Adequate, yet Addicting
I had high hopes for this after seeing it advertised, and I was intrigued by the summary.
However, there were times I felt pulled out of the story. I couldn’t imagine what the author was describing. It felt like there was information missing in the description. For instance when you first meet Theseus, there was no description on how she felt, what he looked liked, and so on. She told us a few pages later after the meeting for us to know. A few instances I felt the sentences were jumbled and hard to understand. True, there are characters in this story who are old and talk formally, but these sentences were not those. The story also has no true climax, rather: rising action, rising action, rising action, and then when you think it’s finally going to peak— it ends.
That being said, I found that the story got better after the sample ends. I would like to keep reading but the author cut the book on a cliffhanger, and now I have to wait a whole year. Please don’t make me wait a whole year.