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Claimed by the Goddess #5
Magic Unleashed
Luna has been Found, Bound, Tamed, and Claimed; now she’s about to be Unleashed on the world.
Time is running out. One portal has begun the release of magic, but evil at every turn threatens to hinder the last five. Luna and her men are on a race against the clock, to open the remaining portals.
The fight against evil isn’t the only thing threatening to tear the group apart as their time draws to a close. Hidden secrets will jeopardize everyone and throw Luna for a turn she wasn’t expecting.
Now she must unlock the world’s magic. Or risk losing it all. The final battle for herself, her men, and the world begins and ends with her.
*Warning this book is intended for 18+. It is a fast burn Reverse Harem series, with a HEA. This book contains lots of M/M interactions, BDSM, DD/Lg, and other explicit sexual scenes some readers may find
Time is running out. One portal has begun the release of magic, but evil at every turn threatens to hinder the last five. Luna and her men are on a race against the clock, to open the remaining portals.
The fight against evil isn’t the only thing threatening to tear the group apart as their time draws to a close. Hidden secrets will jeopardize everyone and throw Luna for a turn she wasn’t expecting.
Now she must unlock the world’s magic. Or risk losing it all. The final battle for herself, her men, and the world begins and ends with her.
*Warning this book is intended for 18+. It is a fast burn Reverse Harem series, with a HEA. This book contains lots of M/M interactions, BDSM, DD/Lg, and other explicit sexual scenes some readers may find
245 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 26, 2020
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Rozie Marshall
19 books194 followersRozie Marshall is an inspired writer from Colorado, where she lives with her husband, kids, and fur babies. She has a BA in European History and works in a bookstore, where else? Although she started writing over a decade and a half ago, it took some convincing for her to publish her first book, but once it happened, the floodgates of words burst and the books kept coming.
Often referred to by her fans as Goddess of Smut and All That is Sexy, she delights her fans with her special knack for kink and smut. When she is not busy arguing with her characters, she spends her time plotting new stories and doing research for her books. Oh, and coffee is her best friend.
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Often referred to by her fans as Goddess of Smut and All That is Sexy, she delights her fans with her special knack for kink and smut. When she is not busy arguing with her characters, she spends her time plotting new stories and doing research for her books. Oh, and coffee is her best friend.
You can find out more about Rozie Marshall and follow her updates by joining her Facebook Group subscribing to her Newsletter.
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May 18, 2020
Loved
Oooh so sad to end this series absolutely loved it and was so damn hot ! And funny as well !! Rozie love your work !!
Oooh so sad to end this series absolutely loved it and was so damn hot ! And funny as well !! Rozie love your work !!
May 15, 2020
Plenty of drama and excitement.
The series finished off with quite a bang. This book was filled with drama, action, and excitement as Luna finished opening all the portals on earth. The last portal opening was emotional and the aftermath had me tearing up a little bit. The author did a fantastic job depicting the grief experienced by Luna.
I am still curious to read about Lilith and her journey. I am hoping there will be a spin off featuring her. 🤞🏼
Overall, I really enjoyed this series. Some of the books dragged on without any real progress with the story’s villain or with the portals, but those books had a heavy focus on Luna and the development and growth of her relationships which I can appreciate. Writing a series with 12 men in the harem cannot be easy when trying to give them all equal focus so ones don’t fall into the background. There were times I felt as if some characters were somewhat forgotten but then within a few chapters, they were given the spotlight.
Still had a few grammatical errors but not nearly as bad as some of the previous books. Nothing that another round of editing can’t fix.
The steam and MM is still just as hot as when the series started. 🤤🔥
The series finished off with quite a bang. This book was filled with drama, action, and excitement as Luna finished opening all the portals on earth. The last portal opening was emotional and the aftermath had me tearing up a little bit. The author did a fantastic job depicting the grief experienced by Luna.
I am still curious to read about Lilith and her journey. I am hoping there will be a spin off featuring her. 🤞🏼
Overall, I really enjoyed this series. Some of the books dragged on without any real progress with the story’s villain or with the portals, but those books had a heavy focus on Luna and the development and growth of her relationships which I can appreciate. Writing a series with 12 men in the harem cannot be easy when trying to give them all equal focus so ones don’t fall into the background. There were times I felt as if some characters were somewhat forgotten but then within a few chapters, they were given the spotlight.
Still had a few grammatical errors but not nearly as bad as some of the previous books. Nothing that another round of editing can’t fix.
The steam and MM is still just as hot as when the series started. 🤤🔥
November 8, 2021
As the last book of the series, this has the climactic scene where Draven Thorne, the villain, finally makes his move. But I felt it was anti-climactic, really. There had a sort of cartoonish quality to the scenario that made it difficult to take the whole thing seriously, especially the aftermath, when Luna is reeling and then Nan shows up from the Goddess Realm and scolds her for being a ninny. That part was rather farcical.
Add to that the whole last portal thing. I could not understand how Luna had managed to open the last portal, since the requirements of the ritual hadn't been met. This left me very confused, and no explanation was given for the anomaly.
And what happened when the portal was opened? We didn't see any monumental changes taking place in the world. Luna's powers didn't change, nor did anyone else's. Nothing seemed to happen at all. What did returning the magic do? Why had it been so crucial? I really felt shortchanged because if it was of such importance that Luna and her men had had to risk their lives to get this done, I expected there to be some sort of impact to breaking all the six portals. Like feeling a ripple of magic sweeping over the earth, getting a rumbling, shuddering sensation of something being shaken up or disturbed, having various supernatural beings awakening or suddenly jerking upright as they sense a strong jolt of power like a lightning bolt hitting them... something!! But there was nothing. Again, extremely anticlimactic. It felt like this big accomplishment on Luna and her men's part actually made no discernible difference. We needed to have some payoff in order to know that all that effort had been worth it. Five books, coming down to this: a big fat zero. What a letdown.
I think Draven also was a weak villain. He somehow never felt like a truly credible threat. I mean, Luna is the Moon Goddess' child or a goddess in her own right, while Draven is only a run-of-the-mill vampire who has been stealing other beings' magic. It stands to reason you'd never believe that he could possibly be more powerful than her. In Their Vampire Queen by Joely Sue Burkhart, Shara (the FMC) is also a child of a goddess or the embodiment of a goddess, having been gifted the powers of Isis; and the villain is a god, the Sun God. That's a believable villain because he has great powers of his own. You feel like he would be formidable and difficult to defeat. But here, a goddess against a plain old vampire? Really? It's a bit of a stretch to think that it would be easy for Draven to get the upper hand.
There was a loose end which was not tied up: Draven's son who was left trapped in the place where they found him. He was never freed, which was kind of sad because he has been trapped in there for so long. Which begs the question: how does he stay alive? Is there food in that place??? Where does the food come from? I suppose the answer is "magic," and like I said in my review of book 4, that's a lousy answer for anything.
I felt like too many secrets were kept in this book, with the intention of "protecting" the other party. Luna decides to take action against Draven without informing the others, because she knows they will be overprotective and disagree or maybe even prevent her from doing it. As a result, she is prevented from carrying out her plan fully and didn't manage to fully disable Draven, which she could have if she'd had more opportunity before the men "rescued" her. If she had shared her plans with them, she could have pulled it off and neutralised Draven earlier in the story. Of course, then we wouldn't have the Final Showdown, but still.
Another instance was when the men got an idea of what would happen at the Final Showdown with Draven, but didn't tell her. If they had told her, she would have been better prepared and then might not have needed to go through all that emotional pain, plus the waiting. Instead, what they do is have a pass-the-parcel or rather pass-the-Luna night, where each of them takes turns with her "so that she can know she is loved". But is this love? From Ry's POV:
I don't know, if I were thinking about what I would miss about someone I loved, I don't think I'd be focusing on that person's sexual responses to me in bed. Granted that Ry is an incubus, but still, I just felt, like I said in my other reviews of this series, that the relationships are mostly built on sex and lust, not actually love. I don't really see any of the guys saying that they love her for specific character traits or personality traits. Here is the angel Zuriel's POV:
This is a bit better but it sounds like he loved her for what she did for him or what she gave to him, rather than for her own sake. It's a fine line, but this sort of love is born out of gratitude and it isn't selfless because it's about how the other person has helped ME. "I love her for what she did for me" is different from "I love her because she is who she is," you know?
So, overall I feel very disappointed by the quality of the relationships depicted in this series. As it was 5 books long, there was ample space and time for the author to develop the relationships more, and in some cases I think she tried but it was not enough for me. Luna is simply spread too thinly among the 12 men and after the initial period when she's getting to know each of them and preparing to claim them, they never again have intimate discussions or talk about anything very personal. After that, it's all sex and "I love you"s after sex, and that's it. There's no meaningful connection, nothing emotional, and I was really disappointed by this.
Add to that the whole last portal thing. I could not understand how Luna had managed to open the last portal, since the requirements of the ritual hadn't been met. This left me very confused, and no explanation was given for the anomaly.
And what happened when the portal was opened? We didn't see any monumental changes taking place in the world. Luna's powers didn't change, nor did anyone else's. Nothing seemed to happen at all. What did returning the magic do? Why had it been so crucial? I really felt shortchanged because if it was of such importance that Luna and her men had had to risk their lives to get this done, I expected there to be some sort of impact to breaking all the six portals. Like feeling a ripple of magic sweeping over the earth, getting a rumbling, shuddering sensation of something being shaken up or disturbed, having various supernatural beings awakening or suddenly jerking upright as they sense a strong jolt of power like a lightning bolt hitting them... something!! But there was nothing. Again, extremely anticlimactic. It felt like this big accomplishment on Luna and her men's part actually made no discernible difference. We needed to have some payoff in order to know that all that effort had been worth it. Five books, coming down to this: a big fat zero. What a letdown.
I think Draven also was a weak villain. He somehow never felt like a truly credible threat. I mean, Luna is the Moon Goddess' child or a goddess in her own right, while Draven is only a run-of-the-mill vampire who has been stealing other beings' magic. It stands to reason you'd never believe that he could possibly be more powerful than her. In Their Vampire Queen by Joely Sue Burkhart, Shara (the FMC) is also a child of a goddess or the embodiment of a goddess, having been gifted the powers of Isis; and the villain is a god, the Sun God. That's a believable villain because he has great powers of his own. You feel like he would be formidable and difficult to defeat. But here, a goddess against a plain old vampire? Really? It's a bit of a stretch to think that it would be easy for Draven to get the upper hand.
There was a loose end which was not tied up: Draven's son who was left trapped in the place where they found him. He was never freed, which was kind of sad because he has been trapped in there for so long. Which begs the question: how does he stay alive? Is there food in that place??? Where does the food come from? I suppose the answer is "magic," and like I said in my review of book 4, that's a lousy answer for anything.
I felt like too many secrets were kept in this book, with the intention of "protecting" the other party. Luna decides to take action against Draven without informing the others, because she knows they will be overprotective and disagree or maybe even prevent her from doing it. As a result, she is prevented from carrying out her plan fully and didn't manage to fully disable Draven, which she could have if she'd had more opportunity before the men "rescued" her. If she had shared her plans with them, she could have pulled it off and neutralised Draven earlier in the story. Of course, then we wouldn't have the Final Showdown, but still.
Another instance was when the men got an idea of what would happen at the Final Showdown with Draven, but didn't tell her. If they had told her, she would have been better prepared and then might not have needed to go through all that emotional pain, plus the waiting. Instead, what they do is have a pass-the-parcel or rather pass-the-Luna night, where each of them takes turns with her "so that she can know she is loved". But is this love? From Ry's POV:
I began to think about the time I had spent with Luna and the other guys. It's made me realise I didn't regret claiming her, and I couldn't regret falling in love with her ever. I would miss the smell of her hair, the touch of her skin, but most of all, I would miss her glorious moans as she orgasmed. My c*ck twitched to life as the image of her spread out like a feast entered my mind.
I don't know, if I were thinking about what I would miss about someone I loved, I don't think I'd be focusing on that person's sexual responses to me in bed. Granted that Ry is an incubus, but still, I just felt, like I said in my other reviews of this series, that the relationships are mostly built on sex and lust, not actually love. I don't really see any of the guys saying that they love her for specific character traits or personality traits. Here is the angel Zuriel's POV:
I was going to miss Luna, and not just for the sex but because she filled a void I hadn't even known existed. Her unconditional love and support through everything had made falling worth it.
This is a bit better but it sounds like he loved her for what she did for him or what she gave to him, rather than for her own sake. It's a fine line, but this sort of love is born out of gratitude and it isn't selfless because it's about how the other person has helped ME. "I love her for what she did for me" is different from "I love her because she is who she is," you know?
So, overall I feel very disappointed by the quality of the relationships depicted in this series. As it was 5 books long, there was ample space and time for the author to develop the relationships more, and in some cases I think she tried but it was not enough for me. Luna is simply spread too thinly among the 12 men and after the initial period when she's getting to know each of them and preparing to claim them, they never again have intimate discussions or talk about anything very personal. After that, it's all sex and "I love you"s after sex, and that's it. There's no meaningful connection, nothing emotional, and I was really disappointed by this.
April 27, 2020
What a fantastic finale of a fantastic series! I loved and devoured this book just like all the books in the series, but this one was special because, although beautiful, it is still the end and I can’t help but feeling a bit sad to say goodbye to these characters, even if they might show up here and there is some of the author’s future books.
I fell in love with the characters and their quirky ways. I love their chemistry, their love and dedication to each other, their loyalty and their willingness to do whatever it takes to save each other and the world. Not to mention all kinds of hotness all throughout this book and the entire series. The steamy goodness is exploding from the pages and the authors imagination are simply amazing. There is not a scene that repeats in the entire series!
The amount of research the author put in the series is simply amazing. All the places, all the supernaturals, all the legends, prophecies, and not to mention super interesting and original never repeated steamy scenes, it is beyond impressive.
I have run out of ideas how to praise the author and can’t think of new ways to express my adoration that I haven’t used already. I’ve loved this author from the first page of the first book in this series and I’ve loved her more with each book I’ve read. She is the Goddess of Smut and everything that is sexy and this will forever remain one of my favourite series.
The books only make sense when read in order. The reading order is: Triad Found (Claimed By The Goddess Book 1), Pentacle Bound (Claimed by the Goddess Book 2), Elements Tamed (Claimed by the Goddess Book 3), Goddess Claimed (Claimed by the Goddess Book 4), and Magic Unleashed (Claimed by the Goddess Book 5).
I fell in love with the characters and their quirky ways. I love their chemistry, their love and dedication to each other, their loyalty and their willingness to do whatever it takes to save each other and the world. Not to mention all kinds of hotness all throughout this book and the entire series. The steamy goodness is exploding from the pages and the authors imagination are simply amazing. There is not a scene that repeats in the entire series!
The amount of research the author put in the series is simply amazing. All the places, all the supernaturals, all the legends, prophecies, and not to mention super interesting and original never repeated steamy scenes, it is beyond impressive.
I have run out of ideas how to praise the author and can’t think of new ways to express my adoration that I haven’t used already. I’ve loved this author from the first page of the first book in this series and I’ve loved her more with each book I’ve read. She is the Goddess of Smut and everything that is sexy and this will forever remain one of my favourite series.
The books only make sense when read in order. The reading order is: Triad Found (Claimed By The Goddess Book 1), Pentacle Bound (Claimed by the Goddess Book 2), Elements Tamed (Claimed by the Goddess Book 3), Goddess Claimed (Claimed by the Goddess Book 4), and Magic Unleashed (Claimed by the Goddess Book 5).
May 14, 2021
Loved This Series
From the beginning to the very end I've absolutely loved this series. I mean we have the sweetest and most loving heroine that loved her alphas males with her whole heart that she die for them and don't even get me started on said alphas that doted on her and gave up their lives for her... Oh boy and the sex scenes in this book... Whew baby they were HOT!!!!!..
This was a good read and I loved everything about it.. I would reread this series again it was just that good..
Overall Rating:
5* ~ An Amazing Read
From the beginning to the very end I've absolutely loved this series. I mean we have the sweetest and most loving heroine that loved her alphas males with her whole heart that she die for them and don't even get me started on said alphas that doted on her and gave up their lives for her... Oh boy and the sex scenes in this book... Whew baby they were HOT!!!!!..
This was a good read and I loved everything about it.. I would reread this series again it was just that good..
Overall Rating:
5* ~ An Amazing Read
March 26, 2023
Magic Unleashed
Oh, I really hope there is more to this world! Once again it was filled with a ton spicy moments. The story was great and I really need more of everyone. Hope there are spinoffs to read.
Oh, I really hope there is more to this world! Once again it was filled with a ton spicy moments. The story was great and I really need more of everyone. Hope there are spinoffs to read.
October 4, 2021
ALAS, it has come to an end…
I can’t say I’m all that upset because this last book barely had me hanging on by a thread.
The only thing keeping me invested at all, was that I wanted to see the guy’s (and Luna’s) reaction to her pregnancy.
Overall, this book was a quick read and the storyline itself did feel extremely repetitive throughout most of the book.
* cue Luna opening each portal one by one with the same ritual each time*
YAWN.
Additionally, the sex scenes were so rushed and didn’t progress in a natural or passionate way; it was as if Rozie was trying to squeeze it in at least once more with all 12 guys and I simply could NOT get into it.
This in itself is quite disappointing, considering how adventurous and unique the smut was throughout most of the series.
I was truthfully pushing myself to just get through this book; I didn’t feel like anything exciting occurred until literally the last quarter of the book, which seems to be a trend for these last two books in the series (I.e., the first 3/4 of the book read more like a fuck ton of filler).
It wasn’t until the men got fucking stuck in the mirrors and then came out only to be brutally murdered by Draven.
HOLY FRESH HELL.
Thank god for that plot twist for real.
When Luna truly believe they were dead, there were absolutely water works involved.
Although, it was slightly unbelievable the way she just sat there while they were killed and then proceeded to rip her bindings off after they were all already dead….
Come on, as if she would watch ALL 12 MEN DIE in front of her face, without trying anything????
Luna had to obtain several supernatural items in order to bring her men back from the goddess realm and I almost wish this side quest of hers took up more time in the book; it would have certainly felt like less filler and I would have been so invested in that.. but I digress.
The epilogue was a wild ride and a fucking phenomenal end to this series.
Luna gives birth to not one, not two BUT THREE supernatural bundles of joy.
I was mildly curious how they all ended up coming from different dads but shit doesn’t always have to make sense in the magical realm, am I right?
Sidenote: I would simply die for a Lilith RH with A and the seven deadly sins… Rozie, get on this my friend!
~ 3.5 stars ~
I can’t say I’m all that upset because this last book barely had me hanging on by a thread.
The only thing keeping me invested at all, was that I wanted to see the guy’s (and Luna’s) reaction to her pregnancy.
Overall, this book was a quick read and the storyline itself did feel extremely repetitive throughout most of the book.
* cue Luna opening each portal one by one with the same ritual each time*
YAWN.
Additionally, the sex scenes were so rushed and didn’t progress in a natural or passionate way; it was as if Rozie was trying to squeeze it in at least once more with all 12 guys and I simply could NOT get into it.
This in itself is quite disappointing, considering how adventurous and unique the smut was throughout most of the series.
I was truthfully pushing myself to just get through this book; I didn’t feel like anything exciting occurred until literally the last quarter of the book, which seems to be a trend for these last two books in the series (I.e., the first 3/4 of the book read more like a fuck ton of filler).
It wasn’t until the men got fucking stuck in the mirrors and then came out only to be brutally murdered by Draven.
HOLY FRESH HELL.
Thank god for that plot twist for real.
When Luna truly believe they were dead, there were absolutely water works involved.
Although, it was slightly unbelievable the way she just sat there while they were killed and then proceeded to rip her bindings off after they were all already dead….
Come on, as if she would watch ALL 12 MEN DIE in front of her face, without trying anything????
Luna had to obtain several supernatural items in order to bring her men back from the goddess realm and I almost wish this side quest of hers took up more time in the book; it would have certainly felt like less filler and I would have been so invested in that.. but I digress.
The epilogue was a wild ride and a fucking phenomenal end to this series.
Luna gives birth to not one, not two BUT THREE supernatural bundles of joy.
I was mildly curious how they all ended up coming from different dads but shit doesn’t always have to make sense in the magical realm, am I right?
Sidenote: I would simply die for a Lilith RH with A and the seven deadly sins… Rozie, get on this my friend!
~ 3.5 stars ~
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 31, 2024
The entire series could have been summed up in 1 book not 5
Utter torment this series seriously, like I think the idea behind it was mediocre but the execution was horrendous.
SPOILERS:
the basic premise is that she sleeps with twelve guys and has to open 6 (I think) portals but there's a villain stopping her.
First off the men were all the same, they all had some form of previous relationship and were hesitant to claim her. SECONDLY ONE OF THE GUYS WAS A FURRY AND ANOTHER WAS A RED HEADED EMO.
another thing with the guys was that the author was trying too hard to make them different when they were all white, so she attempted to give them unique traits and kinks, which backfired so bad.
Secondly the villain. He was so weak it took just a single blade to the heart to kill him forever.
Thirdly was the whole thing about her being pregnant by the last book. Literally like 4 people told her "oh congratulations you're pregnant" and because she was so different and quirky she was like "heh no I'm not!! I'm on birth control" (NOT AN ACTUAL QUOTE SMHH )
okay so if you can see past all that and STILL want to read this book then just know that the smut was so boring and THERE WAS SO MUCH OF IT. No seriously they all finished in like 30 seconds and they were like "okay, who's next!"
AND LAST OFF SHE GOT A DOG AND NAMED IT BEANS. poor dog.
So overall if you're looking like a wattpad type book but worse with some poorly written smut and fantasy elements, and want to waste at least 2-3 weeks of your time then please go ahead, but just know that if I could give a series 0 starts I 100% would 🤗
Utter torment this series seriously, like I think the idea behind it was mediocre but the execution was horrendous.
SPOILERS:
the basic premise is that she sleeps with twelve guys and has to open 6 (I think) portals but there's a villain stopping her.
First off the men were all the same, they all had some form of previous relationship and were hesitant to claim her. SECONDLY ONE OF THE GUYS WAS A FURRY AND ANOTHER WAS A RED HEADED EMO.
another thing with the guys was that the author was trying too hard to make them different when they were all white, so she attempted to give them unique traits and kinks, which backfired so bad.
Secondly the villain. He was so weak it took just a single blade to the heart to kill him forever.
Thirdly was the whole thing about her being pregnant by the last book. Literally like 4 people told her "oh congratulations you're pregnant" and because she was so different and quirky she was like "heh no I'm not!! I'm on birth control" (NOT AN ACTUAL QUOTE SMHH )
okay so if you can see past all that and STILL want to read this book then just know that the smut was so boring and THERE WAS SO MUCH OF IT. No seriously they all finished in like 30 seconds and they were like "okay, who's next!"
AND LAST OFF SHE GOT A DOG AND NAMED IT BEANS. poor dog.
So overall if you're looking like a wattpad type book but worse with some poorly written smut and fantasy elements, and want to waste at least 2-3 weeks of your time then please go ahead, but just know that if I could give a series 0 starts I 100% would 🤗
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 1, 2020
This review is for the whole series, it is now complete.
First, lets talk about the story line. It was good, a paranormal "find the magic" trope, where the female main character is not aware she is supernatural until she meets the first of her men. After she has come to terms with being supernatural, she has to save the world, with the help of her fated mates and some friends. The story line is good, the characters develop deeply enough that you know what to expect from each person in the harem. Its a large harem, but the reader knows how she connects to each guy, and their relationships make sense.
Now, lets talk about the hot hot hot relationship scenes. WHEW! With so many guys, there are a lot of them! In all configurations, so expect many MM scenes, some with, some without the FMC. The guys develop relationships with each other, romantic and familial, outside of the scope of the female, which made this book so nicely tied up into its happy ending.
First, lets talk about the story line. It was good, a paranormal "find the magic" trope, where the female main character is not aware she is supernatural until she meets the first of her men. After she has come to terms with being supernatural, she has to save the world, with the help of her fated mates and some friends. The story line is good, the characters develop deeply enough that you know what to expect from each person in the harem. Its a large harem, but the reader knows how she connects to each guy, and their relationships make sense.
Now, lets talk about the hot hot hot relationship scenes. WHEW! With so many guys, there are a lot of them! In all configurations, so expect many MM scenes, some with, some without the FMC. The guys develop relationships with each other, romantic and familial, outside of the scope of the female, which made this book so nicely tied up into its happy ending.
March 13, 2021
Author has potential
This wasn't a terrible series. It had some interesting plot points, not terrible character development, hood world building. But the editing is terrible, and autocorrect really killed the author. The word "defiantly" was in place of "definitely" multiple times through the series, which means the author spelled it "definately" and then never caught on to autocorrect. Also - LUBE. 12 men having sex with each other multiple times a day, and the word lube was mentioned like once in the whole series. That drew me out of the story so much. No one is going at it without lubricant. The character development was decent, but 12 characters is really hard for an author to keep up with and it showed.
All in all, if you're up for reading something more like what you would find on Wattpad, you'll probably like this series. If you're looking for a good published, polished book, this series isn't for you.
This wasn't a terrible series. It had some interesting plot points, not terrible character development, hood world building. But the editing is terrible, and autocorrect really killed the author. The word "defiantly" was in place of "definitely" multiple times through the series, which means the author spelled it "definately" and then never caught on to autocorrect. Also - LUBE. 12 men having sex with each other multiple times a day, and the word lube was mentioned like once in the whole series. That drew me out of the story so much. No one is going at it without lubricant. The character development was decent, but 12 characters is really hard for an author to keep up with and it showed.
All in all, if you're up for reading something more like what you would find on Wattpad, you'll probably like this series. If you're looking for a good published, polished book, this series isn't for you.
October 29, 2021
This was a fantastic finale to an excellent series and I’m honestly kind of heartbroken it’s over.
I loved how Luna was able to fit in so well with each guy’s personality and needs and yet maintained her own person as well. I loved each guy and each personal brand they brought to the group. I loved the dynamic of the harem together and the off-shoot relationships that developed between the guys. (So much M/M, mmm yes please!!) It was such a feel good series with so much damn spice and I wish I had more!! I could’ve honestly read another 10 books with this family.
The villain was a god damn bastard, the twists were surprising, the sneaky side characters were fun, and the conclusion was overall well-executed. I’m so sad it’s over but it was a fucking fun ride!! 10/10 recommend.
I loved how Luna was able to fit in so well with each guy’s personality and needs and yet maintained her own person as well. I loved each guy and each personal brand they brought to the group. I loved the dynamic of the harem together and the off-shoot relationships that developed between the guys. (So much M/M, mmm yes please!!) It was such a feel good series with so much damn spice and I wish I had more!! I could’ve honestly read another 10 books with this family.
The villain was a god damn bastard, the twists were surprising, the sneaky side characters were fun, and the conclusion was overall well-executed. I’m so sad it’s over but it was a fucking fun ride!! 10/10 recommend.
April 28, 2020
While I've enjoyed the series because it has been fun, it just got a little messy. Larger harems are a bit of a nightmare to manage and on the whole, this one worked fine, but.... All the guys had relationships with each other and that's great since there were so many of them....except it wasn't just one other guy and that made it difficult to keep track of. It actually got to the point for me where I left that no one was actually dedicated to Luna. She is supposed to be their centre but they are off having fun with each other and none of them seemed to put her first. They didn't communicate anything to her either. Little things bugged me. The ending was cute though
October 3, 2020
If you’re looking for a series with high heat, this is the one!
This series was good but I do have to admit I skipped some of the steamy scenes in the 4th and 5th books. It was a lot and when the MC had 12 in her harem, how could there not be a lot. Some of the scenes I gave up trying to mentally picturing it, but some of them were fun imagining. The actual story behind all the heat was good, so good I wished there was more about the story at times than what happened in their private moments.It ends with a HEA.
This series was good but I do have to admit I skipped some of the steamy scenes in the 4th and 5th books. It was a lot and when the MC had 12 in her harem, how could there not be a lot. Some of the scenes I gave up trying to mentally picturing it, but some of them were fun imagining. The actual story behind all the heat was good, so good I wished there was more about the story at times than what happened in their private moments.It ends with a HEA.
May 26, 2020
This series is probably one of my all time favorites. I cried the whole last quarter of the book.
Though there are a lot of spelling errors throughout this series, it doesnt take away from the story or the emotions this author is trying to get across.
The only thing I would change is probably just letting the charactors talk more instead of immediately jumping into sex instead. But that doesnt bother me as much since I loved the story. 5 fucking stars dude. <3
Though there are a lot of spelling errors throughout this series, it doesnt take away from the story or the emotions this author is trying to get across.
The only thing I would change is probably just letting the charactors talk more instead of immediately jumping into sex instead. But that doesnt bother me as much since I loved the story. 5 fucking stars dude. <3
July 22, 2020
Claimed by the Goddess Series
Rozier Marshal, you have the most fabulous imagination. I dearly LOVED this book series. The stories never dragged. The sex scenes were VERY numerous (with 12 men harem, why not?). The story flowed and matured very nicely. I can't hardly wait for the next series.
I don't know who or how the grammar and spelling is edited but who ever does it needs to use grammar and spell check more often.
Rozier Marshal, you have the most fabulous imagination. I dearly LOVED this book series. The stories never dragged. The sex scenes were VERY numerous (with 12 men harem, why not?). The story flowed and matured very nicely. I can't hardly wait for the next series.
I don't know who or how the grammar and spelling is edited but who ever does it needs to use grammar and spell check more often.
June 30, 2021
Dude.... this series really is great but it could have been better with a good editor... the hookup scenes are super HOT 🔥🥵😍 but the punctuation and grammar issues took away from the story... im the type of reader than can skip over it if the story is good enough so I finished and still loved it but I know some ppl aren't like that.. would have given the whole series a 5 star if it weren't for that but I'd still recommend it if you want some good smut :)
December 23, 2021
Great Story Line
I really enjoyed this series. The overall plot is good. I'm rating it 4 stars due to typos, grammar and she repeats herself quite a bit. Almost, like she has forgotten previous chapters and what was wrote. So she wrote it again, only it played out differently than before. She needs a better editor. Other than that, it IS a great story. Loved the guys and personalities.
I really enjoyed this series. The overall plot is good. I'm rating it 4 stars due to typos, grammar and she repeats herself quite a bit. Almost, like she has forgotten previous chapters and what was wrote. So she wrote it again, only it played out differently than before. She needs a better editor. Other than that, it IS a great story. Loved the guys and personalities.
April 29, 2020
Loved this book!!!!!
This was the perfect end to this series
I'm sad that it has ended I want more. But it did end perfectly
I laughed out loud especially with nan, that woman is brilliant. I cried at a certain part I won't say what because I don't want to spoil anything.
I can't wait to read more from this author. ❤
This was the perfect end to this series
I'm sad that it has ended I want more. But it did end perfectly
I laughed out loud especially with nan, that woman is brilliant. I cried at a certain part I won't say what because I don't want to spoil anything.
I can't wait to read more from this author. ❤
January 1, 2021
Medium-Burn, awesome sex, great characters and their growth throughout the series. Love each and everyone. This author really delves into some different kinks for each of the guys. Note there are 12 of them and each one is very different. Overall a great series and fun to read. I really love this author.
July 1, 2021
Lovers of mm and lots of lovin
Ok guys if you like lots of sex and mm action this is the series for you. I really enjoyed this series. It was sweet and the last book will make you squall like a baby but totally worth it!! Mfc is sweet and no drama at all. The guys were more drama than the mfc. Just read already and maybe alone or with a loved if you get my meaning!!? Hot hot 🥵
Ok guys if you like lots of sex and mm action this is the series for you. I really enjoyed this series. It was sweet and the last book will make you squall like a baby but totally worth it!! Mfc is sweet and no drama at all. The guys were more drama than the mfc. Just read already and maybe alone or with a loved if you get my meaning!!? Hot hot 🥵
October 19, 2021
So are we going to ignore DJ and did he get out? I felt the sex scenes were forced due to the portals and I skipped those scenes since I knew what needed to happen. It was okay and I like smut but this was too much for me. I finished it to get it done but I skipped a lot of the sets scenes Since I was over them
November 21, 2021
I took a long break between book 4 and this final book. I was hoping the finale would be more interesting than it was. I loved the guys in the harem, but by the end Luna just bored the fuck out of me. Sorry. Had to say it. Doesn't help that there's so little actual action beyond Luna boning her guys. This series started out strong, but ended very meh.
April 28, 2020
Perfect!
This was the perfect bow and with a butt ton of feelings! I lagged and ugly cried! I had multiple heart attacks but it was so worth every bit of everything I went though. Such an amazing end to this great series.
This was the perfect bow and with a butt ton of feelings! I lagged and ugly cried! I had multiple heart attacks but it was so worth every bit of everything I went though. Such an amazing end to this great series.
May 4, 2020
WOW
I don’t think I have the words to do this book justice. It’s so good and the ending was great. I really hope there will be more books about the characters in this book. I would definitely recommend reading this book.
I don’t think I have the words to do this book justice. It’s so good and the ending was great. I really hope there will be more books about the characters in this book. I would definitely recommend reading this book.
June 8, 2020
Excellent Series
I loved the authentic and genuine characters and plot development. With so many main characters I was surprised how well each character was developed throughout the series. Loved reading the series and would definitely highly recommend!
I loved the authentic and genuine characters and plot development. With so many main characters I was surprised how well each character was developed throughout the series. Loved reading the series and would definitely highly recommend!
June 14, 2020
Too much sex
I never thought I would be annoyed by how much sex was in a reverse harem book. Good Lord. It just gets boring. I was starting to hate when it was a Luna chapter. Poor girl must have been chafed. The scenes with the men continued to shine.
I never thought I would be annoyed by how much sex was in a reverse harem book. Good Lord. It just gets boring. I was starting to hate when it was a Luna chapter. Poor girl must have been chafed. The scenes with the men continued to shine.
June 17, 2020
Love the series
I loved this series. It had me laughing and crying in this book. All the characters are great. I wish there was a another book on the kids growing up and the future Luna saw. I want to know about the other guys babies. I hate to see this series end.
I loved this series. It had me laughing and crying in this book. All the characters are great. I wish there was a another book on the kids growing up and the future Luna saw. I want to know about the other guys babies. I hate to see this series end.
June 19, 2020
Absolutely amazing!
Such an amazing series and the end is perfect! I am in complete awe of how well this is written. The characters are amazing and each one has such a well established personality.
Such an amazing series and the end is perfect! I am in complete awe of how well this is written. The characters are amazing and each one has such a well established personality.
July 6, 2020
Yes, I finished it all the books and I really enjoyed the ending!!! The very last chapter made me smile. I couldn’t get enough of all of those 12 men and Luna together and I’m sad it’s over. I definitely enjoyed reading about each personality and loved each of the guys. 😍
September 26, 2020
Read. This. Series
Holy freaking smokes! This book had me laughing and crying. By the end my heart was full and wanting more.
This has been an amazing series and this book was amazing. It showed just how b@dass Luna is and how much her guys mean to her.
Holy freaking smokes! This book had me laughing and crying. By the end my heart was full and wanting more.
This has been an amazing series and this book was amazing. It showed just how b@dass Luna is and how much her guys mean to her.
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