoú

Reviews

[Rachel Emily · Rating 4 out of 5]

I completely love this! A group of authors has rewarded us with a prolific works giveaway all based around the theme of tentacles! (Or as I like to call them, consentacles!)

This one is a steamy, fun (kinda sorta dub-con if you think on it too much LOL) short story set in a world that I definitely want to know more about. Hell has a bar and Jay is sent an exclusive invite. I would love to get more stories set at the same bar, heck even more with Jay and Azaheal would be great.

A few typos and all that maybe the author can get corrected before releasing on amazon, but overall really enjoyed this one.

[Lauralee · Rating 1 out of 5]

Uhm. So this is what happened: Prolific authors gifted us with freebie stories about tentacles, which is about the last thing I would have thought to ask for, but I was weirdly intrigued anyway.

And now I read this and it's like fanfiction written by a very enthusiastic 14-year-old, who was very naughty and watched tentacle porn online but never actually had sex.
There is no logic to be found, no plausibility in the MC's actions and the editing is horrible.
Oh well, cost me maybe ten minutes of my life, so whatever. I got about twelve more to try, so fingers crossed! :P

[Mere Rain]

This is for people who are really into tentacles.
I am not; I just like trying things.
I flinched a couple times, I admit, especially with , but I don't regret reading it.

Recommended for readers who want something short and kinky.

[Dan · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short but fun. But way too short. I wish it was longer

[Don Bradshaw · Rating 2 out of 5]

Oh Brea, please use a proofreader.

[M. · Rating 4 out of 5]

Fun short story. This author and several others have graced us with their take on “tentacle porn.” When I heard about this I got so excited to add more books to my Goodreads tentacle porn shelf.

This short story is about an intelligent but quite man (Jay) who receives and invitation to Hell’s Bar. Once there he realizes something is very different about this bar. Eventually he chooses a demon (Azaheal.) for one unforgettable night. I found it interesting how the author decided to keep a language barrier between Azaheal. and Jay. It would be nice to get a few more short stories from Hell’s Bar, maybe some couples could reappear in those future books.

If you’re looking for a quick read, I recommend this book. There are a few typos but not enough to be distracting.

[Katherine · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was an intriguing and surprisingly sweet story that was a great read on its own but could easily expand to other stories I would absolutely read!

Jay is just a regular guy who suddenly finds himself recieving an unusual and nonspecific invitation to a downtown hotel that keeps following him around. When he goes there he finds a bar unlike any other with people unlike any other. It turns out the abr is something more than Eartly and his night takes a turn that way to!

Jay is a caring and open guy who shows himself to look out for others. He appears to be a bit of a workaholic and hasn't really gotten out socially outside of that. It is fun watching him go out to this crazy bar and really interesting seeing how he reacts to the situation. However, there were a bunch of things that came up that could really allow this story to expand;


Jay is told to choose the menu item that looks right to him and keeps looking at Vrykolakas. Does that mean he was supposed to pick that and changed something by not picking it? And what is a Vrykolakas?

When we meet Azaheal it is stated he is low born. What does this mean?

The human woman Jay sees in the elevator asks if it is his first time there. So once you have an invite can you go anytime? Do most people continue to go just to hookup? Or do people often find a permanent match?

If you do find a match, what does it mean? Jay and Azaheal are boyfriends by the end, so can they see each other in normal life? Can Azaheal even leave the bar?



These were all curious things that came up. They were unnecessary for the short story, but if expanded would make it into such an interesting read! Otherwise, this was a really good sweet and sexy short!

[Quwinntessa · Rating 2 out of 5]

Writing deserves a 3 star, editing deserves 1 so I averaged to 2 stars. I use free stories to help me decide if I want to drop money on an author. So I don’t know if this author normally skips all editing or just her free works but regardless, you don’t buy the food at Costco when the sample tastes bad. Cute story with some issues.

[Amanda · Rating 4 out of 5]

Hot and steamy tentacle action. Was glad to find this prolific work, this story has an interesting setting and I am curious to know more about it. Would love more stories from this world and to find out more about Jay and Azaheal. There were a few typos and grammar errors that I noticed but was able to read thru them. Definitely a fun read!

[Shaira · Rating 4 out of 5]

I wish we got to see more of this world. It was very different from the other books I've read. About these demons and this club? What's the purpose of that, how they select people and about this énas kai monádikos thing. I want to know more about Azaheal kind, and more him and Jay moments together.

[A.L. Miller · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was different and I love the different choices on the menu and the whole world was intriguing, making we want to know more about it. I enjoyed the story over all. It was a fun, sweet read and very unpredictable.

[Wendy · Rating 4 out of 5]

I would love to see this tentacle-verse developed more. It has a great idea just not enough development. It has promise. I hope the author revisits this concept.
As far as this read...hot demon tentacle sex was the best part.

[Kat reads romance · Rating 2 out of 5]

Had its moments, but the setup took way too long. Plus, the bad grammar, misspellings, and incorrect words were constant and disruptive. Look, I went into this not expecting much, but come on. Too bad, because the sexy time had potential. If you’re willing to stick it out, it’s almost worth it.

[wordsandblankspaces · Rating 3 out of 5]

I liked the story but the typos were rampant. I understand this is just a short freebie so probably not heavily edited, if at all. A quick little run through probably could have fixes at least half of these typos.

[DC · Rating 1 out of 5]

I couldn’t even finish this. Please, dear author, get an editor or anybody who understands English grammar. I was so distracted by the bad writing that I completely lost interest in the story itself.

[Ash · Rating 2 out of 5]

I’ll read a lot but I feel like these short stories were barely a thought and not well executed.
HOWEVER, I do appreciate the authors taking the time to provide “slice of life” type items

[Jocelyn F · Rating 2 out of 5]

Had promise, there were so many typos that I spent the majority of my time trying to figure out the right words... I know this was a freebie, but come on, editing please and thank you!

[Ken Cook · Rating 5 out of 5]

Very short story, set in an alternative world. From the viewpoint of Jay, the plot takes the reader into fantastical sex with a heat factor off the scales. I want his orgasms!

[Jacquie Stewart]

Bizarre but strangely compelling. Unfortunately it had a number of errors which kinda ruined it for me. I really wanted more of it

[Jeanette · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sexy short story

[Jery Schober]

In dire need of an editor.

[Cari Resh · Rating 2 out of 5]

Oof. Could’ve been no much better, but the errors were hard to get past. Some sentences made no sense and spelling was all over the place.

[Natalie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Liked it a whole lot!!!

[Ann-Marie · Rating 5 out of 5]

nice little short story

[riah! · Rating 2 out of 5]

She must’ve forgot to check for typos bc at one point she mixed up a word with “squirrel.” I never thought it could get this bad.

Smut wasn’t even that good either smh

[Danis ❤️ MM · Rating 3 out of 5]

Cute premise. Poorly edited though which was distracting. Lots of typos, poor grammar. A few sentences here and there that didn't make sense. Felt like a first draft.