lemme just say this: don't get curious and read the alternative ending. just don't.
other than that, everything was pretty good ! i will say i got pretty scared and also sobbed a couple of times due to some... unforeseen events but wow the writing was good
Nobody can stop me from logging fanfiction if it’s more than a 1000 pages I deserve it. Pretty cool tho! Got a bit repetitive and I missed the pjo humor but I liked reading it.
Okay so… The premise of the fanfic itself is really great - exactly what I was looking for, honestly. Percy falling into Tartarus by himself? Peak. Dark Percy ? Even better. I’m not even going to lie, some parts made me cringe, bit I’m going to ignore that because I knew what I was getting myself into reading a dark Percy fic 🙈🙈 Another thing I want to say is.. I think the author has a thing for tattoos 😭 I don’t want to spoil anything but it’s an interesting concept, honestly. Overall the fic is quite well-written and great, some parts were written so well they made me gasp audibly or almost cry 🥹
One thing I have to add though, do NOT, I repeat DO NOT read the extra chapter. It’s not even that the angst is that bad (although it absolutely is bad) it’s absolutely disgusting, awful and just … no. You do not want to read that, believe me. 💔💔
with the way people talk abt this fic you'd think it's on the level of asoiaf, but it's just rly mid. got to the part where all percy jackson has to do to get the chance to bring annabeth back from the dead is cry a little. there's quite a bit of cheesiness coating this fic (this moment just was the culmination of the cheesiness for me) but i've read dramione fics before so this is still bearable. there's just too many convenient things that happen to save percy when he's in a bad situation and it happens over and over and over
i WILL say tho that people were right that the last chapter is very disturbing. genuinely props to the author because i was freaked the fuck out
wtf. this was EXACTLY what i was looking for. this was SOSOSOSOS good. when i say i want the MC to suffer this is what i meannnnnn. Dark percy jackson hittttttsss. adn she demontrated that so well.